Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFKPQ8SS0GBTJ0NM6J62SP5

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Duration:
50.2s
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$0.000000
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Stealth

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came down in a fine, persistent drizzle that felt more like a cold sigh from the London sky than an actual storm. It slicked the cobbles of the narrow Soho alley into a dark, reflective mirror, catching the lurid green of the neon sign that hummed overhead: a stylized raven in flight. The Raven’s Nest. Aurora Carter, known to a very select few as Rory, swung her leg over the seat of her battered delivery bike, the insulated bag slung across her back bumping against her hip. The last order—a double portion of Yu-Fei’s special mapo tofu and a pot of jasmine tea—was done. Her shoulders ached with the damp chill that had seeped through her waterproof jacket. All she wanted was the relative warmth of the bar’s fug, a pint of something dark, and the quiet authority of the man behind the counter. She pushed through the heavy oak door, the scent of stale beer, lemon polish, and old wood enveloping her like a familiar, slightly melancholy blanket. The place was half-empty, a few scattered figures hunched over their drinks in the gloom. The walls, papered with antique maps of forgotten empires and black-and-white photographs of stern-faced strangers, seemed to drink the meager light from the shaded lamps. She saw Silas immediately, a tall, solid shape moving with a faint, rhythmic hitch behind the bar. He was polishing a glass with a meticulousness that spoke of old habits, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching a sliver of light. He looked up, his hazel eyes finding hers across the room, and gave a small, almost imperceptible nod. It was a gesture of acknowledgement, not welcome, but for Rory, it was enough. She was halfway to the bar, shrugging off her wet jacket, when a sound cut through the low murmur of the room. A laugh, bright and sharp, yet with a brittle edge that snagged on the air. It was a laugh she knew, a sound file she’d thought long deleted from her memory. Her body froze, one boot still raised to take a step. Slowly, she turned. In a corner booth, partially obscured by a faux-marble column, sat two women. One was a stranger, sleek and dark-haired. The other… the other was Eva. But it was an Eva reforged in some unfamiliar fire. The wild, curly auburn hair Rory remembered was now a sleek, platinum bob that curved precisely to her jawline. The round, open face she’d known had been subtly reshaped, cheekbones sharper, lips fuller. She wore a tailored cream silk blouse that probably cost more than Rory’s monthly rent, and a string of pearls lay coolly against her collarbone. She was gesturing with a hand that sported a glittering diamond on her index finger, her voice carrying a new, polished cadence. This was not the Eva who’d stolen jam tarts from the corner shop and cried over stray dogs. This was someone else, someone assembled with care and expense. As if feeling the weight of Rory’s stare, the woman looked up. Her eyes—the same startlingly green eyes, at least, untouched by the renovation—widened. The polished smile faltered, then reassembled itself into something more cautious. She murmured something to her companion, who glanced over with disinterested curiosity, then slid out of the booth. Eva crossed the worn floorboards. She moved differently, too—a smooth, confident glide where there had once been a bouncy, unselfconscious stride. “Rory? Oh my God. Rory Carter.” The name, spoken aloud in this place, felt like a stone dropped into a quiet pool. Silas, behind the bar, didn’t visibly react, but Rory knew he was listening. He always was. “Eva,” Rory replied, her voice coming out flatter than she intended. She cleared her throat. “What are you doing here?” “Closing a deal, actually,” Eva said, gesturing vaguely back at her companion. “In the art world. It’s… it’s a long story. You?” Her green eyes, so familiar and so alien, scanned Rory’s face, then took in the damp delivery uniform, the tired set of her shoulders. “What are you…?” “Working,” Rory said simply. She didn’t elaborate. There was a chasm between them, wide and deep, and she had no interest in building a bridge across it just then. The memory of Eva was the last good, clean thing from that time before Evan, before the careful dismantling of herself. Seeing this glossy apparition standing in its place felt like a desecration. “You look… good,” Eva said, and the lie was so blatant it was almost kind. “Hard. But good. London suits you.” “It’s a place,” Rory said, her gaze drifting back towards the bar, towards Silas and the promise of quiet anonymity. “How long are you in town?” “Indefinitely. I’m setting up a gallery in Mayfair.” Eva took a small step closer. The scent of her perfume was expensive, complex, nothing like the vanilla body spray she used to douse herself in. “Rory, I’m so sorry I fell off the map. After you left Cardiff… things got complicated.” “Complicated,” Rory echoed. She thought of the frantic, late-night calls she’d made from a phone box, the messages left unanswered. She’d needed her friend, her fierce, loyal Eva, and had found only silence. She’d built the silence into a fortress around herself. Now, here was the architect, admiring the stonework. “Yeah. They did.” “I tried,” Eva said, her voice dropping, losing some of its polished veneer. For a flash, Rory saw the girl beneath, the one with the smudge of jam on her chin. “I swear, I tried to reach you. But you’d vanished. And then… I had my own escape to manage.” Something in her tone, a shadow passing behind the green eyes, made Rory pause. “Escape?” Eva’s hand fluttered to her pearl necklace, a nervous gesture that was purely old Eva. “It’s a long story. Like I said. Not one for here.” She glanced back at her companion, who was checking her watch. “Look, can we… can we meet? Properly? I have so much to tell you. So much to… apologize for.” The offer hung in the air, a fragile, complicated thing. Part of Rory, the lonely part that sometimes ached in the quiet of her flat above this very bar, screamed yes. But the larger part, the part that had been whittled down by betrayal and disappointment, was wary. This woman was a stranger wearing her best friend’s face. Did she owe this stranger anything? Before she could answer, a heavy glass was set down on the bar with a definitive clink. Silas. He hadn’t moved from his spot, but the sound was a summons. An anchor. “I have to go,” Rory said, the relief in her own voice surprising her. “Rory, please.” Eva’s hand shot out, fingers closing around Rory’s left wrist. It wasn’t a hard grip, but it was firm, and it landed directly on the small, crescent-shaped scar, the one from the garden wall when she was seven. Eva’s thumb brushed over it, an unconscious gesture of shared history. The contact sent a jolt through her, a memory of trust so potent it hurt. “The gallery. ‘Eva’s Eye.’ It’s on Dover Street. Come by. Anytime. We can talk. Like we used to.” Rory gently pulled her wrist free, her fingers going to rub the old scar as if to soothe it. “I’ll think about it.” She turned and walked to the bar, sliding onto a stool without looking back. She felt Eva’s gaze on her back, a tangible weight. Silas placed a pint of stout in front of her, the head a perfect creamy crown. He didn’t ask. He never did. He just leaned against the back counter, his hazel eyes observing, assessing. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light. “Friend of yours?” he asked, his voice a low rumble. Rory took a long drink, letting the cold, bitter taste wash over her. She watched Eva return to her booth, resume her conversation, the polished mask firmly back in place. The two women were like creatures from a different ecosystem, briefly glimpsed in the wrong habitat. “Once,” Rory said, setting the glass down. “A long time ago. She used to be the person I’d call to help me bury a body.” “And now?” “Now she looks like she’d hire someone to do it. And then invoice me for the shovel.” She traced a drop of condensation down the side of her glass. “She’s changed.” “We all change,” Silas said, not unkindly. He began drying another glass, the methodical motion somehow calming. “The question is whether the foundation cracks, or just the facade. Hers looks like a full renovation.” “She said she tried to find me,” Rory murmured, almost to herself. “After I left Cardiff.” Silas paused, his rag stilled. He looked at her, his gaze direct and penetrating. “People who really try, usually find a way. Especially people who care as much as she clearly once did.” He resumed his polishing. “But grief and guilt can make a person run in the opposite direction, too. Sometimes for years.” The bar’s door opened, admitting a burst of cold air and two new patrons. The spell of the reunion was broken. Eva was packing up her things, her companion already at the door. She cast one last look towards the bar, a complex mixture of hope and regret on her sculpted features. Rory gave a final, short nod. It wasn’t forgiveness. It wasn’t an invitation. It was merely an acknowledgement of a ghost being laid to rest. Eva nodded back, a sad, small smile touching her lips, and then she was gone, swallowed by the rainy night and the green glow of the raven. Rory turned back to her stout, the silence of the bar settling around her again. But it was different now, filled with the phantom echo of a laugh she no longer recognized and the chilling realization that the person who had once been her lifeline had, in her own way, drowned long before Rory ever did. The weight of time wasn’t just in the years lost; it was in the irreversible mutations they had undergone, alone, in the dark. She had found a spymaster for a landlord and a warren of secrets for a home. Eva had found pearls and a gallery. Neither had found their way back to each other. Silas, as if sensing the turn of her thoughts, placed a small bowl of salted nuts beside her drink. “The foundation holds, Rory,” he said quietly. “Whatever they build on top of it. Remember that.” She picked up a nut, felt its rough salt crystals against her skin, and wondered if that was true. She thought of the hidden room behind the bookshelf in the back, of the secrets Silas kept and the ones she now kept herself. Foundations could be buried so deep you forgot they were there. You just learned to walk on the new ground, and tried not to listen for the hollow sound beneath your feet.
created_at"2026-03-11T23:28:55.589Z" 3/11/2026, 11:28:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
42.11% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Rory said simply [simply]"
1"She glanced back [back]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.158
effectiveRatio0.158
78.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1841
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"coolly"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
6
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"precisely"
4"coolly"
5"gently"
6"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1841
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"marble"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"complex"
count2
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"silence"
count3
12
word"fluttered"
count1
13
word"tangible"
count1
14
word"perfect"
count1
15
word"firmly"
count1
16
word"traced"
count1
17
word"methodical"
count1
18
word"facade"
count1
19
word"echo"
count1
20
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"familiar"
3"gloom"
4"rhythmic"
5"marble"
6"silk"
7"weight"
8"scanned"
9"complex"
10"echoed"
11"silence"
12"fluttered"
13"tangible"
14"perfect"
15"firmly"
16"traced"
17"methodical"
18"facade"
19"echo"
20"chilling"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences117
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1836
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1557
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
London1
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory23
Yu-Fei1
Silas9
Eva19
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
6"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore0.761
windowScore0.5
19.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"As if feeling the weight of Rory’s stare, the woman looked up"
1"felt like a stone dropped into a quiet"
2"he bar, didn’t visibly react, but Rory kne"
3"felt like a desecration"
4"as if sensing the turn of her thoughts, placed a small bowl of salted nuts beside her drink"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.545
wordCount1836
matches
0"not welcome, but for Rory, it was enough"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean52.46
std35.91
cv0.684
sampleLengths
0146
1136
267
3144
453
527
652
749
862
921
1026
1150
1253
1350
1415
1556
1664
1732
1814
1984
2023
2169
2210
2346
2425
252
2631
2734
2816
2954
3077
3127
32111
3335
3475
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences117
matches
0"been whittled"
1"being laid"
2"was gone"
63.95% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs245
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was gesturing"
2"was listening"
3"was checking"
4"was packing"
58.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences136
ratio0.029
matches
0"The last order—a double portion of Yu-Fei’s special mapo tofu and a pot of jasmine tea—was done."
1"Her eyes—the same startlingly green eyes, at least, untouched by the renovation—widened."
2"She moved differently, too—a smooth, confident glide where there had once been a bouncy, unselfconscious stride."
3"The weight of time wasn’t just in the years lost; it was in the irreversible mutations they had undergone, alone, in the dark."
91.15% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1572
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar,"
adverbCount68
adverbRatio0.043256997455470736
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.01653944020356234
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean13.5
std7.66
cv0.567
sampleLengths
024
130
23
332
417
514
626
725
815
925
1017
1122
1218
1314
1422
1515
1616
1711
183
1913
207
212
224
2310
2419
2514
2625
2722
2818
2910
3012
3112
3211
3318
345
3516
366
3716
3813
393
4011
414
425
4312
4434
453
464
473
4822
4921
45.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.34558823529411764
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners47
29.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"Slowly, she turned."
ratio0.009
60.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences113
matches
0"It slicked the cobbles of"
1"Her shoulders ached with the"
2"She pushed through the heavy"
3"She saw Silas immediately, a"
4"He was polishing a glass"
5"He looked up, his hazel"
6"It was a gesture of"
7"She was halfway to the"
8"It was a laugh she"
9"Her body froze, one boot"
10"She wore a tailored cream"
11"She was gesturing with a"
12"Her eyes—the same startlingly green"
13"She murmured something to her"
14"She moved differently, too—a smooth,"
15"He always was."
16"She cleared her throat."
17"Her green eyes, so familiar"
18"She didn’t elaborate."
19"She thought of the frantic,"
ratio0.398
21.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount99
totalSentences113
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"It slicked the cobbles of"
2"The Raven’s Nest."
3"Aurora Carter, known to a"
4"The last order—a double portion"
5"Her shoulders ached with the"
6"She pushed through the heavy"
7"The place was half-empty, a"
8"The walls, papered with antique"
9"She saw Silas immediately, a"
10"He was polishing a glass"
11"He looked up, his hazel"
12"It was a gesture of"
13"She was halfway to the"
14"A laugh, bright and sharp,"
15"It was a laugh she"
16"Her body froze, one boot"
17"the other was Eva."
18"The wild, curly auburn hair"
19"The round, open face she’d"
ratio0.876
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences113
matches
0"As if feeling the weight"
1"Now, here was the architect,"
2"Before she could answer, a"
ratio0.027
46.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences74
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The rain came down in a fine, persistent drizzle that felt more like a cold sigh from the London sky than an actual storm."
1"It slicked the cobbles of the narrow Soho alley into a dark, reflective mirror, catching the lurid green of the neon sign that hummed overhead: a stylized raven…"
2"Her shoulders ached with the damp chill that had seeped through her waterproof jacket."
3"He was polishing a glass with a meticulousness that spoke of old habits, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching a sliver of light."
4"The wild, curly auburn hair Rory remembered was now a sleek, platinum bob that curved precisely to her jawline."
5"She was gesturing with a hand that sported a glittering diamond on her index finger, her voice carrying a new, polished cadence."
6"She murmured something to her companion, who glanced over with disinterested curiosity, then slid out of the booth."
7"Eva’s hand fluttered to her pearl necklace, a nervous gesture that was purely old Eva."
8"But it was different now, filled with the phantom echo of a laugh she no longer recognized and the chilling realization that the person who had once been her li…"
9"Silas, as if sensing the turn of her thoughts, placed a small bowl of salted nuts beside her drink."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory replied, her voice coming out flatter than she intended"
1"Eva said, and the lie was so blatant it was almost kind"
2"Eva said, her voice dropping, losing some of its polished veneer"
3"Eva’s hand shot out, fingers closing around Rory’s left wrist"
4"he asked, his voice a low rumble"
5"Silas said, not unkindly"
6"Rory murmured, almost to herself"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.053
73.2670%