| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1513 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1513 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "measured" | | 7 | "loomed" | | 8 | "vibrated" | | 9 | "predator" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1502 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones will remember you. Go tonight. Go alone." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1442 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.49 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | November | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 2 | | Rory | 7 | | Brendan | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Brendan" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Jennifer" | | 6 | "Evan" | | 7 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "November" | | 1 | "Golden" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "London" | | 6 | "Welsh" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "as though expecting her, as though pleased" | | 1 | "darkness that seemed to drink the faint light around them" | | 2 | "not quite memory and not quite premonition" | | 3 | "not quite premonition" | | 4 | "seemed different" | | 5 | "darkness that seemed to fold inward on itself" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1502 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 39.53 | | std | 30.51 | | cv | 0.772 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 101 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 90 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 81 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 80 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 74 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 63 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 80 | | 23 | 82 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 79 | | 33 | 72 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 40 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 42 |
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| 91.50% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "being watched" | | 1 | "being held" | | 2 | "been seemed" | | 3 | "been laid" |
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| 90.26% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 243 | | matches | | 0 | "was doing" | | 1 | "was imagining" | | 2 | "was playing" | | 3 | "was building" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "They should not have been blooming—not in November, not in this cold—but they were." | | 1 | "They were trees—or had been once—but the bark had calcified into something harder than wood, something that rang when she heard a sound she could not identify, a single clear note that hung in the air for a long moment before fading into silence." | | 2 | "The air was warmer than it should have been, warmer than the November night allowed, and it carried a scent she could not place—something sweet and green and faintly metallic, like sap and copper mixed together." | | 3 | "It was tall—too tall, its proportions subtly wrong in ways she could not articulate—and it wore something that might have been a coat or might have been skin, dark and featureless and moving with a slow, organic undulation." | | 4 | "\"We have been waiting.\" The figure tilted its head—a motion that looked painful, that looked wrong on a neck that bent at too many angles—and the darkness where its face should have been seemed to focus." | | 5 | "Instead it raised one arm—if it was an arm, if those were fingers—and pointed toward the standing stones." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 208 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 3 | | adverbRatio | 0.014423076923076924 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 14.04 | | std | 11.2 | | cv | 0.798 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 44 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 30.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.29906542056074764 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Just her name, written in" | | 1 | "Instead she had found herself" | | 2 | "Perhaps the cold and the" | | 3 | "Then they resumed, closer than" | | 4 | "Instead it raised one arm—if" |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 54.04% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "She did not look back." | | 1 | "They should not have been" | | 2 | "She touched the pendant at" | | 3 | "She should have thrown it" | | 4 | "She should have laughed and" | | 5 | "It had never felt alive." | | 6 | "They were not stones at" | | 7 | "They were trees—or had been" | | 8 | "She stepped into the clearing." | | 9 | "She breathed it in and" | | 10 | "She told herself she had" | | 11 | "She told herself it was" | | 12 | "She had grown up in" | | 13 | "They came from behind her," | | 14 | "She spun around and saw" | | 15 | "Her hand went to the" | | 16 | "She was not alone." | | 17 | "She had known it from" | | 18 | "She turned anyway." | | 19 | "It was tall—too tall, its" |
| | ratio | 0.415 | |
| 29.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate had been" | | 1 | "Rory pushed through and let" | | 2 | "She did not look back." | | 3 | "The path ahead wound between" | | 4 | "They should not have been" | | 5 | "Petals the color of bruises" | | 6 | "She touched the pendant at" | | 7 | "The Heartstone was warm against" | | 8 | "The letter had been waiting" | | 9 | "She should have thrown it" | | 10 | "She should have laughed and" | | 11 | "The Heartstone had been a" | | 12 | "It had never felt alive." | | 13 | "The oaks thinned and the" | | 14 | "Rory stopped at its edge." | | 15 | "The standing stones rose before" | | 16 | "They were not stones at" | | 17 | "They were trees—or had been" | | 18 | "She stepped into the clearing." | | 19 | "The wildflowers here grew thicker," |
| | ratio | 0.862 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "The path ahead wound between ancient oaks whose branches interlaced overhead like the fingers of clasped hands, blocking out the pale disc of the moon until she…" | | 1 | "The Heartstone was warm against her sternum, warmer than her own blood, and it pulsed with a rhythm that did not match her heartbeat." | | 2 | "Instead she had found herself changing into dark clothes, lacing her boots, slipping the pendant over her head because some instinct she could not name told her…" | | 3 | "The standing stones rose before her in a rough circle, twelve pillars of oak-bark darkness that seemed to drink the faint light around them." | | 4 | "They were trees—or had been once—but the bark had calcified into something harder than wood, something that rang when she heard a sound she could not identify, …" | | 5 | "She told herself it was a fox, a deer, any number of animals that might wander through Richmond Park at night." | | 6 | "Understanding would require her to look, to turn her back on whatever circled her and face the thing that approached from the other direction." | | 7 | "It was tall—too tall, its proportions subtly wrong in ways she could not articulate—and it wore something that might have been a coat or might have been skin, d…" | | 8 | "It came from everywhere and nowhere, a chorus of whispers that overlapped and contradicted themselves, some high and some low, some speaking words she almost un…" | | 9 | "It stood apart from the circle, half-hidden by the oaks, and it glowed with a faint inner light that matched the pendant at her throat." | | 10 | "Rory thought of her father, Brendan Carter, a barrister who had died when she was twelve." | | 11 | "She thought of her mother, Jennifer, who had never spoken of her family, who had changed the subject whenever Rory asked about her childhood in the Welsh valley…" | | 12 | "She had run to London, to Eva, to a flat above a bar and a job delivering food for a woman named Yu-Fei who asked no questions." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |