Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ84QMGY6ZMWE56T31B111R

Run Details

Duration:
21.6s
Cost:
$0.000609
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove was colder than it had any right to be. Aurora Carter pulled her coat tighter, the fabric doing little against the damp that seeped into her bones. The pendant at her throat—slim silver chain, crimson gemstone—thrummed against her skin, warm as a heartbeat. She’d followed its pulse for hours, through the labyrinth of Richmond Park’s winding paths, until the trees had thinned into a ring of ancient oaks, their gnarled trunks carved with runes she couldn’t begin to decipher. This was it. The place where the pendant had led her. A place that shouldn’t exist. She stepped over a tangle of roots, the glow of her phone casting weak light on wildflowers the wrong shade of blue, blooming fat and ripe beneath a moon that looked too full, too bright. The Fae Grove. Her childhood friend Eva had mentioned it once, in passing, as the kind of legend you tell to scare children. *Isolde’s grove,* she’d called it, voice low. *If you find it, it finds you first.* Aurora had laughed then. Now, the name hovered in her mind like smoke, the pendant’s rhythm quickening as if it knew something she didn’t. A branch cracked behind her. She froze. The sound hadn’t come from her boots. The grove was silent now, but the pause felt deliberate, as though the world itself had leaned in to listen. Aurora’s breath came shallow. She’d fled London’s noise for this hollow stillness, seeking answers in the dark—answers about the man who’d been following her since Tuesday, about the door in her flat that hadn’t been there the day before. The pendant had heated to near-scalding when she’d found the door, its glow flaring like a warning. And now, here, in this place that time forgot, it pulsed in her palm, steady and insistent. *Follow it,* Eva had said when Aurora called, panicked, the night the door appeared. *Whatever it leads you to, it’s better than staying stuck in the dark.* Aurora shifted her weight, the movement brushing against her left wrist. Her scar prickled. The crescent moon there had always been a faint silver line, but lately it throbbed in tandem with the pendant, as if both were instruments tuned to some distant, invisible frequency. She ignored it. She had to. The grove’s center was marked by a pool, its surface black as void, reflecting nothing. She knelt, fingers hovering above the water. The pendant’s heat flared, and for a moment, her reflection stared back—eyes too wide, skin pinched with gooseflesh. Then the water trembled, and her image shattered into something else: a street she knew, her flat above Silas’s bar, lit from within. A shadow moved past the window. Her hand shook. A whisper, then, so soft it might have been the wind. *Rory.* Her name. Not Aurora. Not Carter. She stood abruptly, spine stiff. The trees had closed in, their branches weaving a canopy that smothered the stars. The pendant dimmed, its glow guttering like a candle in a draft. Cold pressed against her neck, not from the air but from something *behind her*. She turned. Nothing. Only the oaks, their trunks leering with the cracked faces of long-dead things. Aurora forced herself to breathe. *Stay calm. Think.* She’d been here ten minutes, maybe more. The grove’s time was a lie, she remembered that now—Eva had said an hour here might be hours back in the world she knew, or minutes. How long had it been since she left her flat? Since she’d seen the stranger in her hallway, his eyes gleaming with too much light? A flicker to her left. A shape, no larger than a cat, darting between roots. She squinted. The thing was *waving* at her, small and jerky, its limbs too long, too spindly. A fox? A sparrow? Her pulse kicked up. The creature vanished. The pendant went cold. She took a step back, then another, the ground suddenly uneven beneath her soles. The trees seemed taller, their branches knitting tighter. The pool’s surface smoothed, and when she looked down, her reflection was gone. The grove wasn’t reflecting the world anymore. It was *closing its eyes*. A shrug of movement in her periphery. Aurora whirled. Nothing. Only the trees. But the air had a weight now, thick as breath on glass. She reached for the pendant, her fingers brushing the stone. It was ice. Then, without warning, searing heat. A jolt, sharp as a needle, at her scar. She gasped, stumbling. The grove *tilted*. The trees warped, their bark peeling like burnt parchment. The flowers bled, their petals crumpling to dust that swirled in tight, dry cyclones. The pool yawned open, its blackness deepening, and in its depths something *pulsed*—a slow, ravenous glow. Aurora’s breath hitched. *Run.* She spun, but her path was gone. The oaks had become a wall. The pendant dangled loose, the gemstone now a pale, sickly color. A sound rose, low and resonant, like a bone pipe played in another realm. It vibrated in her teeth. She pressed a hand to her skull, but the noise was inside her now, a hum that turned her blood to syrup. And then she felt it. A presence. Not a thing you *felt* with your eyes or ears but with the marrow of your bones. It was everywhere and nowhere, a weight without shape, a voice without a mouth. It *knew* her. Had always known her. Aurora’s knees buckled. The pendant clattered to the earth. It lay still. Dead. The grove had taken its offering. Or maybe it was just beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount935
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount935
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"depths"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"pulsed"
2"weight"
3"throbbed"
4"trembled"
5"shattered"
6"whisper"
7"gleaming"
8"flicker"
9"searing"
10"depths"
11"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans14
markdownWords40
totalWords930
ratio0.043
matches
0"Isolde’s grove,"
1"If you find it, it finds you first."
2"Follow it,"
3"Whatever it leads you to, it’s better than staying stuck in the dark."
4"Rory."
5"behind her"
6"Stay calm. Think."
7"waving"
8"closing its eyes"
9"tilted"
10"pulsed"
11"Run."
12"felt"
13"knew"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount930
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove2
Carter2
Richmond1
Park1
Eva3
Aurora10
London1
Tuesday1
Silas1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"London"
globalScore0.962
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed taller their branches knitting tighter"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.151
wordCount930
matches
0"not from the air but from something *behind her*"
1"Not a thing you *felt* with your eyes or ears but with the marrow of your bones"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean38.75
std32.12
cv0.829
sampleLengths
0101
197
25
3102
427
551
672
712
86
961
108
1158
1243
134
1447
1552
1645
174
1865
195
2040
2113
226
236
94.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"was marked"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
71.79% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs156
matches
0"was *waving"
1"wasn’t reflecting"
2"was just beginning"
1.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences101
ratio0.05
matches
0"The pendant at her throat—slim silver chain, crimson gemstone—thrummed against her skin, warm as a heartbeat."
1"She’d fled London’s noise for this hollow stillness, seeking answers in the dark—answers about the man who’d been following her since Tuesday, about the door in her flat that hadn’t been there the day before."
2"The pendant’s heat flared, and for a moment, her reflection stared back—eyes too wide, skin pinched with gooseflesh."
3"The grove’s time was a lie, she remembered that now—Eva had said an hour here might be hours back in the world she knew, or minutes."
4"The pool yawned open, its blackness deepening, and in its depths something *pulsed*—a slow, ravenous glow."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount937
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Cold pressed against her"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03735325506937033
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007470651013874066
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean9.21
std7.85
cv0.852
sampleLengths
015
118
216
336
43
58
65
735
83
920
107
1112
1220
135
142
157
1620
174
1835
1917
2017
2114
2213
2311
243
2531
263
273
2815
297
3018
3123
326
333
3411
351
362
372
382
395
4014
4112
4214
432
441
4513
465
472
481
497
36.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.27722772277227725
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then the water trembled, and"
1"Only the oaks, their trunks"
2"Only the trees."
3"Then, without warning, searing heat."
ratio0.048
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences84
matches
0"She’d followed its pulse for"
1"She stepped over a tangle"
2"Her childhood friend Eva had"
3"She’d fled London’s noise for"
4"Her scar prickled."
5"She ignored it."
6"She had to."
7"She knelt, fingers hovering above"
8"Her hand shook."
9"She stood abruptly, spine stiff."
10"She’d been here ten minutes,"
11"Her pulse kicked up."
12"She took a step back,"
13"It was *closing its eyes*."
14"She reached for the pendant,"
15"It was ice."
16"She gasped, stumbling."
17"She spun, but her path"
18"It vibrated in her teeth."
19"She pressed a hand to"
ratio0.274
55.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences84
matches
0"The air in the Fae"
1"Aurora Carter pulled her coat"
2"The pendant at her throat—slim"
3"She’d followed its pulse for"
4"This was it."
5"The place where the pendant"
6"A place that shouldn’t exist."
7"She stepped over a tangle"
8"The Fae Grove."
9"Her childhood friend Eva had"
10"*Isolde’s grove,* she’d called it,"
11"A branch cracked behind her."
12"The sound hadn’t come from"
13"The grove was silent now,"
14"Aurora’s breath came shallow."
15"She’d fled London’s noise for"
16"The pendant had heated to"
17"*Whatever it leads you to,"
18"Aurora shifted her weight, the"
19"Her scar prickled."
ratio0.81
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"*If you find it, it"
1"Now, the name hovered in"
ratio0.024
17.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Aurora Carter pulled her coat tighter, the fabric doing little against the damp that seeped into her bones."
1"She stepped over a tangle of roots, the glow of her phone casting weak light on wildflowers the wrong shade of blue, blooming fat and ripe beneath a moon that l…"
2"Now, the name hovered in her mind like smoke, the pendant’s rhythm quickening as if it knew something she didn’t."
3"She’d fled London’s noise for this hollow stillness, seeking answers in the dark—answers about the man who’d been following her since Tuesday, about the door in…"
4"The crescent moon there had always been a faint silver line, but lately it throbbed in tandem with the pendant, as if both were instruments tuned to some distan…"
5"The flowers bled, their petals crumpling to dust that swirled in tight, dry cyclones."
6"She pressed a hand to her skull, but the noise was inside her now, a hum that turned her blood to syrup."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.5537%