Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFDFE8JJQXJVBDR4TWDDYYQ

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Duration:
44.6s
Cost:
$0.000612
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The pavement under Aurora’s soles became slicker, absorbing the sound of her footsteps until her boots fell silent on the damp moss beneath the overhanging arches. She had walked past this line three times earlier that year, a woman who avoided it like a contagion, but the sign of the broken silver chain she’d found in her pocket pulled her down. It was a homeless man’s coin she’d found copper-sharp, bearing a symbol she didn’t know, but one that lived in the back of her mind as the truth she had been running from. She needed the tool he had left. She needed it now. The breath in her lungs was thin, tasting of ozone and crushed petals. It should have been September, the color of the leaves turning pale gold, but within the ancient clearing, the oak stood stone-brown as the deep winter. Wildflowers bloomed where there were no wildflowers. They were scents and shapes that hurt the eye. Their colors were off from chlorophyll, the purples leaning towards violet, the whites small and grey. Aurora cupped her neck, sliding her fingers over the chain. The Heartstone pendant lay heavy in her palm, the deep crimson surface warm. Her skin prickled at that contact. It hurt. It hurt in a way that told her the stone was a vessel for the unseen, and the unseen was waking up. She closed her eyes, forced hers shut against the reality of what she had invited in, but the cold air pressed her eyes open again. The silence within the clearing was absolute, a physical weight that sat upon her chest. The headlights of a distant road seemed to sting behind her eyelids, that is what they looked like. She walked forward, boots sinking into the loam of the earth. Her hair ticked against her ear. She shook it away. Something shifted in the peripheral vision of the left eye. It was a shadow. A flicker of movement too quick for the eye to catch, but the mind knew it was there. Not a cat. Not a rat. It was the way the wind did not need to move the leaves; the leaves moved without wind. Aurora stopped. She looked at her left wrist. The scar, the crescent crescent-shaped scar, itch feebly beneath the skin. It was a play of magic, a signal from a child. The pendant at her throat flared. Her skin turned red against the warm heat. She was in the space. The space where nothing stayed. The space where a Hel portal waited. The music of the undergrowth was not the wind. The whispering of the branches was a speech. She coughed. The coughing surprised her. It echoed. Aurora swallowed the lump of fear and looked at the edge of the clearing. The oak trees were black in the light of the night lamps. The trunks stood straighter than nature would allow. They were carved from the inside out. She was a fool. A woman who thought she could walk into a myth and then hold the sky. Her mouth was dry. She reached for a bottle of water but the bottle was gone. She reached for the will and wrapped her fingers around it. There was a rustle. The sound came from behind her right shoulder. It was not the sound of a footstep. It was the sound of a breath taken deeply in a darkened room. She spun around, eyes wide and blue. The open ground before her was white with moonlight. The trees cast long shadows. “Hello,” she called out, a weak word. A voice that sounded like she was speaking to herself. No one answered. The birds did not fly. Aurora knew this. She was in a trap. She had been in a trap before, but this one was different. This one was the one where she could not run. She touched her neck. The pendant was burning. It was a deep crimson heat, sending a pulse through her veins. The stone was not just hot. It was alive. The shadows were closing in. The trees were not the same trees. They were not. She took a step forward. Her foot crunched on stone. The stone was grey. Not the grey of London, but the grey of the dark. She looked at her shoes. The soles were not touching the ground. The soles were hovering. Just a little bit. Not hovering at will. Hovering because the ground did not like them. The woman stood still. She stopped breathing for a moment. There was a shape near the standing stones. A black silhouette, tall and thin. It stood between the trees. The grand of the wood. Aurora stepped back. She turned and moved toward the stones. The line of oak was not a line. It was a wall. It was a mountain. The stones were not in the form of stones. They were standing stone. She walked past them. She saw the air shifted. The air shifted. It moved like water. The shadow was gone. It was gone. Aurora turned around. The Grove was empty. There was nothing. She was alone. She was alone. She looked at her watch. The face of the watch was white. The numbers were red. She stopped. The shadow did not go. It was there. Behind her. It was behind her. It was within the space. She looked at the sky. The sky was not the same. The moon was there. The sun was there. The air did not move. She felt a chill on the side of her arm. She touched the pending. It burned. Aurora knew the calculation. She knew the game. The silence was not the silence. The silence was a sound. It was a hum. She walked to the center of the Grove. She placed her hands on the grass. The grass was grey. The shadows were not shadows. They were the skin. She looked at her screen. Her phone screen was cracked. The phone was on the ground. The phone was on the ground. She did not pick it up. The phone was heavy. She did not pick it up. The wind was still. The trees did not sway. The ground did not shake. She knew the truth. She knew the shadows were not shadows. They were not. They were. She was in a bad place. She was here. She was here. The breath in her lungs was not air. It was something else. She looked at the ground. The ground was not ground. The ground was a mouth. The mouth was closed. Aurora stepped back. She stepped back. She did not move. She did not move.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1112
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1112
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"flicker"
4"echoed"
5"pulse"
6"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences161
matches
0"felt a chill"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences161
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1112
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1111
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora9
September1
Heartstone1
Hel1
London1
Grove2
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like"
1"sounded like she was speaking to herself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.899
wordCount1112
matches
0"Not the grey of London, but the grey of the dark"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean16.6
std17.83
cv1.074
sampleLengths
0105
171
278
333
421
510
646
730
814
934
108
1114
1227
1319
1427
154
1629
1721
1817
198
2030
2129
2215
2310
2415
2532
2610
2724
2810
2929
309
317
327
333
347
356
3616
372
3810
399
4011
418
4215
436
448
4511
464
4719
489
4916
96.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences161
matches
0"were carved"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs202
matches
0"was waking"
1"was speaking"
2"was burning"
3"were closing"
4"were not touching"
5"were hovering"
6"were standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences161
ratio0.006
matches
0"It was the way the wind did not need to move the leaves; the leaves moved without wind."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1114
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.01615798922800718
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0026929982046678637
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean6.91
std5.39
cv0.78
sampleLengths
026
135
233
37
44
513
626
77
89
916
1010
1113
126
132
1422
1525
1615
1718
1811
196
204
2110
224
2318
243
253
2618
272
286
2911
3011
316
328
335
345
357
369
378
382
394
402
4114
4212
438
447
454
4615
474
4812
4911
26.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats38
diversityRatio0.11180124223602485
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners18
21.79% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"Just a little bit."
ratio0.007
21.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount76
totalSentences153
matches
0"She had walked past this"
1"It was a homeless man’s"
2"She needed the tool he"
3"She needed it now."
4"It should have been September,"
5"They were scents and shapes"
6"Their colors were off from"
7"Her skin prickled at that"
8"It hurt in a way"
9"She closed her eyes, forced"
10"She walked forward, boots sinking"
11"Her hair ticked against her"
12"She shook it away."
13"It was a shadow."
14"It was the way the"
15"She looked at her left"
16"It was a play of"
17"Her skin turned red against"
18"She was in the space."
19"They were carved from the"
ratio0.497
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount143
totalSentences153
matches
0"The pavement under Aurora’s soles"
1"She had walked past this"
2"It was a homeless man’s"
3"She needed the tool he"
4"She needed it now."
5"The breath in her lungs"
6"It should have been September,"
7"Wildflowers bloomed where there were"
8"They were scents and shapes"
9"Their colors were off from"
10"Aurora cupped her neck, sliding"
11"The Heartstone pendant lay heavy"
12"Her skin prickled at that"
13"It hurt in a way"
14"She closed her eyes, forced"
15"The silence within the clearing"
16"The headlights of a distant"
17"She walked forward, boots sinking"
18"Her hair ticked against her"
19"She shook it away."
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She had walked past this line three times earlier that year, a woman who avoided it like a contagion, but the sign of the broken silver chain she’d found in her…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
76.6548%