| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1540 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1540 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "resolved" | | 12 | "uncanny" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "pounding" | | 16 | "shimmered" | | 17 | "raced" | | 18 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 147 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 161 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1524 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1385 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.02 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Rory | 28 | | Hel | 1 | | Thursday | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Richmond | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 0.489 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "as if shivering" | | 1 | "looked like the old stories" | | 2 | "not quite a skull, not quite something alive" | | 3 | "not quite something alive" | | 4 | "looked like they'd been carved from obsid" | | 5 | "as if waiting for further instruction" | | 6 | "as if escaping a cage" | | 7 | "looked like—" | | 8 | "appeared—black and spiraling, like frost cracking across skin" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1524 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 26.28 | | std | 18.81 | | cv | 0.716 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 90 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 84 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 57 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 38 | | 43 | 51 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 31 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 95.72% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "been gone" | | 1 | "been carved" | | 2 | "were gone" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 87.96% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 238 | | matches | | 0 | "was doing" | | 1 | "were speaking" | | 2 | "was suddenly standing" | | 3 | "were fading" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 22 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 161 | | ratio | 0.124 | | matches | | 0 | "She took a step forward, boots crushing something that shouldn't have been growing this time of year—tiny blue flowers with petals curled shut as if shivering." | | 1 | "But the standing stones—she didn't remember these standing stones." | | 2 | "Not from any particular direction—just in the air around her." | | 3 | "Something moved—a shape shifting between the trunks, too large to be a fox, too quick to be human." | | 4 | "Somewhere deep in the undergrowth, something exhaled—slow, wet, deliberate." | | 5 | "She could feel it now—the wrongness wasn't just outside her." | | 6 | "A shape resolved itself between two oaks—a woman, impossibly tall, her limbs too long, her dark hair moving as if underwater." | | 7 | "Something behind the woman moved—a shift in the shadows, a too-deep inhalation." | | 8 | "She remembered that field—green and golden in the late afternoon light, the day she'd been born." | | 9 | "Maybe if she removed the pendant—" | | 10 | "Its head was wrong—not quite a skull, not quite something alive." | | 11 | "She glanced toward the standing stones—so close." | | 12 | "If she stood still—" | | 13 | "If the pendant was the key—if it was what they wanted—" | | 14 | "The world tilted—" | | 15 | "—and she was suddenly standing in familiar territory." | | 16 | "She exhaled shakily, then laughed—a brittle, disbelieving sound." | | 17 | "And on her sleeve, just above the wrist—a smear of dark red that looked like—" | | 18 | "Beneath the crescent scar from her childhood accident, a new mark had appeared—black and spiraling, like frost cracking across skin." | | 19 | "But beneath her fingernails, dark soil remained—damp and smelling richly of something ancient and wild." |
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| 93.87% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 234 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.04700854700854701 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01282051282051282 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 161 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 161 | | mean | 9.47 | | std | 5.83 | | cv | 0.616 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 43.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.2484472049689441 | | totalSentences | 161 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "Too sweet, like overripe fruit" | | 1 | "Then stillness again." | | 2 | "Somewhere deep in the undergrowth," | | 3 | "Maybe if she removed the" | | 4 | "Then she noticed the blackened" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't remember walking from" | | 1 | "She only knew she had" | | 2 | "She took a step forward," | | 3 | "She knew this place, knew" | | 4 | "Her breath hitched." | | 5 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 6 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 7 | "She had fallen against a" | | 8 | "Her father had stitched it" | | 9 | "She couldn't remember which of" | | 10 | "She took two steps back" | | 11 | "Her pendant flared against her" | | 12 | "She could feel it now—the" | | 13 | "It had been inside her" | | 14 | "She forced her voice steady." | | 15 | "Her voice was like wind" | | 16 | "Her teeth were too white," | | 17 | "Her pendant burned now, radiating" | | 18 | "She remembered that field—green and" | | 19 | "She remembered her mother's voice" |
| | ratio | 0.284 | |
| 48.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 116 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed like" | | 1 | "Rory hesitated at the threshold," | | 2 | "She didn't remember walking from" | | 3 | "She only knew she had" | | 4 | "The air smelled wrong." | | 5 | "She took a step forward," | | 6 | "The wrongness coiled in her" | | 7 | "Richmond Park was her usual" | | 8 | "She knew this place, knew" | | 9 | "Rory reached out, fingers brushing" | | 10 | "The surface pulsed faintly beneath" | | 11 | "Her breath hitched." | | 12 | "The pendant was doing the" | | 13 | "The voice came from behind" | | 14 | "Rory spun, heart hammering, but" | | 15 | "The blue flowers had already" | | 16 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 17 | "A dry chuckle floated through" | | 18 | "Rory's mouth was dry." | | 19 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" |
| | ratio | 0.823 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "If she ran, it would" | | 1 | "If she stood still—" | | 2 | "If the pendant was the" | | 3 | "—and she was suddenly standing" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 56.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't remember walking from the tube station, didn't remember the taxi ride that had somehow taken too long, the streets stretching unnaturally between one…" | | 1 | "She took a step forward, boots crushing something that shouldn't have been growing this time of year—tiny blue flowers with petals curled shut as if shivering." | | 2 | "She knew this place, knew the familiar breadth of the oak canopy, the thick undergrowth that parted neatly for the park's footpaths." | | 3 | "A shape resolved itself between two oaks—a woman, impossibly tall, her limbs too long, her dark hair moving as if underwater." | | 4 | "The standing stones behind her rang with a low, metallic sound that vibrated through Rory's bones." | | 5 | "The pendant's glow cast eerie shadows that stretched unnaturally long across the path." | | 6 | "She turned and sprinted the final distance to the standing stones, diving through the boundary as if escaping a cage." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory lied (lie)" | | 1 | "she screamed (scream)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |