Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2DKBSHW9M2EP1Y4SZP836C

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Duration:
26.7s
Cost:
$0.000664
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DeepSeek

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign flickered, casting a sickly emerald glow across the wet pavement. Rory stood beneath it, her delivery bag slung over one shoulder, the scent of jasmine rice and soy sauce clinging to her jacket. She’d made this drop a hundred times—a late-night order for the regular at table seven, the one who always tipped in crumpled fives and never met her eyes. She pushed open the heavy oak door. The Raven’s Nest exhaled its usual breath: stale beer, beeswax, and the ghost of a dozen conversations. Silas was behind the bar, polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better days. He nodded once, a gesture of acknowledgment so subtle it could have been a twitch. Rory nodded back, crossing the worn floorboards toward table seven. Then she stopped. The man at the bar turned on his stool, a pint of stout in his hand, his profile catching the dim light from a brass sconce. He’d shaved the scruff, trimmed the hair that used to hang past his collar. He wore a suit—grey, well-tailored, the kind that cost more than her month’s rent. But the shape of his jaw, the way he held his shoulders like a man bracing for impact, was unmistakable. “Rory?” His voice hit her like a punch to the chest. Low. Measured. Wrong. She’d last heard that voice through a phone speaker, crackling with distance and the sound of a door slamming in the background. *I can’t do this anymore.* Seven words. She’d replayed them in her head so many times they’d lost all meaning, become just a string of sounds she couldn’t unhear. “Liam.” She said his name flat. A statement of fact, not a greeting. He slid off the stool, and she noticed the slight hitch in his movement—not a limp, like Silas’s, but a hesitation, as if his body remembered a life it no longer lived. He wore a silver watch on his left wrist. She remembered the day he’d bought it, second-hand from a stall in Camden, too big for him, the leather strap cracked and smelling of someone else’s sweat. This one was new. Sleek. Waterproof to two hundred meters. “You look…” He trailed off, searching for a word that wouldn’t land wrong. “…different.” Different. Not good. Not great. Just different. The word sat between them like a pebble in a shoe. “It’s been three years,” she said. She kept her voice even, the way you hold a mirror steady when you don’t want to see what’s reflected. “People change.” He winced. A flicker, there and gone, but she caught it. She’d always caught his tells, the micro-expressions he thought he hid so well. The way his left thumb rubbed his index finger when he was nervous. The way the corner of his mouth tightened when he was about to lie. He was doing neither now—just standing, exposed, the polished armor of his suit doing nothing to hide the boy she’d once known. “I’m sorry,” he said. “I should have called. I should have—” “You should have done a lot of things.” Rory set the delivery bag on a nearby table. She didn’t want to be holding it, didn’t want to feel like she was here on a job while he stood in front of her, a ghost from a life she’d buried. “But you didn’t. So let’s not pretend we’re going to have that conversation in a bar at midnight.” Silas raised an eyebrow from behind the counter, a silent question. Rory shook her head once. *I’ve got this.* Liam gestured to the empty stool beside him. “Can I buy you a drink? Please. Just one drink. And if you want me to leave after that, I will.” She wanted to say no. The word sat at the back of her throat, bitter and familiar. But there was something in his eyes—a rawness she hadn’t seen since the night he’d shown up at her flat in Cardiff, hollowed out by the news that his mother’s cancer had come back. That Liam had been brittle, a man made of dry leaves. This Liam was something else. Tempered. Polished. But she could still see the cracks. “One drink,” she said. “And you talk. I listen. Then we’re done.” He ordered two pints of the house pale ale. Silas pulled them with the same stoic efficiency he brought to everything, setting them on the bar with a quiet clunk. Rory took the seat beside Liam, keeping a stool of space between them. A buffer zone. Liam wrapped his hands around his glass. His nails were clean, trimmed. His palms looked smooth, the calluses from years of construction work faded to memory. “I’m a property developer now,” he said, staring at the amber liquid. “Can you believe it? Me. The guy who couldn’t hold down a job for more than six months.” “You were good with your hands.” The words slipped out before she could stop them. She regretted them instantly. They sounded like an accusation. Maybe they were. Liam’s jaw tightened. “I was angry. I didn’t know what to do with it, so I broke things. I broke us.” Rory took a long drink. The ale was cold and bitter, and it burned going down in a way she needed. “You broke me, Liam. For a while. But I put myself back together. That’s what I do.” He nodded, and she saw the sheen of moisture at the corner of his eyes before he blinked it away. “I know. You were always the strong one. I leaned on you, and I never knew how to carry my own weight.” “That’s not true.” She set the glass down. The wood had thousands of tiny scratches, patterns carved by years of glasses and fists and tears. “You carried me too, sometimes. You just didn’t know how to stop.” A beat of silence. The bar hummed around them—the clink of glasses, the low murmur of conversation from the corner booth, the creak of floorboards as Silas moved toward the back room. It felt like they were in a bubble, suspended in the amber glow of the lights. “My mother died,” Liam said, his voice barely above a whisper. “Six months after I left. She asked about you. On her last day, when she could barely speak, she asked if you were okay.” Rory’s chest tightened. She remembered Maggie Sullivan, a woman with hands like parchment and a laugh that could fill a room. She’d taught Rory to knit, fed her shepherd’s pie when she was too broke to buy groceries, held her when she sobbed about Evan. “I didn’t know,” Rory said. “I would have come to the funeral. You should have told me.” “I didn’t tell anyone. I couldn’t stand the idea of people looking at me with pity. I couldn’t stand the idea of you looking at me like I was something broken that needed fixing.” “You were broken, Liam. And so was I. That didn’t mean we had to stop being friends.” He laughed, a bitter, hollow sound. “Friends. Is that what we were?” Rory looked down at her wrist, at the crescent-shaped scar that had been there since she was seven, a souvenir from a fall off her bike. She’d been trying to show off for the neighbor kids, and Liam had been the one to pick her up, to carry her home, to sit with her while her mother bandaged the wound. “You were my best friend,” she said softly. “And then you weren’t. And I had to learn to live with that.” He lifted his pint. “To learning to live.” She clinked her glass against his, a toast that felt more like a dirge. They drank in silence. The ale sat warm in her stomach, loosening something she’d kept tight for three years. She looked at him—really looked—and saw the boy he’d been: the one who’d borrowed her jumper and never returned it, the one who’d climbed onto her fire escape at 3 a.m. after a fight with his father, the one who’d promised they’d always be okay. “You’re different,” she said, echoing his earlier words. “But not gone.” He almost smiled. “Neither are you.” The neon sign flickered outside, casting a green pulse through the frosted window. Rory finished her pint and stood. She picked up her delivery bag, the weight of it grounding her. “Take care of yourself, Liam.” He nodded, but didn’t say goodbye. She was grateful for that. As she pushed open the door, the night air hit her, cold and sharp. She heard the creak of the stool as he turned back to the bar. She didn’t look back. Instead, she let the weight of time settle against her ribs, heavy and familiar. Some regrets didn’t fade. They just got easier to carry.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.343
leniency0.686
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.057
89.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1480
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"softly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1480
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"measured"
2"flicker"
3"eyebrow"
4"familiar"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"whisper"
8"stomach"
9"echoing"
10"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences107
matches
0"was nervous"
1"was grateful"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords8
totalWords1472
ratio0.005
matches
0"I can’t do this anymore."
1"I’ve got this."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1160
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Liam"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Seven1
Silas5
Camden1
Different1
Rory11
Liam8
Cardiff1
Maggie1
Sullivan1
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Liam"
5"Maggie"
6"Sullivan"
7"Evan"
places
0"Camden"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like they were in a bubble, suspen"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.679
wordCount1472
matches
0"not a limp, like Silas’s, but a hesitation, as if his body remembered a life it no longer"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"heard that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean31.32
std22.28
cv0.711
sampleLengths
065
165
23
374
41
513
651
71
812
978
1014
1118
1228
1373
1411
1567
1619
1729
1876
1912
2046
2126
2230
2327
2421
2538
2642
2737
2848
2935
3045
3117
3234
3317
3412
3560
3621
378
3814
3964
4011
416
4231
435
4411
4532
4624
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"reflected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs203
matches
0"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences130
ratio0.054
matches
0"She’d made this drop a hundred times—a late-night order for the regular at table seven, the one who always tipped in crumpled fives and never met her eyes."
1"He wore a suit—grey, well-tailored, the kind that cost more than her month’s rent."
2"He slid off the stool, and she noticed the slight hitch in his movement—not a limp, like Silas’s, but a hesitation, as if his body remembered a life it no longer lived."
3"He was doing neither now—just standing, exposed, the polished armor of his suit doing nothing to hide the boy she’d once known."
4"But there was something in his eyes—a rawness she hadn’t seen since the night he’d shown up at her flat in Cardiff, hollowed out by the news that his mother’s cancer had come back."
5"The bar hummed around them—the clink of glasses, the low murmur of conversation from the corner booth, the creak of floorboards as Silas moved toward the back room."
6"She looked at him—really looked—and saw the boy he’d been: the one who’d borrowed her jumper and never returned it, the one who’d climbed onto her fire escape at 3 a.m."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1172
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.033276450511945395
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004266211604095563
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean11.32
std8.48
cv0.749
sampleLengths
014
123
228
37
417
516
615
710
83
926
1014
1114
1220
131
1410
151
161
171
1822
197
2022
211
225
237
2432
259
2627
274
281
295
3013
311
321
332
342
352
3611
376
3820
392
402
419
4213
4313
4414
4522
464
477
4817
4932
43.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3153846153846154
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences92
matches
0"Then she stopped."
1"Maybe they were."
2"Instead, she let the weight"
ratio0.033
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences92
matches
0"She’d made this drop a"
1"She pushed open the heavy"
2"He nodded once, a gesture"
3"He’d shaved the scruff, trimmed"
4"He wore a suit—grey, well-tailored,"
5"His voice hit her like"
6"She’d last heard that voice"
7"*I can’t do this anymore.*"
8"She’d replayed them in her"
9"She said his name flat."
10"He slid off the stool,"
11"He wore a silver watch"
12"She remembered the day he’d"
13"He trailed off, searching for"
14"She kept her voice even,"
15"She’d always caught his tells,"
16"He was doing neither now—just"
17"She didn’t want to be"
18"*I’ve got this.*"
19"She wanted to say no."
ratio0.5
3.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences92
matches
0"The green neon sign flickered,"
1"Rory stood beneath it, her"
2"She’d made this drop a"
3"She pushed open the heavy"
4"The Raven’s Nest exhaled its"
5"Silas was behind the bar,"
6"He nodded once, a gesture"
7"Rory nodded back, crossing the"
8"The man at the bar"
9"He’d shaved the scruff, trimmed"
10"He wore a suit—grey, well-tailored,"
11"His voice hit her like"
12"She’d last heard that voice"
13"*I can’t do this anymore.*"
14"She’d replayed them in her"
15"She said his name flat."
16"A statement of fact, not"
17"He slid off the stool,"
18"He wore a silver watch"
19"She remembered the day he’d"
ratio0.913
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Silas was behind the bar, polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better days."
1"He’d shaved the scruff, trimmed the hair that used to hang past his collar."
2"He wore a suit—grey, well-tailored, the kind that cost more than her month’s rent."
3"He slid off the stool, and she noticed the slight hitch in his movement—not a limp, like Silas’s, but a hesitation, as if his body remembered a life it no longe…"
4"He was doing neither now—just standing, exposed, the polished armor of his suit doing nothing to hide the boy she’d once known."
5"She remembered Maggie Sullivan, a woman with hands like parchment and a laugh that could fill a room."
6"Rory looked down at her wrist, at the crescent-shaped scar that had been there since she was seven, a souvenir from a fall off her bike."
7"She clinked her glass against his, a toast that felt more like a dirge."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Liam said, his voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.457
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.2144%