| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.522 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1221 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.19% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1221 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "reminder" | | 9 | "wavered" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1210 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1063 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.32 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Laila | 1 | | London | 2 | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 1 | | Hel | 3 | | Aurora | 14 | | Isolde | 8 | | Evan | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Laila" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.841 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 51.32% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared under her door that morning, no signature, only her childhood alias—Laila—written in a spidery hand she didn't recognize" | | 1 | "seemed deeper than it should be, every shape just slightly off" | | 2 | "something like regret in her voice" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.479 | | wordCount | 1210 | | matches | | 0 | "not with heat, but with something else" | | 1 | "no longer a gentle pulse but" | | 2 | "Not like before, but like a stone dropped into still water" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 36.67 | | std | 19.75 | | cv | 0.539 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 36 |
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| 91.09% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "were wilted" | | 1 | "was broken" | | 2 | "being played" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.091 | | matches | | 0 | "Tonight, the park felt different—older, somehow, and watchful." | | 1 | "The note had appeared under her door that morning, no signature, only her childhood alias—Laila—written in a spidery hand she didn't recognize." | | 2 | "The park's usual nocturnal sounds—the rustle of small creatures, the distant hum of London beyond the trees—had fallen away." | | 3 | "Between them, the air shimmered, not with heat, but with something else—a distortion, like looking through water." | | 4 | "The air here didn't hum with the usual energy; it felt dead, drained." | | 5 | "The silence was broken by a sound from behind her—a footstep, too heavy to be an animal's." | | 6 | "Another sound—a whisper, like dry leaves skittering across stone, coming from her left." | | 7 | "Something moved at the edge of her vision—a flash of color, too bright, too fast to be anything natural." | | 8 | "Isolde's form flickered, and for a moment, Aurora saw another face behind hers—Evan's, with his cruel smile and eyes that had once looked at her with such warmth." | | 9 | "She could feel them now—watching, waiting, their presence a cold weight against her skin." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1076 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "cold settled over Aurora." |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03903345724907063 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013011152416356878 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 11 | | std | 6.47 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 36.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 36.63% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the trees, their branches" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come to this part" | | 1 | "She'd burned it immediately, but" | | 2 | "Her fingers traced the smooth" | | 3 | "She reached the clearing." | | 4 | "She shouldn't have come." | | 5 | "She stepped toward the standing" | | 6 | "She spun around, hand tightening" | | 7 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 8 | "She was close to a" | | 9 | "She took another step forward," | | 10 | "Her pulse spiked, a frantic" | | 11 | "She was being played with." | | 12 | "she called, her voice steadier" | | 13 | "She shouldn't have brought it." | | 14 | "she whispered, the words barely" | | 15 | "She should run." | | 16 | "She should turn and flee" | | 17 | "She couldn't outrun this." | | 18 | "She was no longer alone." | | 19 | "She could feel them now—watching," |
| | ratio | 0.231 | |
| 47.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air of Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora hugged her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "She'd come to this part" | | 3 | "Tonight, the park felt different—older," | | 4 | "The instructions had been precise:" | | 5 | "The note had appeared under" | | 6 | "She'd burned it immediately, but" | | 7 | "Her fingers traced the smooth" | | 8 | "The path narrowed, the trees" | | 9 | "Aurora's breath plumed in the" | | 10 | "The park's usual nocturnal sounds—the" | | 11 | "An unnatural silence pressed in," | | 12 | "She reached the clearing." | | 13 | "The standing stones were there," | | 14 | "The Fae Grove." | | 15 | "The wildflowers that normally bloomed" | | 16 | "The air here didn't hum" | | 17 | "Aurora's heart hammered against her" | | 18 | "The pendant grew warmer, a" | | 19 | "She shouldn't have come." |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Because the pendant had grown" | | 1 | "Because the note had known" | | 2 | "Because, despite the voice in" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 99.13% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The wrongness had started the moment she'd entered the park, a prickle on the back of her neck that had nothing to do with the cold." | | 1 | "She stepped toward the standing stones, her boots crunching on dead leaves that should have been soft with moss." | | 2 | "But the air around her seemed to shift, thickening as if the very molecules were coiling." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "Isolde said, a note of something like regret in her voice" | | 2 | "Aurora asked, her voice tight" | | 3 | "she whispered, the words barely audible" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice fading" | | 5 | "the Fae whispered, her voice barely audible" |
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| 63.04% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the Fae whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.435 | | leniency | 0.87 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.174 | |