Run: 2026-03-18-01KM08WRB74NGDTS05R5H5KTB8

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31.5s
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$0.002597
Provider:
Mistral

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Thriller genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down like a broken mainsail, slack and endless, soaking Detective Quinn’s leather jacket before she’d reached the end of the block. Her shoes slapped against wet pavement, heels echoing off Georgian façades that blurred into streaks of gold and black under sodium lights. The suspect—a lean runner in a too-thin motoring jacket—had just ducked down the alley behind All Hallows Lane. No lights. No cameras. Just the steady drip of rainwater from overflowing gutters and the distant thrum of a bus engine changing down through Camden. Quinn didn’t slow. She went in boots-first, torch cutting a pale cone through the murk. The alley narrowed, the walls slick with algae and the occasional graffiti tag signed simply *Rook*. Then she saw him—slanting left, head down, hands in pockets like he was out for a Sunday stroll instead of evading a warrant. She’d taped his photo above her desk three days ago; fresh mug from tonight’s drunk-and-disorderly, fresh bruising along the jawline. “Police! Freeze where you are!” Her voice bounced back at her, swallowed by the wet stone. No response. The runner jinked right, past a boarded-up kebab shop whose neon sign flickered the P in *Pizza* into a morse-code of green guilt. Quinn’s breath came hot behind her teeth. She angled around a dumpster overflowing with black bin liners that stank of fried chicken and something older. That was when she saw the hatch—cast-iron, dulled by decades of traffic, set into the pavement at a jaunty angle as though the street itself had vomited it up in surprise. There were fresh scratches around the locking bolt. Someone had pried it open recently and not bothered to shut the damn thing properly. A laugh tried to escape her throat, half adrenaline, half grim humour. There were rules for descending into holes like this: call for backup, wait for a ram, maybe toss a flashbang. But her partner’s voice on the radio still crackled in her memory: *“Quinn, don’t wait for miracles.”* Morris had been dead three years come next Tuesday, his oxygen line severed mid-transfusion. The official report said equipment failure. She carried the metal splinter from that oxygen valve in her watch pocket next to her warrant card, warm from her pulse like a tiny, accusing dagger. She took the ladder rungs two at a time, torch beam licking rust flakes into brief constellations. The shaft opened into a tunnel that smelled of wet concrete and something sweetly metallic—copper tanged through the damp, undercut by ozone and the faintest waft of something cloying, like burnt sugar. The walls were tiled in faded white with a green stripe halfway up, an echo of the 1960s before the station had been mothballed. A sign at ankle height read *Mind the Gap*, although the gap was no wider than a coffin lid these days. Ahead, the runner’s silhouette flickered at the edge of her torch. The tunnel split: left went uphill toward Euston Road; straight on slipped down into darkness where the tiled walls ended abruptly at raw brick. He chose straight. Quinn’s torch batteries dying too fast. She clicked off the juice and palmed a mini-Maglite from her jacket; tiny but bright enough to carve a neon tunnel. The descent was gradual at first, then suddenly steeper, the gradient catching her boots. A low rumble vibrated through the soles—train noise? Or something else deeper, older, moving in the clay beneath London? Quinn swallowed. The Metro was shut for renovation; no scheduled services tonight. But she’d heard rumours about trains that ran without maps… She rounded a corner thick with dripping condensation and found the runner halted beside a metal door, riveted like an aircraft hatch, set into the tunnel wall on the left. He was pulling something from his jacket—a flat, bone-white rectangle about the size of a playing card. He slid it into the slot of a turnstile embedded in the door. A soft *click*. The light above the door shifted from red to green. Quinn ducked behind a cluster of pipes. She watched as the suspect pressed his palm to a biometric scanner beside the door. A low *burrr* answered, and then the door swung inward without a sound. Warm, yellow lamplight spilled across the wet floor, carrying the scent of spiced rum and something fried—churros maybe?—alongside cigarette smoke curling lazy in the still air. Her breath hitched. This wasn’t just an abandoned tunnel. It was a threshold. Quinn stepped out of cover and tightened her grip on the torch. The entrance corridor widened into a proper underground space lit by flickering bulbs wrapped in frayed yellow cloth. The walls were covered with warped maps—Europe one week, the old Roman Empire the next—pinned under glass that had once been shopfront windows. A few metres ahead, the suspect was already being swallowed by a crush of humanity: figures in long coats, veiled women in abayas that shimmered like oil slicks, a man pushing a trolley whose wheels sounded like a xylophone played by a drunk toddler. The noise levels rose—not raucous, but controlled, like a hive of shifted light and muttered deals. She followed, her boots clicking on tiled flooring that gave way to uneven cobblestones slicked with something darker than rainwater. This was the Veil Market—a rabbit warren beneath London that only opened when the moon swelled full and hungry. Bone tokens were the currency, passed hand to hand with whispered pedigrees. She’d read the intelligence logs—at least twenty pages of DCI grumbling and pages of footnotes. The Market didn’t exist on any map. It moved location like a migratory predator. The suspect paused outside a stall draped in velvet so old it looked like it had been salvaged from a Victorian funeral parlour. An elderly man behind the counter was pouring powder from a sealed jar into small muslin pouches tied with black thread. The suspect exchanged the bone token for one of the pouches, tucked it away, then slipped onward through the crowd. Quinn’s skull began to ache behind her eyes—a pressure, rhythmic, like a second pulse. She rubbed the bridge of her nose. Too much adrenaline. Too many layers. She needed to make a call. But getting a signal underground was like praying to a dead god. Then her torch beam caught a flicker of familiar olive skin. Tomás, leaning against a stall selling bottles labelled in languages Quinn couldn’t parse. His Saint Christopher medallion glinted under the yellow light, suspended above a hand-rolled cigarette he hadn’t yet lit. He saw her instantly. No flicker of surprise—just the faintest tightening at the corners of his mouth, as though he’d been expecting this collision for years. “You shouldn’t be here, Detective,” he said quietly, exhaling a thin stream of smoke that smelled faintly of lavender. “Not dressed like that.” She didn’t lower the torch. “He just paid for something upstairs. Something dangerous.” Tomás exhaled through his nose. “Solasin. Black lotion. Turns shadows into claws.” His fingers drummed once against the crate behind him—slow, deliberate. A code. “You follow him in there, who knows what claws will be sharpened for you?” The Market had unfolded around them: a stall selling glass eyes that still wept real tears, another with cages that hummed softly, shifting rhythms inside. The pressure in her skull ratcheted up. Somewhere deeper in the maze, a stall holder began chanting in a minor key, the sound threading through the crowd like a needle through silk. Quinn stepped closer until they were practically shoulder to shoulder. “Which part of ‘I’m a cop’ didn’t you understand? This ends tonight.” Tomás flicked ash onto the cobbles. “You took an oath to uphold the law. Not to chase monsters down their throats.” “I don’t care what he is—druid, demon, pickled footballer—I arrest him.” “You sure?” His voice dropped to a murmur only she’d hear. “Last time you ran into a cellar looking for answers, your partner came out in a body bag. And their bloodstains were the shape of Saint Andrew’s crosses. Remember that.” Her jaw clenched. “Stay out of this, Herrera.” “Can’t do that.” He tapped his medallion. “My license hangs on balance too. And right now, mine’s tilting toward the scales of gravity.” A ripple of movement behind Tomás. Quinn’s torch flicked up just in time to catch the runner—ten metres away now, weaving toward a closed-circuit staircase whose iron steps spiralled downward into darkness. The Veil Market wasn’t just a bazaar; it was a maze with an exit, and the exit was always being dug deeper. Tomás’s fingers brushed her forearm. A pinprick of heat blazed where his scar touched her sleeve. “You go down those stairs,” he said, voice low, “you don’t come back up ordinary. The bones remember you. Or you forget you had bones at all.” Quinn wrenched free. “Wise words from a man who still believes in saintly medallions.” She strode forward, torch blazing, boots ringing on metal. Behind her, Tomás stubbed out his cigarette with deliberate finality. She didn’t hear him move, but she knew he was following. The stairs spiralled like a helix etched from rust and resolve. At the first landing, Quinn’s torch died completely. She jammed it into her pocket—no time to curse the batteries. The darkness pressed close, thick enough to taste tin and decaying parchment. Somewhere, water dripped, but the rhythm was wrong—more like a heartbeat, slow and patient, counting the decades since the last suicide. Then a flicker—grey against black. A corridor that hadn’t been on any of the old Tube maps. A corridor that looked like it had been painted white with surgical gloves dipped in luminous mucus. The walls pulsed faintly, as though lit from within by some slow coral bloom. The runner was now thirty metres ahead, his bioluminescent silhouette flickering in and out of the corridor’s sickly glow. Quinn broke into a run. The corridor split again. She chose left. The air warmed, became cloying. She tasted salt on her tongue—blood? seawater? The corridor widened into a chamber roughly circular, its vaulted ceiling lost in shadow. The runner stood in the centre, now motionless. Behind him, a stone pedestal rose waist-high, its surface sheeted with something dark that reflected no light at all. The bones—real bones—were visible through the sheen; fingers, ribs, a shattered femur arranged in a rough star pattern. The runner was whispering, rotating his hands above the star like a conductor leading a subterranean orchestra only he could hear. Tomás caught up, breathing hard. He pulled out a second mini-Maglite and clicked it on. The beam cut through the gloom and found the runner’s face—eyes wide, pupils swallowed by black voids, mouth working silently. “What the hell is he doing?” Quinn kept her voice low, but it still echoed like a shout in cathedral acoustics. Tomás’s grip on the torch tightened until joints whitened. “Calling the Nameless.” A sound answered—a wet, clicking ululation that rattled inside her skull until teeth ached. The pedestal’s dark surface began to ripple. The sound intensified, a chorus now, dozens of throats mimicking the runner’s chant. The chamber filled with a scent like rotting roses and copper. Quinn’s muscles locked. She raised her pistol—identical to the one Morris had carried that night—levelled at the runner’s spine through the pearl of her torch beam. “Police! Hands where I can see them!” The runner didn’t turn. The chanting kept growing, swelling into something that felt like physical pressure, forcing her back two steps, three. Tomás grabbed her elbow and yanked her sideways. “Don’t shoot!” he hissed. “The musket ball won’t help. Last time someone fired here, three officers—” A shriek tore through the chamber, inhuman, slicing through their eardrums like wire through silk. The runner’s body arched backward, suspended as though wires from the ceiling had caught him. His bones cracked audibly, reforming in mid-air into a shape that wasn’t quite his—too many joints, too many angles, like a broken marionette trying to stand upright. Quinn fired anyway. The shot echoed, deafening. The runner staggered, flesh splitting along the altered limbs, but the wound sealed instantly in a ripple of black fire. The shriek turned triumphant. Tomás slammed Quinn against the corridor wall. The torch tumbled, rolling out of sight, plunging them both into instant, suffocating dark. “Move,” he growled in her ear. “Or become part of the furniture.” Ahead, the chamber burned brighter. Shadow things detached from the walls—tall, thin, with faces like melted candle wax—turning toward the noise of the gunshot, sniffing the air. Quinn shoved Tomás’s shoulder. “Your fix or mine?” He didn’t hesitate. “Ours.” They ran—pounding boots, ragged breathing—a corridor that seemed to be shortening ahead of them, walls contracting like lungs exhaling. Behind, the pounding of many feet began, a stampede of irregular time signatures. They burst through an archway into comparative light—a tunnel that smelled of damp wool and stale chips. This one sloped upward, exit steps visible at the far end, a ladder’s rungs glinting under a security light coloured sickly green like army surplus. Quinn didn’t waste breath counting. She climbed, fingers finding rust but no give. Somewhere below, the shadow things hissed in chorus. Tomás shoved her up from below. “Climb, Detective. Or become history.” Her boot skidded on the top rung. She threw herself over the lip and landed hard on wet pavement—Euston Road under a blotched moon. No sign of the Veil Market. No sign of the runner, the Nameless, or whatever grotesque parody of her partner had been lying in wait. She spun, pistol raised again, arms trembling. Tomás emerged like a ghost, wiping rain from his face. His Saint Christopher medallion was warm to the touch. He rolled it between thumb and forefinger once, twice, then tucked it back under his collar. Quinn’s mouth was a grim line. “Explain it all tomorrow at the Yard.” He shook his head. “Won’t be tomorrow. And the Yard won’t have answers.” She wanted to argue, to cuff him for obstruction, to demand answers about Morris, about the Market, about whatever unholy stampede now slithered back into London’s bloodstream. But the green neon sign of a nearby pub flickered on, casting long shadows across the pavement—and for the first time in three years, Detective Harlow Quinn felt something other than fury or grief coil cold in her guts. Tomás saw it in her eyes. “Get in the car, Detective. We’re not done.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"His fingers drummed once [once]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.133
91.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2435
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sweetly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"sweetly"
1"suddenly"
2"softly"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2435
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"predator"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count3
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"silk"
count2
12
word"flicked"
count2
13
word"jaw clenched"
count1
14
word"etched"
count1
15
word"resolve"
count1
16
word"pulsed"
count1
17
word"shattered"
count1
18
word"gloom"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count2
20
word"pounding"
count2
21
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"flickered"
2"pulse"
3"echo"
4"vibrated"
5"shimmered"
6"predator"
7"velvet"
8"rhythmic"
9"flicker"
10"familiar"
11"silk"
12"flicked"
13"jaw clenched"
14"etched"
15"resolve"
16"pulsed"
17"shattered"
18"gloom"
19"echoed"
20"pounding"
21"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences170
matches
0"p in surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences170
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences190
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords12
totalWords2397
ratio0.005
matches
0"Rook"
1"Pizza"
2"“Quinn, don’t wait for miracles.”"
3"Mind the Gap"
4"click"
5"burrr"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions77
wordCount2150
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Detective2
Quinn22
Georgian1
Hallows1
Lane1
Camden1
Sunday1
Morris3
Tuesday1
Euston2
Road2
London3
Metro1
Europe1
Roman1
Empire1
Veil3
Market6
Victorian1
Saint2
Christopher2
Tomás14
Tube1
Ahead2
Nameless1
Harlow1
persons
0"Detective"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Market"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
7"Harlow"
places
0"Hallows"
1"Lane"
2"Camden"
3"Euston"
4"Road"
5"London"
6"Europe"
7"Victorian"
globalScore0.988
windowScore0.833
35.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences131
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"sounded like a xylophone played by a drunk"
1"looked like it had been salvaged from a V"
2"looked like it had been painted white wit"
3"felt like physical pressure, forcing he"
4"quite his—too many joints, too many angles, like a broken marionette trying to stand upright"
5"corridor that seemed to be shortening ahead of them, walls contracting like lungs exhaling"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.417
wordCount2397
matches
0"not raucous, but controlled, like a hive of shifted light"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences190
matches
0"flooring that gave"
1"carried that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean38.05
std26.53
cv0.697
sampleLengths
089
174
241
379
496
594
665
755
873
961
1013
11113
1280
1364
1445
1568
1623
1713
1838
1957
2022
2121
2211
2341
248
2523
2654
2716
2827
2914
3030
3163
3248
3357
3466
3535
3621
3712
3814
3931
4026
417
4230
4316
4457
453
4628
4721
4812
4927
90.82% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences170
matches
0"were tiled"
1"been mothballed"
2"was shut"
3"been shopfront"
4"being swallowed"
5"been salvaged"
6"being dug"
7"been painted"
71.09% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs362
matches
0"was pulling"
1"was already being"
2"was pouring"
3"was like praying"
4"was always being"
5"was following"
6"was whispering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount37
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences34
totalSentences190
ratio0.179
matches
0"The suspect—a lean runner in a too-thin motoring jacket—had just ducked down the alley behind All Hallows Lane."
1"Then she saw him—slanting left, head down, hands in pockets like he was out for a Sunday stroll instead of evading a warrant."
2"She’d taped his photo above her desk three days ago; fresh mug from tonight’s drunk-and-disorderly, fresh bruising along the jawline."
3"That was when she saw the hatch—cast-iron, dulled by decades of traffic, set into the pavement at a jaunty angle as though the street itself had vomited it up in surprise."
4"The shaft opened into a tunnel that smelled of wet concrete and something sweetly metallic—copper tanged through the damp, undercut by ozone and the faintest waft of something cloying, like burnt sugar."
5"The tunnel split: left went uphill toward Euston Road; straight on slipped down into darkness where the tiled walls ended abruptly at raw brick."
6"She clicked off the juice and palmed a mini-Maglite from her jacket; tiny but bright enough to carve a neon tunnel."
7"A low rumble vibrated through the soles—train noise?"
8"The Metro was shut for renovation; no scheduled services tonight."
9"He was pulling something from his jacket—a flat, bone-white rectangle about the size of a playing card."
10"Warm, yellow lamplight spilled across the wet floor, carrying the scent of spiced rum and something fried—churros maybe?—alongside cigarette smoke curling lazy in the still air."
11"The walls were covered with warped maps—Europe one week, the old Roman Empire the next—pinned under glass that had once been shopfront windows."
12"The noise levels rose—not raucous, but controlled, like a hive of shifted light and muttered deals."
13"This was the Veil Market—a rabbit warren beneath London that only opened when the moon swelled full and hungry."
14"She’d read the intelligence logs—at least twenty pages of DCI grumbling and pages of footnotes."
15"Quinn’s skull began to ache behind her eyes—a pressure, rhythmic, like a second pulse."
16"No flicker of surprise—just the faintest tightening at the corners of his mouth, as though he’d been expecting this collision for years."
17"“Solasin. Black lotion. Turns shadows into claws.” His fingers drummed once against the crate behind him—slow, deliberate."
18"Quinn’s torch flicked up just in time to catch the runner—ten metres away now, weaving toward a closed-circuit staircase whose iron steps spiralled downward into darkness."
19"The Veil Market wasn’t just a bazaar; it was a maze with an exit, and the exit was always being dug deeper."
20"She jammed it into her pocket—no time to curse the batteries."
21"Somewhere, water dripped, but the rhythm was wrong—more like a heartbeat, slow and patient, counting the decades since the last suicide."
22"Then a flicker—grey against black."
23"She tasted salt on her tongue—blood?"
24"The bones—real bones—were visible through the sheen; fingers, ribs, a shattered femur arranged in a rough star pattern."
25"The beam cut through the gloom and found the runner’s face—eyes wide, pupils swallowed by black voids, mouth working silently."
26"A sound answered—a wet, clicking ululation that rattled inside her skull until teeth ached."
27"She raised her pistol—identical to the one Morris had carried that night—levelled at the runner’s spine through the pearl of her torch beam."
28"His bones cracked audibly, reforming in mid-air into a shape that wasn’t quite his—too many joints, too many angles, like a broken marionette trying to stand upright."
29"Shadow things detached from the walls—tall, thin, with faces like melted candle wax—turning toward the noise of the gunshot, sniffing the air."
30"They ran—pounding boots, ragged breathing—a corridor that seemed to be shortening ahead of them, walls contracting like lungs exhaling."
31"They burst through an archway into comparative light—a tunnel that smelled of damp wool and stale chips."
32"She threw herself over the lip and landed hard on wet pavement—Euston Road under a blotched moon."
33"But the green neon sign of a nearby pub flickered on, casting long shadows across the pavement—and for the first time in three years, Detective Harlow Quinn felt something other than fury or grief coil cold in her guts."
93.60% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2200
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"flat, bone-white rectangle"
adverbCount89
adverbRatio0.04045454545454545
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.011363636363636364
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences190
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences190
mean12.62
std8.12
cv0.643
sampleLengths
024
122
218
32
42
521
63
712
816
923
1020
1116
122
1323
147
1518
1631
178
1815
1912
2020
2131
226
2327
2417
2532
2624
2721
2811
2924
303
316
3221
3314
348
3511
362
3710
3810
3930
4017
4113
423
4310
447
4515
4613
4726
483
496
41.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2631578947368421
totalSentences190
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences163
matches
0"Just the steady drip of"
1"Then she saw him—slanting left,"
2"Too much adrenaline."
3"Too many layers."
4"Then her torch beam caught"
5"Somewhere deeper in the maze,"
6"Somewhere, water dripped, but the"
7"Then a flicker—grey against black."
8"Somewhere below, the shadow things"
ratio0.055
99.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences163
matches
0"Her shoes slapped against wet"
1"She went in boots-first, torch"
2"She’d taped his photo above"
3"Her voice bounced back at"
4"She angled around a dumpster"
5"She carried the metal splinter"
6"She took the ladder rungs"
7"He chose straight."
8"She clicked off the juice"
9"She rounded a corner thick"
10"He was pulling something from"
11"He slid it into the"
12"She watched as the suspect"
13"Her breath hitched."
14"It was a threshold."
15"She followed, her boots clicking"
16"She’d read the intelligence logs—at"
17"It moved location like a"
18"She rubbed the bridge of"
19"She needed to make a"
ratio0.301
42.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount136
totalSentences163
matches
0"The rain came down like"
1"Her shoes slapped against wet"
2"The suspect—a lean runner in"
3"Quinn didn’t slow."
4"She went in boots-first, torch"
5"The alley narrowed, the walls"
6"She’d taped his photo above"
7"Her voice bounced back at"
8"The runner jinked right, past"
9"Quinn’s breath came hot behind"
10"She angled around a dumpster"
11"That was when she saw"
12"Someone had pried it open"
13"A laugh tried to escape"
14"The official report said equipment"
15"She carried the metal splinter"
16"She took the ladder rungs"
17"The shaft opened into a"
18"The walls were tiled in"
19"A sign at ankle height"
ratio0.834
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
ratio0
59.27% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences94
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Her shoes slapped against wet pavement, heels echoing off Georgian façades that blurred into streaks of gold and black under sodium lights."
1"The shaft opened into a tunnel that smelled of wet concrete and something sweetly metallic—copper tanged through the damp, undercut by ozone and the faintest wa…"
2"The walls were covered with warped maps—Europe one week, the old Roman Empire the next—pinned under glass that had once been shopfront windows."
3"A few metres ahead, the suspect was already being swallowed by a crush of humanity: figures in long coats, veiled women in abayas that shimmered like oil slicks…"
4"She followed, her boots clicking on tiled flooring that gave way to uneven cobblestones slicked with something darker than rainwater."
5"No flicker of surprise—just the faintest tightening at the corners of his mouth, as though he’d been expecting this collision for years."
6"A sound answered—a wet, clicking ululation that rattled inside her skull until teeth ached."
7"The chanting kept growing, swelling into something that felt like physical pressure, forcing her back two steps, three."
8"His bones cracked audibly, reforming in mid-air into a shape that wasn’t quite his—too many joints, too many angles, like a broken marionette trying to stand up…"
9"They ran—pounding boots, ragged breathing—a corridor that seemed to be shortening ahead of them, walls contracting like lungs exhaling."
10"They burst through an archway into comparative light—a tunnel that smelled of damp wool and stale chips."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"His fingers drummed once, deliberate"
1"he said, voice low,"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he hissed (hiss)"
1"he growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.133
77.3455%