| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 71.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1384 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1384 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "fragmented" | | 1 | "profound" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "methodical" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "scanned" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "fractured" | | 15 | "raced" | | 16 | "gleaming" | | 17 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1376 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "Thum… thum… thum…" | | 1 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1375 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.58 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 3 | | London | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Rory | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 66.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like ten minutes, but the Grove re" | | 1 | "ove remained a seemingly endless, unchanging" | | 2 | "looked like an arm lowered slowly" | | 3 | "looked like a flaw in the world, a place" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.907 | | wordCount | 1376 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a standing stone, but a space between two oaks" | | 1 | "Not words, but the sibilant rush of air through leaves, of breath through b" | | 2 | "not flickers but full, loping strides" | | 3 | "not at her, but at the stone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | |
| 98.69% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 57.33 | | std | 28.4 | | cv | 0.495 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 95 | | 1 | 127 | | 2 | 78 | | 3 | 86 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 68 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 82 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 71 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 92 | | 18 | 63 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 57 |
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| 88.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "was replaced" | | 1 | "been given" | | 2 | "was swallowed" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "been led" | | 5 | "been led" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 214 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "was assessing" | | 2 | "weren’t chasing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "It was replaced by something sweeter, cloying—a perfume of honeysuckle and rot that coated the back of her throat." | | 1 | "She’d reasoned, in her cool, methodical way, that if the pendant—which her benefactor had insisted would guide her—reacted to a dream, then the dream was a map." | | 2 | "Richmond Park was never silent at night; there was always the hum of the distant city, the rustle of nocturnal animals, the whisper of wind." | | 3 | "They didn't wilt under her boots; they simply bounced back into shape as if she’d never been there." | | 4 | "A flicker of movement at the extreme edge of her vision—quick, low to the ground, like a hunting fox—but when she turned her head, nothing was there but the eerie, non-directional light." | | 5 | "It was tall, too tall, its form suggested rather than seen—a suggestion of elongated limbs and a head tilted at an inquisitive angle." | | 6 | "This thing wasn’t warmth; it was a void." | | 7 | "Not back the way she came—that path was gone, swallowed by the uniform, gleaming trees—but away from the coalescing figure, toward any point on the shimmering perimeter of the Grove." | | 8 | "The pendant wasn't a guide; it was a key." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1393 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "diffuse, silver-green luminescence" | | 1 | "small, thumb-sized lump" | | 2 | "crushed moon-pale flowers" | | 3 | "resilient, flower-strewn ground." |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03015075376884422 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016511127063890883 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 10.92 | | std | 7.78 | | cv | 0.712 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 35.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.20634920634920634 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 27.78% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 70.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "It was replaced by something" | | 1 | "It was never truly dark" | | 2 | "She came because of the" | | 3 | "It had been a simple," | | 4 | "She’d reasoned, in her cool," | | 5 | "She touched the pendant now," | | 6 | "It was cool." | | 7 | "Her own breathing sounded ragged" | | 8 | "They didn't wilt under her" | | 9 | "She walked for what felt" | | 10 | "It was a rhythmic thrum," | | 11 | "It felt absurdly mundane." | | 12 | "She scanned the line of" | | 13 | "It was a stupid thing" | | 14 | "She wasn’t here to meet" | | 15 | "She was here to find" | | 16 | "She pressed on, faster now," | | 17 | "She spun, heart hammering against" | | 18 | "It wasn’t empty." | | 19 | "She was being observed." |
| | ratio | 0.375 | |
| 35.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 102 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It was replaced by something" | | 2 | "The Fae Grove wasn't dark." | | 3 | "It was never truly dark" | | 4 | "A diffuse, silver-green luminescence seeped" | | 5 | "She came because of the" | | 6 | "It had been a simple," | | 7 | "The stone in the dream" | | 8 | "She’d reasoned, in her cool," | | 9 | "Rory needed answers." | | 10 | "The pendant had been given" | | 11 | "The Grove, a place between" | | 12 | "She touched the pendant now," | | 13 | "It was cool." | | 14 | "The silence was the first" | | 15 | "Richmond Park was never silent" | | 16 | "Here, the air was utterly" | | 17 | "Her own breathing sounded ragged" | | 18 | "A path of crushed moon-pale" | | 19 | "They didn't wilt under her" |
| | ratio | 0.85 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 72.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been a simple, recurring vision for a week: a standing stone carved with a spiraling symbol that matched the faint inner glow of the Heartstone pendant s…" | | 1 | "They didn't wilt under her boots; they simply bounced back into shape as if she’d never been there." | | 2 | "A cold spot in the air made the hairs on her forearms prickle, a pocket of chill that moved, sliding past her shoulder like someone brushing by in a crowded roo…" | | 3 | "She took a step back, her heel crushing something that crunched softly." | | 4 | "Things moved in the periphery of her vision now, not flickers but full, loping strides that matched her pace, staying just out of direct sight." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |