Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0AK49ZA7RQSCGJKH1V0VFN

Run Details

Duration:
32.5s
Cost:
$0.005269
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The last delivery of the night was for an address that didn’t exist. Rory had double-checked the slip from Yu-Fei, her phone’s GPS, even the printed map. It all pointed here: to a nondescript service gate in the stone wall bordering Richmond Park. The instruction had been handwritten on the back of a Golden Empress receipt: *Leave at the old oaks, inside. Generous tip included.* The cash in her pocket felt heavy, a bribe for a fool’s errand. The gate was unlocked, a heavy iron thing that swung inward with a soundless, oiled motion that was wrong. Gates should protest. They should groan or shriek, especially ones hidden in the shadows of a London park at two in the morning. This one swallowed the sound whole. Beyond was not the manicured lawn or the gravel paths she knew from weekend walks. The air changed first. It thickened, tasting of damp earth and something else, something sweet and heavy like overripe fruit and cold stone. The city’s distant hum—the perpetual white noise of traffic and life—vanished, replaced by a silence so profound it felt like a pressure against her eardrums. Rory stepped onto the path. Her trainers made no sound on the packed dirt. Moonlight, filtered through a canopy of ancient oaks, painted everything in shades of silver and black. The trees here were immense, their trunks gnarled into shapes that suggested agony or ecstasy, twisted in ways that defied natural growth. They formed a rough, deliberate circle. Standing stones. The Heartstone Pendant, tucked beneath her shirt, gave a faint, distinct pulse of warmth against her sternum. A gentle throb, like a second heartbeat. It did that sometimes, a fact she’d filed away under ‘weird but harmless’ alongside her flatmate Silas’s nocturnal habits and Yu-Fei’s cryptic smiles. It was probably just a quirk of the old jewelry. But here, the pulse was quicker, more insistent. A quiet alarm. She was looking for the exact center of the circle, where Yu-Fei said to leave the small, insulated bag. Rory’s gaze swept the ground. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion, even in the dim light—scarlet poppies, pale moon-daisies, star-shaped blue blossoms that seemed to drink the moonlight and glow. Their scent was part of that heavy sweetness in the air. That’s when the first wrong thing happened. A sound, beneath the silence. Not a footstep. A sigh. A long, slow exhalation of breath, coming from the cluster of oaks to her left. It was so human, so weary, that Rory spun around, the insulated bag crinkling in her grip. The trees were just trees. Shadows pooled between them, thick and velvet. Nothing moved. “Hello?” she called. Her voice fell flat, absorbed by the grove. No echo. No birds startled into flight. The silence simply folded the sound away. She forced herself to turn back, to walk the final few yards to the center of the circle. The ground was a carpet of those strange, vibrant wildflowers. She knelt, placing the bag gently amongst the blue star-blossoms. Mission accomplished. Time to go. The thought was a shard of relief in the growing unease. As she stood, the pendant gave another pulse, this one stronger, accompanied by a faint, internal luminescence that seeped through the fabric of her shirt. A soft, crimson glow. *When near a Hel portal*, the strange little note from the anonymous benefactor who’d given it to her had said. She’d never found a note that made less sense. What was a Hel portal? What was Dymas? It had felt like a prank, a piece of fantasy lore slipped into a jewelry box. Now, standing in the silent, moonlit grove, the warmth against her skin felt less like a quirk and more like a beacon. A warning light. *Crack.* The sound was sharp, brittle, coming from behind her right shoulder. The snap of a twig. Heavy. Deliberate. Rory didn't turn this time. Her cool-headedness, the trait her friends valued, seized her. She catalogued: one clear, intentional sound of something large displacing a branch. Not the wind—there was no wind. Not a small animal—the snap had too much weight. A person. Someone was here. “Yu-Fei?” she tried, her voice steadier than she felt. “The delivery’s made.” Silence. Then, a new sound. A dragging, shuffling noise, like heavy fabric being pulled across rough bark. It moved from the right, circling behind the broad trunk of the nearest oak. Away from her, but not retreating. Repositioning. The sweet, cloying smell in the air thickened, curdling into something more decayed. The shadows between the trees seemed to deepen, to coalesce. At the very edge of her vision, where sight blurs and imagination takes over, something shifted. A tall, thin shape that was there and then wasn't, blending into the darkness of a tree trunk as if it had been absorbed. It had no discernible features, just a silhouette of wrong proportions, too long and jointed in a way that human limbs were not. Heart hammering now, a frantic drum against the steady pulse of the pendant. Rory took a step back toward the gate. Her foot brushed a patch of the white moon-daisies. As she looked down, she saw the petals were curling inward, browning and withering in a slow, silent wave, spreading away from where she’d stepped. Dying. A whisper rustled through the canopy above. It wasn’t words, not at first. It was the sound of dry leaves skittering on pavement, of paper tearing, of a gasp cut short. It twisted and layered, and for a horrifying second, it coalesced into a single, sibilant syllable that sounded like her childhood nickname, but twisted. *Rooooory.* The pendant flared, its crimson glow now visible even through her jacket, a frantic, pulsing beacon. Warmth bloomed into actual heat, a brand against her chest. *Hel portal.* The words from the note slammed into her mind with new, terrifying clarity. A door. A threshold. And she was standing on the mat. The dragging sound stopped. All sound stopped. The Grove held its breath. Then, from the densest patch of shadow at the circle’s edge, something began to detach itself. Not stepping out, but peeling away from the darkness, like a shadow deciding to become three-dimensional. It was tall, impossibly so, its limbs thin and ending in suggestions of fingers. It had no face, only a smooth, ovoid shape where a head should be, tilted at an angle of curious examination. The moonlight did not touch it. It was a void in the shape of a figure, drinking the light, a hole cut in the fabric of the night. It raised one long, jointed arm, a movement that was slow, fluid, and entirely silent. It pointed. Not at her. At the place where the Heartstone burned against her skin. The gate. The silent, oiled gate that had swallowed all sound when she entered. It was her only landmark, her only path back to the world of humming fridges and distant traffic. It was thirty yards behind her. Thirty yards of crushed-flower path and whispering, watching trees. Rory didn’t run. She knew, with an instinct deeper than thought, that running would trigger something final. Instead, she began to walk. One step. Then another. She kept her eyes forward, on the iron latch of the gate, now a dull glint in the gloom. She could feel the void-thing’s attention on her back, a physical weight, a pressure that wanted to make her flinch, to make her look. The pendant’s heat was almost unbearable now. The glow was a steady, bloody light in her peripheral vision. A beacon for her, or for it? She was halfway. The gate was clear. The night air of the park, thick with car fumes and distant sirens, seemed to beckon from just beyond the wall. Behind her, the whispering in the canopy began again, but this time it took on a rhythm, a cadence. It was mocking. It was counting her steps. *One... two... three...* On the twentieth step, a cold draft snaked around her ankles, carrying the smell of grave-dirt and wilted flowers. The shadows on the path in front of her began to move, stretching toward the gate, trying to bar her way. They were thin, elongated fingers of pure night. Her rational mind, her Pre-Law mind that dealt in evidence and precedent, was screaming. This wasn’t possible. Shadows didn’t move. Figures didn’t peel out of darkness. Time didn’t feel like it was stretching and compressing with every panicked heartbeat. She broke into a stumbling run the last ten yards, not daring to look back. Her hand found the cold iron of the gate latch. It resisted for a heart-stopping second, then gave. She threw herself through, slamming the heavy gate shut behind her. The clang of metal on metal was a symphony, a cacophony of the real world. She leaned against it, chest heaving, staring at the unyielding iron. The silence from inside the grove was absolute. She could hear the faint whoosh of a car on the distant road. An owl hooted. Normal sounds. The Heartstone’s heat began to fade, its glow dwindling back to a faint, internal pulse. The brand on her skin cooled to a mere warmth. Rory pushed herself off the gate, her legs trembling. She looked down at her jacket. Pressed against the fabric, as if seared by the pendant’s sudden flare, was a perfect, faintly glowing imprint of the gem’s shape, no larger than a thumbnail. A crimson stain that wasn’t a stain. She looked back at the gate, at the dark stone wall of Richmond Park. There was no hint of the impossible grove beyond it, no whisper, no scent of sweet decay. Just a locked gate in a wall, under a mundane London moon. But as she turned to walk back to her bike, parked under a streetlamp a hundred yards away, her foot crunched on something. She looked down. A single, perfect blue star-blossom lay on the gravel path, impossibly vibrant, impossibly fresh. Pulled from a grove that shouldn’t exist, dropped by a thing that should not be. A souvenir. A receipt for a delivery she had not made to a place she could never speak of. The night was no longer silent. It was filled with the sound of her own ragged breathing and the frantic, silent screaming of a mind trying to reassemble a world that had just, quietly, come apart at the seams. She didn't look back again. She didn't need to. She could still feel the weight of that featureless gaze, fixed on her, through the iron and the stone, all the way home.
created_at"2026-04-24T18:03:51.498Z" 4/24/2026, 6:03:51 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1776
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1776
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"silence"
count5
1
word"profound"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count5
3
word"warmth"
count4
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"beacon"
count3
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"glint"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"grave"
count1
14
word"symphony"
count1
15
word"cacophony"
count1
16
word"perfect"
count2
highlights
0"silence"
1"profound"
2"pulse"
3"warmth"
4"throb"
5"velvet"
6"echo"
7"beacon"
8"weight"
9"whisper"
10"glint"
11"gloom"
12"could feel"
13"grave"
14"symphony"
15"cacophony"
16"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences173
matches(empty)
76.80% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences173
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences174
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords21
totalWords1771
ratio0.012
matches
0"Leave at the old oaks, inside. Generous tip included."
1"When near a Hel portal"
2"Crack."
3"Rooooory."
4"Hel portal."
5"One... two... three..."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1753
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.46
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei2
Richmond2
Park2
Golden1
Empress1
London2
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Rory8
Hel3
Dymas1
Silence1
Grove1
Pre-Law1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
3"Silence"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Hel"
4"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences114
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a pressure against her eardru"
1"blossoms that seemed to drink the moonlight and glow"
2"felt like a prank, a piece of fantasy l"
3"sounded like her childhood nickname, but t"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.565
wordCount1771
matches
0"Not stepping out, but peeling away from the darkness, like a shadow deciding to be"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences174
matches
0"thought, that running"
95.71% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean46.61
std22.6
cv0.485
sampleLengths
078
148
263
360
468
559
67
756
825
954
1082
1125
121
1318
1446
1512
1638
1786
1856
1956
2052
2112
2295
2330
2447
2569
2625
2728
2830
2948
3039
3159
3237
3325
3449
3543
3674
3771
95.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences173
matches
0"been handwritten"
1"was unlocked"
2"being pulled"
3"been absorbed"
4"was filled"
8.84% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs279
matches
0"was looking"
1"wasn't, blending"
2"were curling"
3"was standing"
4"was mocking"
5"was counting"
6"was screaming"
7"was stretching"
77.18% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences174
ratio0.023
matches
0"The city’s distant hum—the perpetual white noise of traffic and life—vanished, replaced by a silence so profound it felt like a pressure against her eardrums."
1"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion, even in the dim light—scarlet poppies, pale moon-daisies, star-shaped blue blossoms that seemed to drink the moonlight and glow."
2"Not the wind—there was no wind."
3"Not a small animal—the snap had too much weight."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount288
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.020833333333333332
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.003472222222222222
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences174
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences174
mean10.18
std7.17
cv0.704
sampleLengths
013
114
216
319
416
519
63
720
86
915
104
1119
1225
135
149
1516
1622
176
182
1917
207
2123
2210
238
243
2519
265
2724
2811
297
305
313
322
3315
3417
355
367
372
383
398
402
415
427
4318
4410
4510
462
473
4811
4925
43.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.3390804597701149
totalSentences174
uniqueOpeners59
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences148
matches
0"Then, a new sound."
1"Away from her, but not"
2"Then, from the densest patch"
3"Instead, she began to walk."
4"Just a locked gate in"
ratio0.034
82.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences148
matches
0"It all pointed here: to"
1"They should groan or shriek,"
2"It thickened, tasting of damp"
3"Her trainers made no sound"
4"They formed a rough, deliberate"
5"It did that sometimes, a"
6"It was probably just a"
7"She was looking for the"
8"Their scent was part of"
9"It was so human, so"
10"Her voice fell flat, absorbed"
11"She forced herself to turn"
12"She knelt, placing the bag"
13"She’d never found a note"
14"It had felt like a"
15"Her cool-headedness, the trait her"
16"She catalogued: one clear, intentional"
17"she tried, her voice steadier"
18"It moved from the right,"
19"It had no discernible features,"
ratio0.345
68.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences148
matches
0"The last delivery of the"
1"Rory had double-checked the slip"
2"It all pointed here: to"
3"The instruction had been handwritten"
4"The gate was unlocked, a"
5"Gates should protest."
6"They should groan or shriek,"
7"This one swallowed the sound"
8"The air changed first."
9"It thickened, tasting of damp"
10"The city’s distant hum—the perpetual"
11"Rory stepped onto the path."
12"Her trainers made no sound"
13"Moonlight, filtered through a canopy"
14"The trees here were immense,"
15"They formed a rough, deliberate"
16"The Heartstone Pendant, tucked beneath"
17"A gentle throb, like a"
18"It did that sometimes, a"
19"It was probably just a"
ratio0.784
33.78% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"Now, standing in the silent,"
ratio0.007
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences84
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The gate was unlocked, a heavy iron thing that swung inward with a soundless, oiled motion that was wrong."
1"The trees here were immense, their trunks gnarled into shapes that suggested agony or ecstasy, twisted in ways that defied natural growth."
2"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion, even in the dim light—scarlet poppies, pale moon-daisies, star-shaped blue blossoms that seemed to drink the moonli…"
3"As she stood, the pendant gave another pulse, this one stronger, accompanied by a faint, internal luminescence that seeped through the fabric of her shirt."
4"*When near a Hel portal*, the strange little note from the anonymous benefactor who’d given it to her had said."
5"She could feel the void-thing’s attention on her back, a physical weight, a pressure that wanted to make her flinch, to make her look."
6"Her rational mind, her Pre-Law mind that dealt in evidence and precedent, was screaming."
7"Pressed against the fabric, as if seared by the pendant’s sudden flare, was a perfect, faintly glowing imprint of the gem’s shape, no larger than a thumbnail."
8"It was filled with the sound of her own ragged breathing and the frantic, silent screaming of a mind trying to reassemble a world that had just, quietly, come a…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she tried, her voice steadier than she felt"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.2752%