| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.583 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1177 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 10.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1177 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "mosaic" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "sentinel" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "quickened" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "lurched" | | 14 | "perfect" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "grave" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.38% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 26 | | totalWords | 1173 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "Come to the grove at moonrise. Bring the Heartstone. You'll have your answers." | | 1 | "Don't stare. Don't engage. You're not trapped unless you let yourself be trapped." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.04% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1049 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | October | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 13 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.88 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.853 | | wordCount | 1173 | | matches | | 0 | "not the gentle warmth she'd come to know, but something urgent" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 30.87 | | std | 20.45 | | cv | 0.663 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 66 | | 11 | 68 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 58 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 45 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 58 | | 37 | 13 |
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| 95.04% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "been pinned" | | 1 | "been swallowed" | | 2 | "being watched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | |
| 38.01% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was wrong here—too still, too heavy, carrying the thick perfume of blossoms that shouldn't exist in autumn." | | 1 | "Something moved—a flicker at the edge of her vision, there and gone before her eyes could track it." | | 2 | "The sound came from behind her, from the direction of the largest standing stone—a massive slab of gray-green rock that stood twice her height, its surface scarred with spirals she'd never noticed before." | | 3 | "\"I am what remains of the pact your bloodline broke. I am the debt that has gone unpaid for three generations.\" The shadow tilted its head, and in the motion, Rory caught a glimpse of eyes—too many, too bright, burning in the darkness like coals." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 132 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.03787878787878788 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 10.76 | | std | 8.15 | | cv | 0.758 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 33 |
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| 38.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.29357798165137616 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the stones." | | 1 | "Only the flowers." | | 2 | "Only the suffocating stillness." | | 3 | "Even the insects had fallen" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "You'll have your answers.*" | | 1 | "She hadn't told anyone." | | 2 | "They'd both have been right," | | 3 | "She'd walked this route before," | | 4 | "It had been quiet for" | | 5 | "She pushed through the last" | | 6 | "she said, her voice flat" | | 7 | "She turned in a slow" | | 8 | "She snapped her head toward" | | 9 | "She'd been in tight spots" | | 10 | "She'd talked her way out" | | 11 | "Her stomach lurched." | | 12 | "She looked away, forced herself" | | 13 | "You're not trapped unless you" | | 14 | "She'd learned that lesson the" | | 15 | "It spoke of hunger." | | 16 | "She steadied herself." | | 17 | "It started at the edges" | | 18 | "Its voice was the rustle" | | 19 | "It was not a pleasant" |
| | ratio | 0.237 | |
| 56.77% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air in Richmond" | | 1 | "Rory pulled the collar of" | | 2 | "The message had been pinned" | | 3 | "You'll have your answers.*" | | 4 | "She hadn't told anyone." | | 5 | "Eva would have called it" | | 6 | "Silas would have told her" | | 7 | "They'd both have been right," | | 8 | "The path through the park" | | 9 | "She'd walked this route before," | | 10 | "The grass beneath her boots" | | 11 | "Rory's hand went to the" | | 12 | "The deep crimson gemstone lay" | | 13 | "It had been quiet for" | | 14 | "She pushed through the last" | | 15 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 16 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in" | | 17 | "The air was wrong here—too" | | 18 | "Rory stopped at the center" | | 19 | "The pendant pulsed harder now," |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The deep crimson gemstone lay warm against her sternum, thrumming with a pulse that wasn't her own." | | 1 | "The air was wrong here—too still, too heavy, carrying the thick perfume of blossoms that shouldn't exist in autumn." | | 2 | "This was a quiet that pressed against her eardrums, that made her hyperaware of her own breathing, the rustle of her jacket, the grinding of soil under her boot…" | | 3 | "The sound came from behind her, from the direction of the largest standing stone—a massive slab of gray-green rock that stood twice her height, its surface scar…" | | 4 | "Carved lines that shifted and writhed like living things, rearranging themselves into patterns that hurt to look at." | | 5 | "A chorus of voices speaking in a language that slithered through her skull, too fast for her conscious mind to parse, but her bones understood." | | 6 | "Of the certainty that she was being watched by something that had been waiting for her a very long time." | | 7 | "Something in between, tall and slender and wrong, with limbs that bent at angles that defied anatomy." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice flat against the silence" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |