Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFH5X8D1FFG6AAFWWN2EFEZ

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Duration:
2m 7s
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$0.012653
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Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Thriller genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow’s boot slips on a grease-stained kebab wrapper, and she slams her palm into a damp brick wall to arrest her momentum. Her worn leather watch digs into her wrist, the fogged face reading 1:14am as she pushes off the wall, legs burning, and picks up the pace again. Thirty yards ahead, Tomás Herrera’s dark curly head bobs around a corner, his medical bag slapping against his hip as he runs. She’d tailed him out of the Raven’s Nest ten minutes prior, the bar’s distinctive green neon sign bleaching the back of his jacket before he’d spotted her unmarked car idling across the Soho street and bolted. She’d sat on that nest of vipers for six weeks, digging up every scrap of evidence she could link them to the three teenagers found drained of blood in Shoreditch, their wrists carved with the same unreadable mark that had been burned into her partner’s chest three years prior. No one at the Met would listen. They called her obsessed, said DS Morris’s death was a random gang killing, said the marks were nothing but graffiti. Harlow knew better. She’d seen the way the case files vanished from the mainframe, the way her superiors transferred her to desk duty after she pushed for an investigation into the clique that ran the Raven’s Nest. This was her only shot. She cuts through a gaggle of drunk students stumbling out of a Camden pub, their shouts fading behind her as she watches Tomás flag down a black cab that pulls over before he even finishes raising his hand. No queue, no hesitation, the driver’s window rolling down just far enough to show a flash of white teeth before Tomás climbs in. Harlow sprints back to her own idling car, yanks the door shut, and slams her foot on the accelerator, the cab pulling away three cars ahead of her. Rain lashes the windscreen, her wipers fighting to keep the road clear as they cross the canal bridge into Camden, the high street’s neon signs blurring into streaks of pink and blue. She keeps two car lengths back, her eyes fixed on the cab’s rear plates, too familiar with the clique’s habit of dumping tails to get careless. Ten minutes later, the cab pulls over on a dim side street lined with boarded-up shopfronts, half a block from the locked entrance to the old Camden Town Tube branch, abandoned since a 1979 fire. Tomás climbs out, doesn’t look back, and walks straight for the chain-link fence strung across the entrance. Harlow kills her engine, sits in the dark for two minutes, waiting to make sure he’s not laying a trap. She runs a hand over her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair, plastered to her sharp jaw by rain, and rests her hand on the service pistol holstered at her hip. She’d snuck out of her flat with nothing but her badge, her gun, and the crumpled photo of her and Morris she kept in her wallet. She’d spent three years chasing the shadow of what killed him, and it had led her right here. She climbs out of the car, locks the door behind her, and creeps along the side of the road, sticking to the shadows of the buildings. She peers around the fence line, and watches Tomás pull a small, smooth bone token from the pocket of his jeans, run it along a faint groove carved into the brick wall beside the entrance. The heavy metal door embedded in the wall swings inward with a low groan, no alarm, no sound, just dark. Tomás slips inside, and the door starts to swing shut behind him. Harlow’s first thought is to call for backup. Her second is that backup would never come. No one would believe her that there was a market full of who knew what behind that door, that the clique she’d been chasing wasn’t just a group of drug dealers, but something else entirely. She thinks of the three dead teenagers, their cold bodies pulled from the Thames, of Morris’s grin in that photo, the way he’d laughed when she told him they’d crack the case that night. She runs for the door, slips through the gap before it closes all the way, and presses her back to the cold brick wall inside, her breath caught in her throat. The air smells of cinnamon, burnt sage, and a sharp metallic tang that stings her nostrils, copper, fresh and thick. Her eyes adjust to the dim light, and she blinks. The old Tube station is strung with warm orange fairy lights, strung from the cracked ceiling along the length of the platform. Stalls line both sides of the overgrown tracks, vendors leaning over wooden tables stacked with oddities: vials of glowing green liquid, small leather pouches strung on cord, stacks of bone tokens just like the one Tomás used, their surfaces carved with the same unreadable mark she’d seen on the dead kids. A woman with horns curling from her forehead sells mirrors that show faces that aren’t the viewer’s, a man in a hood sharpens a silver knife that glints in the fairy light, muttering to himself in a language Harlow can’t place. She’d heard rumors, once, of a veil between the human world and something else, a market that moved every full moon, that sold things no human shop could stock. She’d thought they were just urban myths, stories coppers told each other on late shifts to pass the time. She’d been wrong. She pushes off the wall, keeping her head down, and walks slowly along the platform, her boots silent on worn concrete. She spots Tomás ten yards ahead, standing at a stall piled high with sterile bandages and glass vials, his medical bag open on the table as he hands the vendor a stack of cash. The vendor passes him a vial of glowing blue liquid, and Tomás tucks it into his bag, his hand brushing the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck, the gold glinting. Harlow steps forward, her hand moving to the gun at her hip, and a loose tile skitters under her boot. The sound echoes off the tunnel walls, and Tomás’s head snaps up, his warm brown eyes locking with hers. He doesn’t yell, doesn’t run, not at first. He just stares, his jaw tight, the scar along his left forearm peeking out from the sleeve of his jacket. “Detective Quinn.” His voice is low, the faint Seville lilt thickening, the way it did when he gave his witness statement years prior, after he lost his NHS license for treating unauthorized patients. “You shouldn’t be here.” “Turns out I’m sick of people telling me where I shouldn’t be.” Harlow’s hand wraps around the grip of her pistol. “Three kids are dead, Herrera. You’re the only link between them and the Raven’s Nest. You’re coming with me.” Tomás laughs, a sharp, bitter sound, and steps back, away from her. “You think this is a normal arrest? You think you can walk out of here with me in cuffs and that’ll be the end of it? You don’t know what you’re walking into.” “I know you lost your license for treating patients no other doctor would touch.” Harlow advances slowly, the stalls around her going quiet, every eye in the market turning to her. “Those kids weren’t human, were they? They were whatever this lot is, and something killed them, and you’re running because you’re next. I can protect you.” A low boom echoes through the station, and a set of heavy iron gates slams down across the mouth of the tunnel behind Tomás, cutting off his only escape. He flinches, staring at the gates, then back at Harlow, and this time there is unmistakeable fear in his eyes. “You brought the wardens. They don’t let trespassers leave. Not alive.” Harlow spins around, her pistol raised, and comes face to face with three men, their eyes solid black, their shoulders broad enough to block the entrance she’d slipped through. The lead man holds a cudgel carved from the same dark, pitted wood as the gates, and he takes a step forward, the concrete floor creaking under his weight. Behind her, Tomás yells her name, but she can’t look away, her finger tightening on the trigger of her gun, as the lead man smiles, and his teeth split into a row of sharp, yellowed fangs.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Harlow’s hand wraps around [around]"
1"Harlow advances slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.5
92.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1406
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1406
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"unreadable"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"echoes"
count2
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"familiar"
2"glinting"
3"echoes"
4"lilt"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
89.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences54
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"starts to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences59
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1406
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1285
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tomás13
Herrera1
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Shoreditch1
Met1
Morris3
Camden3
Town1
Tube2
Thames1
Harlow11
Saint1
Christopher1
Seville1
persons
0"Tomás"
1"Herrera"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
4"Harlow"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"Shoreditch"
2"Camden"
3"Town"
4"Tube"
5"Thames"
6"Seville"
globalScore0.994
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1406
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"is that backup"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs11
mean127.82
std88.22
cv0.69
sampleLengths
0225
1199
2186
3311
4152
537
640
745
857
960
1094
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"been burned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs201
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1290
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.01937984496124031
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005426356589147287
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean23.83
std10.87
cv0.456
sampleLengths
022
127
222
336
449
57
620
73
834
95
1038
1123
1228
1332
1426
1535
1617
1720
1829
1926
2018
2126
2235
2320
2412
258
268
2735
2834
2931
3020
3110
3222
3351
3441
3529
3619
373
3821
3934
4030
4120
4219
438
4420
4533
464
4721
4819
4912
40.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3559322033898305
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences54
matches
0"Her worn leather watch digs"
1"She’d tailed him out of"
2"She’d sat on that nest"
3"They called her obsessed, said"
4"She’d seen the way the"
5"She cuts through a gaggle"
6"She keeps two car lengths"
7"She runs a hand over"
8"She’d snuck out of her"
9"She’d spent three years chasing"
10"She climbs out of the"
11"She peers around the fence"
12"Her second is that backup"
13"She thinks of the three"
14"She runs for the door,"
15"Her eyes adjust to the"
16"She’d heard rumors, once, of"
17"She’d thought they were just"
18"She’d been wrong."
19"She pushes off the wall,"
ratio0.463
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences54
matches
0"Harlow’s boot slips on a"
1"Her worn leather watch digs"
2"She’d tailed him out of"
3"She’d sat on that nest"
4"They called her obsessed, said"
5"Harlow knew better."
6"She’d seen the way the"
7"This was her only shot."
8"She cuts through a gaggle"
9"Harlow sprints back to her"
10"Rain lashes the windscreen, her"
11"She keeps two car lengths"
12"Tomás climbs out, doesn’t look"
13"Harlow kills her engine, sits"
14"She runs a hand over"
15"She’d snuck out of her"
16"She’d spent three years chasing"
17"She climbs out of the"
18"She peers around the fence"
19"The heavy metal door embedded"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She’d sat on that nest of vipers for six weeks, digging up every scrap of evidence she could link them to the three teenagers found drained of blood in Shoredit…"
1"She’d seen the way the case files vanished from the mainframe, the way her superiors transferred her to desk duty after she pushed for an investigation into the…"
2"The air smells of cinnamon, burnt sage, and a sharp metallic tang that stings her nostrils, copper, fresh and thick."
3"The vendor passes him a vial of glowing blue liquid, and Tomás tucks it into his bag, his hand brushing the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck, the gol…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.1818%