| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1316 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1316 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "sentinels" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 195 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 195 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 201 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 31.12% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 32 | | markdownWords | 108 | | totalWords | 1279 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "You knew it would be like this," | | 1 | "You knew it wasn’t just a park." | | 2 | "\"Isolde's place, where the trees remember names.\"" | | 3 | "pressure" | | 4 | "bent" | | 5 | "loud" | | 6 | "urge" | | 7 | "was" | | 8 | "shifted" | | 9 | "Shifted" | | 10 | "Evan" | | 11 | "Focus." | | 12 | "wrinkled" | | 13 | "puckered" | | 14 | "“For the door,”" | | 15 | "“Don’t let it swallow the light.”" | | 16 | "scratch, scratch, scratch" | | 17 | "always" | | 18 | "inside" | | 19 | "“You came back.”" | | 20 | "“We missed you, Laila.”" | | 21 | "Laila." | | 22 | "moved" | | 23 | "there" | | 24 | "shape" | | 25 | "“You are not hers,”" | | 26 | "“But you carry the key. The lock remembers.”" | | 27 | "“You left her here,”" | | 28 | "“You left Laila. And we kept her. We sang to her. We buried her name in roots. But you—oh, you—you came back with her face.”" | | 29 | "couldn’t" | | 30 | "away" | | 31 | "“Stay. Stay with Laila. She’s been so lonely.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1200 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 15 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Evan | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Silence" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Cardiff" | | 6 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.875 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 81.51% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed muted as if the grove didn’t want to acknowledge her presence" | | 1 | "as if parting for someone walking through" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1279 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "crossed that threshold" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 95 | | mean | 13.46 | | std | 14.67 | | cv | 1.09 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 76 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 99.87% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 195 | | matches | | 0 | "was played" | | 1 | "been smothered" | | 2 | "been—stood" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 222 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 40 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 29 | | totalSentences | 201 | | ratio | 0.144 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, the gravel crunch of her boots echoed too loud in the quiet night; the next, silence swallowed the sound whole." | | 1 | "The trees—oaks, beeches, silhouetted in the moonlight—stood too still." | | 2 | "The pulse had started three nights ago—soft at first, then insistent—guiding her toward Richmond, toward this grove Yu-Fei had only ever mentioned in hushed tones, calling it *\"Isolde's place, where the trees remember names.\"*" | | 3 | "Not scent, exactly—though there was something beneath the damp earth and moss, something floral but wrong, like lilies left too long in stagnant water." | | 4 | "Not clouded—*bent*." | | 5 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—white starflowers, deep violet foxgloves, scarlet poppies that looked painted onto the dark soil." | | 6 | "Something rustled—just once, behind her." | | 7 | "The standing stones—ancient, barkless oaks arranged in a wide circle—framed the edge of the clearing." | | 8 | "She pulled it free—the silver chain cool against her skin, the stone glowing with that faint, internal crimson light." | | 9 | "The ground felt different—softer, yet unyielding, like moss over concrete." | | 10 | "Then—music." | | 11 | "Aurora’s scar—small, crescent-shaped on her left wrist—tingled." | | 12 | "The pendant flared—just a hot flicker." | | 13 | "It didn’t shimmer—it *puckered*, as if space had been lightly pinched." | | 14 | "But the laugh came again—this time from her left." | | 15 | "Then—*scratch, scratch, scratch*—like fingernails dragging slowly down bark." | | 16 | "At the edge of vision—*always* at the edge—a flicker." | | 17 | "The pendant pulsed—once, twice—then went cold." | | 18 | "Then a whisper—so soft it might have been the rustle of leaves if she hadn’t felt it *inside* her skull." | | 19 | "Then the music again—this time a discordant lullaby, played on broken pipes." | | 20 | "And then—silence." | | 21 | "They hadn’t been *there*—that twisted oak with the crown like antlers—before." | | 22 | "And in the center—where the portal had been—stood a figure." | | 23 | "It wore no clothes, but its skin—gray and smooth—seemed to ripple, like oil on water." | | 24 | "The voice was a chorus—children, women, a man—all speaking at once." | | 25 | "And beside them—a silver chain, snapped." | | 26 | "The flowers began to close—petals folding inward, slowly, like fists." | | 27 | "She didn’t know where—only *away*." | | 28 | "And when she finally burst from between the oaks—into the cold, normal dark of Richmond Park, under a moon that moved right—the pendant in her hand was ice cold." |
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| 89.80% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1239 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 64 | | adverbRatio | 0.0516545601291364 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011299435028248588 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 201 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 201 | | mean | 6.36 | | std | 5.61 | | cv | 0.881 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 42.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.31343283582089554 | | totalSentences | 201 | | uniqueOpeners | 63 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "Just that thick, waiting hush." | | 1 | "Even her breath seemed muted," | | 2 | "Barely a foot across." | | 3 | "Then a child’s laugh rang" | | 4 | "Then a whisper—so soft it" | | 5 | "Then the music again—this time" | | 6 | "Still warm in her palm." | | 7 | "Just a suggestion of hollows" |
| | ratio | 0.056 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, breath misting in" | | 1 | "She exhaled, long and slow." | | 2 | "*You knew it would be" | | 3 | "*You knew it wasn’t just" | | 4 | "She stepped forward." | | 5 | "It was the *pressure*, like" | | 6 | "She passed between two gnarled" | | 7 | "It pooled on the ground" | | 8 | "It was beautiful." | | 9 | "They looked like sentinels." | | 10 | "she whispered, not to anyone," | | 11 | "She pulled it free—the silver" | | 12 | "It wasn't brighter, but the" | | 13 | "She walked toward the center." | | 14 | "Her boots made no sound." | | 15 | "It came from no direction." | | 16 | "It simply *was*." | | 17 | "She gripped the pendant." | | 18 | "she said, voice low but" | | 19 | "She hadn’t felt that since" |
| | ratio | 0.282 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 97 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "The path into Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She paused, breath misting in" | | 2 | "The trees—oaks, beeches, silhouetted in" | | 3 | "She exhaled, long and slow." | | 4 | "*You knew it would be" | | 5 | "*You knew it wasn’t just" | | 6 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 7 | "The crimson gem pulsed faintly" | | 8 | "That was why she was" | | 9 | "The pulse had started three" | | 10 | "She stepped forward." | | 11 | "The air changed." | | 12 | "It was the *pressure*, like" | | 13 | "She passed between two gnarled" | | 14 | "The moment she crossed that" | | 15 | "It pooled on the ground" | | 16 | "This was the Fae Grove." | | 17 | "It was beautiful." | | 18 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—white" | | 19 | "Ferns unfurled like sleeping dragons." |
| | ratio | 0.683 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 96.27% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—white starflowers, deep violet foxgloves, scarlet poppies that looked painted onto the dark soil." | | 1 | "The flowers bloomed closer, their colors deepening to a bruised purple, their stems thickening, twisting like veins." | | 2 | "And when she finally burst from between the oaks—into the cold, normal dark of Richmond Park, under a moon that moved right—the pendant in her hand was ice cold…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice low but clear" | | 1 | "she called, voice steady despite the tremor in her ribs" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "the thing whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.429 | |