Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ09BNS789MGW4ZNTDEJ7CTV

Run Details

Duration:
46.5s
Cost:
$0.006923
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The path through Richmond Park ended not with a gate or a sign, but with a sense. Aurora Carter felt it as a soft click behind her ribs, a quiet shift in the air pressure that made her ears pop. One moment she was crunching over autumn-damp leaves under the indifferent glow of a quarter moon, the next she was passing between two gnarled oaks so old their roots had melted into the earth, forming a low archway. The air changed. It grew warmer, thicker, and smelled of honeysuckle and crushed violets, a cloying sweetness entirely out of place for a London October. Wildflowers—pale blues, violent purples, and crimsons that looked black in the moonlight—brushed against her jeans, blooming in defiant mockery of the season. This was the place. Isolde's Grove. The Fae-touched pocket where time stuttered. Eva’s frantic, whispered instructions had been clear: come alone, after midnight, when the moon was waning. Don’t step off the path once you’re inside the stones. And for God’s sake, don’t eat or drink anything you find. Rory pulled the collar of her jacket tighter, the familiar weight of the Heartstone pendant cool against her chest under her t-shirt. It had been given to her by a stranger in a paper mask, a benefactor she’d never seen, and it had become a habit to touch it when she was nervous. The gemstone, deep crimson and the size of a thumbnail, lay inert against her sternum. No pulse. No warmth. That was good. The instructions said it would pulse with warmth near a Hel portal, and she certainly wasn’t looking for one of those tonight. Her footsteps were silent on the mossy path. Too silent. The familiar London sounds—the distant hum of traffic, the bark of a fox—had been amputated. The only noises were the rustle of unnaturally broad leaves and the faint, almost sub-audible trickle of water. The standing stones that marked the true boundary of the grove loomed ahead, grey and mossy, their surfaces pitted and strange. They weren’t arranged in a circle, but in a jagged, broken line, like the spine of some buried leviathan. A chill, separate from the evening air, prickled the skin on her forearms. Something felt… staged. Too picturesque. The wildflowers formed perfect, artful clusters. The moonlight fell in ideal, silver pools on the path. It was like walking onto a film set that had been meticulously dressed to look ‘enchanted’. And the silence wasn’t peaceful; it was expectant. She stopped beside the largest standing stone, the one with a hollow at its center like a navel. This was the meeting point. Eva should be here. *Should* be. “Eva?” Rory’s voice was a dry rasp, swallowed instantly by the verdant stillness. No echo. Just the sound, then nothing. She checked her phone. 12:17 AM. She’d been inside the grove for less than five minutes. The battery icon was full, but the signal bars were not just empty; the little ‘x’ sat where the lines should be. Of course. A soft, wet sound came from her left. Rory’s head snapped toward it. Nothing. Just the trunk of a silver birch, its peeling bark gleaming like bone in the low light. She let out a slow breath. A droplet, from dew condensing on leaves. That was all. She took a step off the path, onto the thick, springy moss that carpeted the area between the stones. The moment her trainer sank into it, she felt a subtle wrongness. It was too soft. Too giving. It felt almost like a living membrane. The scent of flowers intensified, but now it carried a dark undercurrent, like nectar beginning to ferment. The Heartstone at her chest gave a single, faint throb against her skin. Rory froze, her hand flying to the pendant. It was cold. Utterly cold. Had she imagined it? Then she heard it. A breath. Not her own. It was a low, rasping inhalation, coming from everywhere and nowhere, like the grove itself was drawing air into hollow lungs. The wildflowers around the base of the nearest stone trembled, though there was no wind. “Eva?” she called again, louder this time, her voice cracking. “This isn’t funny.” The silence that followed was different. It was thick, attentive. She could feel it pressing on her eardrums. She was not alone. The knowledge settled in her gut like a cold stone. Something was here, in the periphery, moving only when she looked away. Keeping her eyes fixed on the central hollow of the standing stone before her, she slowly, deliberately, began to turn her head. Her peripheral vision caught a flicker of movement—something tall and impossibly thin, darker than the surrounding shadow, darting behind a tree. She whirled fully around. Nothing. Just the silent, watching stones and the riot of silent color. Her heart hammered against her ribs. This was wrong. Eva’s instructions had been about danger from the Fae, about trickery and bargains. They hadn’t mentioned this primal, stalking fear. This feeling of being hunted in a place that was trying too hard to look beautiful. She took a step back toward the path. The moss squelched wetly under her foot, and this time, she was sure. It felt like she’d stepped on something that recoiled. Bile rose in her throat. She stumbled back, her heel hitting the firm, packed earth of the path. A relief. A small victory. The low breathing sound came again, closer this time, accompanied by a faint scent of ozone, like after a lightning strike. It overpowered the floral sweetness, turning it sour. The Heartstone pulsed. A warm, steady beat against her skin, once, twice, three times. Not near a Hel portal. Then what? She scanned the tree line, her eyes wide and aching from the strain. The shadows between the trees were no longer empty. They seemed denser, more substantial. And they were… *milling*. Like a crowd seen through frosted glass. Shapes that were almost human, but with too many joints, or heads that lolled at impossible angles. They never stepped into the moonlight. They only watched. A low, melodic humming began, tuneless and atonal. It wasn’t a human melody. It vibrated in her teeth, a frequency that felt designed to unsettle the very air. It was coming from the hollow in the standing stone. Rory’s breath hitched. She forced herself to look. In the dark hollow of the ancient oak, something glistened. It was not moss or water. It was a patch of slick, black obsidian that hadn’t been there a moment before. And in its polished surface, a reflection moved. Not her reflection. A face, pale as paper, with eyes that were entirely too wide and too black, watching her with an expression of terrible, patient hunger. It was smiling, a slow, stretching grin that revealed not teeth, but row upon row of fine, glass-like shards. A scream locked in her chest, a fragile, useless thing. The pendant against her skin burned with a sudden, sharp heat. The humming stopped. The world held its breath. Then, from the very center of the grove, where the moss was thickest and the wildflowers grew in a perfect, unnatural circle, a voice spoke. It was a chorus of whispers, dry as old leaves, and it spoke her name. “*Aurora Carter.*” It knew her. Not Rory. Not Laila. The name her father used when she was in trouble. The full, formal weight of it. The thing in the stone’s reflection grinned wider, the glass-shard teeth catching the moonlight. The shapes in the shadows leaned forward as one. She didn’t remember deciding to run. Her body simply moved, propelled by a terror so profound it bypassed thought. She fled back along the path, the pendant a searing brand against her heart. The archway of ancient oaks loomed, and she threw herself through it, the floral scent clinging to her like a foul perfume. She burst out onto the normal, damp earth of Richmond Park, gasping, the ordinary smells of soil and rotting leaves a benediction. She didn’t stop, her trainers slapping against the hard-packed path, until the car park was in sight and the distant, beautiful noise of London traffic filled the air. Panting, braced against the cold metal of her car, she looked down at her chest. The Heartstone was glowing. A soft, steady, crimson light pulsed from its core, illuminating the fabric of her t-shirt. It was warm, not with the heat of proximity to a portal, but with a deep, internal fire, as if it were a heart beating in sync with her own terrified pulse. She looked back toward the dark line of trees. The path was empty. The grove was silent. But as she watched, just for a second, in the deepest shadow where the two oaks formed the arch, something tall and impossibly thin straightened up from a crouch. It raised a long, too-jointed arm in a slow, deliberate wave. Then it was gone. The pendant continued to glow, a steady, crimson alarm against her skin, a silent testament that the night’s wrongness was not over. It had only just begun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"a dry rasp swallowed instantly [instantly]"
1"she called again [again]"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
83.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slowly"
2"deliberately"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count3
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count2
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count2
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"gleaming"
count1
11
word"throb"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count2
16
word"scanned"
count1
17
word"vibrated"
count1
18
word"profound"
count1
19
word"searing"
count1
20
word"testament"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"pulse"
3"warmth"
4"footsteps"
5"loomed"
6"chill"
7"perfect"
8"silence"
9"echo"
10"gleaming"
11"throb"
12"trembled"
13"could feel"
14"flicker"
15"pulsed"
16"scanned"
17"vibrated"
18"profound"
19"searing"
20"testament"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences151
matches
0"was nervous"
1"e with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences151
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords1519
ratio0.003
matches
0"Should"
1"milling"
2"Aurora Carter."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1504
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Carter1
London3
October1
Grove1
Fae-touched1
God1
Heartstone4
Hel2
Fae2
Rory6
Laila1
Eva3
persons
0"Carter"
1"God"
2"Rory"
3"Laila"
4"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Hel"
4"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like she’d stepped on something th"
2.50% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.975
wordCount1519
matches
0"not with a gate or a sign, but with a sense"
1"not teeth, but row upon row of fine, glass-like shards"
2"not with the heat of proximity to a portal, but with a deep, internal fire, as if it were a heart beating in"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean42.19
std27.81
cv0.659
sampleLengths
0125
149
297
383
458
529
620
740
847
974
1017
1145
1213
1344
1459
1545
1653
1750
1864
1938
208
2185
2221
233
245
2540
262
2723
2823
2955
3050
3166
3217
3340
344
3527
95.97% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences151
matches
0"been given"
1"been amputated"
2"being hunted"
3"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount9
totalVerbs229
matches
0"was crunching"
1"was passing"
2"was waning"
3"wasn’t looking"
4"was like walking"
5"was drawing"
6"was coming"
7"was smiling"
8"was glowing"
49.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences153
ratio0.033
matches
0"Wildflowers—pale blues, violent purples, and crimsons that looked black in the moonlight—brushed against her jeans, blooming in defiant mockery of the season."
1"The familiar London sounds—the distant hum of traffic, the bark of a fox—had been amputated."
2"And the silence wasn’t peaceful; it was expectant."
3"The battery icon was full, but the signal bars were not just empty; the little ‘x’ sat where the lines should be."
4"Her peripheral vision caught a flicker of movement—something tall and impossibly thin, darker than the surrounding shadow, darting behind a tree."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount410
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay inert against her"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.026829268292682926
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.012195121951219513
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean9.93
std7.63
cv0.768
sampleLengths
017
123
238
33
422
522
64
72
86
916
1010
1111
1222
1331
1415
152
162
173
1822
198
202
2115
2218
2321
2419
2513
262
271
282
296
3010
3116
328
3318
345
354
362
3713
382
395
404
412
4210
4322
442
458
465
471
4817
496
37.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.24183006535947713
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences130
matches
0"Just the sound, then nothing."
1"Just the trunk of a"
2"Then she heard it."
3"Just the silent, watching stones"
4"Then, from the very center"
5"Then it was gone."
ratio0.046
72.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences130
matches
0"It grew warmer, thicker, and"
1"It had been given to"
2"Her footsteps were silent on"
3"They weren’t arranged in a"
4"It was like walking onto"
5"She stopped beside the largest"
6"She checked her phone."
7"She’d been inside the grove"
8"She let out a slow"
9"She took a step off"
10"It was too soft."
11"It felt almost like a"
12"It was cold."
13"It was a low, rasping"
14"she called again, louder this"
15"It was thick, attentive."
16"She could feel it pressing"
17"She was not alone."
18"Her peripheral vision caught a"
19"She whirled fully around."
ratio0.369
40.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences130
matches
0"The path through Richmond Park"
1"Aurora Carter felt it as"
2"The air changed."
3"It grew warmer, thicker, and"
4"Wildflowers—pale blues, violent purples, and"
5"This was the place."
6"The Fae-touched pocket where time"
7"Eva’s frantic, whispered instructions had"
8"Rory pulled the collar of"
9"It had been given to"
10"The gemstone, deep crimson and"
11"That was good."
12"The instructions said it would"
13"Her footsteps were silent on"
14"The familiar London sounds—the distant"
15"The only noises were the"
16"The standing stones that marked"
17"They weren’t arranged in a"
18"A chill, separate from the"
19"The wildflowers formed perfect, artful"
ratio0.838
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Aurora Carter felt it as a soft click behind her ribs, a quiet shift in the air pressure that made her ears pop."
1"Wildflowers—pale blues, violent purples, and crimsons that looked black in the moonlight—brushed against her jeans, blooming in defiant mockery of the season."
2"The standing stones that marked the true boundary of the grove loomed ahead, grey and mossy, their surfaces pitted and strange."
3"This feeling of being hunted in a place that was trying too hard to look beautiful."
4"A face, pale as paper, with eyes that were entirely too wide and too black, watching her with an expression of terrible, patient hunger."
5"It was smiling, a slow, stretching grin that revealed not teeth, but row upon row of fine, glass-like shards."
6"It was warm, not with the heat of proximity to a portal, but with a deep, internal fire, as if it were a heart beating in sync with her own terrified pulse."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.7093%