Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2E437P9VZC4G7Q9D3T0TMR

Run Details

Duration:
28.9s
Cost:
$0.000581
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had settled into that miserable London drizzle that seemed to seep through the skin rather than fall from the sky. Aurora Carter stood beneath the green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest, watching the light pool on the wet pavement in a sickly emerald stain. Her delivery bag hung limp against her hip, the last order of the night—a container of salt-and-pepper squid for a regular who always tipped in crumpled fivers—already dropped off fifteen minutes ago. She should have gone straight up to her flat. Instead, she pushed open the door. The warmth hit her first, then the smell: stale ale, lemon polish, and the faint ghost of Silas’ pipe tobacco. The bar was quiet for a Thursday—three regulars huntered at the far end, a couple arguing in a booth near the jukebox. The maps on the walls looked even older than they had a year ago, their edges curling like dead leaves. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with the methodical attention of a man who had spent decades learning to look at nothing while seeing everything. He glanced up at her entry, his hazel eyes flickering with recognition, and nodded once. “Rory,” he said, the word carrying the weight of years. “Bit late for you.” “Last delivery was Covent Garden.” She shrugged off her jacket, the damp fabric clinging to her arms. “Figured I’d let the rain slack off before I head up.” Silas set the glass down and reached for a bottle of Jameson. “You’ll have company, then. Old friend of yours is at the back table.” Rory’s blood went cold. She turned, scanning the dim room, and there—sitting alone at the corner table beneath a photograph of the Thames in the Fifties—was Eva. Eva Davies. No. Eva *Rowan* now, married name, six years ago, white wedding in a Cardiff church that Rory had not attended. Eva, who had been her anchor through adolescence, her lifeline during those first brutal months in London, the friend who had driven three hours in a borrowed car just to help Rory pack her bags and run. Eva, who had not spoken to her in four years. She looked different. The woman at the table was thinner, sharper, her dark hair cut short and severe against the pale column of her throat. She wore a grey coat that looked expensive—too expensive for the rainy Soho nights Rory knew—and her hands were wrapped around a glass of wine that she had not touched. When she looked up, her eyes met Rory’s, and for a moment, neither moved. Then Eva smiled. It was a careful thing, measured and precise, a smile that had been practiced in mirrors. “Laila,” she said, using the old nickname, the one Rory had shed like a snakeskin when she left Evan. “I was hoping you’d stop in.” Rory crossed the room on legs that did not feel like her own. The wooden floor creaked beneath her trainers. She slid into the booth across from Eva and felt the years settle between them like a physical weight. “How did you know I worked here?” “Silas.” Eva’s voice was softer now, less sure. “I rang him yesterday. Asked if you still delivered for Yu-Fei’s. He said you’d probably be here around ten.” “You could have called me directly.” Rory heard the edge in her own voice, that defensive hardness she had cultivated like armor. “You still have my number.” “Do I?” Eva tilted her head, and something flickered in her eyes—hurt, maybe, or anger carefully buried. “You changed it three years ago. Did you think I wouldn’t notice?” The words landed like stones. Rory looked down at her hands on the scarred tabletop, at the pale crescent on her wrist, that old scar from a childhood accident she and Eva had both witnessed—a fall from a garden wall, a trip to A&E, Eva holding her hand while the doctor stitched her up. They had been eleven. Eva had cried harder than Rory had. “I thought maybe you wouldn’t want me to,” Rory said quietly. A long pause. The jukebox switched songs—something old, a woman singing about regret and rain. The couple in the booth stopped arguing and listened for a moment. Then Eva laughed, a dry, hollow sound. “I drove six hours from Cardiff to see you, Laila. I think that answers your question.” “It’s Rory now.” “I know.” Eva reached for her wine glass but did not drink. She just held it, the stem delicate between her fingers. “You changed your whole name. Your whole life. You don’t even sound Welsh anymore.” “Neither do you.” Eva smiled at that, a genuine one this time, and for a second she was the girl who had smuggled snacks into the cinema and cried at the endings of books. “I’ve been in London for two years. You can lose the accent in six months if you practice.” “You live in London?” “Battersea.” Eva set the glass down. “Married a property developer. Big house, bigger mortgage, two cars, and a kitchen that cost more than our parents’ houses combined.” She paused. “Separated now. Six months. It’s almost final.” Rory did not know what to say. The weight of four years pressed down on her chest. She remembered Eva’s wedding photos, tagged on Facebook by mutual friends she had stopped following—Eva in white lace, Eva cutting a cake, Eva dancing with a man whose name Rory had never learned. She had scrolled past them quickly, her thumb catching on the timestamp, and felt nothing but a dull, familiar ache. “I’m sorry,” Rory said, and meant it. “Don’t be.” Eva’s voice was clipped, professional. “It was a mistake. I knew it the day of the ceremony, but I was too stubborn to admit it. You learn to live with the choices you make, right?” It was not an accusation. It was not even a barb. But Rory felt it anyway, sharp and precise, the way Eva had always been able to land a truth without raising her voice. She looked away, at the map of old Soho on the wall, at the faded thumbtacks marking locations that no longer existed. “I’m not the same person I was four years ago,” Rory said. “No.” Eva’s voice softened. “I can see that. You look… settled. Less scared.” It was the truth. Rory had not realized how much fear had been written on her until Eva named its absence. She had spent those first years in London jumping at shadows, checking locks twice, sleeping with a knife under her pillow. Evan had never found her—had not even tried, as far as she knew—but the memory of his hands on her throat had lived in her bones like an old ache. Now it was just memory. A scar. “I ran a half-marathon last spring,” Rory said, and the nonsequitur hung between them, strange and fragile. “I couldn’t have run a mile four years ago. I was too scared to breathe too loud.” Eva reached across the table and took her hand. The gesture was so familiar, so perfectly Eva, that Rory’s throat tightened. Eva’s fingers were cold, her grip light, but she held on. “I wanted to find you,” Eva said. “After I left him. I wanted to call you and tell you I understood. I understood why you disappeared. But I was ashamed. I spent four years building a life I hated, and I thought you’d look at me and see the woman who told you to go. Who pushed you to leave. Who said she’d always be there, and then wasn’t.” “You weren’t there because I didn’t let you be.” “I didn’t try hard enough.” Rory looked at their hands, at Eva’s ringless fingers—the wedding band gone, the tan line still faint. She thought about the years between them, the silence and the distance, how they had both built walls out of their own regret. She thought about the girl she had been, the one who had left Cardiff in the middle of the night with a borrowed suitcase and a heart full of bruises. That girl had never expected to make it this far. She had never expected to sit in a warm bar and hold her best friend’s hand and feel, for the first time in years, that the weight of the past might be something she could set down. “I missed you,” Rory said, and the words came out raw and quiet, stripped of all the armor she had worn for so long. Eva’s eyes were wet, but she did not cry. She squeezed Rory’s hand and let go, reaching for her wine glass to hide the tremor in her fingers. “I know,” she said. “Me too.” They sat in silence while the rain tapped against the window and the neon sign hummed its green song. Silas busied himself at the bar, polishing glasses that were already clean, giving them the privacy they had both come seeking. The night stretched on, quiet and patient, and for a little while, it felt like maybe they had not lost as much time as they thought.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.425
leniency0.85
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.05
90.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1538
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"quickly"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1538
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"weight"
count4
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count2
8
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"warmth"
1"methodical"
2"weight"
3"scanning"
4"measured"
5"flickered"
6"dancing"
7"familiar"
8"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1524
ratio0.001
matches
0"Rowan"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions73
wordCount1166
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.57
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
London3
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
Thursday1
Silas3
Jameson1
Thames1
Fifties1
Eva30
Davies1
Cardiff2
Rory22
Soho2
Evan2
Facebook1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Silas"
4"Jameson"
5"Eva"
6"Davies"
7"Rory"
8"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Thames"
2"Fifties"
3"Cardiff"
4"Soho"
globalScore0.214
windowScore0
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"drizzle that seemed to seep through the skin rather than fall from the sky"
1"felt like maybe they had not lost as mu"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1524
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean36.29
std28.6
cv0.788
sampleLengths
094
1104
214
328
425
527
669
769
819
925
1039
117
1227
1327
1429
1565
1611
1734
1816
193
2036
213
2249
234
2436
2570
267
2737
2856
2912
3013
3179
3234
3332
3469
359
365
37117
3824
3928
406
4166
83.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences82
matches
0"were wrapped"
1"been practiced"
2"been eleven"
3"was clipped"
4"been written"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs187
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences104
ratio0.096
matches
0"Her delivery bag hung limp against her hip, the last order of the night—a container of salt-and-pepper squid for a regular who always tipped in crumpled fivers—already dropped off fifteen minutes ago."
1"The bar was quiet for a Thursday—three regulars huntered at the far end, a couple arguing in a booth near the jukebox."
2"She turned, scanning the dim room, and there—sitting alone at the corner table beneath a photograph of the Thames in the Fifties—was Eva."
3"She wore a grey coat that looked expensive—too expensive for the rainy Soho nights Rory knew—and her hands were wrapped around a glass of wine that she had not touched."
4"“Do I?” Eva tilted her head, and something flickered in her eyes—hurt, maybe, or anger carefully buried."
5"Rory looked down at her hands on the scarred tabletop, at the pale crescent on her wrist, that old scar from a childhood accident she and Eva had both witnessed—a fall from a garden wall, a trip to A&E, Eva holding her hand while the doctor stitched her up."
6"The jukebox switched songs—something old, a woman singing about regret and rain."
7"She remembered Eva’s wedding photos, tagged on Facebook by mutual friends she had stopped following—Eva in white lace, Eva cutting a cake, Eva dancing with a man whose name Rory had never learned."
8"Evan had never found her—had not even tried, as far as she knew—but the memory of his hands on her throat had lived in her bones like an old ache."
9"Rory looked at their hands, at Eva’s ringless fingers—the wedding band gone, the tan line still faint."
98.06% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount758
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.04221635883905013
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005277044854881266
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean14.65
std10.5
cv0.716
sampleLengths
022
125
232
39
46
520
622
720
827
915
1010
114
1217
1311
1412
1513
164
1723
182
191
2019
2137
2210
233
2422
2530
2614
273
2816
2919
306
3113
327
3319
347
358
3619
3722
385
3917
4012
415
4249
434
447
4511
463
4712
4812
497
43.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3269230769230769
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences75
matches
0"Instead, she pushed open the"
1"Then Eva smiled."
2"Then Eva laughed, a dry,"
ratio0.04
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences75
matches
0"Her delivery bag hung limp"
1"She should have gone straight"
2"He glanced up at her"
3"he said, the word carrying"
4"She shrugged off her jacket,"
5"She turned, scanning the dim"
6"She looked different."
7"She wore a grey coat"
8"It was a careful thing,"
9"she said, using the old"
10"She slid into the booth"
11"They had been eleven."
12"She just held it, the"
13"She remembered Eva’s wedding photos,"
14"She had scrolled past them"
15"It was not an accusation."
16"It was not even a"
17"She looked away, at the"
18"It was the truth."
19"She had spent those first"
ratio0.333
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences75
matches
0"The rain had settled into"
1"Aurora Carter stood beneath the"
2"Her delivery bag hung limp"
3"She should have gone straight"
4"The warmth hit her first,"
5"The bar was quiet for"
6"The maps on the walls"
7"Silas stood behind the bar,"
8"He glanced up at her"
9"he said, the word carrying"
10"She shrugged off her jacket,"
11"Silas set the glass down"
12"Rory’s blood went cold."
13"She turned, scanning the dim"
14"Eva *Rowan* now, married name,"
15"Eva, who had been her"
16"Eva, who had not spoken"
17"She looked different."
18"The woman at the table"
19"She wore a grey coat"
ratio0.92
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Now it was just memory."
ratio0.013
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with the methodical attention of a man who had spent decades learning to look at nothing while seeing everything."
1"She wore a grey coat that looked expensive—too expensive for the rainy Soho nights Rory knew—and her hands were wrapped around a glass of wine that she had not …"
2"It was a careful thing, measured and precise, a smile that had been practiced in mirrors."
3"Silas busied himself at the bar, polishing glasses that were already clean, giving them the privacy they had both come seeking."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, the word carrying the weight of years"
1"She shrugged, the damp fabric clinging to her arms"
2"Rory said, and the nonsequitur hung between them, strange and fragile"
3"Rory said, and the words came out raw and quiet, stripped of all the armor she had worn for so long"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.225
leniency0.45
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.1374%