Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0G8ST4JT3YMBVHQC96WRZR

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Duration:
37.9s
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon bled through the window in long stripes across the bar top, and Rory was polishing glasses she had already polished once that evening when the door opened and Delyth Pryce walked back into her life. For a second Rory did not recognise her. The woman who came in wore a charcoal coat cut close to the waist, a leather bag slung over one shoulder, and her hair — which Rory remembered as a riot of bleached blonde, re-dyed every other month in some fresh defiance — was a smooth, expensive brown. She was laughing at something one of her companions had said, two men in the soft, tired suits of people who had taken the train down from a conference. It was the laugh that did it. A brief, sharp note at the top, like someone striking a tuning fork. Rory's hand tightened on the glass. Delyth saw her the same instant. The laugh broke off. She touched one of the men on the forearm and said something Rory couldn't hear, and crossed to the bar alone, her coat whispering. "Aurora Carter," she said. "Jesus Christ." "Delyth." "It is you. I thought I'd lost my mind for a second." She set her bag on the stool beside her and lowered herself carefully onto the next one, and it was then Rory noticed the small, neat curve under the coat, the way she angled her body to accommodate it. "God, how long has it been? Four years?" "Five," Rory said. She had not meant to know the number so exactly. "Nearly six." "Nearly six." Delyth shook her head. She was looking at Rory the way one looks at a photograph turned up in an unexpected drawer, equal parts pleasure and private arithmetic. "You cut your hair." "You grew yours." "I grew up." She laughed, and this time the laugh was softer, chastened, as if she had heard how the word landed. "I mean — you know what I mean. What are you doing here? You're in London?" "I live upstairs." "Upstairs." Delyth glanced at the ceiling as if she might see through it. "In Soho. Above a bar." "Above this bar. It's a long story." "I've got a drink's worth of time. Maybe two." She waved vaguely at the men at the far table, who had resigned themselves to a booth and a bowl of olives. "Gin and tonic. Just tonic, I mean. Lime if you've got it." Rory cut the lime without looking at it. She was conscious, suddenly and absurdly, of the scar on her left wrist, the small white crescent she had worn so long she had forgotten to hide it, and of Delyth's eyes tracking across the bar as if reading a room she'd once known and finding the furniture rearranged. "Tell me about it, then," Delyth said. "The long story." "There isn't much to tell." "There's always much to tell. You don't move from Cardiff to a bedsit above a Soho bar because nothing happened." "It isn't a bedsit. It's a flat." "Rory." The old name, said in the old voice, landed somewhere under her ribs. She set the glass down in front of Delyth and braced her hands against the bar. "I left Evan," she said. "After finals. Eva helped me. I didn't finish the bar exam." Delyth did not say _I'm sorry_, which Rory was grateful for, and she did not say _I told you so_, which Rory was more grateful for, because she had. Once, in a kitchen in Cathays at three in the morning, with the rain slapping the window and a bottle of cheap red between them, Delyth had told her, very carefully, that she didn't like the way Evan said Rory's name. Rory had laughed. She remembered laughing. She remembered thinking _you wouldn't understand, you've never stayed anywhere long enough_. "I'm glad you got out," Delyth said. "I'm glad you — " Rory gestured, uncertainly, at the coat, at the bag, at the whole polished shape of her. "You look well." "I look like my mother." Delyth made a face. "I know. I'm a solicitor now. Property. Can you imagine? Me, conveyancing." She shook her head. "I married Tom. You didn't know that." "I didn't know that." "Three years last April. We're expecting in June." "Congratulations." "Thank you." She looked at Rory over the rim of her glass, and for a moment the old Delyth surfaced, the one who had painted murals on the walls of the student union at two in the morning and been sick in a taxi on the way home from Swansea. "You'd have been invited to the wedding. If I'd known where you were." "I didn't tell anyone where I was." "No," Delyth said. "I gathered." They were quiet. A man at the other end of the bar raised two fingers for another pint and Rory poured it without looking at him, the tap's hiss filling the space between them. Silas was somewhere in the back — she could hear the muffled creak of the floorboard in the office, the one he favoured when he was pretending not to listen. She wondered if he was listening. She wondered if he could tell, from the timbre of her voice, that something in her had gone quiet and careful. "You were going to be the barrister," Delyth said at last. "That was the joke. You were going to wear the wig and I was going to — " she laughed — "I don't know what I was going to do. Live in a van. Paint. Something." "You hated law." "I hated what it made you into." Delyth said this without heat, without even particular attention, as if she had thought it so many times it had worn smooth. "I kept waiting for you to notice. You were so bloody clever, Rory, I couldn't understand why you couldn't see it. You went around like someone carrying a heavy box and asking everyone if the box looked all right." Rory swallowed. The polished glass was in her hand again. She did not remember picking it up. "I didn't see it," she said. "Not then." "No. Well." Delyth turned the tumbler on its coaster, a quarter turn, another quarter. "Neither did I, really. I only thought I did. It's easy, isn't it, to see what someone else should do." The men in the booth were calling her name — _Del, Del, we're going to lose the table_ — and she raised her glass to them without looking, in a gesture Rory remembered, and did not remember, all at once. She drained the tonic. She set the glass down very precisely, as if its placement mattered. "I'm in town until Thursday," she said. "The Marriott on Grosvenor Square. You could come. For breakfast. If you wanted." "I'll think about it." "That means no." "It means I'll think about it." Delyth smiled. It was not the laugh; it was smaller and sadder and more like the girl Rory had known. She stood, gathered her bag, and for a moment her hand hovered over Rory's on the bar, not quite landing. "It's good to see you, Rory." "You too, Del." She watched her go. The door swung shut. The green neon laid its stripes back across the bar top, and Rory stood holding a clean glass and listening to the floorboard in the back office, which had, at some point in the last few minutes, gone entirely still.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She waved vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Rory gestured uncertainly [uncertainly]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.071
71.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1237
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
3"really"
4"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1237
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences59
matches
0"was grateful"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords23
totalWords1248
ratio0.018
matches
0"I'm sorry"
1"I told you so"
2"you wouldn't understand, you've never stayed anywhere long enough"
3"Del, Del, we're going to lose the table"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
28.89% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount867
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Delyth"
discoveredNames
Rory21
Delyth17
Pryce1
Cathays1
Evan1
Swansea1
Del2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Delyth"
2"Pryce"
3"Evan"
places
0"Cathays"
1"Swansea"
globalScore0.289
windowScore0.333
14.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reading a room she'd once known and finding the furniture rearranged"
1"not quite landing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1248
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean26
std26.49
cv1.019
sampleLengths
038
1111
234
36
41
559
615
734
83
938
103
1118
127
1343
1457
1510
165
1720
187
191
2029
2116
2288
237
2424
2532
264
278
281
2963
307
315
3291
3347
343
3568
3617
378
3834
3956
4020
414
423
436
4440
456
463
4748
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs145
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was laughing"
2"was looking"
3"was pretending"
4"was listening"
5"were calling"
21.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences94
ratio0.043
matches
0"The woman who came in wore a charcoal coat cut close to the waist, a leather bag slung over one shoulder, and her hair — which Rory remembered as a riot of bleached blonde, re-dyed every other month in some fresh defiance — was a smooth, expensive brown."
1"Silas was somewhere in the back — she could hear the muffled creak of the floorboard in the office, the one he favoured when he was pretending not to listen."
2"The men in the booth were calling her name — _Del, Del, we're going to lose the table_ — and she raised her glass to them without looking, in a gesture Rory remembered, and did not remember, all at once."
3"It was not the laugh; it was smaller and sadder and more like the girl Rory had known."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount862
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03480278422273782
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010440835266821345
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean13.28
std12.96
cv0.976
sampleLengths
038
18
248
329
47
513
66
76
84
924
104
112
121
1351
148
153
1610
172
186
1924
204
213
2222
2316
243
2513
265
277
2831
2912
308
3149
327
333
345
3520
367
371
3813
3916
405
4111
4229
4341
443
453
4612
477
4821
493
40.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.32978723404255317
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners31
69.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"Once, in a kitchen in"
ratio0.021
28.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences48
matches
0"She was laughing at something"
1"It was the laugh that"
2"She touched one of the"
3"She set her bag on"
4"She had not meant to"
5"She was looking at Rory"
6"She laughed, and this time"
7"She waved vaguely at the"
8"She was conscious, suddenly and"
9"She set the glass down"
10"She remembered laughing."
11"She remembered thinking _you wouldn't"
12"She shook her head"
13"She looked at Rory over"
14"They were quiet."
15"She wondered if he was"
16"She wondered if he could"
17"She did not remember picking"
18"She drained the tonic."
19"She set the glass down"
ratio0.479
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences48
matches
0"The green neon bled through"
1"The woman who came in"
2"She was laughing at something"
3"It was the laugh that"
4"A brief, sharp note at"
5"Rory's hand tightened on the"
6"Delyth saw her the same"
7"The laugh broke off."
8"She touched one of the"
9"She set her bag on"
10"She had not meant to"
11"Delyth shook her head"
12"She was looking at Rory"
13"She laughed, and this time"
14"Delyth glanced at the ceiling"
15"She waved vaguely at the"
16"Rory cut the lime without"
17"She was conscious, suddenly and"
18"The old name, said in"
19"She set the glass down"
ratio0.958
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The woman who came in wore a charcoal coat cut close to the waist, a leather bag slung over one shoulder, and her hair — which Rory remembered as a riot of blea…"
1"She was laughing at something one of her companions had said, two men in the soft, tired suits of people who had taken the train down from a conference."
2"She was conscious, suddenly and absurdly, of the scar on her left wrist, the small white crescent she had worn so long she had forgotten to hide it, and of Dely…"
3"A man at the other end of the bar raised two fingers for another pint and Rory poured it without looking at him, the tap's hiss filling the space between them."
4"The green neon laid its stripes back across the bar top, and Rory stood holding a clean glass and listening to the floorboard in the back office, which had, at …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.393
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.036
72.4863%