Run: 2026-03-18-01KM1G6PJ74G259MR69MP4F713

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Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.003298
Provider:
Minimax

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling for three hours when the door to The Raven's Nest swung open, letting in a gust of damp October air and the sound of traffic slicking on wet cobblestones. Aurora looked up from the glass she was polishing, her cloth pausing mid-stroke against the rim. She knew the shape of her before she recognized the face. The way she stood in the doorway, one hand still on the brass handle, her weight shifted slightly back as if ready to retreat. Old habits. Some things you couldn't unlearn. Mia Thornton stepped inside and let the door fall shut behind her. Rory set the glass down slowly, arranging it just so on the bar top with the practiced motions Silas had drilled into her. Her fingers were steady. She made them be steady. The scar on her wrist itched beneath her sleeve, a phantom sensation she'd learned to ignore years ago. "Rory." Mia's voice was higher than she remembered, thinner. The London damp had turned her auburn hair darker, plastered it flat against her temples. She wore a grey coat that cost more than Rory made in a month, and there were lines around her eyes that hadn't been there before. Thirty now, maybe thirty-one. The same age they'd been when everything fell apart. "Mia." Rory reached for another glass, gave it an unnecessary polish. "Didn't expect to see you in Soho." "I was in the neighborhood." Mia slid onto a barstool, set down her umbrella, and looked around at the old maps and faded photographs with an expression Rory couldn't quite read. "This place is new, isn't it? Feels old." "It's been here a while." Rory placed the glass beneath the tap, filled it, set it in front of her without being asked. Water. No alcohol. Mia had never been able to hold her drink; that much Rory remembered. "Just you, then?" A flicker of something crossed Mia's face. "Waiting for someone. A client. But he—he cancelled." She wrapped her hands around the glass but didn't drink. "I saw your name on the marquee outside. Golden Empress. You work there?" "Delivery." Rory shrugged, leaning her hip against the bar. "Weekends and evenings. Helps with the rent." "Right." Mia nodded slowly, her gaze dropping to her hands. Her nails were painted a deep burgundy, freshly done. Professional. "And you're—you're living above a bar, apparently. That's..." "Convenient," Rory finished. "Si doesn't mind the noise." "Si." "Blackwood. The owner." Rory nodded toward the back, where Silas was counting receipts in his usual corner, the lamplight catching the silver on his signet ring. "He's ex-military.-retired. Doesn't ask questions." "Does he know?" Mia asked, and the question hung between them, dense as the smoke that used to curl through the pubs back home. Rory's jaw tightened. "Know what?" Mia looked up then, and there it was—the thing she'd come here to say. The apology or the accusation or whatever she'd rehearsed on the tube ride over, standing in the rain outside a bar she probably thought Rory would never frequent. The old Mia would have had a speech prepared. Would have written it down and crossed out lines and started over. "About Evan," Mia said quietly. The name landed like a stone in still water. Rory watched the ripples spread through her chest, through the careful architecture she'd built in the years since. The flat above the bar with its secondhand furniture and the window that rattled when the wind came from the east. The routes she'd memorized through London's streets, the faces of regular customers she'd learned to forget. The therapy sessions she'd attended twice a week for two years, then once a month, then not at all. The scar on her wrist that she'd stopped covering with bracelets. "What about him?" Rory asked, and her voice was level, and she was proud of it. "He moved. To Manchester. I heard—" Mia stopped, pressed her lips together. "I heard he lost the position at the firm. Something about, I don't know, money. Fraud, maybe. They didn't prosecute. But he lost everything." "Good." The word came out flat. Final. Mia flinched at it. "I didn't know," she said. "Back then. I didn't—I swear, Rory, I had no idea what he was—" "I know you didn't know." Rory set down her cloth. "That's not the same as knowing and doing nothing." The silence stretched. In the back, Silas's pen scratched against paper. Somewhere in the basement, the old boiler clanked through its death rattle. The green neon sign outside threw pale light across Mia's face, making her look older, younger, neither. "We were eighteen," Mia said finally. "When you told me. And I thought—I thought if I said something, if I went to the authorities, they'd just... they'd have sided with him. You know how he was. How his family was. And I was scared, Rory. I was twenty years old and I was scared, and I'm not—I'm not asking you to forgive me. I just need you to know that I think about it. Every day. I think about what I should have done." Rory turned and pulled a bottle from the shelf behind her. Whiskey. She poured two fingers into a clean glass and set it in front of Mia. "You're right," she said. "You were twenty. You were scared. And I was eighteen, and I had nowhere to go, and Eva let me stay on her couch for six weeks while I figured out how to exist in a city where he didn't have any reach. And you—" She stopped, breathed. "You picked your fear over our friendship. That's what happened. That's the truth of it." Mia stared at the whiskey. Her eyes were wet now, and she didn't bother to hide it. "I looked for you," she said. "After you left Cardiff. I tried to find you." "I know." "I called your parents' house. Your mum was—she was kind. She told me you'd moved. She wouldn't say where." "She wouldn't." Rory wiped down the bar top, a gesture that had become habit, something to do with her hands. "She doesn't forgive easily, my mum. Comes with the barrister blood." "I'm not asking her to forgive me." "And I'm not asking you to carry it forever." Rory looked at her then, really looked, and saw the expensive coat and the professional nails and the hollow space behind Mia's eyes that no amount of success could fill. "But I also can't tell you it doesn't matter. Because it did. You were my best friend, Mia. And when I needed you to be that, you weren't there. And I don't know how to make that into something I can just... let go." Mia nodded slowly. She lifted the whiskey and took a sip, grimaced at the burn. "I ran into Eva last year," she said. "In London. She was—she seemed happy. She told me about the restaurant. And I thought maybe if I could just see you, just once, I could..." She trailed off. "You could what? Fix it?" "I don't know." Rory picked up the glass she'd been polishing earlier and resumed her work. The motion was soothing. Repetitive. She'd learned the value of small rituals, of keeping her hands busy while her mind untangled itself. "I forgave him," she said quietly. "Evan. Not for his sake. For mine. Spent two years in therapy learning how to do it, and I'm still not sure I got it right. But I got to a place where I could stop carrying it. Where it wasn't a weight I dragged around anymore." She set the glass down, aligned it with the others. "You're not Evan, Mia. You're not even in the same category. But carrying this—" She gestured between them. "This has cost me something too. I don't know what. Maybe time. Maybe the ability to trust people the way I used to. Maybe just the version of myself that believed her friends would show up when it mattered." Mia was crying now, silently, the tears tracking down her cheeks and disappearing into the collar of her coat. "I'm sorry," she whispered. "I'm so sorry, Rory." Rory reached across the bar and placed her hand over Mia's. The gesture surprised them both. "I know," she said. "I'm sorry too. For disappearing. For not giving you the chance to apologize before I disappeared. For—" She shook her head. "We were kids. Both of us. And we did the best we could with what we had. That's all any of us can do." Mia looked at her hand, covered by Rory's. "Can we—" She swallowed. "Can we try? Not to fix it. Just to... be something? Like we were, but older? With all the damage we've got now?" Rory considered the question. She thought about Eva, who had stood beside her through the worst of it, who had helped her rebuild from nothing. She thought about Silas, who had taken her in and taught her how to see the world as a series of problems to be solved, one careful step at a time. She thought about the girl she'd been at eighteen, terrified and alone on Eva's couch, certain she would never feel safe again. She thought about forgiveness, and how it wasn't a single moment but a practice. A discipline. Something you had to choose over and over. "Yeah," she said finally. "We can try." Mia exhaled, a shaky breath that seemed to empty her completely. "Okay," she said. "Okay." Rory squeezed her hand once, then withdrew. She poured herself a whiskey of her own, lifted it in a small toast. "To the past," she said. Mia raised her glass to meet it. "To what comes next." They drank in silence, and outside the rain continued to fall, washing the city clean.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
48.48% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags33
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Mia nodded slowly [slowly]"
1"Mia said quietly [quietly]"
2"Mia said finally [finally]"
3"she said quietly [quietly]"
4"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.516
leniency1
rawRatio0.152
effectiveRatio0.152
81.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1647
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1647
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"aligned"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flicker"
2"silence"
3"aligned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences99
matches
0"was proud"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen80
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1639
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1005
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.29
worstName"Mia"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
October1
Thornton1
Silas4
London2
Rory22
Mia23
Water1
Eva2
persons
0"Nest"
1"Thornton"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Mia"
5"Eva"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
globalScore0.356
windowScore0.167
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite read"
1"breath that seemed to empty her completely"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1639
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean28.75
std25.85
cv0.899
sampleLengths
050
142
212
350
463
518
639
742
838
916
1028
118
121
1331
1424
155
1663
175
1894
1916
2036
211
2210
2318
2419
2540
2684
2727
2867
2917
3015
312
3219
3331
347
3583
3615
3737
385
393
4035
41120
4219
438
4416
4549
468
4727
4878
4924
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences99
matches
0"been when"
1"being asked"
2"were painted"
95.29% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs191
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was counting"
2"was crying"
98.90% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences130
ratio0.015
matches
0"Mia had never been able to hold her drink; that much Rory remembered."
1"Mia looked up then, and there it was—the thing she'd come here to say."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1008
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03273809523809524
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.012896825396825396
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean12.61
std11.74
cv0.931
sampleLengths
034
116
211
324
42
55
612
723
84
95
1018
119
1215
1326
144
159
1611
177
1831
198
2023
211
222
2313
243
257
2618
2713
289
297
3010
319
321
338
343
355
361
3726
385
3924
403
412
4214
4328
449
4512
465
479
4818
4921
54.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners52
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Somewhere in the basement, the"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences81
matches
0"She knew the shape of"
1"Her fingers were steady."
2"She made them be steady."
3"She wore a grey coat"
4"She wrapped her hands around"
5"Her nails were painted a"
6"She poured two fingers into"
7"She stopped, breathed"
8"Her eyes were wet now,"
9"She lifted the whiskey and"
10"She trailed off"
11"She'd learned the value of"
12"she said quietly"
13"She set the glass down,"
14"She gestured between them"
15"She shook her head"
16"She thought about Eva, who"
17"She thought about Silas, who"
18"She thought about the girl"
19"She thought about forgiveness, and"
ratio0.284
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences81
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"Aurora looked up from the"
2"She knew the shape of"
3"The way she stood in"
4"Some things you couldn't unlearn."
5"Mia Thornton stepped inside and"
6"Rory set the glass down"
7"Her fingers were steady."
8"She made them be steady."
9"The scar on her wrist"
10"Mia's voice was higher than"
11"The London damp had turned"
12"She wore a grey coat"
13"The same age they'd been"
14"Rory reached for another glass,"
15"Mia slid onto a barstool,"
16"Rory placed the glass beneath"
17"Mia had never been able"
18"A flicker of something crossed"
19"She wrapped her hands around"
ratio0.951
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Aurora looked up from the glass she was polishing, her cloth pausing mid-stroke against the rim."
64.39% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags33
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she remembered, thinner"
1"Mia nodded slowly, her gaze dropping to her hands"
2"Mia asked, and the question hung between them, dense as the smoke that used to curl through the pubs back home"
3"Rory asked, and her voice was level, and she was proud of it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.219
leniency0.438
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.031
81.4234%