Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ07EQ588ZSV645R5HJ9GD1P

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Duration:
56.2s
Cost:
$0.008567
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance cast a sickly, verdant light onto the wet pavement. Aurora Carter pushed through the door of The Raven’s Nest, the familiar smell of old wood, stale beer, and something sharper—underneath it all, the faint, clean scent of gun oil—wrapping around her like a ghost’s embrace. She hadn’t been back in nearly three years, not since she’d fled to London with nothing but a suitcase and Eva’s address scribbled on a napkin. This place, with its dim corners and walls papered in old maps of cities that no longer existed in that form, had been her first sanctuary. She’d only come in for a quick whisky before her shift at the Golden Empress started. A quiet place to lick the wound of another rejected application, another door slammed shut on a life that felt perpetually just out of reach. She found her old spot at the far end of the bar, half-hidden by a support column covered in black-and-white photographs of Soho from the sixties. The bartender, a new guy with a shaved head and bored eyes, acknowledged her with a nod. The bar was quieter than she remembered, the after-work crowd not yet descended. A couple murmured in a booth, heads close together. A man in a tailored overcoat sat alone at the opposite end, nursing a tumbler of amber liquid, his back to the room. Aurora studied the familiar grain of the oak bar top, tracing a faint scratch with her fingernail. She’d made that scratch herself, one nervous night, with the edge of a ring she no longer wore. “Laphroaig,” she told the bartender when he drifted over. “Neat.” As he poured, she caught a glimpse of the man at the end of the bar in the mirror behind the bottles. He shifted, and a sliver of light from the street glinted off a ring on his right hand. Silver. A signet ring with a design she couldn’t make out from this distance. Her breath hitched. It couldn’t be. The man turned his head slightly, his profile illuminated in the mirror’s murky glass. The neat, grey-streaked auburn beard, the familiar slope of the nose. Silas. But not the Silas she remembered. That Silas had carried himself with a wiry, coiled energy, a quiet alertness that filled a room. This man was folded in on himself, his shoulders rounded. There was a stillness to him that felt less like patience and more like exhaustion. Her heart hammered against her ribs. To leave now would be obvious. To stay felt like a summons. She picked up her whisky and walked down the length of the bar, her footsteps unnaturally loud in the quiet. She stopped two stools away. “Silas?” He didn’t flinch, just slowly turned his head. The hazel eyes were the same, but the light in them had dimmed, clouded by something that looked like weariness. He studied her for a long moment, and she saw the exact second recognition sparked. It wasn’t joy that crossed his face, but a complex, layered grimace. “Aurora,” he said, his voice a low rasp, deeper than she recalled. “Or is it Laila, now? I lose track.” The name, her old alias for the world she’d touched when she first came to him, landed like a stone in her stomach. “It’s Rory,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. “Most people just call me Rory.” She gestured to the empty stool beside him. “May I?” He gave a single, tight nod. She sat, leaving a careful stool of distance between them. The bartender set her drink down. She wrapped her hands around the glass, the peaty fumes rising. “I thought you were gone,” Silas said, not looking at her. He traced the rim of his own glass. “After… everything. I heard you’d got out.” “I did. Then I came back. London, I mean. Not here.” She took a sip, the whisky burning a familiar path down her throat. “I live upstairs, actually. A flat above Mr. Chen’s tailor shop.” A faint, mirthless smile touched his lips. “Still close to the action.” “It’s affordable,” she countered, a little too quickly. The tension was a physical thing, a taut wire humming in the space between them. The last time she’d been in this bar, she’d been a different woman—terrified, looking for a way out, her mind a frantic scramble of legal briefs and the specter of Evan’s shadow. Silas had been the unflappable mentor, the one who saw the sharp mind behind the panic and offered not pity, but a practical way forward. He’d taught her how to disappear, how to watch her back, how to see the city as a map of routes and hideouts. “You look…” He paused, searching for the word. “Settled.” “Is that what it is?” She gave a short laugh. “I work part-time at a Chinese restaurant. I deliver curries. I’m not sure ‘settled’ is the word. ‘Stalled,’ maybe.” “The law?” The question was quiet, almost gentle. The old ache flared, the one she’d thought she’d buried. Pre-Law at Cardiff, her father’s proud, relentless ambition for her. “Not for me,” she said, the words practiced, smooth from overuse. “I wasn’t built for it.” He finally turned to look at her fully, his gaze sharp despite the fatigue. “You were built for whatever you decided to be built for, Rory. I remember that much.” The use of her name, the real one, was a jolt. She remembered a night in this very bar, after he’d helped her slip away from a man Evan had hired to find her. He’d poured them both a whisky and said, *“Aurora is a pretty name, but it’s a light. It draws the moths. When you’re in the dark, you need to be the dark.”* He’d given her the name Laila, meaning ‘night,’ for her work with him. “People change,” she said, staring into her glass. “Do they?” he murmured, almost to himself. He shifted on his stool, and a grimace of pain flickered across his face. He instinctively placed his left hand on his knee. Rory noticed for the first time the slight, undeniable limp in his posture. He’d always been so careful to disguise it, to move with a controlled grace. Now he just seemed… burdened by it. “The knee?” she asked softly. “Prague,” he said, the single word hanging in the air, heavy with all the history it contained. The operation gone wrong, the end of his MI6 career, the reason he’d retreated to this bar. “It reminds me of things I’d rather forget. Some days more than others.” They sat in silence for a minute, the only sounds the clink of glasses from the bartender, the low murmur of the couple in the booth. Rory felt the weight of the years between them, a tangible presence. The city outside the stained-glass window was the same, relentless and indifferent. Inside, they were strangers who shared a map of a country that no longer existed. “I see your car sometimes,” Silas said suddenly. “The one with the dragon decal on the back window. Parked down the street.” Rory froze. He’d known she was here? For how long? “Why didn’t you…?” “Call?” He raised an eyebrow. “Come knocking? We don’t do that, Rory. You know that. The first rule of sanctuary is that it must be sought, not imposed. I assumed if you wanted to talk, you would come down those stairs.” He gestured vaguely with his glass toward the back of the bar, beyond the bookshelf that concealed his secret room. “You never did.” The accusation was quiet, but it landed squarely. *You never came back.* The unspoken words hung between them: *I helped you, and then you vanished.* “It was easier not to,” she confessed, the truth raw and unfamiliar on her tongue. “To see you would have been to remember everything. The fear. The running. I was trying to be someone new.” “And are you? Someone new?” The question was brutal in its simplicity. She looked at her hands, the short nails, the faint smear of restaurant grease under one thumbnail. She thought of Evan, a distant, shameful memory. She thought of her father’s disappointed letters. She thought of the city at dawn from the seat of her delivery bike, the quiet streets hers alone. “I’m someone… less,” she finally said. “I shed a lot of skin. Some of it was weight I needed to lose. Some of it…” She trailed off, glancing at him. “Some of it might have been necessary parts, too.” Silas let out a long, slow breath. “We all leave pieces of ourselves behind in the past. It’s the price of moving forward. Sometimes you don’t even know what you’ve lost until you try to call it back.” He reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a pack of cigarettes, then seemed to remember where he was, and shoved it back. “This place used to be full of ghosts, you know. Men and women who’d come to me with their backs against the wall. You were one of the sharpest. And the most frightened.” “And now?” she pressed, a masochistic need to know. He met her eyes. “Now you look tired. But not scared. There’s a difference. Fear consumes. Exhaustion is just… the residue of effort.” He finished his whisky, the ice clinking. “You’re still standing, Rory. That’s not nothing.” It wasn’t the absolution she’d unknowingly sought, but it was something. A recognition. He’d seen her, not the ghost of the frightened girl or the failure of the abandoned law student, but the woman sitting here, whisky-warmed, with a job and a flat and a life of quiet, stubborn persistence. The bartender drifted near. Silas held up two fingers. As fresh glasses were placed before them, Silas’s phone buzzed in his pocket. He pulled it out, glanced at the screen, and his entire demeanor shifted. The weary barkeep vanished, and for a split second, Rory saw the Spymaster—alert, focused, his jaw set. He typed a quick reply and pocketed the phone, the transition back to fatigue almost seamless. “Duty calls,” he said, a familiar, dry irony in his tone. “Even in retirement, it seems.” Rory drained her new whisky, the warmth spreading through her chest, loosening the tight knot there. “Thank you,” she said, and she meant it for more than the drink. He nodded, understanding the layers. “You know where to find me. The door is always open for you. It always was.” He stood, a slight hitch in his movement as he straightened his left leg. He placed a hand briefly on her shoulder, a touch that was both mentor and something that might, in another life, have been paternal. Then he turned and walked away, not toward the front door, but toward the back of the bar. He paused at the bookshelf, and with a deft, practiced motion, seemed to simply merge with the shadows and disappear. Rory sat alone, the space beside her now empty. The ghost was gone, but the conversation lingered, settling around her like dust. She hadn’t found answers, but she’d found a kind of uneasy peace. Time hadn’t healed them. It had just given them new scars to show each other. She left a bill on the bar and stepped back out into the London night, the green neon sign painting her face in shades of ghostly green as she walked away, once again a solitary figure moving through the city, carrying the weight of who she’d been and the quiet, stubborn resilience of who she’d become.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
80.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she asked softly [softly]"
1"Silas said suddenly [suddenly]"
2"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.51
leniency1
rawRatio0.12
effectiveRatio0.12
84.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1940
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"quickly"
3"very"
4"softly"
5"suddenly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Chen"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1940
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"familiar"
count5
1
word"sanctuary"
count2
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"complex"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"weight"
count3
11
word"tangible"
count1
12
word"eyebrow"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"solitary"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"sanctuary"
2"tracing"
3"footsteps"
4"complex"
5"stomach"
6"traced"
7"tension"
8"flickered"
9"silence"
10"weight"
11"tangible"
12"eyebrow"
13"unspoken"
14"warmth"
15"solitary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords35
totalWords1936
ratio0.018
matches
0"“Aurora is a pretty name, but it’s a light. It draws the moths. When you’re in the dark, you need to be the dark.”"
1"You never came back."
2"I helped you, and then you vanished."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1531
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Eva1
Golden1
Empress1
Soho1
Silas9
Evan3
Cardiff1
Laila1
Rory6
Spymaster1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Eva"
3"Empress"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
6"Laila"
7"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
2"Soho"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a summons"
1"looked like weariness"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.066
wordCount1936
matches
0"not since she’d fled to London with nothing but a suitcase"
1"not pity, but a practical way forward"
2"not the ghost of the frightened girl or the failure of the abandoned law student, but the woman sitting here, whisky-warmed, with a job"
3"not toward the front door, but toward the back of the bar"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean44
std30.78
cv0.7
sampleLengths
0104
184
280
310
460
574
643
71
855
920
1049
1133
1226
1335
1412
15103
169
1729
188
1936
2030
2179
228
2364
245
2547
2665
2722
2813
2964
3025
3135
325
3397
3495
359
3637
3750
3868
3916
4029
4121
4276
43105
96.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences122
matches
0"was folded"
1"were placed"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs252
matches(empty)
83.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences144
ratio0.021
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed through the door of The Raven’s Nest, the familiar smell of old wood, stale beer, and something sharper—underneath it all, the faint, clean scent of gun oil—wrapping around her like a ghost’s embrace."
1"The last time she’d been in this bar, she’d been a different woman—terrified, looking for a way out, her mind a frantic scramble of legal briefs and the specter of Evan’s shadow."
2"The weary barkeep vanished, and for a split second, Rory saw the Spymaster—alert, focused, his jaw set."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1052
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"neat, grey-streaked auburn"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.034220532319391636
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009505703422053232
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean13.44
std10.05
cv0.747
sampleLengths
016
136
226
326
416
525
626
717
813
99
1023
1117
1218
139
141
1522
1618
171
1813
193
203
2114
2211
231
246
2517
2610
2715
286
296
306
3120
325
331
348
3520
3615
3712
3812
398
4023
4110
4214
432
446
4510
466
4711
4811
498
45.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners48
28.25% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"Then he turned and walked"
ratio0.008
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount66
totalSentences118
matches
0"She hadn’t been back in"
1"She’d only come in for"
2"She found her old spot"
3"She’d made that scratch herself,"
4"she told the bartender when"
5"He shifted, and a sliver"
6"Her breath hitched."
7"It couldn’t be."
8"Her heart hammered against her"
9"She picked up her whisky"
10"She stopped two stools away."
11"He didn’t flinch, just slowly"
12"He studied her for a"
13"It wasn’t joy that crossed"
14"he said, his voice a"
15"she said, her voice steadier"
16"She gestured to the empty"
17"He gave a single, tight"
18"She sat, leaving a careful"
19"She wrapped her hands around"
ratio0.559
6.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences118
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
2"She hadn’t been back in"
3"This place, with its dim"
4"She’d only come in for"
5"A quiet place to lick"
6"She found her old spot"
7"The bartender, a new guy"
8"The bar was quieter than"
9"A couple murmured in a"
10"A man in a tailored"
11"Aurora studied the familiar grain"
12"She’d made that scratch herself,"
13"she told the bartender when"
14"He shifted, and a sliver"
15"A signet ring with a"
16"Her breath hitched."
17"It couldn’t be."
18"The man turned his head"
19"The neat, grey-streaked auburn beard,"
ratio0.907
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences118
matches
0"To leave now would be"
1"To stay felt like a"
2"Now he just seemed…"
ratio0.025
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A quiet place to lick the wound of another rejected application, another door slammed shut on a life that felt perpetually just out of reach."
1"It wasn’t joy that crossed his face, but a complex, layered grimace."
2"Rory drained her new whisky, the warmth spreading through her chest, loosening the tight knot there."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he said, his voice a low rasp, deeper than she recalled"
1"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
2"Silas said, not looking at her"
3"She took, the whisky burning a familiar path down her throat"
4"she said, the words practiced, smooth from overuse"
5"he murmured, almost to himself"
6"He finished, the ice clinking"
68.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"He’d (would)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"she confessed (confess)"
3"she pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.612
rawRatio0.267
effectiveRatio0.163
76.9429%