| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1949 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1949 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "footfall" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "wavering" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "lilt" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "lurched" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "measured" | | 16 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 221 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 221 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 234 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1949 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1910 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.99 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 19 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 90.48% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like someone scraping nails lightl" | | 1 | "something like a head, a suggestion of pale" | | 2 | "as if watching" |
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| 46.07% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.539 | | wordCount | 1949 | | matches | | 0 | "not the right one, but it came anyway, quiet" | | 1 | "not from one place but from the stones" | | 2 | "Not the stones themselves, but the gaps between them, narrowing" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 234 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 124 | | mean | 15.72 | | std | 16.41 | | cv | 1.044 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 66 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 68 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 47 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 44 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 32 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 221 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 282 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 234 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 290 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.02413793103448276 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 234 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 234 | | mean | 8.33 | | std | 7.16 | | cv | 0.859 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 39.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.2264957264957265 | | totalSentences | 234 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 190 | | matches | | 0 | "Just stillness and the soft" | | 1 | "Just a shimmer, no bigger" | | 2 | "Just the faint ringing in" | | 3 | "Then, from somewhere to her" | | 4 | "Only trunks and wet leaves" | | 5 | "Too many toes, maybe." | | 6 | "Just the measured approach of" | | 7 | "Then the voice came again," | | 8 | "Only the stone and the" | | 9 | "Then at the crack." | | 10 | "Then back again." | | 11 | "Then the crack narrowed and" | | 12 | "Then the flowers at her" |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 190 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept one hand inside" | | 1 | "she muttered, and her voice" | | 2 | "She glanced over her shoulder." | | 3 | "She could still picture the" | | 4 | "It flattened them." | | 5 | "She swallowed and looked around" | | 6 | "She had come because the" | | 7 | "It had warmed again in" | | 8 | "She’d known what that meant" | | 9 | "She paused, frowning." | | 10 | "She looked up." | | 11 | "She made herself breathe through" | | 12 | "They sat at the grove’s" | | 13 | "She watched it, barely blinking." | | 14 | "She stared at the gap" | | 15 | "She took two steps closer." | | 16 | "Her breath came shallow." | | 17 | "She listened until her ears" | | 18 | "She turned in a slow" | | 19 | "Her skin prickled." |
| | ratio | 0.284 | |
| 62.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 151 | | totalSentences | 190 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the last" | | 1 | "The grove sat in the" | | 2 | "Moonlight spilled over the standing" | | 3 | "The air felt tight against" | | 4 | "Wildflowers crowded the clearing in" | | 5 | "She kept one hand inside" | | 6 | "The pendant rested against her" | | 7 | "The crimson stone gave off" | | 8 | "she muttered, and her voice" | | 9 | "She glanced over her shoulder." | | 10 | "The trees behind her had" | | 11 | "The path she’d followed had" | | 12 | "She could still picture the" | | 13 | "It flattened them." | | 14 | "Rory drew the pendant out" | | 15 | "The Heartstone warmed." | | 16 | "She swallowed and looked around" | | 17 | "She had come because the" | | 18 | "It had warmed again in" | | 19 | "She’d known what that meant" |
| | ratio | 0.795 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 190 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 69.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers crowded the clearing in pale knots, white and yellow and bruised blue, blooming as if it had been spring for centuries." | | 1 | "The Heartstone felt warmer now, the glow inside it stronger, as if it had woken up fully and opened one eye." | | 2 | "Only trunks and wet leaves and a patch of moonlit grass trembling as though something had just moved through it." | | 3 | "The smell changed too, sharp and metallic, with a wet undertone that made her think of old coins left in rainwater." | | 4 | "White blooms first, then the yellow and blue, all of them drawing their heads in a slow, patient circle until they faced her as if watching." | | 5 | "The shape below it moved again, slow and broad, as if a body the size of a dog had rolled beneath the earth." | | 6 | "Not the stones themselves, but the gaps between them, narrowing and widening by inches as if the grove breathed around her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.278 | | leniency | 0.556 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.556 | |