| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 71.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1764 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.97% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1764 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "glint" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "unspoken" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "profound" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "grave" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 75.47% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1787 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1757 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 0.51 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Pen | 1 | | Ponds | 1 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | October | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Corsa | 1 | | Sawyers | 1 | | Hill | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | London | 3 | | February | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Wetherspoons | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Christmas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Wetherspoons" | | 3 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Isabella" | | 3 | "Plantation" | | 4 | "Sawyers" | | 5 | "Hill" | | 6 | "London" | | 7 | "Christmas" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 89.76% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite learned to use yet" | | 1 | "looked like ordinary wood — no writhing," |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1787 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 40.61 | | std | 33.09 | | cv | 0.815 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 112 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 99 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 100 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 111 | | 13 | 74 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 86 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 99 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 102 | | 29 | 42 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 70 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 54 | | 34 | 66 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 65 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 50 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 62 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 7 |
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| 95.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was stretched" | | 2 | "were gone" |
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| 66.67% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 250 | | matches | | 0 | "was practically humming" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "were glowing" | | 3 | "was standing" | | 4 | "was screaming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 23 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.156 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d walked Richmond Park a hundred times in daylight — knew the curve of the path past Pen Ponds, the particular hunch of the old oaks near the Isabella Plantation — but at half past eleven on a moonless October night, the place might as well have been another country." | | 1 | "That was the only way she could explain it, even to herself — and she’d learned, over the past six weeks, not to try explaining things to anyone else." | | 2 | "Not dying — waiting." | | 3 | "Wildflowers — bluebells, foxgloves, something pale and star-shaped that she didn’t recognize — bloomed in defiant February profusion." | | 4 | "She could feel the boundary, somehow — a pressure against her skin like the moment before a thunderstorm, the air thick with something unspoken." | | 5 | "The pendant pulsed once — a sharp, hot throb — and Rory stepped forward." | | 6 | "The temperature dropped sharply enough to sting her cheeks, and the air took on a smell she couldn’t place — wet stone and crushed leaves and something beneath both that was sour and cold, like the inside of a long-sealed tomb." | | 7 | "She pressed her palm flat against the pendant and felt its warmth seep into her skin — the only point of heat in the whole strange clearing." | | 8 | "Three steps in, she realized she could see the flowers more clearly than she should — the pale star-shaped ones were glowing faintly, a soft luminescence that pooled at the base of the standing stones and ran like liquid light along the roots of the oaks." | | 9 | "Rory had seen stranger things in the past two months — had sealed a Hel portal with her own blood in the basement of a Wetherspoons, had watched a man’s shadow peel away from his body and crawl up a wall — but something about the box made her stomach clench." | | 10 | "It was a footstep — a single, distinct crunch of frost — and it came from outside the circle." | | 11 | "“Who’s there?” she called, and this time the silence didn’t eat the words — they came out thin and reedy, a child’s voice in a cathedral." | | 12 | "But the face was stretched over a skull that was too long and too narrow, and the smile didn’t stop where it should — it kept going, a wet red line disappearing into the shadows beneath its cheekbones." | | 13 | "She didn’t open it — every instinct she had was screaming at her not to open it — but she clutched it to her chest alongside the pendant and ran." | | 14 | "She saw them clearly as she stumbled — the pale star-shaped blooms unfurling into tiny, needle-fanged mouths that snapped at her ankles as she passed." | | 15 | "She broke through the far edge of the circle and the world snapped back into place — sound, cold, the distant hum of a city that had no idea what lived in its parks." | | 16 | "In the dim light of a London night, it looked like ordinary wood — no writhing, no wrong proportions." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1742 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "pale star-shaped ones" | | 1 | "pale star-shaped blooms" | | 2 | "tiny, needle-fanged mouths" |
| | adverbCount | 63 | | adverbRatio | 0.03616532721010333 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010907003444316877 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 16.39 | | std | 12.53 | | cv | 0.764 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 41 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 46 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 51.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3669724770642202 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 99.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the deer was gone," | | 1 | "Just a copse of birch" | | 2 | "Just a box." |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 85.35% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d walked Richmond Park a" | | 1 | "Her torch beam carved a" | | 2 | "She’d come because the pendant" | | 3 | "She’d never seen them before." | | 4 | "She’d walked this exact stretch" | | 5 | "She could feel the boundary," | | 6 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 7 | "She checked her phone." | | 8 | "she said out loud, because" | | 9 | "Her torch beam seemed to" | | 10 | "Her footsteps on the frost-crisped" | | 11 | "Her breathing made no sound." | | 12 | "She could feel the air" | | 13 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 14 | "She forced herself to walk" | | 15 | "It was the wrongness of" | | 16 | "It was the size of" | | 17 | "She didn’t want to touch" | | 18 | "It was a footstep —" | | 19 | "she called, and this time" |
| | ratio | 0.337 | |
| 78.81% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s feet knew the way" | | 1 | "She’d walked Richmond Park a" | | 2 | "Her torch beam carved a" | | 3 | "The beam caught the silver" | | 4 | "She’d come because the pendant" | | 5 | "That was the only way" | | 6 | "The Heartstone had started pulsing" | | 7 | "Whatever had called her here" | | 8 | "The standing stones appeared between" | | 9 | "She’d never seen them before." | | 10 | "She’d walked this exact stretch" | | 11 | "The earth within the circle" | | 12 | "Wildflowers — bluebells, foxgloves, something" | | 13 | "Rory stopped at the edge" | | 14 | "The smart thing, the sensible" | | 15 | "She could feel the boundary," | | 16 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 17 | "She checked her phone." | | 18 | "The battery had dropped from" | | 19 | "she said out loud, because" |
| | ratio | 0.762 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time she’d parked" | | 1 | "Now, walking into the dark" | | 2 | "Now, eight ancient oaks rose" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 59.52% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone had started pulsing against her sternum at ten o’clock sharp, a steady warmth that grew urgent the closer she got to the park’s western edge." | | 1 | "Inside, it was deeper and older, the black of a room that had never known a window." | | 2 | "Three steps in, she realized she could see the flowers more clearly than she should — the pale star-shaped ones were glowing faintly, a soft luminescence that p…" | | 3 | "One moment it was among the birches, and the next it was half a dozen paces nearer, and Rory hadn’t seen it cross the distance because her torch had flickered a…" | | 4 | "She caught an impression of long limbs and a face that was all wrong angles in the dark, and then the torch died completely, and she was standing in the cold gl…" | | 5 | "But the face was stretched over a skull that was too long and too narrow, and the smile didn’t stop where it should — it kept going, a wet red line disappearing…" | | 6 | "She saw them clearly as she stumbled — the pale star-shaped blooms unfurling into tiny, needle-fanged mouths that snapped at her ankles as she passed." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |