| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2035 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2035 | | totalAiIsms | 46 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "comforting" | | 9 | "resonated" | | 10 | "throb" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "mechanical" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "shimmered" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "resolve" | | 18 | "weight" | | 19 | "gloom" | | 20 | "echoed" | | 21 | "resonance" | | 22 | "raced" | | 23 | "magnetic" | | 24 | "wavering" | | 25 | "sense of" | | 26 | "unspoken" | | 27 | "trembled" | | 28 | "glint" | | 29 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 15 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "appear to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2063 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 2038 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.54 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Silas | 1 | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | glossingSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "vibration that seemed to sync with the faint throb she felt in the grove’s heart" | | 1 | "vibration that seemed to emanate from the roots themselves" | | 2 | "as if looking through heat haze over asphalt on a summer day" | | 3 | "as if testing her resolve" | | 4 | "silhouette that seemed to be made of the night itself, darker than the surrounding shadows, yet with edges that shimmered faintly, like oil on water" | | 5 | "whistle that seemed to carry a melody she almost recognized" | | 6 | "as if responding to an unspoken cue, it lowered its head" | | 7 | "sigh that seemed to dissolve into the grove itself" | | 8 | "felt like a lullaby after the tension o" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 12 | | per1kWords | 5.817 | | wordCount | 2063 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the absence of sound, but the way sound seemed to be swallowed before it could reach h" | | 1 | "not loud, but it resonated in the hollow of her bones, a vibration" | | 2 | "not a visual wobble, but a sense" | | 3 | "not a voice she could decipher, but a sensation of words forming just beyond comprehension, like" | | 4 | "not a magnetic force, but a sensation akin to being drawn toward a cold flame" | | 5 | "not the pain, but the sudden, sharp clarity" | | 6 | "not necessarily an invader, but perhaps a guardian" | | 7 | "not with threat but with recognition" | | 8 | "not in greeting but in offering" | | 9 | "not in words, but in sensation, in the subtle language of place" | | 10 | "not meant to be crossed, but merely acknowledged" | | 11 | "not what lurks in the dark, but the realization" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.08% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 64.47 | | std | 24.36 | | cv | 0.378 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 88 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 92 | | 4 | 81 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 69 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 71 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 118 | | 16 | 93 | | 17 | 89 | | 18 | 69 | | 19 | 67 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 58 | | 22 | 90 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 67 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 55 | | 27 | 57 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 68 | | 30 | 90 | | 31 | 76 |
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| 78.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "were muffled" | | 1 | "been disturbed" | | 2 | "were composed" | | 3 | "were elongated" | | 4 | "being drawn" | | 5 | "been given" | | 6 | "was gone" | | 7 | "been seen" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 332 | | matches | | 0 | "were watching" | | 1 | "were studying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 27 | | semicolonCount | 9 | | flaggedSentences | 29 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.271 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient standing stones — half‑buried, moss‑slicked trunks of oak that had stood longer than any memory of the park — formed a ragged circle, their bark etched with lichen that caught the moonlight in faint, silver veins." | | 1 | "Above, the canopy of leaves — though it should have been bare in late autumn — rustled with a sound like silk brushing silk, though no wind stirred the branches." | | 2 | "The scent of damp soil and something sweeter — like honey left too long in the sun — filled her nostrils." | | 3 | "She moved forward, eyes scanning the standing stones for any sign of alteration — carvings that weren’t there before, symbols etched in the bark, a shift in the way the moonlight pooled." | | 4 | "A sudden crack split the night — a branch snapping somewhere beyond the circle." | | 5 | "The sound did not repeat; instead, a low, almost imperceptible hum began to rise from the ground, like the distant thrum of a transformer buried deep beneath the soil." | | 6 | "It was not mechanical; it was organic, a vibration that seemed to emanate from the roots themselves." | | 7 | "Her breath came shallow; the scar on her wrist prickled, as if the skin remembered some ancient warning." | | 8 | "Between two of the oldest oaks, where the roots knelt together like clasped hands, a faint distortion shimmered — not a visual wobble, but a sense that the air there was thinner, as if looking through heat haze over asphalt on a summer day." | | 9 | "The moment she crossed an invisible line — perhaps the boundary where the standing stones’ influence waned — the humming sharpened into a whisper." | | 10 | "A rustle came from her left — a soft, deliberate shuffle of leaves." | | 11 | "In that brief illumination, she saw something she had missed before: the bark of the nearest standing stone bore a series of shallow grooves, arranged in a pattern that resembled a spiral — a symbol she had glimpsed once in an old folklore book about portals to other realms." | | 12 | "Her mind, trained to spot anomalies, connected the dots: the spiral, the humming, the way time felt thick here — this was not just a grove; it was a thinning, a place where the veil between worlds wore thin." | | 13 | "The space between two stones — previously empty — now held a shape." | | 14 | "It was not a person, not exactly; it was a silhouette that seemed to be made of the night itself, darker than the surrounding shadows, yet with edges that shimmered faintly, like oil on water." | | 15 | "The figure had no discernible face — only a suggestion of where eyes might be, two hollows that drank in the red light from her pendant and reflected nothing back." | | 16 | "She could feel the pull — not a magnetic force, but a sensation akin to being drawn toward a cold flame." | | 17 | "The memory of that childhood accident flashed — not the pain, but the sudden, sharp clarity that had come after: the world narrowing to the sensation of blood, the realization that she was still alive, that she could still act." | | 18 | "Instead, it tilted its head, and from the depth of its hollow eyes came a sound like wind through a narrow crack — a soft, breathy whistle that seemed to carry a melody she almost recognized." | | 19 | "It was not hostile; it was inquisitive, as if it were studying her as she studied it." | | 20 | "No note, no explanation — just the Heartstone, warm and throbbing." | | 21 | "She realized then that the grove was not just a place where the veil was thin; it was a threshold." | | 22 | "And whatever stood before her was not necessarily an invader, but perhaps a guardian — or a prisoner — bound to the space by the same ancient forces that made the standing stones hum." | | 23 | "She lifted her free hand, palm outward, not in greeting but in offering — a gesture of peace she had learned from her mother’s stories about treating the wild things of the forest with respect." | | 24 | "The figure did not vanish; it simply…" | | 25 | "The spiral grooves on the stone caught the moonlight, now appearing less like a warning and more like a map — an invitation, perhaps, to those who could read it." | | 26 | "She had come seeking answers about the artifact; instead, she had found a conversation — one spoken not in words, but in sensation, in the subtle language of place and presence." | | 27 | "The humming faded, leaving only the distant murmur of London’s traffic and the rustle of leaves in the wind — ordinary sounds that now felt like a lullaby after the tension of the unseen." | | 28 | "The Heartstone rested against her chest, warm and constant, a quiet reminder that some thresholds are not meant to be crossed, but merely acknowledged — and that sometimes, the most terrifying thing is not what lurks in the dark, but the realization that you have been seen, and yet, you are still allowed to leave." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 737 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.028493894165535955 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008141112618724558 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 19.28 | | std | 11.06 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 44 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 38 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 44.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.22429906542056074 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 95.24% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she forced herself to" | | 1 | "Instead, it tilted its head," | | 2 | "Then, as if responding to" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 60.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, breath fogging in" | | 1 | "She had come for the" | | 2 | "She had felt it pulse" | | 3 | "Her own footsteps on the" | | 4 | "She paused, hand drifting to" | | 5 | "It had been a childhood" | | 6 | "She touched it now, feeling" | | 7 | "It was comforting, yet it" | | 8 | "It was not loud, but" | | 9 | "She lifted the pendant slightly," | | 10 | "she whispered to herself, voice" | | 11 | "She moved forward, eyes scanning" | | 12 | "It was not mechanical; it" | | 13 | "She crouched, pressing her palm" | | 14 | "She could feel it through" | | 15 | "Her breath came shallow; the" | | 16 | "She rose slowly, eyes narrowing." | | 17 | "It was not a voice" | | 18 | "She halted, heart thudding." | | 19 | "She fought the urge to" |
| | ratio | 0.4 | |
| 17.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter slipped through the" | | 1 | "The night beyond Richmond Park" | | 2 | "She paused, breath fogging in" | | 3 | "The ancient standing stones —" | | 4 | "She had come for the" | | 5 | "The Heartstone, a thumbnail‑sized crimson" | | 6 | "She had felt it pulse" | | 7 | "Aurora tightened the strap of" | | 8 | "The first thing that struck" | | 9 | "Her own footsteps on the" | | 10 | "Wildflowers, impossibly vivid, dotted the" | | 11 | "She paused, hand drifting to" | | 12 | "It had been a childhood" | | 13 | "She touched it now, feeling" | | 14 | "The scent of damp soil" | | 15 | "It was comforting, yet it" | | 16 | "A soft chime rang from" | | 17 | "It was not loud, but" | | 18 | "She lifted the pendant slightly," | | 19 | "The stone glowed with an" |
| | ratio | 0.886 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | technicalSentenceCount | 21 | | matches | | 0 | "The night beyond Richmond Park was a wash of streetlamp glow and distant traffic, but inside the grove the darkness seemed to have depth, like water that swallo…" | | 1 | "The ancient standing stones — half‑buried, moss‑slicked trunks of oak that had stood longer than any memory of the park — formed a ragged circle, their bark etc…" | | 2 | "It was not loud, but it resonated in the hollow of her bones, a vibration that seemed to sync with the faint throb she felt in the grove’s heart." | | 3 | "She moved forward, eyes scanning the standing stones for any sign of alteration — carvings that weren’t there before, symbols etched in the bark, a shift in the…" | | 4 | "The grove felt alive in a way that was both inviting and hostile, as if the trees themselves were watching, their trunks subtly turning to follow her progress." | | 5 | "It was not mechanical; it was organic, a vibration that seemed to emanate from the roots themselves." | | 6 | "Between two of the oldest oaks, where the roots knelt together like clasped hands, a faint distortion shimmered — not a visual wobble, but a sense that the air …" | | 7 | "The wildflowers near that spot seemed to sway inward, their stems bending toward the void as though drawn by an invisible current." | | 8 | "The whisper seemed to coil around her thoughts, urging her forward, then pulling back, as if testing her resolve." | | 9 | "The crimson stone flared, casting a thin wash of red light that painted the nearby stones in shades of blood and rose." | | 10 | "In that brief illumination, she saw something she had missed before: the bark of the nearest standing stone bore a series of shallow grooves, arranged in a patt…" | | 11 | "It was not a person, not exactly; it was a silhouette that seemed to be made of the night itself, darker than the surrounding shadows, yet with edges that shimm…" | | 12 | "The wildflowers at its feet wilted instantaneously, their petals curling inward as though scorched by an unseen frost." | | 13 | "The memory of that childhood accident flashed — not the pain, but the sudden, sharp clarity that had come after: the world narrowing to the sensation of blood, …" | | 14 | "Instead, it tilted its head, and from the depth of its hollow eyes came a sound like wind through a narrow crack — a soft, breathy whistle that seemed to carry …" | | 15 | "It was not hostile; it was inquisitive, as if it were studying her as she studied it." | | 16 | "And whatever stood before her was not necessarily an invader, but perhaps a guardian — or a prisoner — bound to the space by the same ancient forces that made t…" | | 17 | "Aurora felt a sudden, dizzying sense of familiarity, as if she had seen this shape before in a dream she could not recall upon waking." | | 18 | "The humming from the earth softened, returning to a low, almost imperceptible vibration that matched the slow thrum of the Heartstone." | | 19 | "The wildflowers at its feet trembled, then slowly unfurled, their colors returning as if nothing had disturbed them." | | 20 | "As she stepped over the moss‑rooted threshold, the grove seemed to exhale behind her, the wildflowers swaying gently in a breeze that had not been there a momen…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, voice barely more than a breath" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |