| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice moved strangely [strangely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1236 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1236 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "resolved" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "crystalline" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1243 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1207 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.83 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Bad | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Aurora | 10 | | October | 1 | | London | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "October" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1243 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 32.71 | | std | 27.07 | | cv | 0.827 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 86 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 81 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 69 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 65 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 57 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 71 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 67 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 72 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 75 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 95.29% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | 0 | "were getting" | | 1 | "was breathing" | | 2 | "was still burning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones rose from the earth in a rough semicircle, their surfaces slick with something darker than shadow, and they did look like teeth — molars rooted in the jawbone of the earth, waiting to bite down on whatever wandered into their mouth." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance — bluebells and primroses and foxgloves tumbling over each other in a riot of color that had no business existing in October." | | 2 | "The shadows moved wrong — they pooled at the bases of the trees and climbed upward, reaching toward branches that swayed in a wind she still couldn't feel." | | 3 | "Don't look don't look don't —" | | 4 | "The standing stones weren't markers or monuments — they were restraints, pins holding something down that desperately wanted to rise." | | 5 | "For one crystalline moment, Aurora saw everything — the grove's true face beneath the wildflowers and honey-sweet air, the vast dark thing that slept below, the ancient wrongness that the standing stones held at bay — and it saw her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 221 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 8 | | adverbRatio | 0.03619909502262444 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004524886877828055 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 13.51 | | std | 10.27 | | cv | 0.76 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 40.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.358695652173913 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the wind had stopped." | | 1 | "Somewhere in the darkness between" | | 2 | "Then the pendant's light died," | | 3 | "Somewhere beyond the tree line," |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her phone." | | 1 | "She had worn it for" | | 2 | "she whispered, and the words" | | 3 | "She set the takeout bag" | | 4 | "She had been seven when" | | 5 | "She pressed her thumb into" | | 6 | "Her voice moved strangely in" | | 7 | "She held her breath." | | 8 | "They had no features she" | | 9 | "she said, and her voice" | | 10 | "She watched as the carpet" | | 11 | "She thought of Evan, of" | | 12 | "She thought of how long" | | 13 | "She had survived worse than" | | 14 | "She yanked the pendant free." | | 15 | "She walked back through the" | | 16 | "It was still burning when" |
| | ratio | 0.207 | |
| 63.66% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones looked like" | | 1 | "Aurora didn't know why that" | | 2 | "The stones rose from the" | | 3 | "She checked her phone." | | 4 | "The delivery address had brought" | | 5 | "The customer had prepaid." | | 6 | "Every instinct she had developed" | | 7 | "The same instincts that had" | | 8 | "Those instincts screamed at her" | | 9 | "The warmth had started two" | | 10 | "She had worn it for" | | 11 | "Something was here." | | 12 | "The path opened into a" | | 13 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 14 | "The air tasted of honey" | | 15 | "Time felt thick here, viscous," | | 16 | "she whispered, and the words" | | 17 | "She set the takeout bag" | | 18 | "The prawns were getting cold." | | 19 | "That absurd thought almost made" |
| | ratio | 0.793 | |
| 60.98% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the crimson gemstone glowed" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The same instincts that had forced her hands to stop shaking when she dialed Eva's number at three in the morning, that had kept her voice steady while she pack…" | | 1 | "Now the crimson gemstone glowed with its own inner light, soft as a banked ember, and the heat of it pressed against her skin with an insistence that felt almos…" | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance — bluebells and primroses and foxgloves tumbling over each other in a riot of color that had no business…" | | 3 | "The air tasted of honey and cut grass and something older underneath, something that reminded her of the way old churches smelled after rain." | | 4 | "She watched as the carpet of bluebells and primroses peeled away from the earth, revealing soil that was too dark, too rich, too red." | | 5 | "For one crystalline moment, Aurora saw everything — the grove's true face beneath the wildflowers and honey-sweet air, the vast dark thing that slept below, the…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, and the words felt stolen from somewhere else, knowledge that had been waiting for her to arrive" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Those instincts screamed (scream)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |