Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
91
glossingSentenceCount
6
matches
0
"looked like runes but felt more like scra"
1
"as if following her movement"
2
"seemed immovable now appeared to lean inward, their tops almost touching, forming a natural archway that framed a patch of ground darker than the surrounding moss"
3
"note that seemed to emanate from the very stone of the standing stones themselves"
4
"as if trying to hold her back"
5
"as if reminding her of something she had left behind"
"It had been quiet all the way from the Golden Empress, but now, as she stepped through the moss‑choked gap between two ancient oaks, the warmth returned—faint, insistent, like a heartbeat pressed to her palm."
1
"Wildflowers—bluebells, oxeye daisies, something pale and luminous she couldn’t name—blanketed the ground in colors that should have belonged to noon."
2
"Not literally—there had been no voice, only a tug in her chest, a sensation that the stone grew warmer when she faced a certain direction."
3
"Rory needed to know if the stories were true, if the pendant was more than a trinket, if there was something she could use to protect herself—and the people she cared about—if the veil ever tore."
4
"The air inside the circle was still, too still; even the night’s usual chorus of crickets and distant traffic was muffled, as if the grove swallowed sound whole."
5
"Yet the wind didn’t explain the faint, rhythmic tapping she heard—like fingertips drumming on hollow wood—coming from nowhere and everywhere at once."
6
"When she opened them, the grove looked the same—yet something had shifted."
7
"It was not a shadow cast by any visible source; it was an absence of light, a void that drank the moonlight and gave nothing back."
8
"A whisper slithered from the void, not in any language she knew but in a tone that resonated with the marrow of her bones—a feeling of sorrow, of longing, of something ancient and patient."
9
"The wildflowers around her stilled, their heads bowed as if in reverence—or fear."
10
"The pendant had warned her of a Hel portal; she now understood that the warmth was not merely a signal but a lure, a beacon that called to whatever lay beyond."
11
"No answer came, only the resumption of the tapping—now faster, more insistent—like someone rapping on a door from the other side."
12
"A sudden, sharp crack split the silence—a branch snapping somewhere beyond the circle."
13
"The night outside the grove was ordinary—streetlights flickered, a distant siren wailed, the rustle of leaves in the wind sounded exactly as it should."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
72
technicalSentenceCount
19
matches
0
"The oaks, massive and gnarled, formed a rough circle, their bark etched with symbols that looked like runes but felt more like scratches made by frightened claw…"
1
"The air inside the circle was still, too still; even the night’s usual chorus of crickets and distant traffic was muffled, as if the grove swallowed sound whole…"
2
"Warmth spread up her wrist, a comforting heat that made the scar on her left palm throb in sympathy."
3
"Nothing but a sway of tall grass, the flowers bending as if brushed by an invisible hand."
4
"The wildflowers seemed to shift under her gaze, their petals turning ever so slightly, as if following her movement."
5
"She closed her eyes, focusing on the pendant’s warmth, letting it guide her."
6
"The standing stones, which had seemed immovable, now appeared to lean inward, their tops almost touching, forming a natural archway that framed a patch of groun…"
7
"It was not a shadow cast by any visible source; it was an absence of light, a void that drank the moonlight and gave nothing back."
8
"She approached cautiously, each step sinking into the earth as though the soil had grown softer, more yielding."
9
"The tapping grew louder, now accompanied by a low, almost subsonic hum that vibrated in her molars."
10
"The air there was cold, not the chill of night but a biting cold that seemed to sap warmth from her skin, making her breath plume in tiny, ghostly puffs that va…"
11
"A whisper slithered from the void, not in any language she knew but in a tone that resonated with the marrow of her bones—a feeling of sorrow, of longing, of so…"
12
"Images flashed behind her eyelids, not as visions but as sensations: the scent of wet stone, the sound of distant bells tolling underwater, the sensation of fal…"
13
"The hum dropped to a single, sustained note that seemed to emanate from the very stone of the standing stones themselves."
14
"Nothing moved, but the feeling of being watched intensified, a pressure at the base of her skull, as if icy fingers were tracing the ridges of her spine."
15
"The wildflowers slapped at her ankles, their stems surprisingly tough, as if trying to hold her back."
16
"The standing stones loomed, their faces now seeming to leer, the runes etched into their bark glowing faintly with an inner light that matched the pendant’s for…"
17
"Yet as she ran, she could not shake the sensation that the tapping followed her, a faint echo in the cadence of her own footsteps, as if something had latched o…"
18
"Yet, as she lifted the glass to her lips, she felt a faint pressure against her wrist, the scar there tingling as if reminding her of something she had left beh…"