Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFEEQBTF9C19G6RA5WQ7Q8V

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Duration:
1m 35s
Cost:
$0.001369
Provider:
Together

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain battered against the window pane, distorting the green neon sign outside until it looked like a weeping ghost. Inside, the air was thicker, heavy with the scent of gin, stale tobacco, and the dust of a thousand unsolved cases. Aurora Carter pushed the heavy steel door open, the brass bell jingling with a hollow, metallic chorus. She was reluctant to enter, reluctant to let the London cold touch her again, but the pull of her old haunts was a gravity she couldn't escape. She shook the water from her coat, her shoulder-length black hair damp against her cheek. She felt the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist beneath the cuff, a phantom brand from a childhood accident that still ached on cloudy days. She was twenty-five, and she was the most beautiful thing in the world, even drunk, even hiding in London from the ghost of Evan. But she kept her eyes on the bar, her boots clicking on the floor. She didn't look at the maps lining the walls—the faded cartographies of Soho or Prague, pinned and forgotten—but she felt the weight of the past pressing against the corner of her vision. She was looking for a tab, a meet, a silence that wasn't hers to command. "You look different." The voice came from the shadows behind the bar, sharp and clear, cutting through the mist. Silas Blackwood didn't look up from the highball glass he was polishing. The movement of his wrist was too rigid, a mechanical adjustment that made everyone look twice. He set the glass down and looked at her then. Hazel eyes, hard as polished flint, catching the reflection of the silver signet ring that had been on his finger for years. He hadn't changed much since the last time they'd met, not that anyone had expected him to. He was shorter in stature now, or maybe the world had just bent to him. He had a beard, personalised and grey-streaked, and the silence stretched tight between them like a wire about to snap. "Rory." He said it like it was a joke. A life sentence. It had been six years, since he sent the letter and she fled to live in the shadows of another city. "Silas." The tone of her voice was careful, practiced. She didn't trust her name anymore. Not when it meant hiding in a flat above the bar, working shifts at Golden Empress, pretending that she was living her life. She wasn't living it, she was holding it. He sat down, his left leg twitching beneath the table. The limp had always been there, a permanent mark on a man who had served his country in Prague, a knee that would never hold him straight. He didn't offer a chair. He leaned his elbows on his knees, watching her. The bar was empty of anyone else, and it wasn't the bar that remained. They were the only two people who mattered. "You look different." He repeated. A bit colder. More final. "I was starving. It makes you sink a little faster than you grow." He watched her, and for a moment, the bar was empty of anyone else, and it wasn't the bar that remained. They were the only two people who mattered. The world had been a lot bigger than this bar, Rory. But she wasn't anywhere else. She was the woman who had left Cardiff, who had left love, and who had left safety. "We haven't spoken, Rory. Not since I sent the letter." "I know." She took a step back. The scar on her wrist felt hot. "I know why I stayed." He laughed, a dry sound with no humor in it. He pointed to the map covering half the wall behind him. It was marked. A Prague. A Berlin. Red pins on white map paper, the ink faded. "People change, Aurora. I didn't tell you to wait." "I locked the door. I didn't let the past in. I just stayed in the flat above the bar." She touched the glass on the counter, the wood warm and solid. "You think you can go back to the quiet. To the coffee shop and the cat and the silence of the office." "I do." "And I do not." She leaned over the bar, her bright blue eyes dark with a sprite. "You know I never wanted to be a lawyer. I wanted to run. I have no idea what I left." "You were twenty-one when you left. You're twenty-five now. Five years." "If I hadn't met you, I would have died." Silas looked at the scar on her wrist, then at her eyes. He knew that story. She was the one who had come to the bar for safety. She was the one who had been the friend Evans would never catch her. "I know. And now I know you aren't the girl you were." "Are you sure it's you? Or am I just staring at a story I used to know?" "It's you. It's always been you." He turned away to pour a drink into a small glass. Silver fingers moved with practiced grace. "The world is a lot bigger than this bar, Rory." "Then why are we still here?" The rain stopped for a moment, and the silence returned. They were two friends who had been swallowed by time, buried under years of protocol and silence. The bar was cool. The drink was warm. Silas closed his wallet and put his signet ring on the counter. He didn't take it off. It never seemed to be personal to him. "I needed to tell you something." She waited. The neon light flickered, buzzing like a trapped insect. "I'm not sending you anywhere. I'm not... I'm not with the agency anymore." She knew there was no agency. She knew he knew she knew. He was a man who had lost his past. "I'm just retired." "And I'm still trying to survive." She reached out, her hand stopping inches from his. She was blue-eyed and short, he was a man who had lost a wife. "It hurts." Yes, it did. He looked at the floor, his eyes reflecting the dim neon green. He put the glass on the table, the liquid catching the light. "We can't go back." "No." She reached out, her hand stopping inches from his. "Would you go back?" He looked at her, his grey streak hair catching the wind. "I came because I wanted to tell you I was sorry." "Sorry for dying my father off? Sorry for losing you your hands? Sorry that I ran and you stayed?" He looked at her, and something softened in the hazel. "I didn't stay for the other things. I stayed because I know you're in this mess. And you're in a mess because you need something." "I need nothing." "You need a home. You need a reason. You need a friend." "Or just an old scar to remind you of what you were." She pulled her hand back. The scar on her wrist burned. She took the glass. He didn't move. "Drink." He said. She tipped her head back. The liquid was hot and tart. She wiped her mouth with a raw hand, her thumb finding the scar on her wrist. Silas watched. He nodded. "Tomorrow, Rory. Tomorrow you might have the war." She looked at him, blue eyes wide. "Would you be here?" "Always." The bell jangled, and they left. The bar was a grey gnashing. The night had passed. The rain fell down the street, a soft brushing sound against the pavement. The two friends walked into the fog. Aurora's coat was long and sharp. Silas's back was bent. They moved together. The bar closed. The silence remained.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.256
leniency0.513
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.051
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1298
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1298
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count6
2
word"mechanical"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"mechanical"
3"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1296
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount976
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"London"
discoveredNames
Carter1
London2
Evan1
Soho1
Prague3
Blackwood1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory1
Cardiff1
Berlin1
Silas5
Evans1
Silver1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Evan"
2"Blackwood"
3"Empress"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Evans"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Prague"
3"Golden"
4"Cardiff"
5"Berlin"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a weeping ghost"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1296
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"pretending that she"
1"knew that story"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean26.45
std27.51
cv1.04
sampleLengths
0126
185
23
316
4112
533
646
773
810
913
1062
1110
1219
1337
149
1553
162
1737
1811
199
2042
2112
2217
2333
246
2560
266
2711
2813
2921
303
3129
322
333
3424
354
3614
3722
3819
3935
403
4112
4223
437
4434
458
4611
471
4855
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"been swallowed"
11.68% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was looking"
1"was polishing"
2"was living"
3"was holding"
4"wasn't living"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences124
ratio0.008
matches
0"She didn't look at the maps lining the walls—the faded cartographies of Soho or Prague, pinned and forgotten—but she felt the weight of the past pressing against the corner of her vision."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount983
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.024415055951169887
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002034587995930824
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean10.45
std6.94
cv0.664
sampleLengths
020
121
217
327
415
526
624
714
832
915
103
1116
1212
1316
1410
1522
1617
1715
1820
199
203
2121
229
236
2423
258
2610
2727
285
299
3014
318
325
333
342
3513
3621
378
3811
395
4017
4110
427
437
445
4510
4611
473
482
492
33.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.25806451612903225
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences88
matches
0"She was reluctant to enter,"
1"She shook the water from"
2"She felt the small, crescent-shaped"
3"She was twenty-five, and she"
4"She didn't look at the"
5"She was looking for a"
6"He set the glass down"
7"He hadn't changed much since"
8"He was shorter in stature"
9"He had a beard, personalised"
10"He said it like it"
11"It had been six years,"
12"She didn't trust her name"
13"She wasn't living it, she"
14"He sat down, his left"
15"He didn't offer a chair."
16"He leaned his elbows on"
17"They were the only two"
18"He watched her, and for"
19"They were the only two"
ratio0.58
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences88
matches
0"The rain battered against the"
1"Aurora Carter pushed the heavy"
2"She was reluctant to enter,"
3"She shook the water from"
4"She felt the small, crescent-shaped"
5"She was twenty-five, and she"
6"She didn't look at the"
7"She was looking for a"
8"The voice came from the"
9"Silas Blackwood didn't look up"
10"The movement of his wrist"
11"He set the glass down"
12"Hazel eyes, hard as polished"
13"He hadn't changed much since"
14"He was shorter in stature"
15"He had a beard, personalised"
16"He said it like it"
17"A life sentence."
18"It had been six years,"
19"The tone of her voice"
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The movement of his wrist was too rigid, a mechanical adjustment that made everyone look twice."
1"The limp had always been there, a permanent mark on a man who had served his country in Prague, a knee that would never hold him straight."
2"She was blue-eyed and short, he was a man who had lost a wife."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She reached out, her hand stopping inches from his"
1"She reached out, her hand stopping inches from his"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.051
76.6824%