| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she muttered numbly [numbly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.267 | | leniency | 0.533 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 89.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1914 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1914 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "navigated" | | 1 | "hulking" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "depths" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "throbbed" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "trembled" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "lurched" | | 16 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her fists" | | 1 | "clenched her jaw" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 229 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 229 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 240 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 1891 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "You came alone." | | 1 | "shhh" | | 2 | "pull" | | 3 | "through" | | 4 | "retracting" | | 5 | "exploded" | | 6 | "shattered" | | 7 | "messengers" | | 8 | "song" | | 9 | "never" | | 10 | "so" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1819 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Cassiopeia | 1 | | Orion | 1 | | London | 1 | | One | 3 | | Like | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Orion" | | 3 | "Like" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like pine and wet grass" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 6 | | per1kWords | 3.173 | | wordCount | 1891 | | matches | | 0 | "not red but black, curling in on itself like a mushroom cap" | | 1 | "not toward the portal, but *through* it" | | 2 | "not flickering out but *retracting*, as though a tide had turned" | | 3 | "not in fingers but in a cluster of thorny vines" | | 4 | "not through her eyes, not through her ears, but through every cell in her body: centuries of night beneath s" | | 5 | "not through her ears, but through every cell in her body: centuries of night beneath s" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 240 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 105 | | mean | 18.01 | | std | 20.62 | | cv | 1.145 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 134 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 78 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 68 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 68 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 229 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.51% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 319 | | matches | | 0 | "was cloying" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "were lifting" | | 3 | "was dragging" | | 4 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 31 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 27 | | totalSentences | 240 | | ratio | 0.113 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers brushed the silver links and recoiled—too hot." | | 1 | "The dense canopy above—usually a sieve for moonlight—cut it off entirely, plunging her into darkness so complete it didn’t feel like darkness but absence." | | 2 | "Then—light." | | 3 | "She counted seven, though she knew there were more out of sight—ancient oak monoliths arranged in a rough circle, their surfaces carved with spirals worn smooth by centuries of unseen fingers passing over them." | | 4 | "She exhaled, took a step toward the nearest stone—" | | 5 | "—and the world blinked." | | 6 | "Something glinted beside her hand—a fallen flower, its petals not red but black, curling in on itself like a mushroom cap." | | 7 | "Then—a whisper." | | 8 | "She took one step toward the gap between the oaks—the exit she’d come through—" | | 9 | "—and the gap wasn’t there." | | 10 | "Behind her—footsteps." | | 11 | "The flowers trembled slightly—wait, no, that wasn’t flowers." | | 12 | "They opened in unison, revealing black cavities that didn’t glow—didn’t reflect light at all." | | 13 | "As one, the poppies closed their mouths and the petals returned to normal—watertight, normal red." | | 14 | "Through the gap, she saw not darkness or park shadows—" | | 15 | "Its surface marred by symmetrical indentations—rows of tiny craters arranged in geometric order, as though pressed by machinery." | | 16 | "And whatever was on the other side—" | | 17 | "A sound erupted behind her—not from the poppies." | | 18 | "Their fingers—too long, too jointed—curled around the stone tops and hauled their bodies up." | | 19 | "Their faces were smooth and featureless except for a vertical slash where a mouth should be—stitched shut with silvery thread that pulsed like maggots in moonlight." | | 20 | "One of the figures tilted its head—not enough joint to do that." | | 21 | "At least that was the sensation—her mind splintered like glass struck by a hammer." | | 22 | "She knew then—without memory, without reason—that these things were not the watchers." | | 23 | "The messenger at the nearest stone collapsed inward, its cloak dissolving into black mist that swirled toward her—" | | 24 | "—and Rory jerked awake sprawled on damp earth, the pendant cold against her sternum." | | 25 | "She sat up slowly, scanning the grove’s entrance—the two oaks." | | 26 | "The only wrong thing was the absence of sound from the clearing behind her—a forest doesn’t fall silent when you turn your back." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1853 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "together under slick skin." | | 1 | "same filthy green light" |
| | adverbCount | 67 | | adverbRatio | 0.03615758229897464 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008094981111710739 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 240 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 240 | | mean | 7.88 | | std | 7.11 | | cv | 0.903 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 38.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 28 | | diversityRatio | 0.2916666666666667 | | totalSentences | 240 | | uniqueOpeners | 70 | |
| 69.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a suffocating silence, as" | | 1 | "Then the petals peeled back." | | 2 | "Then painful, burning like a" | | 3 | "At least that was the" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 67.92% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "She had followed the pull" | | 1 | "She glanced down at the" | | 2 | "It pulsed once, a slow" | | 3 | "she muttered, tugging the chain" | | 4 | "Her fingers brushed the silver" | | 5 | "She stepped forward." | | 6 | "Her breath hitched." | | 7 | "She waited, eyes straining, but" | | 8 | "She stood in the center" | | 9 | "She counted seven, though she" | | 10 | "They should have glistened with" | | 11 | "It wasn’t the chirr of" | | 12 | "It was a wet, clicking" | | 13 | "It came from somewhere inside" | | 14 | "She exhaled, took a step" | | 15 | "It was dusk." | | 16 | "She looked down at the" | | 17 | "It pulsed twice in rapid" | | 18 | "She pushed up onto her" | | 19 | "She stood again, slower this" |
| | ratio | 0.38 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 134 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "She had followed the pull" | | 1 | "The Heartstone had gone from" | | 2 | "The air here tasted of" | | 3 | "She glanced down at the" | | 4 | "It pulsed once, a slow" | | 5 | "she muttered, tugging the chain" | | 6 | "Her fingers brushed the silver" | | 7 | "The pendant vibrated faintly, the" | | 8 | "She stepped forward." | | 9 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 10 | "The dense canopy above—usually a" | | 11 | "Her breath hitched." | | 12 | "She waited, eyes straining, but" | | 13 | "A soft, lambent glow seeped" | | 14 | "She stood in the center" | | 15 | "The wildflowers that should have" | | 16 | "The scent of them was" | | 17 | "She counted seven, though she" | | 18 | "They should have glistened with" | | 19 | "Rory exhaled slowly, forcing her" |
| | ratio | 0.698 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in the cramped" | | 1 | "—and the world blinked." | | 2 | "—and the gap wasn’t there." | | 3 | "If it was behind her," | | 4 | "As if invisible hands gathered" | | 5 | "—and Rory jerked awake sprawled" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 31.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone had gone from dormant to insistent the moment she stepped past the old rugby pitches, as if the invisible thread connecting it to its origin had …" | | 1 | "Now, standing in the cramped darkness between two hulking oaks with their roots snaking across the path like serpents frozen mid-strike, Rory hesitated." | | 2 | "The air here tasted of iron and damp earth, noxious in a way that didn’t match the park’s usual leaf-mold sweetness." | | 3 | "The wildflowers that should have been dormant at night were in full bloom: foxgloves nodding with purple bells, blood-red poppies folded shut but trembling, as …" | | 4 | "The same filthy green light suffused everything, but the horizon glowed with a low, bruised bruise of sunset that hadn’t been there a second ago." | | 5 | "They opened in unison, revealing black cavities that didn’t glow—didn’t reflect light at all." | | 6 | "Its surface marred by symmetrical indentations—rows of tiny craters arranged in geometric order, as though pressed by machinery." | | 7 | "The green glow drained from the clearing, not flickering out but *retracting*, as though a tide had turned and was dragging the light back into the earth." | | 8 | "A keening, resonant vibration that made her teeth ache and her bones hum." | | 9 | "The messenger at the nearest stone collapsed inward, its cloak dissolving into black mist that swirled toward her—" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she muttered numbly (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.267 | | leniency | 0.533 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |