| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1620 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "utterly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.19% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1620 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "sturdy" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "stark" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "lurch" | | 12 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1612 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1606 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | October | 2 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | London | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | English | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "October" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 33.72% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed ancient then, yes, but peaceful" | | 1 | "looked like hunched figures frozen mid-tu" | | 2 | "seemed much farther away than they should" | | 3 | "appeared ahead of her, and beyond them, the faint orange glow of streetlights bleeding through the Richmond Park trees" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.62 | | wordCount | 1612 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just one, but dozens, spreading outward from the path in a ripple of unfol" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "understanding that they" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 38.38 | | std | 25.31 | | cv | 0.66 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 78 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 66 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 67 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 62 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 60 | | 21 | 62 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 59 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 59 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 78 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 57 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 67 | | 33 | 47 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 48 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 51 | | 38 | 39 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 18 |
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| 99.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "been bounded" | | 1 | "was shaped" |
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| 39.36% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 249 | | matches | | 0 | "was opening" | | 1 | "was pretending" | | 2 | "were opening" | | 3 | "weren't turning" | | 4 | "were turning" | | 5 | "was learning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.069 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant didn't pulse without reason—it led her to things, or rather, it warned her away from them." | | 1 | "And the air itself carried a sweetness that didn't belong to any flower she knew—thick and cloying, like rotting fruit masked with honey." | | 2 | "The bark was warm beneath her palm—warm the way skin was warm—and she yanked her hand away with a sharp inhale." | | 3 | "It was high and sweet and utterly wrong—the way a child's laugh was wrong when it came from something that wasn't a child." | | 4 | "Not pulsed—burned." | | 5 | "That was the worst part—the almost." | | 6 | "Not one shape now—several, shifting and stuttering, always at the edge of perception." | | 7 | "The entrance to the grove, the boundary between this pocket of wrongness and the world she knew, and it was so close, so terribly close—" |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1624 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "behind slow-moving clouds," |
| | adverbCount | 62 | | adverbRatio | 0.038177339901477834 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008620689655172414 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 13.9 | | std | 8.95 | | cv | 0.644 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 36.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3017241379310345 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 92.59% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Only going to find the" | | 1 | "Just the ragged sound of" | | 2 | "Just a smooth expanse of" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't expected the grove" | | 1 | "She touched the Heartstone at" | | 2 | "It had been doing that" | | 3 | "She should have called someone." | | 4 | "She'd told herself she was" | | 5 | "She remembered this from before," | | 6 | "She'd worn practical clothes." | | 7 | "She remembered the clearing as" | | 8 | "She pressed forward." | | 9 | "They were something that remembered" | | 10 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 11 | "She turned slowly, her body" | | 12 | "Its petals were white, luminous" | | 13 | "Her boot found a root" | | 14 | "She moved faster." | | 15 | "Her shoulder-length black hair caught" | | 16 | "It was high and sweet" | | 17 | "It carried no direction, no" | | 18 | "It was shaped like a" | | 19 | "Its head was turned toward" |
| | ratio | 0.222 | |
| 89.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory paused at the edge" | | 2 | "She hadn't expected the grove" | | 3 | "The stones had seemed ancient" | | 4 | "Guardians of a threshold rather" | | 5 | "The wildflowers had closed their" | | 6 | "She touched the Heartstone at" | | 7 | "The crimson gem pulsed once" | | 8 | "It had been doing that" | | 9 | "That was why she'd come." | | 10 | "The pendant didn't pulse without" | | 11 | "The Hel portals, Yu-Fei called" | | 12 | "Tears in the fabric between" | | 13 | "Something was opening nearby." | | 14 | "The pendant had dragged her" | | 15 | "She should have called someone." | | 16 | "Silas, or Yu-Fei, or anyone" | | 17 | "She'd told herself she was" | | 18 | "The grove looked wrong after" | | 19 | "The standing stones stood in" |
| | ratio | 0.741 | |
| 92.59% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, with the moon hidden" | | 1 | "Now she wasn't sure she" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "During her first visit, midday sun had filtered through the canopy in golden shafts, illuminating the wildflowers that shouldn't have been blooming in October." | | 1 | "The wildflowers had closed their petals against the dark, and what remained were pale stems that caught the scant light and held it like thousands of tiny, watc…" | | 2 | "The crimson gem pulsed once against her collarbone, a single heartbeat of warmth that flowed through her chest and faded." | | 3 | "Silas, or Yu-Fei, or anyone with more experience than a twenty-five-year-old delivery driver who'd learned about the existence of other realms approximately thr…" | | 4 | "She remembered the clearing as perhaps fifty feet across, bounded by the standing stones and the ancient oaks that grew so close together their branches wove in…" | | 5 | "They were something that remembered being oaks, or something that was pretending very carefully." | | 6 | "Her shoulder-length black hair caught on a low-hanging branch, and she tore herself free without stopping, ignoring the strands that caught and pulled." | | 7 | "It was high and sweet and utterly wrong—the way a child's laugh was wrong when it came from something that wasn't a child." | | 8 | "The crimson gem blazed with inner light, and for a moment she could see the clearing in stark red relief: the pale trees, the watching flowers, the standing sto…" | | 9 | "The proportions were wrong, the limbs too long, the joints bending at angles that made her stomach lurch even from this distance." | | 10 | "The flowers bent toward it, their petals spreading wider, and Rory realized with a sick lurch of understanding that they weren't turning toward the thing." | | 11 | "The Heartstone swung against her chest, searing and constant, and the crimson light bounced off pale bark and dark petals and the shapes that moved between the …" | | 12 | "The fingers wrapped around her scar, pressing the crescent shape into her skin with deliberate precision, and the touch was so achingly human that she nearly st…" | | 13 | "The Heartstone had cooled to a gentle warmth against her chest, its pulse slowing, calming, as if it had never burned at all." | | 14 | "And in the darkness between the stones, something that remembered being a person was learning how to laugh." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |