| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 70.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1892 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "utterly" | | 6 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1892 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "shattered" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "grave" | | 16 | "throbbed" | | 17 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 178 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 178 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 180 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1887 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "When it calls, follow. Do not wait for daylight." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1860 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.54 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | London | 2 | | Evan | 3 | | Eva | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Camden" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 27.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed reluctant to travel far, as though the darkness here had weight" | | 1 | "seemed closer than before, their boughs leaning inward like interested spectators" | | 2 | "sounded like someone exhaling directly bes" | | 3 | "something like rain on iron and crushed lili" | | 4 | "as though bowing" | | 5 | "looked like an eye that had finally opene" |
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| 94.01% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.06 | | wordCount | 1887 | | matches | | 0 | "no longer a gentle throb but" | | 1 | "not a sudden realization but a slow accumulation, each second adding another grain of dre" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 180 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 36.29 | | std | 25.27 | | cv | 0.696 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 98 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 79 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 57 | | 19 | 54 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 81 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 71 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 49 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 71 | | 39 | 34 | | 40 | 34 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 49 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 50 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 71 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 59 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 97.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "been made" | | 1 | "been closed" | | 2 | "been erased" | | 3 | "been drained" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 311 | | matches | | 0 | "were turning" | | 1 | "was recording" | | 2 | "was following" |
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| 79.37% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 180 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet, like overripe fruit and crushed wildflowers." | | 1 | "She was cool-headed by nature—Eva had always said she could think her way out of a burning building—but cool heads required data, and the data here refused to make sense." | | 2 | "The shape was wrong—too narrow, too long, with an extra joint where a heel should be." | | 3 | "The glow revealed shapes among the trees—tall, motionless figures standing just outside the circle of stones." |
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| 75.91% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1874 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "alone settled over her" | | 1 | "deep, angry red, illuminating" | | 2 | "same bone-deep certainty" |
| | adverbCount | 88 | | adverbRatio | 0.04695837780149413 | | lyAdverbCount | 35 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018676627534685165 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 180 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 180 | | mean | 10.48 | | std | 7.6 | | cv | 0.725 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 42.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3 | | totalSentences | 180 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the moon remained, bone-white" | | 1 | "Instead they stood open, petals" | | 2 | "Only the circle of stones" | | 3 | "Even the distant hum of" | | 4 | "Only the opposite side of" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 81.44% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "It had woken her from" | | 1 | "She had not planned to" | | 2 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 3 | "She clicked on her small" | | 4 | "They rose from the earth" | | 5 | "She told herself this was" | | 6 | "She stepped between two of" | | 7 | "She lifted it free of" | | 8 | "she called, voice low" | | 9 | "She moved to the center" | | 10 | "Their stems were too straight," | | 11 | "She held her breath, listening." | | 12 | "She straightened slowly." | | 13 | "She rubbed it absently, eyes" | | 14 | "She whirled again." | | 15 | "It was not a sudden" | | 16 | "She spoke again, softer." | | 17 | "She gasped and nearly dropped" | | 18 | "It sounded like someone exhaling" | | 19 | "She jerked sideways, heart hammering" |
| | ratio | 0.346 | |
| 44.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 127 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory slipped between the iron" | | 1 | "Richmond Park at night was" | | 2 | "The trees pressed close, their" | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned against" | | 4 | "It had woken her from" | | 5 | "She had not planned to" | | 6 | "The decision had been made" | | 7 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 8 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet," | | 9 | "She clicked on her small" | | 10 | "The light seemed reluctant to" | | 11 | "The standing stones appeared without" | | 12 | "They rose from the earth" | | 13 | "Rory’s left hand rose unconsciously" | | 14 | "The old habit surfaced whenever" | | 15 | "Evan had never given her" | | 16 | "She told herself this was" | | 17 | "This was a choice." | | 18 | "She stepped between two of" | | 19 | "The temperature dropped so sharply" |
| | ratio | 0.83 | |
| 32.68% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "As though whatever made the" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 44.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned against her sternum, a steady pulse that had begun the moment she left her flat above Silas’s bar." | | 1 | "The decision had been made for her by the pendant’s sudden insistence and the half-remembered words of the woman who had pressed it into her hand six months ear…" | | 2 | "They rose from the earth in a loose circle, ancient granite veined with quartz that caught her torchlight like scattered frost." | | 3 | "Inside the circle the ground felt strangely springy, as though she walked on moss over hollow earth." | | 4 | "She took another step back and the footprint moved with her, reappearing instantly a meter behind where she now stood, as though the earth itself was recording …" | | 5 | "She looked down and saw the pendant’s chain had left a faint red line against her throat, as if it had tightened while she wasn’t paying attention." | | 6 | "None of them explained the footprint that kept appearing at her heel or the way the darkness between the oaks seemed to breathe." | | 7 | "She realized with dawning horror that the rhythm matched her own heartbeat, as though the stone had stopped following her pulse and had begun to dictate it." | | 8 | "The moment she broke the circle the sounds behind her exploded into a chorus of rustling, sighing, and the wet noise of flowers being crushed underfoot that was…" | | 9 | "The park outside the grove felt colder, emptier, as though the world had been drained of everything familiar while she stood among the stones." | | 10 | "But she knew, with the same bone-deep certainty that had warned her to run from Evan all those nights ago, that whatever had been watching her had not remained …" | | 11 | "The moon reappeared through the canopy, pale and distant, and for one terrible moment it looked like an eye that had finally opened." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |