Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ084RXS58QNWM1Y9KXE39HS

Run Details

Duration:
29.2s
Cost:
$0.004925
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The oaks were wrong. Aurora Carter knew this within three steps of crossing the invisible boundary she felt in her teeth. The standing stones, ancient and lichen-mottled, stood as the codex promised, but the grove they enclosed swallowed sound. The evening birdsong from Richmond Park, a constant hum when she’d walked the path moments ago, cut off as if a door had slammed shut. Now, there was only the soft crunch of her boots on a carpet of fallen leaves that looked too perfect, too uniformly brown, like stage dressing. She paused, her hand instinctively going to the small, hard warmth against her collarbone. The Heartstone Pendant. Its crimson gem was cool against her skin tonight, its faint inner glow a pinprick in the growing dusk. It had pulsed with warmth for the last half-mile, a silent, insistent guide leading her here, to this pocket of land that shouldn’t exist. The air smelled of damp earth and something else—a cloying sweetness like crushed lilies left to rot. Wildflowers, the codex said. They bloomed year-round. She could see them in the fading light: clusters of white and pale blue, nodding in a breeze she couldn’t feel. Their scent was part of the wrongness. Too strong. Too constant. Rory forced herself to breathe slowly, to catalogue. This was how she survived. By thinking, by observing, by not letting the primal lizard-brain panic take the wheel. She was here for a reason. The pendant had guided her, a gift from an unknown benefactor, its behavior documented as a homing beacon for… something. A Hel portal. The words felt absurd, like something from a fantasy novel, but after the last six months—the Fae, the grove, the fact that time itself felt like wet clay in this place—absurdity was the baseline. She unzipped her jacket, the sound unnaturally loud. The pendant rested against her black t-shirt. It was still cool. No pulse. No warmth. Just a steady, waiting stone. The central grove opened up, the trees forming a perfect circle. The air grew stiller, heavier. In the centre stood the largest of the oaks, its bark like wrinkled skin. This was it. The heart of the pocket. “Alright,” she murmured, her voice a dry whisper that didn’t carry. “I’m here. Now what?” The answer was a sound. It came from the tree line to her left. Not a snap of a twig, but a slow, deliberate creak. The kind of sound a heavy, old door makes when it’s opened with care. Rory froze, every muscle locking. She turned her head slowly, her eyes scanning the deep shadows between the oaks. There was nothing. Just the trunks, the silent flowers, and the gloom. She waited a full minute, her breath held until her lungs burned. The silence that rushed back in was somehow worse. It felt… attentive. She turned back to the great oak. Maybe she was supposed to touch it. Do something. The codex was light on specifics. She took a step forward. *Creaaaak.* This time it was from behind her. To the right. Different direction. Same slow, deliberate sound. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in a cage of bone. She didn’t turn this time. Running felt like it would be a mistake. Showing fear felt like a bigger one. “Is someone there?” she called out. Her voice was steadier than she felt. “This is private property, technically. Or… a park. Something.” No answer. Only the deep, listening silence. Then, a whisper. It wasn’t on the wind. There was no wind. It slithered through the air from no discernible direction, seeming to curl around the back of her neck. It was sibilant, like voices played backwards, and it might have been a word. Or several. Rory’s hand clenched into a fist. The crescent scar on her left wrist, a pale sliver of childhood, pulled tight. She thought of Evan, of his quiet, controlled fury, of the way he’d whisper his threats so low only she could hear them. This felt different. Not human. Not motivated by anything she understood. She took another step toward the great oak. Her boot met not soft earth, but something hard and unyielding. She looked down. A stone. A new stone, not part of the ancient boundary. It was smooth, grey, and half-buried. It looked exactly like a headstone. A quick, panicked survey revealed others. A dozen of them, arranged in a neat semi-circle facing the great tree. They were blank. No names, no dates. Just smooth, cold stone. The pendant against her chest flared with a sudden, intense heat. Rory gasped, her hand flying to it. It wasn’t just warm now; it was hot, pulsing with a frantic, arrhythmic beat like a panicked heart. At the same instant, the great oak seemed to *shift*. It was subtle, a trick of the fading light, but the pattern of its bark seemed to rearrange itself, the wrinkles deepening into grooves that almost looked like a screaming face. And the flowers—the beautiful, year-round wildflowers—all turned. Not on their stems. Their entire clusters, their little heads, swivelled as one to face her. The sweet smell intensified, cloying, suffocating, now carrying the unmistakable undertone of decay. A sound like a collective inhalation drew in from all sides. Not a creak this time, but the soft, rustling whisper of dry leaves being dragged across stone. It came from the headstones. From the trees. From the sky itself. Rory took a stumbling step back, her cool-headedness shattering. The pendant burned. The trees groaned. The flowers watched. The path behind her—the way she’d come—seemed to recede, the boundary stones standing farther away than they had a moment ago. The twilight was deepening, but it wasn’t the natural gloaming of an autumn evening. It was a thick, purple-black ink, pouring down from a sky that held no stars, no moon, just a suffocating blanket of nothing. The shadows under the oaks weren’t dark anymore. They were *empty*, holes cut in the fabric of the grove that showed a deeper, more absolute black beyond. Then, in the deepest shadow of the largest tree, something moved. It wasn’t a person. It had a shape, but it was wrong. Too tall, too thin, its limbs bent at angles that defied anatomy. It moved with a liquid, boneless grace, unfolding from the darkness. It made no sound, but the air grew colder, a physical wave of chill that prickled Rory’s skin and fogged her breath. Her mind, trained to analyze, scrambled for a framework. Hallucination? Hypothermia? No. The pendant was a searing weight against her sternum. The headstones were real under her boots. The thing in the shadow was real. It took a step, and the empty black of its form seemed to absorb the already feeble light. Rory could not see features, but she felt its attention like a physical pressure. It was looking at her. It had always been looking at her. The pendant’s heat shifted, spiking into a sharp, needle-like pain. Instinct, pure and unthinking, took over. She yanked the chain over her head, the silver links snapping easily. The Heartstone Pendant, glowing a furious, bloody crimson, tumbled into her outstretched palm. The effect was instantaneous. A wave of force, silent and invisible, blasted outward from the stone. The flowers bowed flat to the ground. The headstones rattled. The great oak shuddered, bark flaking off like dead skin. And the shadow-thing recoiled. It folded back into the darkness with a speed that was unnatural, a silent scream seeming to ripple from its form not in sound, but in a psychic static that made Rory’s nose bleed, hot and sudden. “Get out,” she gasped, not sure if she was talking to it or herself. She turned and ran. The path was there, now. The boundary oaks were close, their familiar shapes a desperate beacon. She sprinted, boots pounding on the too-perfect leaves, the smell of rotting lilies chasing her. Behind her, the silence broke. A chorus of sounds rose—not animal, not human, but a horrifying blend of both. A wet, clicking noise, like a thousand insects. A low, keening moan that vibrated in her teeth. The sound of heavy things dragging themselves over the earth. She didn’t look back. She burst through the line of standing stones and staggered onto the normal, leaf-littered path of Richmond Park. Sound crashed back in. Distant traffic, the bark of a dog, the hum of a city. The ordinary, beautiful noise of the world. She collapsed against a beech tree, her legs giving out. The pendant in her hand was cooling rapidly, its glow fading to a dull ember, then nothing. It was just a stone again, inert and harmless. Rory drew in ragged, shuddering breaths, the metallic tang of blood in her mouth. She wiped her upper lip with the back of her hand. The crescent scar on her other wrist throbbed in time with her pulse. She was out. She was safe. But as she pushed herself up, her hand scraping against the rough bark of the beech, she saw it. On the sleeve of her black jacket. A single, perfect wildflower, pale blue and impossible, was tangled in the fabric. It had not come from the park. And as she watched, its petals began to wilt, turning brown and crumbling to dust in the space of three heartbeats, leaving only a dark, wet stain on her coat. The grove had not let her leave cleanly. It had marked her. And far behind her, in the pocket of dusk, she could still feel its attention, a cold, patient weight settling back into the shadows, waiting for the pendant to pulse again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1622
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1622
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"perfect"
count4
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"beacon"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"whisper"
count4
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"framework"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"pounding"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
16
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"warmth"
2"pulsed"
3"beacon"
4"pulse"
5"whisper"
6"scanning"
7"gloom"
8"silence"
9"chill"
10"framework"
11"searing"
12"weight"
13"familiar"
14"pounding"
15"vibrated"
16"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences172
matches
0"d with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences172
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences174
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1614
ratio0.002
matches
0"Creaaaak."
1"shift"
2"empty"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1595
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Hel1
Fae1
Evan1
Rory9
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
56.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences107
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like wet clay in this place—absurd"
1"felt like it would be a mistake"
2"felt like a bigger one"
3"looked like a screaming face"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords3.717
wordCount1614
matches
0"Not a snap of a twig, but a slow, deliberate creak"
1"not soft earth, but something hard"
2"Not a creak this time, but the soft, rustling whisper of dry leaves being dragged acros"
3"not in sound, but in a psychic static"
4"not animal, not human, but a horrifying blend of both"
5"not human, but a horrifying blend of both"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences174
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean38.43
std23.44
cv0.61
sampleLengths
04
186
260
356
490
528
638
715
85
965
1024
1127
121
1351
1422
157
1646
1754
1845
1930
2011
2166
2236
2340
2439
2564
2611
2757
2835
2944
3041
314
3232
3341
3414
3581
3622
3759
3838
396
4076
4143
99.14% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences172
matches
0"was supposed"
1"being dragged"
2"was tangled"
91.16% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs245
matches
0"was deepening"
1"was looking"
2"was talking"
3"was cooling"
44.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences174
ratio0.034
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something else—a cloying sweetness like crushed lilies left to rot."
1"The words felt absurd, like something from a fantasy novel, but after the last six months—the Fae, the grove, the fact that time itself felt like wet clay in this place—absurdity was the baseline."
2"It wasn’t just warm now; it was hot, pulsing with a frantic, arrhythmic beat like a panicked heart."
3"And the flowers—the beautiful, year-round wildflowers—all turned."
4"The path behind her—the way she’d come—seemed to recede, the boundary stones standing farther away than they had a moment ago."
5"A chorus of sounds rose—not animal, not human, but a horrifying blend of both."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1615
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"Same slow, deliberate sound."
1"thick, purple-black ink,"
2"normal, leaf-littered path"
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.03343653250773994
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.00804953560371517
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences174
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences174
mean9.28
std6.94
cv0.748
sampleLengths
04
117
218
325
426
514
63
719
824
917
104
113
1221
137
142
152
168
175
1814
196
2019
211
223
2334
248
257
264
272
282
295
3011
315
3214
333
345
3511
364
375
389
3911
4014
415
4214
433
449
4512
469
472
481
497
34.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.27586206896551724
totalSentences174
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences155
matches
0"Just a steady, waiting stone."
1"Just the trunks, the silent"
2"Maybe she was supposed to"
3"Only the deep, listening silence."
4"Then, a whisper."
5"Just smooth, cold stone."
6"Then, in the deepest shadow"
7"Too tall, too thin, its"
ratio0.052
72.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences155
matches
0"She paused, her hand instinctively"
1"Its crimson gem was cool"
2"It had pulsed with warmth"
3"They bloomed year-round."
4"She could see them in"
5"Their scent was part of"
6"She was here for a"
7"She unzipped her jacket, the"
8"It was still cool."
9"she murmured, her voice a"
10"It came from the tree"
11"She turned her head slowly,"
12"She waited a full minute,"
13"She turned back to the"
14"She took a step forward."
15"Her heart hammered against her"
16"She didn’t turn this time."
17"she called out"
18"Her voice was steadier than"
19"It wasn’t on the wind."
ratio0.368
63.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences155
matches
0"The oaks were wrong."
1"Aurora Carter knew this within"
2"The standing stones, ancient and"
3"The evening birdsong from Richmond"
4"She paused, her hand instinctively"
5"The Heartstone Pendant."
6"Its crimson gem was cool"
7"It had pulsed with warmth"
8"The air smelled of damp"
9"Wildflowers, the codex said."
10"They bloomed year-round."
11"She could see them in"
12"Their scent was part of"
13"Rory forced herself to breathe"
14"This was how she survived."
15"She was here for a"
16"The pendant had guided her,"
17"A Hel portal."
18"The words felt absurd, like"
19"She unzipped her jacket, the"
ratio0.794
64.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences155
matches
0"Now, there was only the"
1"To the right."
ratio0.013
67.10% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Now, there was only the soft crunch of her boots on a carpet of fallen leaves that looked too perfect, too uniformly brown, like stage dressing."
1"It had pulsed with warmth for the last half-mile, a silent, insistent guide leading her here, to this pocket of land that shouldn’t exist."
2"The words felt absurd, like something from a fantasy novel, but after the last six months—the Fae, the grove, the fact that time itself felt like wet clay in th…"
3"It was a thick, purple-black ink, pouring down from a sky that held no stars, no moon, just a suffocating blanket of nothing."
4"They were *empty*, holes cut in the fabric of the grove that showed a deeper, more absolute black beyond."
5"It folded back into the darkness with a speed that was unnatural, a silent scream seeming to ripple from its form not in sound, but in a psychic static that mad…"
6"The pendant in her hand was cooling rapidly, its glow fading to a dull ember, then nothing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she murmured, her voice a dry whisper that didn’t carry"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.8
75.7893%