Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFK8GSJ13N62D8HY8R2S9S4

Run Details

Duration:
2m 30s
Cost:
$0.013872
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain stuck to the Raven’s Nest’s smudged front windows like crushed ash, turning Soho’s neon bleed into a watercolor mess of lime and pink that streaked down the panes. Rory leaned her shoulder against the oak bar, the neck of her half-empty lager cold against her palm, and rubbed the crescent scar on her left wrist until it pinkened. It was 9:17 on a Tuesday, the slowest night of the week, the only other patrons a pair of backpackers who’d split an order of fries from the chip shop down the block and were now squabbling over a subway map spread across their table. Her Golden Empress delivery uniform still smelled like ginger and soy, the thermal bag slung over the foot of her stool crumpled at the edges, the last run of the night done early enough that she’d skipped changing out of the black polo emblazoned with the restaurant’s gold dragon before settling in. Above her, the stairs to her flat creaked only when she climbed them; for the last six months, this bar had been the only place she didn’t feel like she was holding her breath, even if the text that had pinged her phone three nights prior—I know you’re in London.—still looped in her head, Evan’s name blocked but his number familiar, the one he’d cycled through three times before she’d fled Cardiff. Silas was wiping down the same spot on the bar for the third time in ten minutes, his hazel eyes fixed on the door like he was waiting for someone, though Rory had never known him to wait for anyone. The silver signet ring he never took off glinted as he wrung the cloth out, his left leg propped on the low footrest under the bar to take the weight off the bad knee that gave him that faint, familiar limp. She’d never asked him how he’d hurt it, just like he’d never asked her about the scar on her wrist or the way she flinched whenever a man’s voice raised too loud behind her. The walls of the Nest were lined with things he never talked about either: frayed black and white photos of men with unsmiling faces, old maps of cities she’d only ever read about, Prague and Berlin and Beirut, their edges taped back together where they’d torn. The green neon sign above the door sputtered every few minutes, casting a sickly glow over the frame of the bookshelf that hid the back room, the one she’d only seen open twice, when men in tailored coats had slipped in after hours and stayed until dawn, their voices too low to make out. The door’s brass bell jangled before she could take another sip of lager, cold air and rain blowing in hard enough to make the candles on the bar flicker. A man stood in the doorway, soaked through to the bone, his dark hair streaked with the same grey that threaded through Silas’s auburn waves, his coat dripping onto the scuffed pine floor. He was around Silas’s age, fifty-eight, give or take, his face lined around the eyes like he’d spent a lot of time squinting into sun he hadn’t expected to see. For a second, no one moved. The backpackers went quiet, the only sound the gurgle of the cider pot simmering on the back burner, spiced with cloves and cinnamon. Silas’s cloth slipped from his hand, landing in a puddle of spilled beer on the bar. Rory had never seen him look unsteady, not even when a drunk had thrown a punch at him the month prior and Silas had disarmed him before the man’s fist had gotten within a foot of his jaw. But now his face went white, the color draining from his cheekbones like someone had sucked it out, and he had to grab the edge of the bar to keep from leaning too hard on his bad leg. “Si,” the man said, his voice rough, like he’d gargled with glass. He pushed the door shut behind him, the bell jangling again, and shook rain off his sleeves. “Heard you were hiding out here. Took me three months to track you down. Told a bloke in a Camden pub you ran the only raven-themed bar in Soho worth drinking in, and who else would be daft enough to name a bar that?” Silas didn’t speak for a long time. He bent slowly, his limp more pronounced than Rory had ever seen it, to pick up the cloth, and when he stood up, his voice was hoarse, like he’d swallowed a stone. “Tom. I buried you. Your mum’s plot in St. Fagans, outside Cardiff. I sent daffodils every spring. Your mum thought I was your work mate. Never had the heart to tell her I was the only family you had left.” Rory’s breath caught. St. Fagans was the cemetery on the edge of the city she’d grown up in, the same one her nan was buried in. She’d rubbed the scar on her wrist so hard it stung, and she dropped her hand into her lap, staring at the two men across the bar, the space between them thick with twelve years of things they’d never said. Tom walked toward the bar, his boots squelching, and leaned against the wood, ten feet away from Rory, like she was just part of the furniture, just the quiet girl who lived upstairs who never bothered anyone. He pulled off his soaked coat, draping it over the back of a stool, and sat down, his eyes sweeping over the maps on the wall, landing on a tattered photo taped behind the bar: two young men standing in front of Prague’s Charles Bridge, Silas twenty years younger, his hair a deep unstreaked auburn, no limp, grinning with a beer bottle in his hand, Tom at his side, equally bright-eyed. “You kept the photos,” he said, quiet. “Couldn’t throw them away,” Silas said. He poured two fingers of bourbon into chipped tumblers, pushing one across the bar to Tom, the silver signet ring scraping against the wood. The bourbon was the good stuff, the stuff he only pulled out for people he cared about, the stuff Rory had only seen him serve once, when his sister came to visit the previous Christmas. “The official report said you died in the raid. The line was the safe house blew up, that there was nothing left to bury. I spent six months trying to prove they were lying. MI6 shut me out, said I was traumatized, stuck me behind a desk, and I quit. Moved down here, opened this place. Thought I’d spend the rest of my life making amends for leaving you there.” Tom laughed, but it was wet, and he swiped at his cheek with the back of his hand before he picked up the bourbon, taking a long sip. “You didn’t leave me. MI6 left us both. They faked my death to keep the double they’d planted in the cell from finding out I was still alive. Spent five years in a prison outside Plzeň. Got out when a contact I’d made traded a hard drive full of state secrets for my release. Spent the last seven years in Portugal, growing oranges. Had a lot of time to think. A lot of time to say I was sorry.” He rolled up the sleeve of his sweater, and a thin, silver brand bloomed on his forearm, faded but still legible, a mark the prison guards had left on men who caused trouble. “I caused a lot of trouble there. But I’m sorriest I got us into that mess. I told you the asset was clean. I told you we didn’t need backup. That was all me. I got you thrown out of the service, got you that limp. I read the reports they put out, said you took a bullet getting out. Bullshit. You went back in for me. Tripped over that fucking root in the safe house’s backyard, blew out your knee. I heard that from the bloke who pulled you out. You risked everything for me, and I got us both burnt.” Silas was crying now, silent tears tracking down his face, his beard glistening where they wet the hair. He twisted the signet ring on his finger, over and over, the same nervous tick Rory had when she was scared. “I blamed myself. I thought I should have overridden you. I was the lead on the op. It was my call. I spent twelve years thinking I’d gotten my best friend killed. Twelve years of drinking alone, of putting those maps up on the wall so I never forgot. Never forgot what I’d done.” Rory’s throat tightened. She pulled her phone out of her pocket, the screen lighting up, the last text from Eva, her childhood best friend who’d begged her to come to London after Evan hit her, the one she’d pushed away eleven months prior, when Evan had found her in Bristol and showed up at her flat. She’d been so scared he’d hurt anyone who loved her that she’d screamed at Eva over the phone, told her she never wanted to see her again, that if she contacted her she’d move to Scotland and never come back. Eva’s last text was still in her inbox, sent the day after that fight: I’m here whenever you’re ready. I love you. Rory typed, fast, her fingers shaking, I’m in London. I live above a bar in Soho. I’m so sorry I pushed you away. I was scared he’d hurt you. Can we get coffee tomorrow? Please. She hit send, and a second later, the text bubbles popped up, Eva online, like she’d been waiting for it. I’ll bring your favorite cinnamon latte. I’m outside your bar right now. I’ve been parked down the block for a week, making sure you’re okay. Rory looked up, her bright blue eyes wet, and through the rain-streaked window, she saw a woman leaning against a streetlamp, her phone in her hand, waving. Across the bar, Silas and Tom were clinking their bourbon glasses, the weight of twelve years of regret lifting, softening, like the rain outside that was starting to slow. The green neon sign glowed, casting a green glow over the maps, over the two old friends who’d found each other again, over Rory, who’d just gotten her best friend back. She stood up, slinging her thermal bag over her shoulder, and called across the bar, “I’m heading up, Si. Lock up when you’re done, yeah?” Silas looked up, wiped his eyes, and grinned, a real grin, the first one Rory had seen in months. “See you tomorrow, kid. Enjoy your coffee.” Rory laughed, wiping the tears off her face, and pulled the door open, the bell jangling behind her, the cold rain hitting her face, and Eva was there, pulling her into a hug, and for the first time in years, she didn’t feel like she was holding her breath.
created_at"2026-03-11T23:21:10.206Z" 3/11/2026, 11:21:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1846
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1846
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"simmering"
count1
4
word"glistening"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"flicker"
3"simmering"
4"glistening"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
95.24% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences56
matches
0"was scared"
1"was scared"
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences56
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen112
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1845
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1430
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Soho2
Tuesday1
Golden1
Empress1
London3
Evan3
Cardiff1
Rory14
Prague2
Berlin1
Beirut1
Silas11
Charles1
Bridge1
Tom5
Christmas1
Eva5
Bristol1
Scotland1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Evan"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Tom"
5"Eva"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
4"Prague"
5"Berlin"
6"Beirut"
7"Charles"
8"Bridge"
9"Bristol"
10"Scotland"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like ginger and soy, the thermal b"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1845
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
57.95% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs11
mean167.73
std59.18
cv0.353
sampleLengths
0229
1215
2213
373
479
5181
6135
7242
893
9198
10187
80.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences56
matches
0"were lined"
1"was buried"
2"was scared"
3"been parked"
2.26% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs236
matches
0"was holding"
1"was wiping"
2"was waiting"
3"was crying"
4"were clinking"
5"was starting"
6"was holding"
96.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences61
ratio0.016
matches
0"Above her, the stairs to her flat creaked only when she climbed them; for the last six months, this bar had been the only place she didn’t feel like she was holding her breath, even if the text that had pinged her phone three nights prior—I know you’re in London.—still looped in her head, Evan’s name blocked but his number familiar, the one he’d cycled through three times before she’d fled Cardiff."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1435
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.032752613240418116
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.008362369337979094
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean30.25
std23.24
cv0.768
sampleLengths
030
130
245
352
472
540
641
734
846
954
1029
1133
1230
136
1423
1516
1638
1738
1812
1917
2044
217
2232
2340
243
251
2622
2740
2837
2971
307
316
3224
3335
3470
3528
36112
37102
3818
3921
4054
413
4253
4340
4419
453
469
477
487
496
52.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.39344262295081966
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences53
matches
0"It was 9:17 on a"
1"Her Golden Empress delivery uniform"
2"She’d never asked him how"
3"He was around Silas’s age,"
4"He pushed the door shut"
5"He bent slowly, his limp"
6"She’d rubbed the scar on"
7"He pulled off his soaked"
8"he said, quiet"
9"He poured two fingers of"
10"He rolled up the sleeve"
11"He twisted the signet ring"
12"She pulled her phone out"
13"She’d been so scared he’d"
14"I love you."
15"I live above a bar"
16"I’m so sorry I pushed"
17"I was scared he’d hurt"
18"She hit send, and a"
19"I’ll bring your favorite cinnamon"
ratio0.434
7.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences53
matches
0"The rain stuck to the"
1"Rory leaned her shoulder against"
2"It was 9:17 on a"
3"Her Golden Empress delivery uniform"
4"Silas was wiping down the"
5"The silver signet ring he"
6"She’d never asked him how"
7"The walls of the Nest"
8"The green neon sign above"
9"The door’s brass bell jangled"
10"A man stood in the"
11"He was around Silas’s age,"
12"The backpackers went quiet, the"
13"Silas’s cloth slipped from his"
14"Rory had never seen him"
15"the man said, his voice"
16"He pushed the door shut"
17"Silas didn’t speak for a"
18"He bent slowly, his limp"
19"Rory’s breath caught."
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"It was 9:17 on a Tuesday, the slowest night of the week, the only other patrons a pair of backpackers who’d split an order of fries from the chip shop down the …"
1"Above her, the stairs to her flat creaked only when she climbed them; for the last six months, this bar had been the only place she didn’t feel like she was hol…"
2"The silver signet ring he never took off glinted as he wrung the cloth out, his left leg propped on the low footrest under the bar to take the weight off the ba…"
3"The green neon sign above the door sputtered every few minutes, casting a sickly glow over the frame of the bookshelf that hid the back room, the one she’d only…"
4"Tom walked toward the bar, his boots squelching, and leaned against the wood, ten feet away from Rory, like she was just part of the furniture, just the quiet g…"
5"He pulled off his soaked coat, draping it over the back of a stool, and sat down, his eyes sweeping over the maps on the wall, landing on a tattered photo taped…"
6"Silas was crying now, silent tears tracking down his face, his beard glistening where they wet the hair."
7"She pulled her phone out of her pocket, the screen lighting up, the last text from Eva, her childhood best friend who’d begged her to come to London after Evan …"
8"The green neon sign glowed, casting a green glow over the maps, over the two old friends who’d found each other again, over Rory, who’d just gotten her best fri…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"the man said, his voice rough, like he’d gargled with glass"
1"he said, quiet"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.182
71.6072%