Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0Q2AHQ7DMBM3B6T9Q55956

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5.5
Duration:
1m 46s
Cost:
$0.168980
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came down with the kind of conviction London reserved for people who had no choice but to be outside in it. Aurora Carter stood under the green neon wash of The Raven’s Nest sign and dug her thumb into the cracked screen of her phone, trying to coax the delivery app into admitting it had lost signal. The plastic carrier bags in her left hand steamed faintly in the cold. Soy, ginger, chilli oil, fried garlic—Golden Empress clung to her coat like a second job, which, technically, it was. A cab hissed past the kerb and sent a fan of dirty water over her boots. “Brilliant,” she muttered. Inside the bar, warmth gathered against the windows in soft amber smears. The Raven’s Nest always looked more inviting from the outside than it felt once you knew it well. To strangers, it was old Soho charm: dark wood, low lamps, old maps in brass frames, black-and-white photographs of men in hats and women with sharp eyes. To Rory, it was a place with two doors too many, three regulars who never gave their real names, and a bookshelf that opened if you knew where to press. She pushed in with her shoulder. The bell above the door gave its tired little clatter. Conversation bent around her and then resumed. Thursday night, just past nine, meant theatre spillover, two accountants pretending they weren’t on a date, a trio of film students arguing about Godard, and a man at the end of the bar who had once asked Silas for a “London mule” in Russian and left before it arrived. Silas Blackwood looked up from polishing a glass. The action was so habitual she sometimes suspected the glass had been clean for hours. “You’re dripping on my floor,” he said. “You’re welcome to install weatherproofing over all of Soho.” “Council rejected my proposal. Something about blocking out the sky.” Rory crossed to the bar and set down the bags. “Order for Hughes. Third floor, Archer Street. App’s gone blank. If he rings the restaurant, tell Yu-Fei I died bravely.” Silas slid a bar towel toward her with two fingers. The silver signet ring on his right hand flashed under the lamp. “If you had died, you’d still find a way to complain about the paperwork.” She took the towel and wiped rain from her face. Her black hair, cut blunt to her shoulders, had begun curling rebelliously at the ends. “Paperwork deserves complaint. It’s its natural state.” His hazel eyes flicked over her in the quiet, assessing way that would have been rude from anyone else and somehow felt like shelter from him. “You’re pale.” “I’m Welsh.” “Pal-er.” “I skipped lunch.” “That’s not an explanation. That’s evidence.” Before she could answer, someone laughed behind her. Not loud. Not drunken. Just a short sound of recognition caught halfway between delight and disbelief. Rory went still. There were laughs a person forgot after enough years. Voices, too. Faces blurred, bodies altered, names detached themselves from mouths. But certain sounds lived in the spine. She knew that laugh before she turned, and knowing it made the room tilt in a way the rain had not managed. At a table beneath a framed map of the Aegean, a woman had risen partway from her chair. Eva. For a moment Rory saw her at seventeen in Cardiff, hair hacked unevenly under a bathroom sink because she’d decided beauty was a patriarchal scam and then cried because the fringe looked like a small accident. Eva at nineteen, standing outside a lecture hall with two coffees and a cigarette she never lit. Eva at twenty-one, voice fierce through a phone speaker: Come to London. Tonight, Rory. I mean it. Pack whatever matters and leave the rest. The woman in the bar was not that Eva, and also entirely that Eva. Her hair, once a thick red-brown tumble she wore like defiance, was cropped close now, darkened to a sleek black that exposed the clean geometry of her cheekbones. She wore a tailored charcoal suit over a white shirt open at the throat, no jewellery except a watch so severe it looked like it measured more than time. She was slimmer than Rory remembered, or maybe only harder, as though the soft parts had been negotiated away. There was a faint line between her brows that had not existed years ago. Her eyes were the same. Green, bright, unguarded for exactly one second. “Rory?” Eva said. The name struck with embarrassing tenderness. Rory’s fingers tightened around the towel. The crescent scar on her left wrist, pale and small, tugged as her skin flexed. “Eva.” Silas’ gaze moved from one to the other. He said nothing. He rarely interrupted history when it had the poor manners to arrive in his bar. Eva stepped away from the table. There was a man seated behind her, silver-haired, broad-shouldered, his glass untouched. He looked up briefly, registered the interruption, and looked down again at his phone with the boredom of someone paid not to be curious. “I didn’t know you were in London,” Eva said. Rory blinked. Of all the first sentences available in the English language, Eva had chosen a small knife and slid it in gently. “I’ve been here six years.” Eva’s expression changed, a flicker so quick Rory might have missed it if she hadn’t once known every weather system of that face. “Right. Of course. I meant—I didn’t know you were still here.” “Still.” “Yes. Sorry.” Eva gave a small laugh, but this one had no spine-memory in it. It was polished, placed on the table between them like cutlery. “That sounded awful.” “Only a bit.” Silas cleared his throat. “Drink, Carter?” Rory looked at him. He was offering a retreat. Back room, upstairs flat, the safe anonymity of errands and debts and things that needed doing. She should take it. Her phone would regain signal. Hughes on Archer Street would complain his noodles were cold. Yu-Fei would shout. Life would reassemble itself around practical failure, which was at least familiar. Eva’s hand hovered near the back of a chair. “If you have a minute,” she said. “I mean, if you want. If you don’t—” The hesitation did more damage than confidence would have. Rory remembered Eva dragging her through night buses and bad ideas, Eva banging on her dorm room door shouting, Open up, Carter, I brought crisps and a plan. Eva had never asked permission to enter a room in her life. Rory glanced at the delivery bags. Silas took them without asking. “I’ll send Theo down the road with those.” “Theo’s drunk.” “Theo is theatrical. Different condition.” Silas lifted one eyebrow. “Sit down before you flood my bar.” Rory gave him a look meant to say traitor, though gratitude ruined the edges. She followed Eva to the table beneath the Aegean. The map showed old sea routes in fading ink, careful lines across uncertain water. Rory sat opposite her and felt, absurdly, like she was preparing for cross-examination. Pre-Law had left its stains, even if she had done her best to scrub them out with work and distance. Eva’s man at the table excused himself in a low voice and took his phone toward the door. His suit pulled smoothly across his back. “Work?” Rory asked. “Yes.” Eva looked after him, then back. “Not interesting.” “That usually means very interesting.” “No. It means expensive and dull.” Rory accepted the glass Silas placed before her. Whiskey, a small one, no ice. He set a gin and tonic in front of Eva, though she had not ordered. Either he had served her earlier or he had guessed with irritating accuracy. He leaned slightly on his right leg, easing the old knee, and moved away. Eva traced the rim of her glass but didn’t drink. “You work here?” “I live upstairs.” “Oh.” “And work part-time for a restaurant. Deliveries.” Rory held up damp hands, as if the evidence had not already saturated her sleeves. “Glamorous stuff.” “I wasn’t thinking—” “You were.” Eva’s mouth closed. Rory regretted it immediately, not because it was untrue, but because truth delivered too fast could be indistinguishable from cruelty. The bar murmured around them. A burst of laughter near the toilets. The dry shuffle of cards from two old men by the window. Rain tapping the glass like someone who had forgotten a key. Eva sat very straight. She had always had good posture when she was trying not to feel anything. “I thought you’d be a barrister by now.” “So did my father.” “And you?” Rory looked into the whiskey. The surface caught the green neon and turned it swamp-coloured. “I thought a lot of things because people handed them to me already thought. Turns out that’s not the same as wanting.” Eva nodded slowly. “Fair.” “What about you?” Rory asked. “Last I heard you were doing charity admin in Brixton and living with three people and a damp problem.” “That was a long time ago.” “Yes,” Rory said. “It was.” The words sat there. Years arranged themselves around them like empty chairs. Eva finally drank. “I work in crisis consultancy now.” “That sounds like a job title invented to stop follow-up questions.” “It mostly is.” A corner of her mouth lifted. “Companies do stupid things. Governments do worse things. People panic. I tell them how to panic less publicly.” “Expensive and dull.” “Exactly.” Rory studied her. The suit, the watch, the careful hands. Eva’s nails were short, buffed, colourless. No bitten cuticles, no ink on her fingers, none of the old chaos she had worn as proof of life. “You look…” Rory began, and stopped. Eva rescued her with a sharper smile. “Different?” “Yes.” “That’s the polite version.” “I’m incredibly polite now. London softened me.” Eva laughed again, and this time the old note slipped through. It hurt. “I had to change,” Eva said. “Or I thought I did.” Rory waited. One of the things Silas had taught her, though he would deny ever teaching anything so sentimental, was that silence made people choose what kind of truth they could bear. Eva looked toward the wall of photographs. One showed a woman in a cloche hat leaning against a motorcar, smiling as if she’d just stolen it. “After you left Cardiff, everything felt—unfinished. I don’t know. I kept expecting you to ring and say you’d found somewhere safe, you’d got a job, you’d killed Evan with a kitchen appliance.” “I considered a kettle.” “Practical.” “Welsh.” Eva’s smile faded. “You did ring. A few times.” “I did.” “I didn’t answer enough.” There it was. Not the whole of it, but a door opening onto the room where they had stored it all. Rory pressed her thumb into the side of her glass. “You had your own life.” “That’s what I told myself.” “It was true.” “It was convenient.” Eva’s voice lowered. “You were in pieces. You were here because I told you to come. And then once you did, once it was real and messy and not just me being heroic over the phone, I didn’t know what to do with you.” Rory felt heat rise behind her ribs, an old flare she had mistaken for anger many times because anger was easier to carry in public. “You weren’t responsible for me,” she said. “No, but I was your friend.” “Those aren’t the same thing.” “They’re not separate either.” Rory looked away first. Across the room, Silas was speaking to a young woman at the bar. He had his mild public face on, the one that made strangers feel safe telling him secrets they later pretended were jokes. His limp showed as he turned, slight but unmistakable, a hitch time had written into him and failed to erase. Everyone changed. Bodies kept minutes better than clocks. “When I first got here,” Rory said, surprising herself, “I slept on your floor for three nights.” “I remember.” “You gave me the bed. You said floors built character and you were already insufferable.” “I remember that too.” “You made tea in that awful saucepan because the kettle sparked.” “And you said the tea tasted like pasta.” “It did.” Eva laughed softly into her glass. Rory let the memory warm for a second before touching the bruise beneath it. “Then you stopped coming home until late. Then I stopped waiting up. Then I moved into a room in Camden with a window that wouldn’t shut and a woman called Priya who labelled her bananas.” Eva closed her eyes briefly. “I should have helped you find somewhere better.” “You did help.” “Not enough.” “No. Not enough.” The honesty stunned them both into silence. Rory had not planned to say it. For years, she had defended Eva in absentia with the ferocity of someone defending her own choices. Eva got her out. Eva had been young. Eva didn’t know. Eva owed her nothing. Each sentence was true and incomplete. None of them explained the nights Rory had sat on a mattress under a damp patch shaped like Ireland, staring at her phone, willing it to light with a name that didn’t. Eva took the blow without flinching. That, too, was new. “You’re right,” she said. Rory hated that she had wanted an argument. Arguments had handles. Regret was all surface; there was nowhere to grip. “I wasn’t exactly easy,” Rory said. “You were terrified.” “I was sharp.” “You were terrified and sharp.” Eva looked at her directly. “You made jokes like they were sandbags. You’d flinch if someone raised their voice in another room. You pretended not to know Evan was still texting you. I saw more than I admitted.” Rory’s hand went cold around the glass. Evan’s name changed the air. Not dramatically; the bar did not dim, no glass shattered, no wind forced the door. But inside Rory, some small animal woke and listened. “He stopped eventually,” she said. “Good.” “Yes.” “Is he—” “I don’t know.” Eva nodded. She had enough sense not to ask if Rory wanted to. Outside, someone shouted for a taxi. The door opened, bringing in wet air and the smell of petrol. The silver-haired man returned, paused at Eva’s shoulder, and murmured something. Eva’s face composed itself so quickly Rory felt she had seen a curtain drop. “Five minutes,” Eva said to him. He didn’t look pleased, but he left them again. Rory raised an eyebrow. “Your minder?” “My client.” “Your client stands like he’s memorising exits.” “So do half the people in this bar.” “Occupational hazard.” Eva glanced toward Silas. “I wondered what kind of place this was.” “The kind that serves alcohol.” “And hides rooms behind bookshelves?” Rory looked at her sharply. Eva’s smile was faint. “Relax. I saw a man vanish into Dickens earlier. Either London has got more literary or that shelf is a door.” Despite herself, Rory smiled. “Both can be true.” “You always did like impossible explanations.” “I liked correct ones. People found that irritating.” “I didn’t.” “You absolutely did.” “I found it comforting.” Eva leaned back, and for a moment the expensive suit seemed like costume, something she might unzip and step out of if the night were kinder. “You’d look at chaos and immediately start sorting it. Even when we were kids. Remember Mrs. Pritchard’s classroom after the ceiling leak?” “The buckets?” “You made a seating chart based on drip frequency.” “It was efficient.” “You were eleven.” “Water damage respects no age.” Eva’s laugh came full then, unpolished and sudden. A few heads turned. Rory felt something loosen and ache. Then Eva’s eyes shone, and she looked down too late to hide it. Rory pretended not to notice. There were mercies between friends, even old ones, even failed ones. “I did look for you online,” Eva said after a while. “A few years ago. I found nothing.” “I’m not hiding. I’m just boring.” “You’re not boring.” “You don’t know that.” Eva absorbed that. Her fingers tightened around the stem of her glass. “No. I suppose I don’t.” The admission landed heavier than apology. They were strangers with evidence. That was the shape of it. They knew childhood bedrooms, parents’ voices, first embarrassments, the geography of each other’s fear. Eva knew Rory had a crescent scar on her left wrist from falling through a greenhouse pane at nine, and that Rory hated lilies because a funeral director had once told her mother they were elegant. Rory knew Eva used to count steps when anxious and had once written a furious letter to the BBC over a mispronounced Welsh place name. And yet neither knew what the other ate for breakfast now, what kept her awake, what number to ring in an emergency. Time had not erased them. It had made them inaccurate. “I thought about calling,” Rory said. “Many times.” Eva looked up. “I’d get as far as your name. Then I’d think, what if she doesn’t answer? Or worse, what if she does and sounds pleased in that awful way people do when they want the conversation over from the start.” “I wouldn’t have.” “You don’t know that either.” “No,” Eva said. “I don’t.” The rain thickened against the windows. Silas dimmed the lights over the bar by a fraction, settling the room deeper into itself. Rory could smell orange peel, old varnish, wet wool. Her whiskey had gone untouched long enough to seem accusatory. She drank. It burned cleanly. Eva watched her. “Are you happy?” Rory nearly laughed. It was such a blunt question, so young in its ambition, as if happiness were an object one might have misplaced under a coat. “I’m better,” she said. Eva nodded like she understood the distinction. “I have a room upstairs where the window shuts,” Rory said. “A boss who shouts because she cares and because she enjoys shouting. Silas downstairs, who pretends he isn’t feeding every stray in a two-mile radius. Work that doesn’t follow me home unless the containers leak. I read what I want. I sleep most nights. I don’t ask permission to leave rooms.” She looked at Eva. “It’s not a fairy tale. But it’s mine.” Eva’s face changed again, softly this time, something like grief and relief meeting without shaking hands. “I’m glad.” “Are you?” “Happy?” Eva smiled, but it failed before it formed. “I’m successful.” “That bad?” “Some days it’s excellent camouflage.” Rory waited. Eva looked toward her client, who stood near the door with his phone pressed to his ear, framed by green neon. “I have a flat in Clerkenwell with windows that don’t open properly because they’re original sash and apparently that’s charming. I own three coats that cost more than my first car. People listen when I talk. Men twice my age ask for my opinion and pretend it was theirs all along. I haven’t had a flatmate in years.” “And?” “And sometimes I miss the damp problem.” Rory smiled despite the sadness of it. “That must have been some damp.” “It was honest.” Eva rubbed her thumb over her watch strap. “Everything now is strategy. Even kindness. Especially kindness. I spent years becoming someone nobody could dismiss, and somewhere along the way I became someone I’m not sure I’d have liked.” Rory thought of the girl with the hacked fringe and the unlit cigarette, the girl who had said come tonight and meant it. “I’d have liked you.” “You liked everyone then.” “No, I didn’t. I was just quieter about it.” Eva’s eyes crinkled. “You? Quiet?” “I contained multitudes.” “You contained footnotes.” “Footnotes are where the truth hides.” They smiled at each other, and the years between them did not vanish. They never did in real life. They stood there still, a crowded, patient presence. But for a breath, the distance became visible rather than endless, and that was something. Eva reached into her inner jacket pocket and took out a card. Heavy cream stock, black lettering. Of course. She held it between two fingers, then hesitated. Rory looked at it. A small rectangle pretending to solve a large problem. “You don’t have to,” Eva said. “I know.” “I’d like to see you again. Properly. Coffee, dinner, a walk in the rain because apparently that’s your preferred habitat.” Rory took the card. Their fingers brushed. Eva’s hand was cool. On the card: EVANGELINE PRICE. Crisis Strategy. A number. An email. No trace of the girl who had once signed notes E.V.A. because she said full names were for headstones and court summons. “Evangeline,” Rory said. Eva grimaced. “Clients trust syllables.” “My father would adore that sentence.” “Your father terrified me.” “He terrifies judges for a living. It spills over.” “How is he?” “Older. Still certain I’ll come to my senses and sit the conversion course.” “And your mum?” “Still teaching. Still pretending she doesn’t know Dad rings me after every family gathering to ask if I’m eating enough.” Eva smiled. “Some things don’t change.” Rory slipped the card into her coat pocket. “Some do.” Eva nodded. “Yes.” Her client approached again, this time not bothering to hide impatience. “Eva.” “One moment.” “We need to go.” Rory looked from him to her. “Crisis?” “Always.” Eva stood. So did Rory, though she wasn’t sure why. Habit, manners, the body recognising an ending before the mind approved. For a second they faced each other awkwardly. Once, they would have hugged without thought, clumsy and fierce. Now the space between them demanded negotiation. Eva opened her arms a little, uncertain. Rory stepped in before courage could expire. The hug was brief at first, all shoulders and damp wool. Then Eva exhaled, and her hand pressed hard between Rory’s shoulder blades, and something old passed through Rory—not forgiveness, not yet, not all at once, but the memory of being known before she learned to hide efficiently. Eva smelled of bergamot and rain and some expensive clean fabric scent. Not saucepan tea. Not cheap smoke. Not the Cardiff past. But underneath, skin-warm and human, she was still Eva. Rory pulled back first. Her throat felt tight, which annoyed her. “I’ll ring,” she said. Eva searched her face. “Will you?” Rory could have lied kindly. Instead she gave the only truth she had. “I’ll try.” Eva accepted it like something precious and breakable. “Okay.” The client opened the door. Rain noise swelled. Eva paused on the threshold under the green neon, half turned. For an instant the light made her look strange and vivid, someone caught between identities: the old friend, the polished stranger, the woman time had made and unmade. “Rory,” she said. “Yes?” “I’m sorry.” The words were small. They did not repair anything. They did not return missed calls or soften bad mattresses or unspend the years. But they entered the room and stayed. Rory nodded. “Me too.” Eva stepped into the rain. The door shut, muting the city again. Rory stood with her hand in her pocket, fingers resting against the edge of the card. Silas appeared beside her without sound, which was one of his more irritating talents. “Well,” he said. She did not look at him. “Don’t.” “I said one word.” “It had eyebrows.” He glanced toward the door. “Old friend?” “Yes.” “Good one?” Rory watched the rain blur Eva’s figure through the window until it joined the dark and the traffic and became only movement. “I don’t know anymore.” Silas considered that. His signet ring tapped once against the bar top. “Knowing isn’t always the first step.” “What is?” “Opening the door when they knock. Or not. Depends if they’re selling religion.” Despite herself, Rory laughed. It came out uneven. He nudged her whiskey closer. “Theo delivered your noodles. Hughes complained they were early.” “That’s impossible.” “Some men build their identities around dissatisfaction.” Rory picked up the glass. The whiskey had warmed in the room’s heat. “Silas?” “Hm?” “Did you ever run into someone you used to be close to and realise you’d both become people who wouldn’t have met twice?” His face, usually arranged in careful shades of amusement, went still. In the low light, the grey in his auburn beard showed bright as wire. He looked past her to one of the black-and-white photographs on the wall, a street in Prague slick with rain, though perhaps Rory only imagined the location because she knew enough to wound herself with guesses. “Yes,” he said. “More than once.” “What did you do?” “Usually?” His mouth crooked. “I handled it badly.” “And unusually?” “I let time be time. Not a villain. Not an excuse. Just weather.” He reached for a glass behind the bar. “Then I decided whether I wanted to get wet again.” Rory looked down at her boots, still dark with rainwater, at the floorboards she had dripped on, at the small puddle already losing its edges. In her pocket, Eva’s card rested against her fingers. Heavy stock. Black letters. A door, maybe. Or only paper. The Raven’s Nest gathered around her: the old maps, the hidden room, Silas’ quiet movements, strangers murmuring under amber light while London washed itself clean and failed and tried again. Upstairs, her room waited with its shutting window. Her life waited. Not grand, not settled, but hers. Rory finished the whiskey. It burned less this time. Outside, the green neon hummed in the rain, stubborn as a signal.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags43
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva leaned back [back]"
1"The Raven’s Nest gathered around [around]"
dialogueSentences215
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.047
effectiveRatio0.019
89.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4223
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count2
5
adverb"quickly"
count1
6
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"softly"
5"quickly"
6"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4223
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"charm"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"tenderness"
count1
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word"flicker"
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word"familiar"
count1
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word"eyebrow"
count2
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
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word"shattered"
count1
11
word"absolutely"
count1
12
word"comforting"
count1
13
word"efficient"
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highlights
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1"charm"
2"flicked"
3"measured"
4"tenderness"
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6"familiar"
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8"traced"
9"silence"
10"shattered"
11"absolutely"
12"comforting"
13"efficient"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences314
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences314
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"watch"
2"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences489
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4219
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions48
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Despite herself, Rory laughed."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions194
wordCount2887
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity2.77
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
London2
Carter2
Raven3
Nest3
Golden1
Empress1
Soho1
Rory71
Godard1
Silas13
Russian1
Blackwood1
Aegean2
Cardiff2
Come1
Eva80
English1
Archer1
Street1
Open1
Ireland1
Welsh1
Strategy1
Prague1
Upstairs1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Empress"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Blackwood"
7"Eva"
8"Open"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Russian"
3"Cardiff"
4"English"
5"Archer"
6"Street"
7"Ireland"
8"Welsh"
9"Prague"
globalScore0.114
windowScore0
82.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences184
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like shelter from him"
1"looked like a small accident"
2"looked like it measured more than time"
3"something like grief and relief meeting with"
4"appeared beside her without sound, which was one of his more irritating talents"
34.08% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches7
per1kWords1.659
wordCount4219
matches
0"no choice but"
1"Not the whole of it, but a door opening onto the room"
2"not forgiveness, not yet, not all at once, but the memory of being known before she learned to hide efficie"
3"not yet, not all at once, but the memory of being known before she learned to hide efficie"
4"not all at once, but the memory of being known before she learned to hide efficie"
5"Not grand, not settled, but hers"
6"not settled, but hers"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences489
matches
0"knew that laugh"
1"was that silence"
2"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs277
mean15.23
std18.33
cv1.204
sampleLengths
023
168
216
33
487
56
666
723
87
99
1010
1130
1236
1332
1428
152
161
173
186
198
2016
213
2249
2318
241
2577
2614
2790
2812
293
306
3122
3226
3342
349
3523
365
3734
381
3929
403
416
4225
4334
4424
4549
466
4713
482
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences314
matches
0"was cropped"
1"been negotiated"
2"being known"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs525
matches
0"was offering"
1"was preparing"
2"was trying"
3"was speaking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences489
ratio0.008
matches
0"Soy, ginger, chilli oil, fried garlic—Golden Empress clung to her coat like a second job, which, technically, it was."
1"Regret was all surface; there was nowhere to grip."
2"Not dramatically; the bar did not dim, no glass shattered, no wind forced the door."
3"Then Eva exhaled, and her hand pressed hard between Rory’s shoulder blades, and something old passed through Rory—not forgiveness, not yet, not all at once, but the memory of being known before she learned to hide efficiently."
84.20% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1543
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick red-brown tumble"
adverbCount79
adverbRatio0.05119896305897602
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.012313674659753726
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences489
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences489
mean8.63
std8.34
cv0.967
sampleLengths
023
136
213
319
416
53
612
718
827
930
106
1110
127
1349
148
1515
167
179
1810
1910
2020
2110
2212
2314
2410
2515
267
2726
282
292
301
313
326
338
342
352
3612
373
389
392
409
417
4222
4318
441
4536
4617
4712
482
493
45.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.2719836400817996
totalSentences489
uniqueOpeners133
62.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences268
matches
0"Just a short sound of"
1"Then Eva’s eyes shone, and"
2"Once, they would have hugged"
3"Then Eva exhaled, and her"
4"Instead she gave the only"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences268
matches
0"She pushed in with her"
1"She took the towel and"
2"Her black hair, cut blunt"
3"His hazel eyes flicked over"
4"She knew that laugh before"
5"I mean it."
6"Her hair, once a thick"
7"She wore a tailored charcoal"
8"She was slimmer than Rory"
9"Her eyes were the same."
10"He said nothing."
11"He rarely interrupted history when"
12"He looked up briefly, registered"
13"It was polished, placed on"
14"He was offering a retreat."
15"She should take it."
16"Her phone would regain signal."
17"She followed Eva to the"
18"His suit pulled smoothly across"
19"He set a gin and"
ratio0.201
64.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount212
totalSentences268
matches
0"The rain came down with"
1"Aurora Carter stood under the"
2"The plastic carrier bags in"
3"Soy, ginger, chilli oil, fried"
4"A cab hissed past the"
5"The Raven’s Nest always looked"
6"She pushed in with her"
7"The bell above the door"
8"Conversation bent around her and"
9"Thursday night, just past nine,"
10"Silas Blackwood looked up from"
11"The action was so habitual"
12"Rory crossed to the bar"
13"Silas slid a bar towel"
14"The silver signet ring on"
15"She took the towel and"
16"Her black hair, cut blunt"
17"His hazel eyes flicked over"
18"Rory went still."
19"Faces blurred, bodies altered, names"
ratio0.791
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences268
matches
0"To strangers, it was old"
1"To Rory, it was a"
2"Before she could answer, someone"
3"Either he had served her"
4"because she said full names"
5"Now the space between them"
ratio0.022
95.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences106
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood under the green neon wash of The Raven’s Nest sign and dug her thumb into the cracked screen of her phone, trying to coax the delivery app i…"
1"His hazel eyes flicked over her in the quiet, assessing way that would have been rude from anyone else and somehow felt like shelter from him."
2"She was slimmer than Rory remembered, or maybe only harder, as though the soft parts had been negotiated away."
3"Life would reassemble itself around practical failure, which was at least familiar."
4"None of them explained the nights Rory had sat on a mattress under a damp patch shaped like Ireland, staring at her phone, willing it to light with a name that …"
5"It was such a blunt question, so young in its ambition, as if happiness were an object one might have misplaced under a coat."
6"Eva looked toward her client, who stood near the door with his phone pressed to his ear, framed by green neon."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags43
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory held up, as if the evidence had not already saturated her sleeves"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags27
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"film students arguing (film student arguing)"
dialogueSentences215
tagDensity0.126
leniency0.251
rawRatio0.074
effectiveRatio0.019
87.9399%