Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFGDNME104337NNWMQ93RJY

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Duration:
20.8s
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$0.000000
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Stealth

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest cast a sickly glow on the wet pavement, a lone beacon in the Soho alley. Aurora Carter pushed through the door, the scent of old wood, malt, and damp wool wrapping around her like a familiar blanket. It was a smell that belonged to the flat above—the flat that wasn’t truly hers, just a borrowed perch in Silas Blackwood’s orbit. The bar was a sanctuary of shadows. Light pooled in low, golden islands on the scarred mahogany, illuminating glasses, hands, faces deep in conversation. The walls were a collage of forgotten geography and frozen moments: tattered maps of the Baltic, a stark black-and-white of a Prague square, a faded photograph of a fishing trawler crew. It was Silas’s history, curated and displayed like a museum exhibit. Rory took a seat at the far end of the bar, away from the cluster of suits loosening their ties. She ordered a gin and tonic, the simple transaction a small anchor in the drifting evening. She’d come from the restaurant, the smell of five-spice and steamed buns still faint in her hair. Her delivery shift had ended an hour ago, her wrist throbbing with the familiar ache of gripping the scooter’s handlebars. The crescent scar there, a pale silver crescent, itched under her sleeve. A ghost from a childhood fall, a different life. Cardiff felt like a novel she’d once read. She sipped her drink, watching the bubbles rise, when a voice cut through the low hum of the bar. “Rory? Rory Carter?” It was a voice she hadn’t heard in years. A voice that used to belong to someone who wore band t-shirts and laughed too loud in university libraries. She turned on her stool. He stood a few feet away, holding two pints. Tomás. But the name didn’t fit. This man was older, broader through the shoulders, his posture rigid where Tomás had been lanky and slouching. His hair was cropped short, his face clean-shaven, all sharp angles that looked carved rather than grown. He wore a plain, dark button-down shirt, sleeves rolled to the elbow, revealing a forearm thick with corded muscle and the faint, puckered line of an old scar. His eyes, once a warm brown, held a flat, assessing quality she didn’t recognize. “Tomás?” Rory said, her voice quieter than she intended. She stood, the stool scraping against the floor. “My God. I haven’t seen you since… since graduation.” “Eight years,” he said, his accent still there, a ghost of his native Portuguese softening the crisp London vowels. He smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “You look… exactly the same. I almost didn’t—well. I saw the scar.” Her hand instinctively went to her wrist, hidden beneath the sleeve of her jacket. “You have a good memory.” “Some things stick.” He placed one of the pints in front of her. “Let me. It’s the least I can do.” They sat. The silence that fell wasn’t awkward so much as cavernous, filled with the echoes of the people they used to be. The Tomás she knew had been all ambition and easy charm, destined for a fast-track career in the city, talking of mergers and acquisitions. This man seemed to be made of something denser. “So,” she began, tracing the condensation on the glass. “You’re in London. I thought you were in…” “São Paulo. For a while. Then Dubai.” He took a long drink of his beer. “Work.” The way he said it—a single, clipped word—closed a door. Rory remembered his father’s construction empire. “Still in the family business?” A shadow crossed his face, quick as a passing cloud. “Not exactly. The business changed. I changed with it. Or I tried to.” He set his glass down with a precise click. “You? You fled Cardiff, Eva said. Said you were coming to London.” “I did.” Rory thought of the cramped flat in Roath, the shouting, the sound of her own name becoming a weapon in Evan’s mouth. Eva, her childhood friend, had been the lifeline. “Needed a fresh start.” “And here you are. In Silas Blackwood’s bar.” Tomás’s gaze swept the room, taking in the maps, the discreet security of the space. “A peculiar place for a fresh start.” “It’s home. For now.” She shrugged. “I deliver food for Yu-Fei’s restaurant. It pays the bills. I’m… figuring things out.” “Figuring things out.” He repeated the words as if tasting them, finding them bland. “Always the thoughtful one, Rory. Always thinking three steps ahead. Where’s that brilliant legal mind now? I heard you’d gotten into Pre-Law at Cardiff.” “I left.” The admission was simple, the weight of it compressed into two words. She didn’t owe him the details—the abuse, the fear that turned her degree into a cage she had to break out of. “The path wasn’t for me.” “Paths change.” He leaned forward slightly, his voice dropping. The low, assessing quality was back. “But people don’t change their essential nature. You were always about solving the puzzle, finding the angle. Even in those ridiculous debate society arguments. You’d find the one loose thread and pull until the whole thing unraveled.” It was a compliment from the old Tomás. From this man, it felt like an analysis. “You seem to have changed yours,” she countered gently, nodding at his formidable posture, the air of contained power. “You’re a long way from quoting Milton in that cramped flat off campus.” “Milton had nothing to say about negotiating with shipping magnates in the Gulf of Oman.” A dry, humourless smile. “The world taught me different lessons. Some of them… unpleasant.” His hand rested on the bar, and she noticed his right hand wore a simple, thick silver ring, a plain band. It wasn’t his signet; that had been a family heirloom. This looked like a tool. “What do you do now, really?” Rory asked, her curiosity overriding caution. The investigator in her, the one who’d loved Pre-Law for its demand for truth, was stirring. Tomás held her gaze for a long moment, the silence stretching between them. In it, she saw the ghost of their shared history—a night of too much wine and philosophical arguments on a balcony, a failed attempt at kissing that had ended in laughter, a pact to always tell each other the truth. “I solve problems,” he said finally. “For people who have complex, often… unconventional problems. I help them find solutions. Much like you, I suppose. Just with a higher budget.” “And less paperwork?” she offered, a weak attempt to recapture their old rhythm. His smile returned, brief and sharp. “Much less paperwork.” The weight of the years settled back onto the table. Who was he? The carefree student was buried under this man of steel and shadows. Had she become as unrecognizable to him? The delivery girl with the scar and the quiet life, living above a bar owned by a retired spymaster. Maybe. Maybe she was just another puzzle he’d happened upon. “I’m sorry,” Tomás said, his voice suddenly raw, the flat affect cracking for just a second. “I’m not… I’m not very good at this. At the past. It feels like a country I don’t have a passport for anymore.” “I know the feeling,” Rory said softly. The regret wasn’t just his; it was a shared atmosphere, a fine dust over the memory of who they were. She remembered his easy laugh, now vanished. He remembered her fierce optimism, now tempered into something cooler. He looked at the ring on his hand, twisting it once. “I heard about Evan. From Eva. Years ago.” Rory stilled. The name was a cold stone in her gut. “A lot happened after I left.” “Are you safe?” The question was direct, professional. The man who solved unconventional problems was looking at her, not the old friend. “Yes. It’s been years. He doesn’t know where I am.” She touched her wrist again, the crescent scar a testament to survival of a different kind. “It’s quiet now.” “Quiet is good.” He nodded, as if confirming an operational detail. He finished his pint. “I should go. I have a… meeting.” They stood again. The farewell felt as fraught as the greeting. He pulled her into a brief, stiff hug. He smelled of something clean and astringent, not the beer and rain-scent she remembered. “Don’t be a stranger,” he said, the cliché jarring in his mouth. “You’re in the city. And if you ever need… anything. A different kind of problem solved. You know where to find me.” He meant here. At The Raven’s Nest. The thought sent a shiver through her. “You too, Tomás,” she said. “Whatever it is you’re really doing.” He gave her a long, unreadable look. Then he turned and walked away, not toward the door, but toward the back where the bookshelves lined the wall, where the shadows were deepest. He didn’t limp, but he moved with a deliberate caution, as if his body was a machine that required mindful operation. Rory sat back down, her gin and tonic forgotten, now warm and flat. She stared at the empty stool where he’d been. The room felt larger, colder. She had come for a quiet drink, an escape from the day’s monotony. Instead, she had met a ghost, one who wore her friend’s name but carried the weight of a thousand unspoken miles. The past wasn’t a foreign country. It was here, sitting in the dim light of a Soho bar, drinking a pint and leaving without saying goodbye properly. It had eyes like polished stone and a scar on its arm that told a story she would never hear. And it had reminded her that every person you once knew carries inside them a universe of experiences you will never enter, a map of a territory you can no longer navigate. The weight of that, of time and the silent drift of lives, was heavier than any regret. She finished her drink in one swallow, the bitter gin a fitting last taste. The green neon outside the window pulsed, a lonely, beating heart in the London dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
80.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she countered gently [gently]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"Rory said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.46
leniency0.92
rawRatio0.13
effectiveRatio0.12
76.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1693
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
6
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"slightly"
2"gently"
3"really"
4"suddenly"
5"very"
6"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1693
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"echoes"
count1
6
word"charm"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"complex"
count1
10
word"testament"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"carried the weight"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"navigate"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"familiar"
2"sanctuary"
3"stark"
4"silence"
5"echoes"
6"charm"
7"tracing"
8"weight"
9"complex"
10"testament"
11"unreadable"
12"carried the weight"
13"unspoken"
14"navigate"
15"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences108
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1688
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1300
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho2
Carter1
Silas2
Blackwood1
Baltic1
Prague1
Tomás7
Portuguese1
London2
Rory8
Roath1
Evan1
Eva1
Pre-Law1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Tomás"
6"Portuguese"
7"Rory"
8"Evan"
9"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"London"
3"Roath"
globalScore1
windowScore1
37.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a novel she’d once read"
1"as if tasting them, finding them bland"
2"felt like an analysis"
3"as if confirming an operational detail"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.592
wordCount1688
matches
0"not toward the door, but toward the back"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean39.26
std31.01
cv0.79
sampleLengths
068
1102
266
319
43
533
692
726
839
919
1021
1156
1217
1316
1421
1544
1636
1730
1820
1938
2041
2152
2248
2365
2428
2553
2629
2713
289
2961
3039
3144
3219
3317
3422
3529
3622
3733
3834
3914
4011
4153
42186
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"was cropped"
1"was buried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was looking"
13.96% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences133
ratio0.045
matches
0"It was a smell that belonged to the flat above—the flat that wasn’t truly hers, just a borrowed perch in Silas Blackwood’s orbit."
1"The way he said it—a single, clipped word—closed a door."
2"She didn’t owe him the details—the abuse, the fear that turned her degree into a cage she had to break out of."
3"It wasn’t his signet; that had been a family heirloom."
4"In it, she saw the ghost of their shared history—a night of too much wine and philosophical arguments on a balcony, a failed attempt at kissing that had ended in laughter, a pact to always tell each other the truth."
5"The regret wasn’t just his; it was a shared atmosphere, a fine dust over the memory of who they were."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1313
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"simple, thick silver ring,"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.030464584920030464
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008377760853008377
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean12.69
std7.79
cv0.614
sampleLengths
023
122
223
37
417
531
611
720
816
917
1020
1112
129
138
1419
153
169
1719
185
199
201
215
2218
2317
2428
2514
269
278
289
2919
308
3112
3214
335
3413
358
362
3721
3824
399
409
418
4215
431
4410
456
465
4710
4822
4912
54.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3684210526315789
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners49
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences102
matches
0"Maybe she was just another"
1"Then he turned and walked"
2"Instead, she had met a"
ratio0.029
31.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences102
matches
0"It was a smell that"
1"It was Silas’s history, curated"
2"She ordered a gin and"
3"She’d come from the restaurant,"
4"Her delivery shift had ended"
5"She sipped her drink, watching"
6"It was a voice she"
7"She turned on her stool."
8"He stood a few feet"
9"His hair was cropped short,"
10"He wore a plain, dark"
11"His eyes, once a warm"
12"She stood, the stool scraping"
13"he said, his accent still"
14"He smiled, but it didn’t"
15"Her hand instinctively went to"
16"He placed one of the"
17"she began, tracing the condensation"
18"He took a long drink"
19"He set his glass down"
ratio0.471
9.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences102
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
2"It was a smell that"
3"The bar was a sanctuary"
4"Light pooled in low, golden"
5"The walls were a collage"
6"It was Silas’s history, curated"
7"Rory took a seat at"
8"She ordered a gin and"
9"She’d come from the restaurant,"
10"Her delivery shift had ended"
11"The crescent scar there, a"
12"A ghost from a childhood"
13"Cardiff felt like a novel"
14"She sipped her drink, watching"
15"It was a voice she"
16"A voice that used to"
17"She turned on her stool."
18"He stood a few feet"
19"This man was older, broader"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Her delivery shift had ended an hour ago, her wrist throbbing with the familiar ache of gripping the scooter’s handlebars."
1"His hair was cropped short, his face clean-shaven, all sharp angles that looked carved rather than grown."
2"It wasn’t his signet; that had been a family heirloom."
3"The man who solved unconventional problems was looking at her, not the old friend."
4"He didn’t limp, but he moved with a deliberate caution, as if his body was a machine that required mindful operation."
16.30% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Rory said, her voice quieter than she intended"
1"He leaned, his voice dropping"
2"Rory asked, her curiosity overriding caution"
3"He nodded, as if confirming an operational detail"
4"he said, the cliché jarring in his mouth"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.18
leniency0.36
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.04
77.2219%