| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1629 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1629 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "mechanical" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "streaming" | | 10 | "resolved" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.20% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 141 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 146 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1612 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1573 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.64 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 10 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 | | Druidic | 1 | | October | 1 | | Thin | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 17.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed closer now, pressing in from both sides like silent witnesses" | | 1 | "something that seemed to rise from the ground itself" | | 2 | "quite process—too tall, too thin, with angles where angles shouldn't be" | | 3 | "thrum that seemed to originate from somewhere beneath the earth, from the roots of the standing stones themselves" | | 4 | "quite solidified" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 6 | | per1kWords | 3.722 | | wordCount | 1612 | | matches | | 0 | "not the gray-brown of ordinary oak but something closer to charcoal, almost charred" | | 1 | "Not swaying in a wind she couldn't feel, but pulsing" | | 2 | "Not the gentle warmth of sunlight but the fevered heat of infection, of something working beneath" | | 3 | "not the absence of sound but the active suppression of it, as if the night itself had cla" | | 4 | "not pain, not yet, but something adjacent to it" | | 5 | "not yet, but something adjacent to it" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that trees watch, that her" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 32.24 | | std | 27.29 | | cv | 0.847 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 88 | | 4 | 72 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 78 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 82 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 72 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 69 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 59 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 49 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 52 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 57 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 74 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 81 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 51 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 50 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 92.82% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "been locked" | | 1 | "were carved" | | 2 | "being held" | | 3 | "were gone" | | 4 | "been given" |
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| 23.23% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 264 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "was being" | | 2 | "were watching" | | 3 | "was playing" | | 4 | "Was weighing" | | 5 | "was seeing" | | 6 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 146 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "Not this place—not exactly—but places like it." | | 1 | "Not just any stones—these, she knew." | | 2 | "The path was easy enough to follow—the same crushed-gravel trail she jogged sometimes during daylight hours, when the park was alive with dog walkers and cyclists and young mothers pushing prams." | | 3 | "Not silence—that would have been a relief." | | 4 | "She counted them as she approached—seven, arranged in a loose circle around a clearing no wider than a modest garden." | | 5 | "Much darker—not the gray-brown of ordinary oak but something closer to charcoal, almost charred." | | 6 | "Too green—the vivid, almost fluorescent green of spring growth that had no business existing in late October." | | 7 | "Impressions of forms that her brain couldn't quite process—too tall, too thin, with angles where angles shouldn't be." | | 8 | "The crimson gem pulsed in her grip, faster and faster, and with each pulse came a sound—a low, resonant thrum that seemed to originate from somewhere beneath the earth, from the roots of the standing stones themselves." | | 9 | "The silence that followed was absolute—not the absence of sound but the active suppression of it, as if the night itself had clamped a hand over her ears." | | 10 | "Not her name—not quite." | | 11 | "Every instinct she'd ever possessed screamed at her to run—to turn and sprint back down the path, over the wall, out of this place and never return." | | 12 | "Rory gasped as heat flooded through her—not pain, not yet, but something adjacent to it." | | 13 | "And the standing stones—the standing stones had faces." | | 14 | "That would have been easier—monsters she could name, monsters she could run from, monsters that belonged to stories with beginnings and endings." | | 15 | "The standing stones were just trees again—old oaks, gnarled and weathered, their bark unmarked by any symbol she could see." |
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| 92.84% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1597 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "against centuries-old brick," |
| | adverbCount | 66 | | adverbRatio | 0.041327489041953665 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007514088916718848 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 146 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 146 | | mean | 11.04 | | std | 8.56 | | cv | 0.776 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 35.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.3013698630136986 | | totalSentences | 146 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 27.32% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Too green—the vivid, almost fluorescent" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd scaled the wall where" | | 1 | "It had been warm in" | | 2 | "She'd come because of the" | | 3 | "She'd told herself she was" | | 4 | "Their branches formed a canopy" | | 5 | "She heard it first as" | | 6 | "She counted them as she" | | 7 | "She'd been here before, months" | | 8 | "She'd noticed the stones, noted" | | 9 | "She'd thought they were Druidic." | | 10 | "They were carved, she realized" | | 11 | "She looked away." | | 12 | "She knew it was irrational," | | 13 | "Her phone flickered." | | 14 | "They stood at the far" | | 15 | "It was warm now." | | 16 | "They shifted, subtly, like dancers" | | 17 | "Their positions changed, rearranged, became" | | 18 | "She felt tears streaming down" | | 19 | "she whispered, and her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.23 | |
| 91.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "The park gates had been" | | 1 | "She'd scaled the wall where" | | 2 | "Places that breathed when no" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant hung cold" | | 4 | "It had been warm in" | | 5 | "She'd come because of the" | | 6 | "The ancient oaks that ringed" | | 7 | "Something that had been waiting" | | 8 | "The restaurant job had finished" | | 9 | "Silas's bar had emptied by" | | 10 | "She'd told herself she was" | | 11 | "Richmond Park sprawled before her," | | 12 | "The moon hung low and" | | 13 | "Rory turned on her phone's" | | 14 | "The path was easy enough" | | 15 | "Their branches formed a canopy" | | 16 | "She heard it first as" | | 17 | "This was something else." | | 18 | "A thickness in the air" | | 19 | "Something older, something that seemed" |
| | ratio | 0.738 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it lay dormant, a" | | 1 | "Now, in the blue-white glare" | | 2 | "Now the screen showed eleven," |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 42.41% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd scaled the wall where the mortar had crumbled, her sneakers scraping against centuries-old brick, and dropped into the darkness of Richmond Park with the …" | | 1 | "She'd told herself she was being ridiculous, that she needed sleep more than answers, that this was just another manifestation of the anxiety that had followed …" | | 2 | "She'd been here before, months ago, during a daytime walk with the vague sense of discovery that came from exploring new corners of London." | | 3 | "Too green—the vivid, almost fluorescent green of spring growth that had no business existing in late October." | | 4 | "Wildflowers bloomed among the blades, impossibly bright: buttercups, clover, tiny purple violets that had no season, no sense, no place in the natural order of …" | | 5 | "The crimson gem pulsed in her grip, faster and faster, and with each pulse came a sound—a low, resonant thrum that seemed to originate from somewhere beneath th…" | | 6 | "The silence that followed was absolute—not the absence of sound but the active suppression of it, as if the night itself had clamped a hand over her ears." | | 7 | "Something that made her aware of every nerve ending, every capillary, every cell of her body." | | 8 | "Rory stood alone in the clearing, surrounded by silence and shadow and the faint, sourceless scent of flowers that didn't exist." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |