| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 90.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1565 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "reluctantly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 58.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1565 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "clenching" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "shattered" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "lurching" | | 9 | "the last thing" | | 10 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 146 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 148 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1552 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1529 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | English | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | London | 1 | | Holloway | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Earth" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "English" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Holloway" | | 5 | "Road" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 96.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as though fighting against a current it couldn’t name" | | 1 | "looked like lichen or possibly old scars" |
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| 71.13% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.289 | | wordCount | 1552 | | matches | | 0 | "Not much, but enough to make her feel armed" | | 1 | "not only in her ears but in her bones, rattling her teeth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 35.27 | | std | 26.96 | | cv | 0.764 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 96 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 67 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 74 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 75 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 60 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 58 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 67 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 46 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 45 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 94 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 53 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 25 |
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| 98.05% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "being pulled" | | 1 | "was lifted" | | 2 | "were caked" |
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| 96.64% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 258 | | matches | | 0 | "was still wearing" | | 1 | "were pressing" | | 2 | "were dangling" | | 3 | "wasn’t running" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 148 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong before she took another breath—thick, as though dipped in syrup." | | 1 | "The standing stones groaned behind her—not with wind, not with any natural sound she recognised." | | 2 | "She checked the pendant beneath her collar—the Heartstone." | | 3 | "When she lifted her foot, the earth clung like wet clay, and a sound rose from below—wet, leathery, like something breathing through a mask of mucus." | | 4 | "Not swaying—leaning." | | 5 | "Its posture was impossible—too many joints, too many angles, its spine curving in directions a human spine shouldn’t." | | 6 | "For a heartbeat she saw the grove differently—the oaks weren’t trees at all." | | 7 | "Its face was a smooth oval, featureless except for a vertical slit where a mouth should be, and two deeper slashes for eyes that were entirely black—pupil, iris, sclera all merged into a void that absorbed the light." | | 8 | "One instant it was twenty paces away; the next it was inches from her face, its breath rolling over her like rotting seaweed." | | 9 | "The thing hissed—a sound like steam through a blocked pipe—and recoiled half a step." | | 10 | "The tear in its torso had sealed; the bioluminescence bled out into the surrounding air like milk spilled in water, leaving only a faint green glow hanging in the shape of its silhouette." | | 11 | "It did—briefly—projecting a crimson halo over her chest." | | 12 | "She knew already what she’d see—the hunchbacks unfolding, lengthening, their limbs stretching impossibly long, their green-eyed voids closing the distance between them and her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1373 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.03932993445010925 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010924981791697014 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 148 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 148 | | mean | 10.49 | | std | 7.81 | | cv | 0.745 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 34.46% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.2702702702702703 | | totalSentences | 148 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Only here it wasn’t copper," | | 1 | "Just a sulphurous half-twilight, the" | | 2 | "Normally it glowed like poker-red" | | 3 | "Then it spoke." | | 4 | "Instead the cracks pulsed with" | | 5 | "Then the grove exhaled." | | 6 | "Somewhere deep in the lining" |
| | ratio | 0.052 | |
| 65.93% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "It was cold and green" | | 1 | "It was the sound of" | | 2 | "She was still wearing her" | | 3 | "She hadn’t even had time" | | 4 | "She checked the pendant beneath" | | 5 | "She clenched her fists." | | 6 | "she said aloud" | | 7 | "Her voice sounded muffled, as" | | 8 | "She hadn’t passed any on" | | 9 | "It didn’t move when she" | | 10 | "It simply waited." | | 11 | "She unzipped her jacket just" | | 12 | "She took a step forward." | | 13 | "She jammed her foot down" | | 14 | "She forced herself to walk." | | 15 | "Its posture was impossible—too many" | | 16 | "It wore a cloak, but" | | 17 | "It clung, dark and damp," | | 18 | "She reached into the side" | | 19 | "It emitted a sound like" |
| | ratio | 0.385 | |
| 71.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 105 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through the archway" | | 1 | "The air smelled wrong before" | | 2 | "It was cold and green" | | 3 | "The standing stones groaned behind" | | 4 | "It was the sound of" | | 5 | "She was still wearing her" | | 6 | "She hadn’t even had time" | | 7 | "The grove wasn’t supposed to" | | 8 | "She checked the pendant beneath" | | 9 | "A warning pulse, faint but" | | 10 | "She clenched her fists." | | 11 | "she said aloud" | | 12 | "Her voice sounded muffled, as" | | 13 | "A twig snapped." | | 14 | "She hadn’t passed any on" | | 15 | "The path had been clear." | | 16 | "It didn’t move when she" | | 17 | "It simply waited." | | 18 | "Rory exhaled through her nose." | | 19 | "She unzipped her jacket just" |
| | ratio | 0.778 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it hung loose, black" | | 1 | "Now it flickered, barely there," | | 2 | "Now something stood between the" | | 3 | "As if the whole sky" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 34.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it hung loose, black as a raven’s wing, catching the dim glow that shouldn’t have existed." | | 1 | "Now it flickered, barely there, as though fighting against a current it couldn’t name." | | 2 | "The crimson streak caught the grove’s sickly light and for a second the air above her own blood seemed to writhe, as though the droplets were dangling from invi…" | | 3 | "It was unfolding, limbs lengthening like accordion pleats, its cloak dissolving into the dark so that she glimpsed only an expanse of moss-green skin stippled w…" | | 4 | "Its face was a smooth oval, featureless except for a vertical slit where a mouth should be, and two deeper slashes for eyes that were entirely black—pupil, iris…" | | 5 | "Dozens more hunchbacks, their sizes varying from child to giant, all emaciated, all draped in damp cloaks that clung to whatever skeletal frames supported them." | | 6 | "The sound arched through the grove, bouncing off the unseen sky, and the entire circle of watchers rippled as though reality had hiccuped." | | 7 | "The sound shattered not only in her ears but in her bones, rattling her teeth and filling her skull with static." | | 8 | "She sailed between the stones, her stomach lurching as if she’d dropped several storeys." | | 9 | "Somewhere deep in the lining of her jacket, the box cutter was still clutched in her fist, the blade smeared with something green and iridescent that smelled of…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |