| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she called again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 81.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1589 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "precisely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1589 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "profound" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "encounter" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 39 | | totalWords | 1594 | | ratio | 0.024 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory, I need you. The grove, midnight. Come alone." | | 1 | "watched" | | 2 | "her" | | 3 | "Of course you can feel us. We want you to feel us. That’s the point." | | 4 | "Eva. Eva. Which one was Eva? There have been so many." | | 5 | "watching" | | 6 | "singing" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1501 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.73 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 11 | | Eva | 10 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly" | | 1 | "felt like it was trying to burn its way" | | 2 | "silver that seemed to come from the wrong direction" | | 3 | "silence that seemed to have depth, like water pressing against her eardrums" | | 4 | "felt like a voice if voices could be ma" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.137 | | wordCount | 1594 | | matches | | 0 | "Not observed, not monitored, but *watched* in the way a cat watches a mouse, with patience" | | 1 | "not monitored, but *watched* in the way a cat watches a mouse, with patience" | | 2 | "Not toward the moonlight, but toward *her*, their petals unfurling to reveal centers" | | 3 | "Not with words, not precisely, but with a pressure against her mind" | | 4 | "not precisely, but with a pressure against her mind" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "saw that the" | | 1 | "realized that she" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 46.88 | | std | 26.77 | | cv | 0.571 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 83 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 90 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 77 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 86 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 75 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 72 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 67 | | 21 | 61 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 73 | | 25 | 70 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 72 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 58 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 30 |
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| 98.25% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "been disconnected" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 10 | | totalVerbs | 244 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "was falling" | | 2 | "were trying" | | 3 | "was testing" | | 4 | "was being" | | 5 | "was blazing" | | 6 | "was wearing" | | 7 | "were *watching" | | 8 | "was coming" | | 9 | "was coming" |
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| 32.97% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the air pressed against her skin like cold fingers, and the scent was wrong — damp earth and old metal, like the smell of a wound." | | 1 | "In the silence that followed, Aurora became aware of a new sensation — the distinct, creeping certainty that she was being watched." | | 2 | "The wet breathing from her left was closer now, and she could smell it — a sweet, cloying scent like overripe fruit and something chemical beneath, something that burned the back of her throat." | | 3 | "Their faces — if they could be called faces — were turned toward her with an attention that was almost reverent." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 397 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.037783375314861464 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010075566750629723 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 15.33 | | std | 10.14 | | cv | 0.661 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 45.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3557692307692308 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Then her boots hit solid" | | 1 | "Then, gradually, she became aware" | | 2 | "*Of course you can feel" | | 3 | "Then the light faded, and" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 89.47% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the silver chain" | | 1 | "Its deep crimson surface pulsed" | | 2 | "She’d come because Eva’s message" | | 3 | "It bent the wrong way," | | 4 | "She’d been here before, twice," | | 5 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 6 | "She’d learned enough in her" | | 7 | "It had never glowed like" | | 8 | "It had never felt like" | | 9 | "She should leave." | | 10 | "It hung low and heavy," | | 11 | "Its light fell strangely, painting" | | 12 | "she called again, and this" | | 13 | "She pressed her back against" | | 14 | "She pulled away quickly, but" | | 15 | "Its light painted the immediate" | | 16 | "she said, because she’d learned" | | 17 | "We want you to feel" | | 18 | "She’d dealt with fae before," | | 19 | "She’d learned their rules, their" |
| | ratio | 0.326 | |
| 86.32% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant grew warm against" | | 1 | "She pulled the silver chain" | | 2 | "Its deep crimson surface pulsed" | | 3 | "She’d come because Eva’s message" | | 4 | "*Rory, I need you." | | 5 | "The grove, midnight." | | 6 | "The grass beneath her boots" | | 7 | "It bent the wrong way," | | 8 | "The wildflowers that bloomed year-round" | | 9 | "Aurora stopped at the boundary." | | 10 | "The standing stones loomed above" | | 11 | "She’d been here before, twice," | | 12 | "The grove had been beautiful" | | 13 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 14 | "The sound of it died" | | 15 | "The heartstone grew hotter against" | | 16 | "She’d learned enough in her" | | 17 | "It had never glowed like" | | 18 | "It had never felt like" | | 19 | "She should leave." |
| | ratio | 0.747 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Even though Eva had been" | | 1 | "Even though the message had" | | 2 | "Now the air pressed against" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 17 | | matches | | 0 | "Through the trees ahead, she could just make out the dark shapes of the standing stones, their ancient oak forms twisted into silhouettes against a sky that hel…" | | 1 | "Come alone.* And because Eva was the one person who’d never asked anything of her, the one who’d pulled her from the wreckage of her old life and found her work…" | | 2 | "The wildflowers that bloomed year-round in the grove were closed now, their petals drawn tight like tiny fists." | | 3 | "In the distance, somewhere beyond the standing stones, a bird called out in a voice that was almost human and then fell abruptly silent." | | 4 | "The world twisted, colors bleeding into each other like wet paint, and for a moment she was falling sideways through a darkness that had texture and weight." | | 5 | "It hung low and heavy, twice the size it should have been, its surface mottled with shadows that didn’t correspond to any lunar geography she knew." | | 6 | "Its light fell strangely, painting the clearing in shades of silver that seemed to come from the wrong direction." | | 7 | "The wildflowers that carpeted the grove floor were still closed, their stems bent at angles that suggested they were trying to press themselves back into the ea…" | | 8 | "A soft scratching from the direction of the stones, as if something with too many legs was testing the boundary she’d just crossed." | | 9 | "In the silence that followed, Aurora became aware of a new sensation — the distinct, creeping certainty that she was being watched." | | 10 | "Not toward the moonlight, but toward *her*, their petals unfurling to reveal centers that were too dark and too deep, like small mouths yawning wide." | | 11 | "Not with words, not precisely, but with a pressure against her mind that felt like a voice if voices could be made of cold and shadow and the spaces between hea…" | | 12 | "The pressure against her mind shifted, became something that might have been amusement if amusement could curdle milk and kill small birds in flight." | | 13 | "The wet breathing from her left was closer now, and she could smell it — a sweet, cloying scent like overripe fruit and something chemical beneath, something th…" | | 14 | "She turned, putting the standing stone at her back again despite its warmth and its shifting patterns, and tried to track the movements that flickered at the ed…" | | 15 | "One of them was wearing something that might have been clothes, fabric that hung in tatters from a frame that was too tall and too thin." | | 16 | "Another crawled on all fours, or perhaps on all sixes, its limbs articulating in directions that Aurora’s mind kept trying to correct." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "it said, and its voice was the sound of branches breaking under snow" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |