Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2E09AFCMZP9S797G1J6AA2

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Duration:
26.9s
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$0.000554
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DeepSeek

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The pendant had been warm for the last half hour, a steady, insistent pulse against her sternum like a second heartbeat. Rory had followed its pull off the main path through Richmond Park, past the last dog walker and the final jogger with their bobbing headlamp, until the trees closed in and the city sounds faded to nothing but the crunch of her own boots on frost-kissed grass. She’d come for answers. The unknown benefactor who’d left the Heartstone in her flat above Silas’ bar hadn’t left a note, only the thing itself, and its warmth had been the first real lead she’d had in weeks. Now the silver chain felt hot against her collarbone as she pushed through a tangle of brambles and stepped into the clearing. The Fae Grove. She’d heard Eva mention it once, in passing, with a strange look in her eyes that Rory had chosen not to press. Now she understood why. The standing stones ringed the glade like ancient teeth, their surfaces furred with moss that caught the thin moonlight and turned it silver. The grass underfoot was impossibly green for November, and wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed in clusters at the base of the oaks, their petals dark and velvety as bruises. It was wrong. Beautiful, but wrong, like a room in a dream where the furniture had been arranged just slightly askew. Rory pulled out her phone. No signal. The clock read 9:47 PM, but even as she watched, the numbers flickered, jumped to 10:02, then back to 9:31. She pocketed it and breathed slowly, deliberately, the way she did when Evan used to corner her in the kitchen demanding to know where she’d been. Cool-headed. That’s what people said about her. Cool-headed and quick. She’d need both tonight. The pendant pulsed again, a throb of heat that made her touch it through her jacket. It was pointing toward the largest of the standing stones, a slab of granite that split the moonlight into two unequal halves. The air here tasted different—copper and honey and something green and rotting, all at once. “Right,” she whispered to herself. “You came here for answers. Find the answer, get out.” The sound came from behind the stone. A soft, wet scrape, like something being dragged across wet grass. Rory froze. Her breath caught in her throat and she held it, straining to hear over the thud of her own pulse. The grove was silent. Not the silence of a cold November night with its rustle of dead leaves and distant traffic, but a dead silence, a held-breath silence, like the whole clearing was waiting to see what she would do. Nothing moved. The wildflowers didn’t sway. The moonlight didn’t shift. She took a step toward the stone. The scrape came again, louder this time, and now she could place it—it was coming from the other side of the monolith, low to the ground, rhythmic. Something breathing. Something that didn’t want her to hear it. Rory’s hand went to her pocket. She’d brought a small flashlight, a folding knife, a lighter. Pathetic tools against whatever lived in a fae-touched grove at night, but they were what she had. She pulled out the flashlight and clicked it on. The beam cut across the grass, illuminated the base of the standing stone, and showed her nothing. Just moss and dirt and a scatter of small white pebbles that caught the light like bone. She let out the breath she’d been holding. And the lights went out. Not the flashlight—that was still on, its beam still cutting a path across the grass—but the moon. One moment the grove had been bathed in that silver light, the next it was gone, swallowed by cloud or something else, and the clearing plunged into a darkness so absolute it felt solid against her skin. The pendant was cold. She hadn’t noticed it cooling down. One moment it had been a steady warmth against her chest, the next it was an ice-cold stone, pressing against her skin like a finger. She grabbed it through her jacket and felt the hardness of the gem, the sharp edges of the silver setting. It felt dead in her hand. The stones moved. They didn’t shift—they were too massive for that—but the shadows at their bases stretched and contracted, and a sound like grinding rock came from deep underground, vibrating up through the soles of her boots. The wildflowers at her feet began to writhe, their stems twisting, their petals curling inward like closing fists. Rory backed toward the treeline. Her heel hit something soft and she stumbled, looked down, and saw a hand. It was pale, almost luminous in the dim glow of her flashlight, and it was reaching up through the grass like a plant pushing toward the sun. Fingers uncurled. Nails, black and jagged, scraped the dirt. The hand was attached to an arm, which was attached to the ground, and the ground was moving, bulging upward, and she could see the shape of a body trying to force its way through the soil. She ran. The flashlight beam swung wildly as she crashed through the brambles, thorns tearing at her jacket, her jeans, her face. The branches clawed at her, hooked into her hair, and she pulled free with a ripping sound that was too loud in the dead air. Behind her, the grinding grew louder, and the wet scrape of something dragging itself across the earth. She didn’t look back. The path was gone. The path she’d taken, the gap in the bushes she’d pushed through, was simply not there anymore. In its place was a wall of hawthorn, its thorns long and black, slick with something that gleamed in the swinging light. Rory spun. The grove was behind her, the standing stones dark and silent, and in the center of the clearing, where she’d stood moments ago, a figure was rising from the grass. It was tall and thin, its limbs too long, its joints bending at angles that should have snapped. It had no face—just a smooth oval where features should have been, pale as milk, reflecting the light of her flashlight back at her in a flat, dead shine. It wore something that might have been a dress, or a shroud, or skin, and it was growing, stretching upward until its head cleared the top of the standing stones. Rory’s hand found the knife in her pocket. She pulled it out, clicked the blade open. The steel caught the light and she held it in front of her, a sad, ridiculous gesture, but she couldn’t not do something. The figure tilted its head. A sound came from its direction—not a voice, but a crack, like ice splitting on a frozen lake. It took a step toward her, and the wildflowers at its feet turned black and curled to ash. The pendant flared hot against her chest. Not warm. Hot enough to burn through her jacket, to sear the skin beneath. She gasped, grabbed it, and the stone was glowing, pulsing with a deep red light that bled through her fingers and cast her own shadow long across the grass. The figure stopped. Its head tilted the other way, and the crack came again, louder. Rory didn’t wait to see what it would do. She turned and ran straight at the hawthorn wall, threw her arms in front of her face, and plunged through. The thorns raked her arms, her shoulders, her scalp. One caught her cheek and tore a hot line across her skin. She pushed through, broke free on the other side, and stumbled onto the familiar dirt path of Richmond Park. The moon was out. The streetlights glowed in the distance. A car drove past on the road, its engine a mundane, beautiful sound. Rory collapsed to her knees on the grass and breathed. The pendant was warm again, a gentle pulse against her chest like a heart. She pulled it out from under her jacket and looked at it. The deep crimson gem glowed faintly from within, then dimmed, faded, settled back to its usual inert state. She touched her cheek. Her fingers came away wet with blood. The grove was behind her. The path she’d come from was just a path, dark and quiet, leading into the deeper woods. She could see the gap in the undergrowth where she’d pushed through, and beyond it, nothing but shadows and bare winter branches. She didn’t know what she’d found. She didn’t know if it had been a trap, a test, or a warning. But the pendant had answered her question, at least. She wasn’t alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1456
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1456
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"flickered"
3"pulsed"
4"throb"
5"silence"
6"rhythmic"
7"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1448
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1414
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone1
Fae1
Grove1
Eva1
Rory10
November2
Evan1
One3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.691
wordCount1448
matches
0"not a voice, but a crack, like ice splitting on a frozen lake"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean32.18
std23.71
cv0.737
sampleLengths
068
160
23
378
421
563
64
753
815
918
1062
1110
127
1337
1442
1534
168
175
1854
194
2057
213
2252
2319
2473
252
2662
274
2843
2932
3077
3139
3241
337
3458
3529
3640
3723
3810
3944
4011
4144
4220
439
443
88.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences107
matches
0"been arranged"
1"being dragged"
2"been bathed"
3"was gone"
4"was attached"
5"was attached"
6"was gone"
22.22% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs225
matches
0"was pointing"
1"was waiting"
2"was coming"
3"was reaching"
4"was rising"
5"was glowing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences108
ratio0.056
matches
0"The air here tasted different—copper and honey and something green and rotting, all at once."
1"The scrape came again, louder this time, and now she could place it—it was coming from the other side of the monolith, low to the ground, rhythmic."
2"Not the flashlight—that was still on, its beam still cutting a path across the grass—but the moon."
3"They didn’t shift—they were too massive for that—but the shadows at their bases stretched and contracted, and a sound like grinding rock came from deep underground, vibrating up through the soles of her boots."
4"It had no face—just a smooth oval where features should have been, pale as milk, reflecting the light of her flashlight back at her in a flat, dead shine."
5"A sound came from its direction—not a voice, but a crack, like ice splitting on a frozen lake."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount92
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.010869565217391304
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean13.41
std9.99
cv0.745
sampleLengths
021
147
24
334
422
53
622
74
823
929
103
1118
125
132
1420
1526
161
176
183
194
2016
2122
2215
235
2410
257
2611
272
2820
294
3036
312
324
334
347
3527
362
378
386
3910
4017
419
4217
4317
448
455
4617
4737
484
496
38.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.25925925925925924
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners28
34.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Just moss and dirt and"
ratio0.01
77.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences98
matches
0"She’d come for answers."
1"She’d heard Eva mention it"
2"It was wrong."
3"She pocketed it and breathed"
4"She’d need both tonight."
5"It was pointing toward the"
6"she whispered to herself"
7"Her breath caught in her"
8"She took a step toward"
9"She’d brought a small flashlight,"
10"She pulled out the flashlight"
11"She let out the breath"
12"She hadn’t noticed it cooling"
13"She grabbed it through her"
14"It felt dead in her"
15"They didn’t shift—they were too"
16"Her heel hit something soft"
17"It was pale, almost luminous"
18"She didn’t look back."
19"It was tall and thin,"
ratio0.357
46.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences98
matches
0"The pendant had been warm"
1"Rory had followed its pull"
2"She’d come for answers."
3"The unknown benefactor who’d left"
4"The Fae Grove."
5"She’d heard Eva mention it"
6"The standing stones ringed the"
7"The grass underfoot was impossibly"
8"It was wrong."
9"Rory pulled out her phone."
10"The clock read 9:47 PM,"
11"She pocketed it and breathed"
12"That’s what people said about"
13"She’d need both tonight."
14"The pendant pulsed again, a"
15"It was pointing toward the"
16"The air here tasted different—copper"
17"she whispered to herself"
18"The sound came from behind"
19"A soft, wet scrape, like"
ratio0.827
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"Now the silver chain felt"
1"Now she understood why."
ratio0.02
64.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The standing stones ringed the glade like ancient teeth, their surfaces furred with moss that caught the thin moonlight and turned it silver."
1"The pendant pulsed again, a throb of heat that made her touch it through her jacket."
2"It was pointing toward the largest of the standing stones, a slab of granite that split the moonlight into two unequal halves."
3"In its place was a wall of hawthorn, its thorns long and black, slick with something that gleamed in the swinging light."
4"It wore something that might have been a dress, or a shroud, or skin, and it was growing, stretching upward until its head cleared the top of the standing stone…"
5"She gasped, grabbed it, and the stone was glowing, pulsing with a deep red light that bled through her fingers and cast her own shadow long across the grass."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
80.5953%