| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 89.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 950 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 950 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "depths" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "traced" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "quivered" | | 12 | "wavered" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "flicker" | | 15 | "could feel" | | 16 | "raced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | | |
| 72.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 13 | | markdownWords | 34 | | totalWords | 937 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "Hel portal. This is why I’m here." | | 1 | "Time moves differently here." | | 2 | "“For your own good, love. Those Fae creatures don’t play.”" | | 3 | "“Follow.”" | | 4 | "It’s just the wind." | | 5 | "pull" | | 6 | "wrong" | | 7 | "there" | | 8 | "shivered" | | 9 | "thing" | | 10 | "evaporated" | | 11 | "cool" | | 12 | "hours" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 924 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 6 | | December | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Evan | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Aurora | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 70.63% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she blinked" | | 1 | "quite align with its face" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 937 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 36.04 | | std | 26.48 | | cv | 0.735 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 92 | | 2 | 78 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 62 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 38 |
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| 98.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant dug into her palm through the thin lining of her delivery bag—a rough thumbnail-sized gemstone, its crimson depths pulsing with a warmth that had drawn her here." | | 1 | "The park’s usual nocturnal chorus—the rustle of pheasants, the distant bark of a fox—had gone silent." | | 2 | "This is why I’m here.* Her fingers brushed the scar on her left wrist—a habit when nervous—and she stepped into the clearing." | | 3 | "The standing stones—twisted oak trunks fused to the earth—glowed faintly, their bark etched with symbols that seemed to shift when she blinked." | | 4 | "*Time moves differently here.* She’d read that in the old folklore books Eva had thrust at her after Evan—*“For your own good, love. Those Fae creatures don’t play.”*" | | 5 | "She glanced at her watch—10:13 p.m." | | 6 | "The leaves didn’t rustle in the wind—they quivered, as if alive." | | 7 | "Then, a flicker again—movement just beyond the Grove’s edge." | | 8 | "But the figure moved then—a slow, fluid slide toward her." | | 9 | "She wouldn’t let this thing—this *thing*—make her feel that way again." | | 10 | "Its mouth opened—and she screamed." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 271 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "rough thumbnail-sized gemstone," |
| | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.025830258302583026 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014760147601476014 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 9.19 | | std | 6.99 | | cv | 0.761 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 48.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the whisper of her" | | 1 | "Then she heard it: a" | | 2 | "Then, a flicker again—movement just" | | 3 | "Then the bark *shivered*." |
| | ratio | 0.046 | |
| 63.68% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d traced its glow for" | | 1 | "She paused, pulling her coat" | | 2 | "She checked her phone." | | 3 | "She clutched the pendant closer," | | 4 | "Her head swiveled, but the" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded too bright," | | 6 | "She exhaled, chiding herself." | | 7 | "*It’s just the wind.*" | | 8 | "She moved forward, boots sinking" | | 9 | "She glanced at her watch—10:13" | | 10 | "She forced her steps to" | | 11 | "Her skin prickled." | | 12 | "She spun, scanning the shadows." | | 13 | "She felt a tug, a" | | 14 | "She followed the light toward" | | 15 | "They bloomed in a perfect" | | 16 | "She reached into her bag," | | 17 | "Her voice wavered." | | 18 | "Her hand flew to her" | | 19 | "she whispered, more to herself" |
| | ratio | 0.391 | |
| 23.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped over the" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant dug into" | | 2 | "She’d traced its glow for" | | 3 | "She paused, pulling her coat" | | 4 | "The air here tasted different:" | | 5 | "The park’s usual nocturnal chorus—the" | | 6 | "She checked her phone." | | 7 | "The pendant’s heat intensified, and" | | 8 | "This is why I’m here.*" | | 9 | "The Grove unfolded before her," | | 10 | "Wildflowers bloomed in thick carpets," | | 11 | "The standing stones—twisted oak trunks" | | 12 | "She clutched the pendant closer," | | 13 | "Someone needed her here." | | 14 | "A snap of twigs made" | | 15 | "Her head swiveled, but the" | | 16 | "Her voice sounded too bright," | | 17 | "The woods beyond the Grove" | | 18 | "She exhaled, chiding herself." | | 19 | "*It’s just the wind.*" |
| | ratio | 0.874 | |
| 57.47% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the ancient oaks loomed" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant dug into her palm through the thin lining of her delivery bag—a rough thumbnail-sized gemstone, its crimson depths pulsing with a warmth …" |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, more to herself than the unseen presence" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |