| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 74.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1165 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 65.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1165 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "trembled" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1170 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1167 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.43 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 5 | | Park | 1 | | Tesco | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Tesco" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Hel" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like stepping through a curtain in" | | 1 | "felt like this" | | 2 | "quite reach, and they had depth to them, dimension, the suggestion of shapes that were crouching or standing or waiting" | | 3 | "felt like surrender" | | 4 | "felt like ice against her chest" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 37.74 | | std | 26.7 | | cv | 0.707 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 76 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 67 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 83 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 64 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 72 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 78 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 69 | | 30 | 13 |
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| 94.74% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "been worried" | | 1 | "been worried" | | 2 | "been was" |
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| 19.82% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "was happening" | | 1 | "was telling" | | 2 | "wasn't watching" | | 3 | "were crouching" | | 4 | "were blooming" |
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| 29.70% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park lay somewhere behind her — she could still hear the M4 in the distance if she strained, a thin artery of noise keeping her tethered to the world of petrol stations and late-night Tesco runs." | | 1 | "The wildflowers bloomed in clusters — white and pale blue and a sickly yellow that she didn't remember from before." | | 2 | "The petals trembled and she saw — or thought she saw — something pale move among them." | | 3 | "She didn't run, but she didn't stop, and when she ducked between the oaks and emerged on the other side, the night air hit her like a slap — cold, ordinary, smelling of wet grass and car exhaust and London." |
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| 92.29% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1168 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay dormant against her" |
| | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.04195205479452055 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007705479452054794 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 11.58 | | std | 9.66 | | cv | 0.834 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 54.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.39 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Too many of them, row" | | 1 | "Just the pale blooms tossing" | | 2 | "Just the shape of sound," | | 3 | "Even the distant hum of" | | 4 | "Then, from directly behind her," |
| | ratio | 0.056 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the boundary" | | 1 | "It had no reason to" | | 2 | "She pressed her fingers against" | | 3 | "She'd come because Yu-Fei had" | | 4 | "Their petals looked too wide." | | 5 | "She counted her breaths." | | 6 | "It smelled of honeysuckle, which" | | 7 | "She turned her head slowly." | | 8 | "She hissed through her teeth" | | 9 | "She should leave." | | 10 | "She was certain of it." | | 11 | "She stood very still and" | | 12 | "She took a step backward," | | 13 | "She grabbed the chain with" | | 14 | "They pooled at the edges" | | 15 | "She thought of her mother's" | | 16 | "She thought of Eva's hand" | | 17 | "She spoke aloud because silence" | | 18 | "She walked forward, toward the" | | 19 | "She didn't run, but she" |
| | ratio | 0.258 | |
| 83.60% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had been to the" | | 1 | "The wildflowers had nodded in" | | 2 | "The air had tasted of" | | 3 | "She stood at the boundary" | | 4 | "Richmond Park lay somewhere behind" | | 5 | "The pendant hung warm against" | | 6 | "That was wrong." | | 7 | "It had no reason to" | | 8 | "The Heartstone only pulsed near" | | 9 | "She pressed her fingers against" | | 10 | "She'd come because Yu-Fei had" | | 11 | "Eva had been worried." | | 12 | "The ones where the wildflowers" | | 13 | "The grass inside the clearing" | | 14 | "The wildflowers bloomed in clusters" | | 15 | "Their petals looked too wide." | | 16 | "Rory stopped walking." | | 17 | "She counted her breaths." | | 18 | "The technique Eva had taught" | | 19 | "The Grove didn't smell right." |
| | ratio | 0.753 | |
| 56.18% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 31.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the boundary stones, the ancient oaks rising black against a sky that had no business being that shade of violet." | | 1 | "Too many of them, row upon row, concentric circles that spiraled inward toward centers that were black." | | 2 | "It smelled of honeysuckle, which was fine, but underneath that, something meaty and mineral, like copper left in a warm room." | | 3 | "But the ground where the shape had been was pressed flat, as if something heavy had been resting there." | | 4 | "And the flowers around the depression were closing over it, petals folding inward with a deliberateness that made her stomach clench." | | 5 | "They pooled at the edges of the clearing where the violet light couldn't quite reach, and they had depth to them, dimension, the suggestion of shapes that were …" | | 6 | "But when she raised her hand to unclasp it, she saw her fingers trembling, and in the orange glow of a distant streetlight, she noticed something on the heel of…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |