Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ072KY3RNAP9YCKTZK19BTY

Run Details

Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.011043
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose black against the London sky, and Rory knew she had made a mistake. She had come to the Grove because the pendant would not stop burning. For three days the Heartstone had pulsed against her sternum like a second heartbeat, insistent and wrong, its crimson glow visible even through her shirt. She had ignored it through her morning shift at the Golden Empress, endured it through an afternoon of dodging Evan's texts, suffered it through a sleepless night spent staring at her ceiling while the gem threw bloody light across the plaster. By the second night she was half-mad with it, and when the pulling sensation began—a certainty that something waited for her in Richmond Park—she had pulled on her jacket and gone. The tube had been empty at that hour. The walk through Richmond's darkened streets had been silent but for her footsteps. She had told herself it was late, that was all. People slept. London slept, in its fitful way. But the Grove did not sleep. The wildflowers were blooming, as they always did, pale petals catching what little light the clouds allowed through. The air was warm and sweet and utterly still. Too still. Richmond Park should have been full of sound—the distant hum of the city, the rustle of nocturnal creatures, the whisper of wind through the oaks. Instead there was nothing. Just her breath, her heartbeat, and the soft drone of insects that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. Rory stopped at the boundary of standing stones and pressed her fingers to the pendant. It was hot against her palm, hotter than it had ever been, and the pulse had quickened. She counted the beats. Her own heart was steady. The Heartstone's rhythm was not—it stumbled and staggered like a bird throwing itself against glass. "Right," she whispered. Her voice fell dead in the air. No echo. No resonance. Just the word, swallowed whole. "Right, then." She stepped between the stones. The clearing looked as it always did. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion, white and yellow and deep violet, their colors too vivid for night. The grass was soft beneath her trainers. Above, the sky stretched wide and starless, a bowl of grey nothing. The Grove existed in its pocket between worlds, and tonight that pocket felt smaller than before. The treeline seemed closer. The darkness beyond the standing stones seemed thicker. Rory walked toward the center of the clearing. She did not know what she was looking for. An answer. A portal. A reason the pendant had driven her here with such desperate urgency. She had expected something to be different, something obvious—a tear in the air, a figure waiting for her, a sign. Instead there was only the Grove, quiet and sweet and watching. She stopped. Turned slowly. The wildflowers were the same. The stones were the same. But something was wrong with the shadows beneath the trees. They were too dark. Not the absence of light, but the presence of something else. Rory squinted at the treeline, trying to parse what her eyes were telling her. The darkness had depth to it. Weight. It hung beneath the branches like smoke, like fabric, like something draped over the world. The pendant pulsed. Rory's hand went to her chest. The gemstone was practically vibrating now, its heat searing through her shirt, and the rhythm had changed again. No longer stumbling. Steady. Matching her heartbeat beat for beat, then falling out of sync, then matching again. Like something learning to speak her language. She took a step back. Behind her, something whispered through the wildflowers. Rory spun. Nothing. Just flowers and grass and the distant standing stones, ancient and indifferent. But the sound had been real—a soft displacement, like a footstep on wet ground. Like someone shifting their weight. Like something standing very, very still and then forgetting to be still. "Hello?" Her voice was small. Ridiculous. The word vanished the moment it left her lips, eaten by the strange dead air. She thought of calling out again, louder, and then did not. Some instinct older than language told her that making noise here would be a mistake. That the silence was not empty but hungry. She reached for her phone. Her pocket was empty. She patted her jacket, her jeans, checked twice, three times. Nothing. She had had it on the tube. She had checked the time before walking into the park. But now it was gone, slipped away into whatever pocket the Grove kept such things. The insects had stopped. Rory held her breath and listened. The silence was absolute. No insects. No wind. No distant city. Just the frantic rhythm of her own pulse and the answering throb of the pendant, two heartbeats that were slowly becoming one. And then, beneath that silence, a sound so faint she might have imagined it: breathing. Not her own. It came from everywhere. From the standing stones. From the trees. From the flowers at her feet. Slow and even and deep, like something vast and patient filling lungs that should not exist. Rory's throat tightened. Her hand found the pendant and gripped it hard, the silver chain biting into her palm. The gem was burning now, truly burning, and she did not care. The pain was something real. Something she understood. She turned in a slow circle, searching for the source. The shadows beneath the trees had thickened further. They pooled like spilled ink, and as she watched, one of them moved. Not flowing with the wind. Not shifting with the light. Moving on its own, slow and deliberate, creeping around the trunk of an oak like a hand reaching for purchase. Rory stepped back again. Her heel caught on something and she stumbled, catching herself before she fell, and when she looked down there was nothing at her feet but flowers. But for a moment—just a moment—she had felt something against her ankle. Cold and damp and reaching. She looked up. The shadows were closer now. They had detached from the treeline and stood in the clearing, vague and man-shaped, features impossible to discern. They did not move when she looked at them. They simply waited, the way a predator waits for prey to tire. The way something patient waits for something that cannot escape. The pendant's pulse quickened. Rory's heart quickened with it. She could feel the two rhythms tangling inside her chest, her own blood and the gem's strange fire, and she realized with distant horror that she could no longer tell which beats were hers. Her hand was trembling. Her scar—thin and white and crescent-shaped—stood out against the red glow of the stone, and she thought absurdly of her mother, of the evening she had fallen from the garden wall and Jennifer Carter had held her and told her it would be all right. It would not be all right. The breathing was louder now. Closer. The shadows had drawn near enough that she could see them clearly—too clearly. They were not empty darkness. They were full. Shapes moved inside them like things beneath water, suggestions of limbs and faces and mouths that opened and closed in silent rhythm with that slow, even breath. And in each of those mouths, something glinted. Something that caught the Heartstone's light and threw it back. Teeth. Rory's breath came short and sharp. The shadows were all around her now, a loose ring of darkness that blocked the standing stones from view. The pendant burned against her chest like a brand. She could feel it trying to sync with her heartbeat again, trying to merge its rhythm with hers, and she understood suddenly that this was what it wanted. What it had always wanted. Not to warn her. Not to guide her. To bring her here. To offer her up. The breathing stopped. The silence that followed was worse. It pressed against her ears like water, and in that pressure she heard something new: a voice, low and distant, speaking words she almost understood. The language was old, older than English, older than anything that should exist in a London park. It came from the pendant. From the shadows. From the wildflowers and the stones and the air itself. And then the shadows moved. All of them at once, surging forward, and Rory did the only thing she could think to do. She screamed. The sound tore from her throat and hung in the air, refusing to fade, and for one terrible moment she saw the faces inside the darkness—beautiful and terrible and hungry, so hungry—and then the Heartstone flared. Red light exploded outward. The shadows recoiled. The wildflowers bent as if in a hurricane. Rory felt heat flood through her, searing and absolute, and then she was running, running blind through the standing stones, running for the park beyond, running for a world where shadows stayed beneath trees and silence was just the absence of sound. She burst from the Grove and kept running. Her lungs burned. Her legs screamed. She did not stop until she reached the road, until she saw the orange glow of streetlamps, until a late-night taxi swerved around her and the driver shouted something profane out the window. Rory collapsed against a garden wall. Her hands were shaking. The pendant had gone cool against her chest, its crimson glow faded to a faint ember, and when she lifted her shirt to look at it, she saw that the skin beneath was red and raw. But that was not what made her start to cry. What made her cry was the silence. Real silence. The silence of the city at night, of distant sirens and rumbling lorries and the steady hum of a world that did not care about her fear. The silence of something ordinary. She pressed her hand over the Heartstone and felt its slow, steady pulse. Matching her heartbeat. In perfect sync. She did not think it would ever stop.
created_at"2026-04-24T17:02:24.721Z" 4/24/2026, 5:02:24 PM
model"z-ai/glm-5.1-20260406"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency4387
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time101518
tokens_prompt812
tokens_completion2928
native_tokens_prompt747
native_tokens_completion2414
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning425
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.01104267
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"821c357a-76d4-4ec0-a0fa-0740d54aefec"
id"bd371112a49c483ba7f66437497de878"
is_byokfalse
latency4387
model_permaslug"z-ai/glm-5.1-20260406"
provider_name"Phala"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.1; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1777050144-r70ZSNA4uxTZi28qf2oV"
session_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1777050144-FlNQK5ydIGZsTi4ydLEP"
upstream_id"bd371112a49c483ba7f66437497de878"
total_cost0.01104267
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Phala"
response_cache_source_id(null)

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1684
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slowly"
2"very"
3"truly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1684
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count4
4
word"quickened"
count3
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"resonance"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"searing"
count2
9
word"silence"
count9
10
word"throb"
count1
11
word"predator"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count2
13
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"footsteps"
2"whisper"
3"pulse"
4"quickened"
5"echo"
6"resonance"
7"weight"
8"searing"
9"silence"
10"throb"
11"predator"
12"could feel"
13"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences171
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences171
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"start to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1672
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1668
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.84
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London3
Rory14
Grove6
Heartstone5
Golden1
Empress1
Evan1
Richmond3
Park2
Ridiculous1
Jennifer1
Carter1
English1
Like3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
3"Empress"
4"Evan"
5"Jennifer"
6"Carter"
7"Like"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
97.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"insects that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once"
1"seemed thicker"
80.38% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.196
wordCount1672
matches
0"Not the absence of light, but the presence of something else"
1"not empty but hungry"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences172
matches
0"saw that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean38.88
std29.07
cv0.748
sampleLengths
017
1110
239
385
456
521
65
773
864
924
1051
113
1249
135
147
1546
1655
1752
184
1939
2015
213
2272
2361
2447
253
2654
2792
286
2972
301
3183
323
3366
345
3556
3657
3747
3846
3910
4041
4119
428
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences171
matches
0"was gone"
12.21% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs284
matches
0"were blooming"
1"was looking"
2"were telling"
3"was practically vibrating"
4"were slowly becoming"
5"was burning"
6"was running"
7"were shaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences172
ratio0.052
matches
0"By the second night she was half-mad with it, and when the pulling sensation began—a certainty that something waited for her in Richmond Park—she had pulled on her jacket and gone."
1"Richmond Park should have been full of sound—the distant hum of the city, the rustle of nocturnal creatures, the whisper of wind through the oaks."
2"The Heartstone's rhythm was not—it stumbled and staggered like a bird throwing itself against glass."
3"She had expected something to be different, something obvious—a tear in the air, a figure waiting for her, a sign."
4"But the sound had been real—a soft displacement, like a footstep on wet ground."
5"But for a moment—just a moment—she had felt something against her ankle."
6"Her scar—thin and white and crescent-shaped—stood out against the red glow of the stone, and she thought absurdly of her mother, of the evening she had fallen from the garden wall and Jennifer Carter had held her and told her it would be all right."
7"The shadows had drawn near enough that she could see them clearly—too clearly."
8"The sound tore from her throat and hung in the air, refusing to fade, and for one terrible moment she saw the faces inside the darkness—beautiful and terrible and hungry, so hungry—and then the Heartstone flared."
98.65% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1685
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount70
adverbRatio0.04154302670623145
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.007121661721068249
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean9.72
std8.73
cv0.898
sampleLengths
017
113
225
341
431
58
613
710
82
96
106
1118
129
132
1425
154
1621
1715
1817
194
205
2115
223
237
242
252
265
272
285
297
3019
317
3212
3316
344
358
368
379
382
392
4012
4120
4211
432
442
455
465
4710
484
4911
33.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats28
diversityRatio0.27906976744186046
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences150
matches
0"Instead there was nothing."
1"Just her breath, her heartbeat,"
2"Just the word, swallowed whole."
3"Instead there was only the"
4"No longer stumbling."
5"Just flowers and grass and"
6"Just the frantic rhythm of"
ratio0.047
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences150
matches
0"She had come to the"
1"She had ignored it through"
2"She had told herself it"
3"It was hot against her"
4"She counted the beats."
5"Her own heart was steady."
6"Her voice fell dead in"
7"She stepped between the stones."
8"She did not know what"
9"She had expected something to"
10"They were too dark."
11"It hung beneath the branches"
12"She took a step back."
13"Her voice was small"
14"She thought of calling out"
15"She reached for her phone."
16"Her pocket was empty."
17"She patted her jacket, her"
18"She had had it on"
19"She had checked the time"
ratio0.3
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences150
matches
0"The standing stones rose black"
1"She had come to the"
2"She had ignored it through"
3"The tube had been empty"
4"The walk through Richmond's darkened"
5"She had told herself it"
6"London slept, in its fitful"
7"The wildflowers were blooming, as"
8"The air was warm and"
9"Richmond Park should have been"
10"Rory stopped at the boundary"
11"It was hot against her"
12"She counted the beats."
13"Her own heart was steady."
14"The Heartstone's rhythm was not—it"
15"Her voice fell dead in"
16"She stepped between the stones."
17"The clearing looked as it"
18"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
19"The grass was soft beneath"
ratio0.687
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences150
matches
0"To bring her here."
1"To offer her up."
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The gemstone was practically vibrating now, its heat searing through her shirt, and the rhythm had changed again."
1"Just the frantic rhythm of her own pulse and the answering throb of the pendant, two heartbeats that were slowly becoming one."
2"Slow and even and deep, like something vast and patient filling lungs that should not exist."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
82.5390%