| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 76.15% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1048 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1048 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "resolve" | | 6 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1056 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1054 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.76 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Rory | 8 | | London | 1 | | May | 2 | | Eva | 5 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 3 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Putney | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "May" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Putney" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.947 | | wordCount | 1056 | | matches | | 0 | "not the layered, overlapping chirr of a real summer meadow, but a single pulse, all of them together, like a heart" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 39.11 | | std | 32.79 | | cv | 0.838 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 99 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 80 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 84 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 99 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 67 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 90 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 69 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 50 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 6 |
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| 92.88% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "being overheard" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was known" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "was doing" | | 1 | "were singing" | | 2 | "were opening" | | 3 | "were obliging" | | 4 | "was humming" | | 5 | "was glowing" | | 6 | "was keeping" | | 7 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked with her collar up and her phone torch off, because Eva had told her — Eva, who knew these things — that the grove didn't like electric light, and tonight Rory felt disinclined to argue with anything that had preferences." | | 1 | "She knew it was an oak because Eva had described them — ancient trunks fossilized into something closer to stone than wood, bark gone grey and hard as slate." | | 2 | "She had expected this — Eva had warned her — but expectation was a thin shield against the way the flowers turned, very slightly, as she passed." | | 3 | "Of course it was empty; she was early, or Isolde was late, or time in here was doing the thing Eva had told her it would do." | | 4 | "The wrong part was that they were singing in rhythm — not the layered, overlapping chirr of a real summer meadow, but a single pulse, all of them together, like a heart." | | 5 | "Wrong in the gait, though she could not have said how; she'd only caught it with the corner of her eye and when she turned her head it was gone and the wildflowers where it had walked were undisturbed." | | 6 | "Only the humming, starting again, farther off now — or nearer, she couldn't tell; the grove did odd things to sound." | | 7 | "The trees had closed, or she had turned too many times, or —" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1047 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03247373447946514 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008595988538681949 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 12.42 | | std | 10.58 | | cv | 0.851 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 32 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 54.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, between the oaks" | | 1 | "Of course it was empty;" | | 2 | "Only the humming, starting again," | | 3 | "Very slowly, she began to" |
| | ratio | 0.058 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked with her collar" | | 1 | "She had come for an" | | 2 | "It had pulsed once on" | | 3 | "She'd been wrong." | | 4 | "She knew it was an" | | 5 | "It wasn't a gust." | | 6 | "It wasn't a sound." | | 7 | "It was simply that on" | | 8 | "She had expected this —" | | 9 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 10 | "It did not carry." | | 11 | "It seemed to land at" | | 12 | "She thought of her phone" | | 13 | "She sat on a fallen" | | 14 | "It was low, and tuneless," | | 15 | "She kept staring, the way" | | 16 | "It simply was not there," | | 17 | "It was glowing through the" | | 18 | "Her throat had gone dry." | | 19 | "she said again, and this" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 61.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The last tube to Richmond" | | 1 | "She walked with her collar" | | 2 | "She had come for an" | | 3 | "That was what she told" | | 4 | "The pendant rested against her" | | 5 | "It had pulsed once on" | | 6 | "She'd been wrong." | | 7 | "The first oak standing stone" | | 8 | "She knew it was an" | | 9 | "Rory walked between the south" | | 10 | "It wasn't a gust." | | 11 | "It wasn't a sound." | | 12 | "It was simply that on" | | 13 | "The silence pressed in with" | | 14 | "The path she'd come down" | | 15 | "Wildflowers bloomed at her feet." | | 16 | "Harebells, foxglove, something with small" | | 17 | "She had expected this —" | | 18 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 19 | "It did not carry." |
| | ratio | 0.797 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "As if one mouth were" | | 1 | "As though sudden movement might" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 59.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked with her collar up and her phone torch off, because Eva had told her — Eva, who knew these things — that the grove didn't like electric light, and to…" | | 1 | "Somewhere ahead, between the oaks that leaned like old men listening, was Isolde's grove, and Isolde had said, come alone, come after moonrise, and bring the He…" | | 2 | "The clearing opened in front of her, ringed by four great stones and fed by a thread of stream that caught the moon in broken pieces." | | 3 | "As if one mouth were opening and closing and many voices were obliging." | | 4 | "It was a long breath, deliberate, the inhalation of a creature that had been holding its lungs still for some while and no longer felt the need." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |