| 50.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Rhys said suddenly [suddenly]" | | 2 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.425 | | leniency | 0.85 | | rawRatio | 0.176 | | effectiveRatio | 0.15 | |
| 80.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2255 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "deliberately" | | 5 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 66.74% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2255 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "mechanical" | | 2 | "variable" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "calculate" | | 6 | "measured" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "unspoken" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.90% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 153 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 65 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2244 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1587 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Rhys" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rhys" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Aurora | 12 | | London | 1 | | Silas | 8 | | Rhys | 13 | | Prague | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Laila | 1 | | Malphora | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Rhys" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Rory" | | 7 | "Laila" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "as if giving her time to vanish" | | 1 | "tasted like rust" | | 2 | "sounded like a confession" | | 3 | "felt like a ravine carved by four years" | | 4 | "felt like being handed back a version o" | | 5 | "felt like ghosts seated between them on" | | 6 | "looked like the old Rhys again—uncertain" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2244 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 47.74 | | std | 27.15 | | cv | 0.569 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 101 | | 1 | 99 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 119 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 83 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 100 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 82 | | 23 | 55 | | 24 | 60 | | 25 | 61 | | 26 | 68 | | 27 | 66 | | 28 | 59 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 53 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 47 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 46 | | 35 | 78 | | 36 | 52 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 54 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 55 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 67 |
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| 89.07% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "was cropped" | | 1 | "been replaced" | | 2 | "being called" | | 3 | "being observed" | | 4 | "being handed" | | 5 | "being asked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 272 | | matches | | 0 | "was listening" | | 1 | "was, listening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 153 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "Old maps clung to the walls in faded sepia, their borders bleeding into one another, while black-and-white photographs hung beside them—men in trench coats, women with sharp eyes, all captured in moments that had hardened into myth." | | 1 | "The small crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light whenever she moved; she traced it without thinking, the way other people might worry a ring." | | 2 | "His slight limp made the journey from the other end of the bar a quiet performance; the old knee injury from Prague still announced itself with every third step." | | 3 | "Silas’s mouth twitched—an almost smile—before he turned to the bottles." | | 4 | "Time had always felt heavy in this bar; tonight it settled over the two of them like wet wool." | | 5 | "She had been reluctant about Pre-Law from the start; Rhys had been the one who made it bearable." | | 6 | "He used to say her mind worked like a crow’s—collecting shiny odd ideas no one else noticed and turning them into solutions." | | 7 | "Rhys looked at her then—really looked." | | 8 | "His hazel eyes met hers for a brief second—steady, careful, the look of a man who had buried more regrets than most people accumulated in lifetimes." | | 9 | "Who they had been—idealistic, messy, hopeful—felt like ghosts seated between them on the empty stools." | | 10 | "For a moment he looked like the old Rhys again—uncertain, a little lost, entirely human." | | 11 | "He set a fresh drink in front of her—darker this time, something medicinal." |
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| 88.14% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1606 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 86 | | adverbRatio | 0.053549190535491904 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013075965130759652 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 153 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 153 | | mean | 14.67 | | std | 10.73 | | cv | 0.731 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 49.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.32679738562091504 | | totalSentences | 153 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 81.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he limped away again," | | 1 | "Then he reached into his" | | 2 | "Then the suit settled back" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 73.66% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "Her straight black hair, shoulder-length" | | 1 | "She brushed it back with" | | 2 | "She glanced up out of" | | 3 | "Their eyes met across the" | | 4 | "He looked nothing like the" | | 5 | "His hair was cropped close," | | 6 | "He had changed so thoroughly" | | 7 | "His voice cracked on the" | | 8 | "She felt her pulse in" | | 9 | "she answered, managing a small" | | 10 | "He crossed the room slowly," | | 11 | "His slight limp made the" | | 12 | "He poured without comment, then" | | 13 | "He knew her usual." | | 14 | "He knew when to speak" | | 15 | "He kept his gaze on" | | 16 | "She heard the boy he" | | 17 | "She had been reluctant about" | | 18 | "He used to say her" | | 19 | "she said quietly" |
| | ratio | 0.366 | |
| 61.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "The dim light of The" | | 1 | "The bar smelled of spilled" | | 2 | "Aurora sat at the far" | | 3 | "The small crescent scar on" | | 4 | "Her straight black hair, shoulder-length" | | 5 | "She brushed it back with" | | 6 | "The door opened." | | 7 | "She glanced up out of" | | 8 | "The man who entered paused" | | 9 | "Their eyes met across the" | | 10 | "The name rose in her" | | 11 | "He looked nothing like the" | | 12 | "That Rhys had worn his" | | 13 | "This version wore a charcoal" | | 14 | "His hair was cropped close," | | 15 | "The easy grin had been" | | 16 | "He had changed so thoroughly" | | 17 | "His voice cracked on the" | | 18 | "She felt her pulse in" | | 19 | "That was what people said" |
| | ratio | 0.797 | |
| 81.30% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she used that same" | | 1 | "Now the line felt like" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 39.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Old maps clung to the walls in faded sepia, their borders bleeding into one another, while black-and-white photographs hung beside them—men in trench coats, wom…" | | 1 | "Above the entrance the green neon sign buzzed faintly, its glow spilling across rain-streaked windows and painting the puddles on the floor in shifting emerald." | | 2 | "She brushed it back with the mechanical efficiency of someone who had learned to keep her hands busy." | | 3 | "The man who entered paused just inside the threshold, shaking water from a dark wool coat." | | 4 | "He looked nothing like the boy who used to steal her lecture notes and replace them with terrible limericks." | | 5 | "The older man moved with the economy of someone who had once done far more dangerous work than pour drinks." | | 6 | "His hazel eyes met hers for a brief second—steady, careful, the look of a man who had buried more regrets than most people accumulated in lifetimes." | | 7 | "Rhys checked his watch, an expensive thing that caught the light like a reminder." | | 8 | "He moved away, favouring his left leg, and began closing out the till with the quiet authority of a man who had survived worse hauntings than old friends." | | 9 | "Outside, the green neon continued its patient humming, keeping watch over a city that kept changing people whether they wanted it or not." | | 10 | "Inside, the photographs on the walls held their silence, bearing witness to yet another story of time and the quiet, stubborn courage it took to keep living ins…" |
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| 66.18% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He stopped, jaw tightening" | | 1 | "she said, voice low" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.275 | | leniency | 0.55 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.05 | |