| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.15% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1763 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.28% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1763 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "racing" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "resolved" | | 11 | "throbbed" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "depths" | | 14 | "perfect" | | 15 | "could feel" | | 16 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "e with unease" | | 1 | "d in sympathy" |
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| 91.53% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 167 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 167 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 37 | | totalWords | 1751 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde’s grove. Midnight. The truth waits where time forgets." | | 1 | "right" | | 2 | "...left us..." | | 3 | "...come back..." | | 4 | "You left us bleeding in the dark, Rory." | | 5 | "We waited so long for you to come home." | | 6 | "Yes you do. You’ve always known." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1742 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.57 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Carter | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Isolde | 2 | | Auroras | 1 | | Aurora | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 49.19% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "as though agreeing with some private joke" | | 1 | "humming that seemed to come from inside her own skull" | | 2 | "sounded like layers of herself speaking at" | | 3 | "felt like the only real thing left in t" | | 4 | "as though traveling down a very long tunnel" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1751 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 67 | | mean | 26.13 | | std | 21.52 | | cv | 0.824 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 69 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 68 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 66 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 42 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 72 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 59 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 63 | | 44 | 42 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 36 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "were crushed" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 283 | | matches | | 0 | "was nearly scalding" | | 1 | "was bleeding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 167 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers—impossible bluebells and foxgloves that should have died months ago—swayed though there was no wind." | | 1 | "The clearing was smaller than it had appeared from outside—barely twenty paces across." | | 2 | "In the polished surface she saw herself—same straight black hair falling to her shoulders, same bright blue eyes wide with unease—but the woman staring back had a small crescent scar on her *right* wrist." | | 3 | "Another sound reached her—soft, wet, like bare feet on damp stone." | | 4 | "Accompanied by something else—a low humming that seemed to come from inside her own skull." | | 5 | "A breeze stirred the flowers, carrying with it the faint scent of her mother’s perfume—jasmine and something metallic underneath." | | 6 | "The voice—if it was a voice—sounded like layers of herself speaking at once." | | 7 | "For a terrible second she saw two versions of the grove laid over one another—one bathed in moonlight, the other in pitch darkness where the flowers had teeth." | | 8 | "The eyes were wrong—too large, too black, like holes punched through paper." |
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| 65.68% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1756 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "Tall, moss-covered sentinels" | | 1 | "same straight black hair" | | 2 | "alone settled over her" |
| | adverbCount | 103 | | adverbRatio | 0.058656036446469245 | | lyAdverbCount | 26 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014806378132118452 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 167 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 167 | | mean | 10.49 | | std | 7 | | cv | 0.667 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 47.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.31736526946107785 | | totalSentences | 167 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she had slipped out" | | 1 | "Even the quality of moonlight" | | 2 | "Only the standing stones and" | | 3 | "Only darkness stared back from" | | 4 | "Instead the trees pressed closer" | | 5 | "Just raw animal panic that" | | 6 | "Instead she stared at the" | | 7 | "Then it smiled with too" | | 8 | "Then, slowly, the wildflowers began" | | 9 | "Somewhere far away, in a" |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here for" | | 1 | "She should have told someone." | | 2 | "Their stems whispered against one" | | 3 | "She kept it low, wary" | | 4 | "She hesitated at the threshold," | | 5 | "She stepped inside anyway." | | 6 | "She approached carefully, boots making" | | 7 | "She whirled, torch beam slashing" | | 8 | "Her breathing sounded too loud" | | 9 | "She told herself it was" | | 10 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 11 | "It came from somewhere to" | | 12 | "She swept the torch that" | | 13 | "Her reflection smiled at her," | | 14 | "She closed her eyes." | | 15 | "She risked a glance at" | | 16 | "She had entered the grove" | | 17 | "She forced herself to move," | | 18 | "She spun around, torch cutting" | | 19 | "Her own accent, but stretched" |
| | ratio | 0.272 | |
| 85.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 110 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung low and" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter pulled her jacket" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant rested against" | | 3 | "She had come here for" | | 4 | "The truth waits where time" | | 5 | "She should have told someone." | | 6 | "The air tasted wrong the" | | 7 | "The wildflowers—impossible bluebells and foxgloves" | | 8 | "Their stems whispered against one" | | 9 | "Aurora’s torch beam cut a" | | 10 | "She kept it low, wary" | | 11 | "The pendant grew warmer, almost" | | 12 | "The standing stones appeared gradually," | | 13 | "She hesitated at the threshold," | | 14 | "The words sounded borrowed, as" | | 15 | "She stepped inside anyway." | | 16 | "The change was immediate and" | | 17 | "The distant hum of London" | | 18 | "The temperature dropped several degrees." | | 19 | "The pendant flared once, bright" |
| | ratio | 0.748 | |
| 34.01% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "As though she had never" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 34.36% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she had slipped out of her flat above the bar like a thief, heart hammering with the same reckless certainty that had once driven her from Cardiff and E…" | | 1 | "The wildflowers—impossible bluebells and foxgloves that should have died months ago—swayed though there was no wind." | | 2 | "Tall, moss-covered sentinels arranged in a loose circle that felt less like ruins and more like teeth." | | 3 | "She hesitated at the threshold, boots sinking into grass that was too soft, too alive." | | 4 | "Even the quality of moonlight altered, taking on a sickly pearlescent sheen that made her shadow look too long, too thin." | | 5 | "At its center stood a single oak, ancient and massive, its trunk split down the middle as though lightning had tried to tear it apart centuries ago and failed." | | 6 | "Only the standing stones and the impossible flowers nodding gently, as though agreeing with some private joke." | | 7 | "Accompanied by something else—a low humming that seemed to come from inside her own skull." | | 8 | "The wildflowers had grown taller, their stalks now reaching her waist, tugging at her jeans with small, insistent fingers." | | 9 | "Just raw animal panic that sent her sprinting toward what she desperately hoped was the way out." | | 10 | "She could feel the thing that wore her face standing directly behind her now, close enough that its presence pressed against her back like cold water." | | 11 | "The sound reached her as though traveling down a very long tunnel." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She whispered, voice shaking only slightly," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "She whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |