| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1268 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1268 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "churn" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "resonance" | | 14 | "perfect" | | 15 | "vibrated" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1263 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1253 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.64 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | November | 2 | | Covent | 1 | | Garden | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Covent" | | 3 | "Garden" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 44.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed dramatic at the time" | | 1 | "felt like a mistake" | | 2 | "symbols that seemed to writhe at the edge of her vision" | | 3 | "quite focus on, symbols that seemed to writhe at the edge of her vision" |
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| 41.65% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.584 | | wordCount | 1263 | | matches | | 0 | "not the rustle of a fox or the distant hum of the city, but something organic" | | 1 | "no longer arranged in a circle but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 31.58 | | std | 26.93 | | cv | 0.853 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 105 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 81 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 77 | | 9 | 75 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 83 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 46 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 15 |
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| 94.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "been siphoned" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "was going" | | 1 | "was standing" |
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| 1.41% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet the grove glowed—a soft, sourceless luminescence that made the shadows too sharp, too long." | | 1 | "A sound broke the silence—not the rustle of a fox or the distant hum of the city, but something organic and wet." | | 2 | "She caught it only as a flicker—a silhouette that didn't match the trees, a figure too tall and too narrow to be human." | | 3 | "It came from behind her, high and childish, but with a wrong resonance—too many notes layered together, harmonics that scraped at the edge of hearing." | | 4 | "The pendant in her hand was still cold, but now it vibrated—a low, subsonic thrum that she felt in her teeth, in the marrow of her bones." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 132 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 2 | | adverbRatio | 0.015151515151515152 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007575757575757576 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 12.5 | | std | 9.59 | | cv | 0.767 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 45.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3564356435643564 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 73.26% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the pound of her" | | 1 | "Too many of them." |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come here because the" | | 1 | "She told herself it was" | | 2 | "She'd passed through this part" | | 3 | "She forced herself to breathe," | | 4 | "She had checked her phone" | | 5 | "She had told no one" | | 6 | "She caught it only as" | | 7 | "It vanished before she could" | | 8 | "Her voice came out thin," | | 9 | "She should have heard some" | | 10 | "It felt dead now, inert," | | 11 | "She pressed it against her" | | 12 | "It came from behind her," | | 13 | "They had been blue and" | | 14 | "She stepped back, and her" | | 15 | "She didn't look down." | | 16 | "She didn't want to see" | | 17 | "She pushed forward, branches catching" | | 18 | "Her breath came in ragged" | | 19 | "She turned around." |
| | ratio | 0.275 | |
| 91.87% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air in Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora pressed the Heartstone pendant" | | 2 | "The silver chain felt heavier" | | 3 | "She'd come here because the" | | 4 | "A tug at the edge" | | 5 | "Tonight it had been unbearable," | | 6 | "She told herself it was" | | 7 | "The grove was wrong." | | 8 | "She'd passed through this part" | | 9 | "The wildflowers that should have" | | 10 | "Aurora rubbed her left wrist," | | 11 | "The skin felt warm, almost" | | 12 | "The pendant pulsed." | | 13 | "A sound broke the silence—not" | | 14 | "A slow exhalation, as if" | | 15 | "Aurora froze, her hand still" | | 16 | "She forced herself to breathe," | | 17 | "This was a clearing." | | 18 | "A pocket between worlds, maybe," | | 19 | "Time moved differently here, the" |
| | ratio | 0.736 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it felt like a" | | 1 | "Now they were red." | | 2 | "Because the pendant was no" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 14.29% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pressed the Heartstone pendant against her collarbone, its faint warmth a strange comfort against the chill that had settled into her bones the moment sh…" | | 1 | "The silver chain felt heavier than it should, as if the tiny crimson gem had grown denser in the past hour, pulsing against her skin with a slow, deliberate rhy…" | | 2 | "The wildflowers that should have been dormant in November bloomed in clusters of impossible blue and white, their petals catching a light that came from nowhere…" | | 3 | "Yet the grove glowed—a soft, sourceless luminescence that made the shadows too sharp, too long." | | 4 | "The skin felt warm, almost feverish, and she caught herself pressing harder as if she could ground herself in the old pain." | | 5 | "It came from behind her, high and childish, but with a wrong resonance—too many notes layered together, harmonics that scraped at the edge of hearing." | | 6 | "The giggling came again, closer now, and with it a whisper that slithered through the wildflowers like a wind through tall grass." | | 7 | "And it spoke it with an intimacy that made her skin crawl, as if it had been waiting, watching, tasting the sound of it for a long time." | | 8 | "Because the pendant was no longer cold, no longer hot, but humming at the same frequency as the voice that had whispered her name." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |