| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1288 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
| |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 10.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1288 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "glinting" | | 10 | "searing" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "lilt" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "could feel" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 184 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 187 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.57% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 31 | | markdownWords | 64 | | totalWords | 1262 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "unfolded" | | 1 | "Time moves differently here" | | 2 | "Don’t stay past your reason. The Grove remembers who walks in. And who forgets to walk out." | | 3 | "aware" | | 4 | "Pulse." | | 5 | "Pulse." | | 6 | "farther away" | | 7 | "scraping" | | 8 | "Pulse." | | 9 | "sank" | | 10 | "laughter" | | 11 | "it had aged" | | 12 | "\"You’re paranoid, Rory. Trust me. I’d never hurt you.\"" | | 13 | "Pulse. Pulse. Pulse." | | 14 | "shifted" | | 15 | "figures" | | 16 | "adjusted" | | 17 | "presence" | | 18 | "noise" | | 19 | "Decaying." | | 20 | "laughed" | | 21 | "they" | | 22 | "closer" | | 23 | "hum" | | 24 | "light" | | 25 | "Hel." | | 26 | "warn" | | 27 | "summoning" | | 28 | "footsteps" | | 29 | "come through" | | 30 | "widen" |
| |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1247 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.4 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Unless" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | November | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Camden | 1 | | Isabella | 1 | | Bridge | 1 | | London | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Unless | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isabella" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Camden" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.792 | | wordCount | 1262 | | matches | | 0 | "not from where she’d come, but from the portal itself" |
| |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 75 | | mean | 16.83 | | std | 20.54 | | cv | 1.221 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 89 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 69 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 53 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 35 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 42 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 184 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was supposed" |
| |
| 47.09% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 218 | | matches | | 0 | "were walking" | | 1 | "were swallowing" | | 2 | "was pointing" | | 3 | "wasn’t warning" | | 4 | "was *summoning" |
| |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 32 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 27 | | totalSentences | 187 | | ratio | 0.144 | | matches | | 0 | "The path into the Fae Grove didn’t appear so much as it *unfolded*—a thinning of the dense bramble at the edge of Richmond Park, just past the old stag enclosure, where the mist clung too thickly for autumn." | | 1 | "Between them, a carpet of wildflowers—impossible in November—glowed faintly in the moonlight: blue bells, snowdrops, violets." | | 2 | "Their scent was wrong—too sweet, cloying, with a metallic undercurrent, like blood masked by perfume." | | 3 | "It hung cold against her collarbone, hidden beneath her scarf and layers—a silver chain with a crimson gem the size of a thumbnail." | | 4 | "And last night, it had pulsed—just once—as she passed a graffiti-tagged alley near Camden." | | 5 | "Not hot—just *aware*." | | 6 | "The silence was absolute—no wind, no distant hum of London, not even the rustle of a mouse in leaf litter." | | 7 | "Rory stepped forward, boots crunching on something brittle—petals, she realized, scattered across the moss." | | 8 | "She blinked—and suddenly, the clearing felt *farther away*." | | 9 | "A sound, faint and hollow, echoed from beyond the trees—not from any direction she could place." | | 10 | "But at the edge of her vision—movement." | | 11 | "The beam cut through the mist, steady—but the light didn't reflect." | | 12 | "Then—**laughter**." | | 13 | "But her phone hadn’t just died—*it had aged*." | | 14 | "A childhood memory flickered—Evan’s voice, whispering, *\"You’re paranoid, Rory. Trust me. I’d never hurt you.\"* The knife glinting in the kitchen light." | | 15 | "She took another step—and the ground *shifted* beneath her." | | 16 | "And between them—**figures**, just beyond focus." | | 17 | "And then—the *noise* began." | | 18 | "The hand was human—pale, bloated, fingers curled like claws." | | 19 | "Not toward the entrance—she didn’t trust the path anymore—but around the circle, skidding through moss and petals." | | 20 | "She glimpsed them in the periphery—*they* were moving." | | 21 | "She reached the opposite side of the grove—and stopped." | | 22 | "And within the crack—a *light*." | | 23 | "They formed words now—her name, spoken in Eva’s voice, in her mother’s, in Evan’s cruel lilt." | | 24 | "And beyond them—*footsteps* in the moss." | | 25 | "The pendant flared one last time—blinding red—then went dark." | | 26 | "Rory turned and ran—not toward memory, not toward voice or warmth or belonging—but toward the faintest glimmer of moonlight between two oaks that hadn’t been there before." |
| |
| 93.82% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1275 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 60 | | adverbRatio | 0.047058823529411764 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008627450980392156 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 187 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 187 | | mean | 6.75 | | std | 6 | | cv | 0.889 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 2 |
| |
| 46.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.3315508021390374 | | totalSentences | 187 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Then again this morning, sharper," | | 1 | "Twice in one day." | | 2 | "Too much stillness." | | 3 | "Just a shift in the" | | 4 | "Just a suggestion of *presence*." | | 5 | "Always just out of sight." |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 92.59% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, one gloved hand" | | 1 | "They weren’t trees so much" | | 2 | "Their scent was wrong—too sweet," | | 3 | "She glanced at her phone." | | 4 | "She hadn’t come here for" | | 5 | "She’d come because of the" | | 6 | "It hung cold against her" | | 7 | "It had arrived in a" | | 8 | "She pulled it free from" | | 9 | "She turned slowly, checking the" | | 10 | "They crunched like dried insect" | | 11 | "She followed the pull, stepping" | | 12 | "She blinked—and suddenly, the clearing" | | 13 | "She turned her head." | | 14 | "She snapped toward it." | | 15 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 16 | "She pulled out her flashlight," | | 17 | "It *sank*, as if the" | | 18 | "It came from behind her." | | 19 | "Her breath came faster now." |
| | ratio | 0.319 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 95 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "The path into the Fae" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped through with a" | | 2 | "The air changed the moment" | | 3 | "She paused, one gloved hand" | | 4 | "They weren’t trees so much" | | 5 | "Their scent was wrong—too sweet," | | 6 | "She glanced at her phone." | | 7 | "The screen flickered once, then" | | 8 | "Aurora frowned, tucked it into" | | 9 | "The Grove remembers who walks" | | 10 | "Rory exhaled sharply, shaking off" | | 11 | "She hadn’t come here for" | | 12 | "She’d come because of the" | | 13 | "It hung cold against her" | | 14 | "It had arrived in a" | | 15 | "A slow, warm thrum, like" | | 16 | "That wasn’t coincidence." | | 17 | "She pulled it free from" | | 18 | "The gem glowed faintly, a" | | 19 | "A breath of heat against" |
| | ratio | 0.704 | |
| 74.07% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her, five ancient oaks" | | 1 | "Now, standing in the Grove," |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory turned and ran—not toward memory, not toward voice or warmth or belonging—but toward the faintest glimmer of moonlight between two oaks that hadn’t been th…" |
| |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |