| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 93.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1517 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 67.04% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1517 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "searing" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 174 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 174 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 27 | | totalWords | 1517 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "Snap." | | 1 | "What if the silver chain isn't the link between her and the outside world?" | | 2 | "What if the pendant is the bait?" | | 3 | "Sit still, Rory. Sit still." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1517 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.53 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "London" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | London | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Regent | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | English | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Jennifer" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Regent" | | 4 | "Street" | | 5 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 55.66% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a vibration in her own bones" | | 1 | "sounded like her mother, Jennifer, teachin" | | 2 | "looked like the silhouette of her own ref" | | 3 | "looked like it was asking a question that" |
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| 68.16% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.318 | | wordCount | 1517 | | matches | | 0 | "not physically, but passively, like trees bending under a winter gale" | | 1 | "not like a barrier, but like a mouth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 39.92 | | std | 27.15 | | cv | 0.68 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 85 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 78 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 82 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 65 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 74 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 58 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 62 | | 26 | 51 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 50 | | 33 | 85 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 20 |
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| 93.16% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 174 | | matches | | 0 | "were bloomed" | | 1 | "was built" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "were closed" | | 5 | "was gone" |
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| 71.79% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 260 | | matches | | 0 | "was telling" | | 1 | "was hardening" | | 2 | "were leaning" | | 3 | "was asking" | | 4 | "was standing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 174 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "It did not absorb sound; it waited for it." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1523 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.021667760998030205 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004596191726854892 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 174 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 174 | | mean | 8.72 | | std | 6.12 | | cv | 0.702 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 33.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 29 | | diversityRatio | 0.19540229885057472 | | totalSentences | 174 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 62.50% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, here in the pocket" | | 1 | "Usually, the moss on stones" | | 2 | "Only the stones." |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 37.50% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "It should spill soft, dull" | | 1 | "She stopped just inside the" | | 2 | "They were ancient, massive oaks" | | 3 | "It was a low-level heat," | | 4 | "She looked at her left" | | 5 | "She had hidden it most" | | 6 | "It always did when the" | | 7 | "It should have been cold." | | 8 | "It was the temperature of" | | 9 | "She came here to find" | | 10 | "It was the sound of" | | 11 | "She had walked this ridge" | | 12 | "She knew the rhythm of" | | 13 | "It did not absorb sound;" | | 14 | "She took another step." | | 15 | "Her dress rustled against the" | | 16 | "It did not sway." | | 17 | "Their petals were closed tight," | | 18 | "She had just finished deliveries" | | 19 | "It was telling her to" |
| | ratio | 0.456 | |
| 25.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 139 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "The light filtering through the" | | 1 | "Moonlight shouldn't cast shadows in" | | 2 | "It should spill soft, dull" | | 3 | "Aurora Carter stepped off the" | | 4 | "She stopped just inside the" | | 5 | "They were ancient, massive oaks" | | 6 | "Aurora reached down, her fingers" | | 7 | "The metal burned through her" | | 8 | "It was a low-level heat," | | 9 | "She looked at her left" | | 10 | "The small crescent-shaped scar shimmered" | | 11 | "She had hidden it most" | | 12 | "The scar itched." | | 13 | "It always did when the" | | 14 | "Rory pulled the silver chain" | | 15 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay flat" | | 16 | "It should have been cold." | | 17 | "It was the temperature of" | | 18 | "That was how she knew." | | 19 | "She came here to find" |
| | ratio | 0.869 | |
| 31.25% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "If the timer malfunctioned, she" |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 11.90% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "They were ancient, massive oaks felled to upright slabs, their bark stripped clean as if by a dull saw." | | 1 | "It was a low-level heat, the kind that signaled a change in atmospheric pressure before a storm." | | 2 | "She had hidden it most nights, sleeves pulled over the forearm when walking down the street in London, but here, out alone in the Richmond Park that belonged to…" | | 3 | "It was the sound of a door hinge rusting, wet and choking, sliding on wood that did not exist." | | 4 | "The little wildflowers that grew here, which the codex said were bloomed year-round, looked stiff, almost plastic under the moonlight." | | 5 | "Their petals were closed tight, some bruised purple, others a white that did not reflect the sky." | | 6 | "The deep crimson stone hummed, a vibration that rattled her teeth." | | 7 | "She could see the standing stones were leaning slightly, not physically, but passively, like trees bending under a winter gale that hadn't touched them." | | 8 | "She could see the heels of her own boots dragging through the dirt, leaving wet imprints that were far deeper than her weight ouline." | | 9 | "Faint glow emanated from the crimson stone, a heartbeat that matched the shattering of her own sense of time." | | 10 | "She closed her eyes, the pendant burning at the point of her breast, waiting for the light to break her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |