| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 74.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1154 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1154 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "fractured" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "loomed" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "unsettled" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "flicker" | | 15 | "glistening" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 18 | | markdownWords | 40 | | totalWords | 1135 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove remembers you. Come at midnight. Bring no light." | | 1 | "trap" | | 2 | "glowed" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "step" | | 5 | "bending" | | 6 | "Malphora" | | 7 | "unfurled" | | 8 | "literally turned" | | 9 | "air itself" | | 10 | "“Rory.”" | | 11 | "claim" | | 12 | "bones" | | 13 | "You were given the stone. You carry a debt. The Grove remembers." | | 14 | "did" | | 15 | "bit" | | 16 | "was" | | 17 | "awake" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1127 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.44 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | Black | 1 | | English | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Earth" | | 5 | "Cardiff" | | 6 | "Black" | | 7 | "English" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 23.79% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.762 | | wordCount | 1135 | | matches | | 0 | "not by human hands but by some older necessity" | | 1 | "not from any direction, but from the *air itself*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 23.16 | | std | 24.3 | | cv | 1.049 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 105 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 93 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 72 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 82 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 36 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 |
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| 99.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "been slipped" | | 1 | "were given" |
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| 96.37% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | | 0 | "were dreaming" | | 1 | "was listening" | | 2 | "were laughing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 21 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.128 | | matches | | 0 | "But the Heartstone Pendant had stirred that morning—first a faint throb, then a quiet, insistent warmth against her skin." | | 1 | "The ancient oaks—the standing stones—loomed ahead, their trunks wider than cars, bark split with cracks that looked too symmetrical to be natural." | | 2 | "Between them, the grass didn’t grow—it *glowed*, just barely, a faint phosphorescence in shades of silver and violet, as if the soil itself were dreaming." | | 3 | "Not temperature, not pressure—but *weight*." | | 4 | "One moment they were laughing under the oaks, the next wide-eyed at the sun already high—only minutes, according to their watches." | | 5 | "Ten steps in, the pendant flared—a low, throbbing warmth, like a heartbeat beneath her sternum." | | 6 | "Her boots—quiet, rubber-soled—crushed no grass." | | 7 | "It stood between two flowers—one blood-red, one bone-white—neither of which had been there a moment ago." | | 8 | "The note had unsettled her, yes, but it was the dream that pulled her—the recurring one she’d had since fleeing Cardiff." | | 9 | "Black coat, hair tucked under a cap, but the eyes—those skeletal, alien eyes—had locked onto hers for a heartbeat before vanishing." | | 10 | "The thing in the center tilted its head—or the place where a head might be." | | 11 | "The anemones turned their heads—*literally turned*, their stems twisting—to face her." | | 12 | "A low sound began, not from any direction, but from the *air itself*—a hum, below hearing, that vibrated in her molars." | | 13 | "The pendant flared red, so bright it cast shadows for a split second—shadows that didn’t match the trees." | | 14 | "The thing—the presence—didn’t move." | | 15 | "Her heel met resistance—not soil." | | 16 | "The pendant screamed—a high-pitched whine only she could hear." |
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| 96.75% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 755 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.04370860927152318 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007947019867549669 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 8.53 | | std | 6.62 | | cv | 0.776 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 45.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3082706766917293 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Then came the first sound." | | 1 | "Just a shadow between two" | | 2 | "Just a smooth, elongated curve" | | 3 | "Then it *unfurled*." | | 4 | "Slowly, eyes wide, she looked" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 99.31% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath curled in front" | | 1 | "She’d come with a note," | | 2 | "Her instincts, honed sharp by" | | 3 | "It wasn’t the first time." | | 4 | "They formed a rough circle" | | 5 | "It was listening." | | 6 | "She’d been here before, years" | | 7 | "It hung bloated and white" | | 8 | "She rubbed the crescent scar" | | 9 | "It ached, though it hadn’t" | | 10 | "She turned, but the space" | | 11 | "She told herself it was" | | 12 | "Its crimson gem dimmed, then" | | 13 | "She didn’t turn this time." | | 14 | "Her breath was too loud." | | 15 | "Her boots—quiet, rubber-soled-crushed no grass." | | 16 | "She took one slow step" | | 17 | "It blackened slightly under her" | | 18 | "She hadn’t noticed before." | | 19 | "It shifted, folding in on" |
| | ratio | 0.302 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air in Richmond" | | 1 | "A hush had fallen over" | | 2 | "Her breath curled in front" | | 3 | "She’d come with a note," | | 4 | "Her instincts, honed sharp by" | | 5 | "It wasn’t the first time." | | 6 | "The pendant only reacted near" | | 7 | "The ancient oaks—the standing stones—loomed" | | 8 | "They formed a rough circle" | | 9 | "Wildflowers sprouted in impossible clusters:" | | 10 | "Aurora stepped over the threshold." | | 11 | "The air changed." | | 12 | "The silence wasn’t just absence" | | 13 | "It was listening." | | 14 | "She’d been here before, years" | | 15 | "The moon hadn’t moved since" | | 16 | "It hung bloated and white" | | 17 | "She rubbed the crescent scar" | | 18 | "It ached, though it hadn’t" | | 19 | "A whisper, syllable-less, from just" |
| | ratio | 0.655 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Above her, the sky was fractured with stars, cold and too bright, as though the atmosphere had thinned." | | 1 | "Scrawled in ink that shimmered like dried blood, it had been slipped under her door two nights ago: *The Grove remembers you." | | 2 | "The ancient oaks—the standing stones—loomed ahead, their trunks wider than cars, bark split with cracks that looked too symmetrical to be natural." | | 3 | "Wildflowers sprouted in impossible clusters: white anemones, foxgloves with throats too dark, snowdrops blooming in defiance of the season, their petals edged i…" | | 4 | "The note had unsettled her, yes, but it was the dream that pulled her—the recurring one she’d had since fleeing Cardiff." | | 5 | "A low sound began, not from any direction, but from the *air itself*—a hum, below hearing, that vibrated in her molars." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |