| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 88.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1758 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.96% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1758 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "unsettled" | | 5 | "churning" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "transfixed" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "grave" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "intensity" | | 14 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 142 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 142 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1749 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1749 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Rory | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 54.76% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed so clear when she'd started out" | | 1 | "Something that seemed to drink the light before it could reach her" | | 2 | "felt like twenty minutes, though when s" | | 3 | "light that seemed to linger on the bark rather than falling through to the ground" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 8 | | per1kWords | 4.574 | | wordCount | 1749 | | matches | | 0 | "not here, not this close to the place the old stories called the Fae Grove, but the reminder still settled like a stone in her stomach" | | 1 | "not this close to the place the old stories called the Fae Grove, but the reminder still settled like a stone in her stomach" | | 2 | "Not menacingly, not with any obvious malice, but with the simple indifference of something" | | 3 | "not with any obvious malice, but with the simple indifference of something" | | 4 | "not clearly, not enough to identify, but present in a way" | | 5 | "not enough to identify, but present in a way" | | 6 | "not clearly, not fully, but enough to know" | | 7 | "not fully, but enough to know" |
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| 49.30% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "remembered that much" | | 1 | "imagined that it" | | 2 | "making that sound" | | 3 | "know that they" | | 4 | "found that she" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 40.67 | | std | 27.72 | | cv | 0.681 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 76 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 80 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 82 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 81 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 60 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 67 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 82 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 59 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 87 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 59 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 70 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 48 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | |
| 8.92% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 9 | | totalVerbs | 314 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't listening" | | 1 | "was breathing" | | 2 | "was losing" | | 3 | "was standing" | | 4 | "was singing" | | 5 | "was making" | | 6 | "was cooling" | | 7 | "were shaking" | | 8 | "were gathering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 142 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "The memory felt thin, stretched—like a photograph pulled too far in one direction." | | 1 | "The battery indicator flickered—sixty-three percent—and then, without her touching anything, jumped to forty-one." | | 2 | "Flowers always had scent—this close, this numerous, she should have been able to smell them." | | 3 | "One moment the path was empty, the next they were simply there—three massive oaks grown so close together that their trunks had fused into a single rough column, their roots churning up the earth around them in raised ridges like the knuckles of a buried fist." | | 4 | "The melody was high and clear and beautiful in the way that ice was beautiful, in the way that distance was beautiful—in a way that did not invite warmth, only a kind of hollow awe." | | 5 | "At the edge of her vision, shapes moved—not clearly, not enough to identify, but present in a way that made the hairs on her arms rise and the scar on her wrist itch with sudden, vicious intensity." | | 6 | "The melody was different this time—lower, more mournful, carrying words in a language she did not recognize and yet somehow understood." | | 7 | "She could see them more clearly now—not clearly, not fully, but enough to know that they were not human." |
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| 95.23% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1760 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 80 | | adverbRatio | 0.045454545454545456 | | lyAdverbCount | 31 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017613636363636363 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 142 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 142 | | mean | 12.32 | | std | 9.42 | | cv | 0.765 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 43 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 30.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 28 | | diversityRatio | 0.24822695035460993 | | totalSentences | 141 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 50.13% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, there was only the" | | 1 | "Instead, she took a step" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 63.61% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "She had a reason." | | 1 | "She was certain of that" | | 2 | "She checked her phone." | | 3 | "She stared at it for" | | 4 | "She hadn't expected any, not" | | 5 | "She remembered that much from" | | 6 | "She hadn't thought much of" | | 7 | "She thought about it now." | | 8 | "She was breathing too loudly." | | 9 | "She slowed her pace, made" | | 10 | "She walked for what felt" | | 11 | "They grew in clusters along" | | 12 | "They should not have been" | | 13 | "It was late autumn, and" | | 14 | "They had no scent." | | 15 | "She straightened and kept walking." | | 16 | "It might have been old" | | 17 | "She couldn't tell." | | 18 | "It meant she was close" | | 19 | "It meant the pendant thought" |
| | ratio | 0.391 | |
| 38.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 112 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "The path had seemed so" | | 1 | "Rory stood at the edge" | | 2 | "The memory felt thin, stretched—like" | | 3 | "She had a reason." | | 4 | "She was certain of that" | | 5 | "Something about the grove." | | 6 | "Something about answers she couldn't" | | 7 | "The streetlamps behind her cast" | | 8 | "This was something older." | | 9 | "Something that seemed to drink" | | 10 | "She checked her phone." | | 11 | "The battery indicator flickered—sixty—three percent—and" | | 12 | "She stared at it for" | | 13 | "She hadn't expected any, not" | | 14 | "The standing stones were somewhere" | | 15 | "She remembered that much from" | | 16 | "Markers for a boundary that" | | 17 | "She hadn't thought much of" | | 18 | "She thought about it now." | | 19 | "The grass crunched beneath her" |
| | ratio | 0.842 | |
| 37.59% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Either time was moving strangely" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 4.26% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Each sound seemed too loud, too present, cutting through the silence that pressed in from all sides." | | 1 | "Not menacingly, not with any obvious malice, but with the simple indifference of something that had been standing here long before people thought to walk beneat…" | | 2 | "The bark of the oaks was dark and deeply ridged, catching the faint light in ways that made it difficult to tell where the shadows ended and the tree began." | | 3 | "But these flowers looked fresh, vibrant, as though it were high summer beneath these ancient oaks." | | 4 | "The canopy opened just enough here to let in a thin wash of moonlight, silver light that seemed to linger on the bark rather than falling through to the ground." | | 5 | "The melody was high and clear and beautiful in the way that ice was beautiful, in the way that distance was beautiful—in a way that did not invite warmth, only …" | | 6 | "The crimson gemstone had always held a faint inner light, but now it blazed like a coal, pulsing in rhythm with a heartbeat that was not her own." | | 7 | "The pendant was cooling slowly, its glow fading to embers." | | 8 | "The lines that had been weathered and unreadable were now sharp, fresh, bleeding sap like wounds." | | 9 | "The trees seemed to lean in as she passed, their branches bowing toward her with a curiosity that felt predatory." | | 10 | "At the edge of her vision, shapes moved—not clearly, not enough to identify, but present in a way that made the hairs on her arms rise and the scar on her wrist…" | | 11 | "She fought against it, digging her heels into the soft earth, but her feet kept moving as though they belonged to someone else." | | 12 | "The pendant burned against her skin, searing, branding, and the last coherent thought she could form before the singing swallowed her entirely was a single, des…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |