Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ09N39VFDBS8J32TK46S9EK

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Duration:
37.4s
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign flickered above the entrance to The Raven’s Nest, casting a sickly halo onto the rain‑slicked pavement. Inside, the bar breathed a low amber glow, the kind that made the shadows in the corners look like they held their breath. Walls plastered with faded maps and black‑and‑white photographs—smoky faces from a world Aurora had only ever read about—loomed like silent witnesses. She pushed through the narrow doorway, the brass bell above her head a tinny chime in the stale air. The scent of fried spring rolls mingled with a faint whiff of rye whiskey, and the hum of muted conversations wrapped around her like a familiar coat. Aurora Carter paused at the threshold, her bright blue eyes narrowing as they swept the room. Her black hair, trimmed to shoulder length and still glossy despite the drizzle, brushed against the back of her hand. The tiny crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light as she lifted her arm to adjust her messenger bag. She'd lived above this bar for three months now, a roof over a life that hadn't been the one she’d once imagined while scrolling through case law in a cramped university library. The bar was almost empty, just a few regulars nursing their drinks. In the far corner, a man with a limp that seemed both a habit and a warning leaned against the bar. His hair was a wash of auburn threaded with grey, his beard neatly trimmed to match. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand, the flat surface catching the light every time his fingers curled around the glass of Scotch. His hazel eyes, half‑closed, scanned the room with a measured patience that made the low hum of conversation feel like static. Aurora’s breath caught. The man was Silas Blackwood, the Spymaster of her youth, the ghost of a life she’d left behind in the middle of a night lit only by streetlamps and whispered promises. He was taller than she remembered, the lines on his face deeper, the weight of his years settled in his shoulders. He was also still Silas: the same quiet authority, the same way he inclined his head slightly when someone entered his domain. For a heartbeat she thought maybe it was someone else—an actor in a role she’d seen on a television drama. The world tilted, the rain on the windows sounding like distant applause. Then she saw his ring, its faint engraving catching the light, and felt the memories rush in, uninvited and sharp. She approached, the wood floor creaking softly under her boots. The bar's dim lighting threw her shadow long across the polished oak, the scar on her wrist a thin slash of pale pink against her skin. “Silas?” she said, her voice a mixture of surprise and caution, the name tasting unfamiliar on her tongue. He turned, the hinge of his left leg giving a quiet protest as he steadied himself. His eyes opened fully, a flicker of recognition crossing the hazel depths before he forced a smile onto his lips. “Aurora,” he said, the name rolling out like a secret. “Or should I call you Rory? It’s been a long time.” She swallowed, the words tumbling out. “It has.” He gestured to the empty stool at the end of the bar. “Sit. It’s always a bit cold by the window.” She slid onto the seat, the leather cool against her skin. The glass on the bar was half‑empty, a dark amber liquid swirling in time with the dim light. “Been a while,” Silas said, setting his drink down with a practiced delicacy. “What brings you back to this part of town?” Aurora considered the question, watching the condensation bead on the glass, the way the light refracted through it. “Work,” she said finally. “Deliveries. The Golden Empress needs a hand after hours. I needed a place to stay, and the flat above your bar was the only vacancy I could find that wasn’t… well, you know.” Silas nodded, his gaze sliding to the scar on her wrist. “You always wore that.” He tapped the signet ring on his finger, the metal clicking against his knuckle. “Some things never change.” She smiled, a thin, self‑aware line. “Except the scar, I suppose. I was a kid then. You reminded me never to be careless.” “You were always the careful one,” he replied, his voice low, as if he were sharing a secret he’d kept for decades. “The only thing that ever changed was your hair. No more dreadlocks, huh?” Aurora laughed—a short, breathy sound that seemed to echo off the photographs on the walls. “No, I cut them off before I left Cardiff. Thought I’d be more… professional.” Silas’s hazel eyes softened for a fraction of a second, then hardened again. “Professional. That was a word you used a lot, when we were…when we tried to help each other read through those casebooks. I remember you’d light up whenever you found a loophole, as if you were solving a puzzle rather than fighting a system.” “I was a different person then,” Aurora said, the words feeling like an apology. “I was…naïve.” Silas took a sip of his Scotch, the liquid leaving a faint amber stain on the rim of the glass. “Naïve is a beautiful place to stand, until it isn’t,” he said. “We all get pulled in different directions. Some of us end up where we think we belong. Others… we end up where we have to be.” She stared at him, studying the lines that framed his face, the hint of a tiredness that lingered behind his composed demeanor. “You… you look the same as I remembered, except older.” He chuckled, a sound that seemed to vibrate through the wooden paneling. “Older, yes. The world made me older. The knee that never fully healed, the faces that never left the shadows, the secrets that never die. You could say we all have our wear and tear.” Aurora ran her thumb over her scar, feeling the thin raised line beneath her skin. “Do you ever regret the choices you made?” she asked, the words slipping out with a tremor that betrayed how much she feared the answer. Silas stared into his glass, the amber catching his reflection. “Regret is a luxury,” he said finally, “when you have time to think about it. I’ve spent a lifetime pushing forward, because the only thing that hurts more than a mistake is the silence that follows it.” He lifted his ring, the silver catching the low light again. “When I retired, I thought I’d get a quiet life. Silas’ bar became a refuge, yes, but also a way to stay connected to those who need help. The network never shuts off. It just… changes its frequency.” Aurora inhaled sharply, feeling the weight of his words settle in the space between them like dust. The rain outside intensified, a steady drumbeat against the windows, as if the world outside wanted to press in, to remind them there was still a storm beyond the bar’s insulated walls. “You were always good at reading people,” she said, the echo of a memory flickering in her mind. “The way you could see the angle of a head, the tension in a voice before anyone else even heard it.” Silas’s eyes darkened for a heartbeat. “That’s why they called me the Spymaster. You, on the other hand, could find a loophole in any law. You always thought you could change the system from inside. And you tried.” Aurora let out a breath she hadn’t realized she’d been holding. “I left because… because the system was… because it broke me.” She stared at the condensation on her glass, watching the droplets drift, merging, disappearing. “I thought I could outrun my past. That’s why I came to London. To deliver meals, to be invisible. To not be the one who… who tried to fix something that wasn’t meant to be fixed.” Silas placed his hand—steady despite the limp—on the bar, the ring on his right hand catching the light. “You didn’t outrun it. You only changed the terrain.” His voice was soft, yet each syllable landed like a stone placed in a pond. The ripples spread across her mind, stirring old feelings she’d kept buried. “There were nights, back in the day, when we talked until dawn about what we’d become. You wanted the law to be a shield. I wanted it to be a weapon. We were both chasing a ghost.” She looked up, their eyes meeting. In his hazel gaze she saw the reflection of a man who’d seen too much, who’d carried the weight of a thousand unspoken things. “Do you ever miss it? The… the running, the missions?” Silas chuckled again, a muted sound that seemed to echo off the map‑covered walls. “I miss the clarity of purpose. When you know exactly what you’re doing, even if it’s dangerous. But I also miss the quiet. There’s a kind of peace in a bar where the biggest risk is a spilled drink.” Aurora’s breath caught. “And you—have you ever thought about… leaving?” He stared at the ring now, the silver catching the amber light. “Every day. Every night. But I can’t. The network, the contacts—they’re part of me now. They rely on me. There’s a responsibility that doesn’t dissolve with retirement.” She thought of her own responsibilities: the delivery schedule, the bills, the constant need to stay invisible. “I keep delivering because it’s… it’s simple. The food goes from one place to another. It’s honest, I guess. No secrets, no lies.” Silas glanced at the old photographs lining the wall, eyes focusing on a black‑and‑white image of a crowded street, a crowd of faces turned away. “Honesty is a rare commodity. Most people carry secrets like a second skin.” A knock at the door sliced through the stillness, a thin bell clattering in its wake. A rain‑soaked figure slipped inside, shaking droplets onto the floor. The newcomer stared at Silas, then at Aurora, before making a beeline for the empty stool beside her. “Ava?” Silas asked, his voice a low murmur, more to himself than to his guest. The woman—taller, with sharp cheekbones and a scar crossing her left cheek—nodded, eyes lingering on Aurora's scar. “Silas. We have to talk.” She pulled up a chair, set her bag down with a soft thud, and the conversation shifted—a different rhythm entering the room, pulling Aurora into a vortex of murmured urgency. Silas leaned close to Aurora, his breath warm against her ear. “The world moves when you think no one’s looking.” He brushed his thumb against the silver signet ring, a small gesture meant only for her. Her blue eyes widened. “What does that mean?” He smiled, a faint curve that didn’t reach his eyes. “There’s a job. A small one. I need someone who can move through the city unseen. You know how to—” She cut him off, the words spilling out without filter. “I’m not that person anymore. I’m just… a delivery girl now.” Silas’s expression softened, understanding the weight of her words. “You were never just a delivery girl. You were always more than the label you wore. And you still are. You just need to see it.” She stared at the ring again, at the gleam of silver, at the green neon sign outside casting a faint glow through the rain‑spattered windows. Time had slipped between them like water between fingers, yet the undercurrent of their connection remained tangled, stubborn, and alive. “I can’t—” she began, then stopped, listening to the rain's rhythm, the low hum of the bar, Silas’s steady breathing. She realized she was holding onto a past that felt more like a myth than a memory. Silas’s voice was gentle, the tone of someone who had learned to speak in whispers. “You don’t have to decide now. Stay. Drink. Talk. Let the night settle around us. The world can wait for a while.” Aurora set her glass down, the amber liquid spilling a thin line across the wood. She looked up at Silas, at his hazel eyes that held a lifetime of untold stories, and slowly nodded. “All right.” She lifted the glass to her lips, feeling the chill of the whisky slide down her throat. The rain intensified, each drop a percussion on the windowpanes. In the dim glow, Silas’s limp shifted as he leaned forward, the weight of his years balanced against the immediacy of the moment. The scar on Aurora’s wrist caught the low light, a pale crescent against her skin, a silent testament to the accidents that had shaped her. There was a pause, a breath held in the space between them, and then Silas spoke, his voice barely above a whisper. “We all have regrets, Aurora. Some we carry like a scar, others like a secret. The important thing is not to let them define the whole of us.” She regarded his silver ring, the way it caught and reflected a fragment of the neon sign, and felt a flicker of something she hadn’t felt in years—a mix of respect, nostalgia, and a quiet hope that perhaps the road ahead wasn’t as narrow as she had believed. The bar continued its low murmur, the world outside a storm of rain and neon, and two old friends, weathered by time, found themselves standing at a crossroads illuminated by the soft green glow of The Raven’s Nest—each carrying the weight of years, each bearing an unspoken regret, each daring, perhaps, to let the past speak and the future listen.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.55% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"she began then [then]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.347
leniency0.694
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.122
89.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2286
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"sharply"
3"slowly"
4"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2286
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"weight"
count5
6
word"flicker"
count2
7
word"depths"
count1
8
word"echo"
count3
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"carried the weight"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count2
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"testament"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"loomed"
2"familiar"
3"scanned"
4"measured"
5"weight"
6"flicker"
7"depths"
8"echo"
9"silence"
10"tension"
11"carried the weight"
12"unspoken"
13"chill"
14"testament"
15"whisper"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count2
3
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"eyes widened"
2"the weight of his words"
3"the weight of her words"
4"a flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
48.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
2"listen"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2273
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1530
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Aurora16
Carter1
Scotch2
Silas20
Blackwood1
Spymaster1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
places(empty)
globalScore0.846
windowScore0.833
62.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sound that seemed to echo off the photographs on the walls"
1"sound that seemed to vibrate through the wooden paneling"
2"sound that seemed to echo off the map‑covered walls"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2273
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean43.71
std23.01
cv0.526
sampleLengths
064
1135
295
377
452
536
618
757
88
921
1029
1122
1255
1333
1423
1535
1629
1757
1816
1958
2032
2147
2240
2396
2449
2539
2638
2772
2827
2964
3040
3153
3210
3339
3440
3538
3644
3715
3852
3936
408
4130
4221
4335
4445
4537
4637
4753
4858
4950
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs251
matches
0"were sharing"
1"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences123
ratio0.065
matches
0"Walls plastered with faded maps and black‑and‑white photographs—smoky faces from a world Aurora had only ever read about—loomed like silent witnesses."
1"For a heartbeat she thought maybe it was someone else—an actor in a role she’d seen on a television drama."
2"Aurora laughed—a short, breathy sound that seemed to echo off the photographs on the walls."
3"Silas placed his hand—steady despite the limp—on the bar, the ring on his right hand catching the light."
4"The woman—taller, with sharp cheekbones and a scar crossing her left cheek—nodded, eyes lingering on Aurora's scar."
5"“Silas. We have to talk.” She pulled up a chair, set her bag down with a soft thud, and the conversation shifted—a different rhythm entering the room, pulling Aurora into a vortex of murmured urgency."
6"She regarded his silver ring, the way it caught and reflected a fragment of the neon sign, and felt a flicker of something she hadn’t felt in years—a mix of respect, nostalgia, and a quiet hope that perhaps the road ahead wasn’t as narrow as she had believed."
7"The bar continued its low murmur, the world outside a storm of rain and neon, and two old friends, weathered by time, found themselves standing at a crossroads illuminated by the soft green glow of The Raven’s Nest—each carrying the weight of years, each bearing an unspoken regret, each daring, perhaps, to let the past speak and the future listen."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1541
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.027903958468526932
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.008436080467229072
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean18.48
std10.08
cv0.545
sampleLengths
020
123
221
319
427
516
620
721
832
912
1021
1116
1225
1321
143
1531
1621
1722
1820
1912
2020
2110
2226
2318
2416
2520
2610
2711
286
292
3012
319
3211
3318
3413
359
3618
374
3833
3911
4018
414
426
4317
4422
4513
4615
4714
4813
4944
50.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3252032520325203
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners40
37.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"Then she saw his ring,"
ratio0.011
42.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences90
matches
0"She pushed through the narrow"
1"Her black hair, trimmed to"
2"She'd lived above this bar"
3"His hair was a wash"
4"His hazel eyes, half‑closed, scanned"
5"He was taller than she"
6"He was also still Silas:"
7"She approached, the wood floor"
8"she said, her voice a"
9"He turned, the hinge of"
10"His eyes opened fully, a"
11"he said, the name rolling"
12"She swallowed, the words tumbling"
13"He gestured to the empty"
14"She slid onto the seat,"
15"she said finally"
16"He tapped the signet ring"
17"She smiled, a thin, self‑aware"
18"he replied, his voice low,"
19"She stared at him, studying"
ratio0.444
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences90
matches
0"The green neon sign flickered"
1"Walls plastered with faded maps"
2"She pushed through the narrow"
3"The scent of fried spring"
4"Aurora Carter paused at the"
5"Her black hair, trimmed to"
6"The tiny crescent scar on"
7"She'd lived above this bar"
8"The bar was almost empty,"
9"His hair was a wash"
10"A silver signet ring glinted"
11"His hazel eyes, half‑closed, scanned"
12"Aurora’s breath caught."
13"The man was Silas Blackwood,"
14"He was taller than she"
15"He was also still Silas:"
16"The world tilted, the rain"
17"She approached, the wood floor"
18"The bar's dim lighting threw"
19"she said, her voice a"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
88.74% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She'd lived above this bar for three months now, a roof over a life that hadn't been the one she’d once imagined while scrolling through case law in a cramped u…"
1"His hazel eyes, half‑closed, scanned the room with a measured patience that made the low hum of conversation feel like static."
2"She stared at him, studying the lines that framed his face, the hint of a tiredness that lingered behind his composed demeanor."
3"The rain outside intensified, a steady drumbeat against the windows, as if the world outside wanted to press in, to remind them there was still a storm beyond t…"
4"The scar on Aurora’s wrist caught the low light, a pale crescent against her skin, a silent testament to the accidents that had shaped her."
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, the name rolling out like a secret"
1"He tapped, the metal clicking against his knuckle"
2"she said, the echo of a memory flickering in her mind"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.224
leniency0.449
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.1272%