| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2242 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "slightly" |
| |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2242 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
| | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "lurched" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "the last thing" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "unravel" | | 14 | "warmth" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 196 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 196 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
| |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 201 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 2264 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "Run along now, darling. Mummy needs to speak with the nice man." |
| |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 2205 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | October | 1 | | London | 3 | | Silence | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Aurora | 22 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Silence" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 64.97% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 147 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to shift when she wasn’t looking directly at them" | | 1 | "something that seemed to breathe" | | 2 | "breath plumed visibly now, drifting upwar" | | 3 | "sounded like the last thing her mother had" | | 4 | "quite process" |
| |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.442 | | wordCount | 2264 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 86 | | mean | 26.33 | | std | 20.62 | | cv | 0.783 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 74 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 68 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 46 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 51 | | 41 | 78 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 38 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 18 |
| |
| 99.89% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
| |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 378 | | matches | | 0 | "was only looking" | | 1 | "wasn’t looking" | | 2 | "was looking" | | 3 | "was screaming" | | 4 | "was coming" |
| |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 22 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 201 | | ratio | 0.08 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant around her neck — the Heartstone — gave off a faint, rhythmic heat against her sternum, like a second heartbeat that didn’t belong to her." | | 1 | "Wildflowers — bluebells, foxgloves, harebells — stood in defiant bloom though it was late October and the rest of the park had already surrendered to frost." | | 2 | "Beyond the canopy she could still see the faint orange smear of London’s distant lights, but they looked wrong — smeared, as though viewed through warped glass." | | 3 | "Its surface reflected the night sky with impossible clarity — every star sharp, every constellation in its proper place, though she knew the light pollution over London should have swallowed them." | | 4 | "Another sound — this time to her left." | | 5 | "The movement of the stems looked almost like breathing — slow, tidal." | | 6 | "It wore her delivery jacket — the one with the Golden Empress logo on the breast — but the fabric looked wet, clinging to a form that wasn’t solid." | | 7 | "It raised one hand — her hand, the same crescent scar livid on the wrist — and beckoned." | | 8 | "The figure’s shape rippled, the borrowed jacket flickering between her delivery uniform and something older — a hospital gown, a child’s nightdress, nothing at all." | | 9 | "It simply ceased to be where it was and existed where she needed to step, close enough that she could smell it — damp soil and her own perfume and something sweeter, like funeral lilies left too long in a vase." | | 10 | "Its face — her face — was inches from hers." | | 11 | "For one impossible moment the entire grove lit up — every petal, every carved spiral on the standing stones, every wrong angle of the thing wearing her skin." | | 12 | "The figure shrieked — a sound like tearing metal and a child’s cry braided together — and began to unravel." | | 13 | "The moment she broke free of the circle the night sounds of London crashed back over her — distant traffic, the hoot of an owl, the faraway wail of a siren." | | 14 | "The standing stones were exactly where they had always been — eight ancient oaks in a loose, perfectly ordinary circle." | | 15 | "The Heartstone was gone, but she could still feel it — a faint, fading warmth somewhere behind her sternum, as though part of it had stayed inside her after all." |
| |
| 92.26% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2191 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, resistant, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 92 | | adverbRatio | 0.04198995892286627 | | lyAdverbCount | 32 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01460520310360566 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 201 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 201 | | mean | 11.26 | | std | 7.78 | | cv | 0.691 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 7 |
| |
| 38.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.263681592039801 | | totalSentences | 201 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she walked between the" | | 1 | "Only the wet sound of" | | 2 | "Only the flowers swaying gently," | | 3 | "Instead she focused on the" | | 4 | "Just a slightly sunken patch" | | 5 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" | | 6 | "Then she turned and walked" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 97.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "She had followed its pull" | | 1 | "She told herself she was" | | 2 | "She clicked on the small" | | 3 | "Their petals glistened with moisture" | | 4 | "They rose from the ground" | | 5 | "She should have turned around." | | 6 | "She stuffed it into her" | | 7 | "She took another step." | | 8 | "She turned slowly." | | 9 | "She followed it toward the" | | 10 | "Its surface reflected the night" | | 11 | "She reached out to touch" | | 12 | "She was certain the gap" | | 13 | "She backed away until her" | | 14 | "She pressed her palm over" | | 15 | "Her voice cracked on the" | | 16 | "She took one careful step" | | 17 | "She told herself it was" | | 18 | "She turned in a slow" | | 19 | "Her breath plumed visibly now," |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 40.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 156 | | totalSentences | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter pulled the collar" | | 1 | "The pendant around her neck" | | 2 | "She had followed its pull" | | 3 | "Tonight it burned." | | 4 | "She told herself she was" | | 5 | "The dreams had grown worse" | | 6 | "Each morning she woke with" | | 7 | "The grass beneath her boots" | | 8 | "She clicked on the small" | | 9 | "Wildflowers — bluebells, foxgloves, harebells" | | 10 | "Their petals glistened with moisture" | | 11 | "The standing stones appeared without" | | 12 | "They rose from the ground" | | 13 | "Aurora’s breath clouded in front" | | 14 | "The air here was several" | | 15 | "The Heartstone flared hot enough" | | 16 | "She should have turned around." | | 17 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 18 | "Aurora shook it, smacked the" | | 19 | "She stuffed it into her" |
| | ratio | 0.839 | |
| 26.88% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "If the grove existed between" |
| | ratio | 0.005 | |
| 56.51% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant around her neck — the Heartstone — gave off a faint, rhythmic heat against her sternum, like a second heartbeat that didn’t belong to her." | | 1 | "The grass beneath her boots was unnaturally soft, almost spongy, as though the earth itself had breathed in and never exhaled." | | 2 | "They rose from the ground in a loose circle, eight ancient oaks whose trunks had fused and petrified centuries ago, their bark carved with spirals that seemed t…" | | 3 | "Beyond the canopy she could still see the faint orange smear of London’s distant lights, but they looked wrong — smeared, as though viewed through warped glass." | | 4 | "The wildflowers here grew taller, their stems brushing against her thighs, releasing a sweet, cloying scent that made her head swim." | | 5 | "The grass behind her made a soft rustling sound, as though something had settled its weight where she had just been standing." | | 6 | "The shadows between them had thickened into something almost solid, something that seemed to breathe." | | 7 | "A low, wet noise, as though something large had shifted its bulk in the undergrowth." | | 8 | "The pendant was screaming now, a high keening note that existed only inside her bones." | | 9 | "Threads of shadow peeled away from its form, whipping toward the pool as though sucked by an invisible current." | | 10 | "The Heartstone was gone, but she could still feel it — a faint, fading warmth somewhere behind her sternum, as though part of it had stayed inside her after all…" |
| |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |