| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1036 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 71.04% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1036 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1047 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1004 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Roehampton | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | November | 1 | | Isolde | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Rory | 6 | | Evan | 1 | | Kingston | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "November" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Kingston" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 13.64% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite catch" | | 1 | "felt like an invitation, though she cou" | | 2 | "quite close the distance it should" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1047 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 30.79 | | std | 24.21 | | cv | 0.786 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 90 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 62 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 78 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 64 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 70 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 51 | | 31 | 51 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 75.78% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 161 | | matches | | 0 | "were shivering" | | 1 | "were walking" | | 2 | "were still bowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers crowded her shins — foxgloves and cornflowers and a starburst of something white she didn't know the name of, all of them blooming in November." | | 1 | "Somewhere behind her, on the far side of the oaks, a branch cracked — that sharp, deliberate crack of weight settling onto wood." | | 2 | "Not from behind her now — from her right, deeper in the grove, where the tree line thickened and the moonlight didn't reach." | | 3 | "Not a shape — a suggestion of one, tall and narrow, the way a coat on a rack becomes a person at three in the morning." | | 4 | "Then the flowers at the far side of the grove bowed down in a long, slow line, as though something heavy had walked through them, and rose up again behind — nothing." | | 5 | "She could see the gap between them, the ordinary dark of the park beyond, but the flowers kept crowding her ankles, tugging, and the grove — the grove was longer than it had any right to be." | | 6 | "Something laughed — not cruelly, almost fondly — and the laugh was close, oh god, close, a breath's-width behind her left ear." | | 7 | "But the flowers, just inside the stones, were still bowing down in a long, slow line — toward the boundary — as if something were walking, patient and unhurried, to the place where she had stood." |
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| 89.55% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 998 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "quiet pressed against her" |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.045090180360721446 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011022044088176353 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 10.68 | | std | 10.43 | | cv | 0.976 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 60.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3979591836734694 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind her, on the" | | 1 | "Then the flowers at the" | | 2 | "Only the wildflowers, trembling their" | | 3 | "Just enough that each step" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 88.35% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She hated it more now" | | 1 | "She had to." | | 2 | "She stepped through." | | 3 | "Her voice came out too" | | 4 | "She cleared her throat." | | 5 | "She took another step in." | | 6 | "It was the faintest thing," | | 7 | "She flattened her palm against" | | 8 | "She held the penlight on" | | 9 | "It did not move." | | 10 | "She almost convinced herself." | | 11 | "she said, mostly to hear" | | 12 | "She began to walk back" | | 13 | "She was three paces from" | | 14 | "It came from behind her," | | 15 | "It was nearly a song" | | 16 | "She did not turn around." | | 17 | "Her own name, in her" | | 18 | "Her lungs locked." | | 19 | "She walked faster." |
| | ratio | 0.329 | |
| 61.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory hated Richmond Park at" | | 1 | "She hated it more now" | | 2 | "Eva had said" | | 3 | "She had to." | | 4 | "That was the whole point." | | 5 | "Isolde had asked for her," | | 6 | "The oaks rose out of" | | 7 | "Rory stood a long moment" | | 8 | "London's hum, the one you" | | 9 | "The quiet pressed against her" | | 10 | "She stepped through." | | 11 | "The air changed at once." | | 12 | "Wildflowers crowded her shins —" | | 13 | "The moon above the grove" | | 14 | "Her voice came out too" | | 15 | "She cleared her throat." | | 16 | "The grove ought to have" | | 17 | "Tonight the grass was empty" | | 18 | "She took another step in." | | 19 | "The flowers whispered against her" |
| | ratio | 0.797 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It was the faintest thing, a nudge of heat against her breastbone, as if someone on the other side of her skin had pressed a thumb there." | | 1 | "Then the flowers at the far side of the grove bowed down in a long, slow line, as though something heavy had walked through them, and rose up again behind — not…" | | 2 | "She could see the gap between them, the ordinary dark of the park beyond, but the flowers kept crowding her ankles, tugging, and the grove — the grove was longe…" | | 3 | "Her childhood scar prickled on her wrist as if the old cut remembered being new." | | 4 | "Rory lay in the leaf-mould and stared up at a sky that was a normal colour of black, and listened to her own ragged breath, and did not get up for a long time." | | 5 | "But the flowers, just inside the stones, were still bowing down in a long, slow line — toward the boundary — as if something were walking, patient and unhurried…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |