Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2ESAFY9THF4TB5MGBWZ8TT

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Duration:
40.4s
Cost:
$0.000774
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had followed Rory in from the street, dark spots blooming across the shoulders of her delivery jacket like a slow infection. She stood just inside the doorway of The Raven’s Nest, letting her eyes adjust to the dim amber light that pooled beneath the brass fixtures. The place smelled of old wood and whiskey, of leather that had been worn smooth by decades of elbows and restless hands. Maps covered the walls, their edges yellowed and curling, showing coastlines that no longer matched the world she knew. She shook the rain from her hair and was already reaching for the takeaway bag when she saw him. He sat alone at the bar, three stools from the end, a half-empty pint of stout sweating onto the polished mahogany. The bones of his face were still the same—that sharp jawline, the slight asymmetry to his nose where it had been broken twice, once in a rugby match and once in a fight he never talked about. But the rest of him had been reworked by time into something harder, something she didn't recognize at first. His hair was shorter now, cropped close at the sides, threaded with grey that hadn't been there at twenty-two. His shoulders had broadened, filled out the charcoal suit jacket in a way that suggested gym sessions and deliberate maintenance. He wore a silver watch that caught the light when he lifted his glass, a heavy, expensive thing that sat against his wrist like a shackle. She should have walked past. Should have slipped into the back corridor and let Silas handle the delivery. Her shift was almost over, and she had a flat upstairs that needed her attention, a shower that called her name with the promise of hot water and silence. But something held her rooted to the damp floorboards. Recognition, yes. But something else. A thread pulled taut across the years, tugging at a part of her she’d thought she’d cut loose. He turned, as if sensing her gaze, and their eyes met. The moment stretched, thin and fragile, like ice over deep water. She watched the flicker of confusion cross his face, the slow dawn of recognition that rearranged his features from polite stranger to someone who knew her. Someone who had known her. “Rory?” His voice had dropped in register, gained a gravel edge that hadn't been there when they were twenty-two and sharing a joint on the roof of the Cardiff University library, watching the stars blur through the smoke. “Leo.” She said his name like she was testing it, like she wasn't sure it still fit in her mouth. He slid off the stool, and she saw the way he moved now—controlled, economical, the slight hitch of a hand toward his hip before he caught himself. Muscle memory. The ghost of a weapon that wasn't there. “What are you—” He stopped, shook his head, and something like a laugh escaped him. “I don’t even know where to start. What are you doing in London?” “I live here.” She stepped forward, the distance between them shrinking to something conversational. Up close, she could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes, the way his jaw tightened when he smiled. “Above the bar, actually. I work for the owner.” She lifted the takeaway bag. “Delivery.” Leo’s gaze travelled over her, reading her the way he used to read exam papers—quick, thorough, searching for the hidden answer. “You’re a delivery driver?” “Part-time.” The word came out sharper than she intended. “It pays the bills while I figure things out.” He nodded, but she could see him filing the information away, slotting it into the mental file he’d kept on her. The same file that had once held her favourite books, her secret fears, the way she took her coffee. She wondered what he’d written in the margins since they’d last spoken. “Can I buy you a drink?” He gestured to the empty stool beside him. “For old times’ sake.” She should say no. Silas was in the back, probably already wondering where his delivery had gone. She had a twenty-pound tip waiting for her from Mrs. Okonkwo at number twelve, and the Thai place two doors down was expecting a pickup in forty minutes. “One drink,” she said, and settled onto the stool before she could change her mind. The bartender—a young woman with a sleeve of roses tattooed up her arm—poured Rory a glass of the house red without asking, and Leo’s eyebrow lifted. “You’ve got a tab here?” “I live upstairs.” Rory wrapped her fingers around the stem of the glass. “Silas—the owner—he takes care of me.” Leo took a long pull of his stout, watching her over the rim. “Silas. He’s the one with the limp, right? Grey hair, silver ring?” “You know him?” “I know of him.” Leo set the glass down, rotated it slowly between his palms. “He’s got a reputation, Rory. Certain kind of people in certain lines of work know his name.” The words hung between them, weighted with meaning she couldn’t quite parse. She took a sip of wine, let the tartness coat her tongue. “What line of work are you in, Leo?” He smiled, and it didn’t reach his eyes. “Corporate security. Risk management. Boring stuff.” “You’re lying.” The silence that followed was sharp enough to cut. Leo’s smile faded, and for a moment she saw the boy she’d known—the one who’d cried at his grandmother’s funeral, who’d let her bandage his knuckles after he’d punched a wall in frustration. The one who’d promised her, drunk and earnest at nineteen, that he’d never turn into the kind of man who lied to the people he loved. “I’m not the same person I was,” he said quietly. “I can see that.” “Can you?” He turned to face her fully, and she saw it then—the weight he carried, the things he’d done that had settled into his bones like lead. “Because I look at you, and I still see the girl who used to read Sylvia Plath out loud in the library. Who cried when she got a B on her torts exam. Who walked out of her final and never looked back.” “I didn’t walk out,” Rory said, her voice low. “I ran. There’s a difference.” “From Evan.” It wasn’t a question. She nodded, once, and the movement felt like pulling a splinter from deep under the skin. “I heard,” Leo said. “Couple years after you left. Heard he was worse than we knew.” Rory stared into her wine, watching the light bend through the ruby depths. “He broke my wrist three weeks before finals. I told everyone I fell down the stairs.” She laughed, a short, bitter sound. “I’d spent two years covering for him. Making excuses. Telling myself it wasn’t that bad.” “Why didn’t you tell me?” The question was gentle, but it cut deeper than anything else he could have said. She looked up, met his eyes. “You were in the army by then. Signed up right after graduation. You had your own war to fight.” “That’s not an answer.” “It’s the only one I have.” They sat in silence, the noise of the bar washing around them like tide around stones. A group of tourists laughed at a corner table, their voices bright and careless. Somewhere in the back, Silas’s footsteps creaked across the floorboards. Leo drained the last of his stout and set the glass down with a thud. “I think about it sometimes. What I would have done if I’d known.” “Nothing. There was nothing anyone could do.” “I could have been there.” Rory set her wineglass down, turned to face him fully. “Where were you, Leo? When I needed someone to pick up the phone at three in the morning? When I was sitting in a hospital waiting room with a broken wrist and a black eye, trying to come up with a lie that wouldn’t make my parents cry?” His face went pale, the colour draining from his cheeks like water from a sink. “I didn’t know.” “No. You didn’t.” She softened her voice, reached out, and touched his hand. The contact was electric, a spark across the scarred skin of their shared history. “And that’s not your fault. But you didn’t call either, Leo. Not once. Not in four years.” “I was in Kabul. Then Helmand. Then—” He stopped, swallowed. “Then I was in a lot of places where phones didn’t work and the mail took three weeks to reach me. And by the time I got back, I didn’t know how.” “How to what?” “How to be the person you remembered.” He pulled his hand away, but gently, like he was letting go of something precious. “I’ve done things, Rory. Things I can’t take back. Things that changed me in ways I still don’t fully understand.” She studied his face, the hard lines and the shadows beneath his eyes, the silver gleam of the watch that probably cost more than her monthly rent. “Corporate security.” “Among other things.” “You’re not going to tell me.” “I can’t.” He leaned closer, his voice dropping to a whisper. “Not because I don’t want to. But because knowing would put you in danger. And I’ve already lost you once.” The words settled into the space between them, heavy and irrevocable. Rory felt something shift in her chest, a door cracking open that she’d thought was sealed shut. “I’m not the same person either,” she said. “I spent three years after Evan not trusting anyone. Not sleeping through the night. Jumping at shadows.” She touched the crescent scar on her wrist, the one from a childhood accident that had healed clean but still marked her. “I came to London because Eva told me there was a room above a bar, and the owner was old and needed help, and maybe I could find a new life here. And I did. Sort of.” Leo nodded slowly. “Sort of.” “It’s not glamorous. I deliver food. I drink cheap wine. I watch the rain fall on Soho and I tell myself that tomorrow will be different.” She smiled, and it felt real for the first time in months. “But it’s mine. And I built it myself.” The rain had stopped outside, the streetlight casting a pale glow through the bar’s front window. The room felt smaller now, cocooned, as if the world beyond had receded and left only the two of them, suspended in amber light and accumulated years. Leo reached into his jacket and pulled out a worn leather wallet. He slid a card across the bar—black, embossed with a single phone number in silver foil. “If you ever need me. For anything.” Rory picked up the card, felt the weight of it in her palm. “Will you be there this time?” “I’ll try.” He stood, adjusted his jacket, and for a moment he looked almost young again, almost the boy who had known her before the world had carved its scars into both of them. “That’s all I can promise. But I mean it.” She slipped the card into her pocket, next to her heart. “Goodbye, Leo.” “Goodbye, Rory.” He walked out into the rain-washed street, and she watched him go, the silver watch catching the light one last time before he disappeared into the neon glow of Soho. The door swung shut, and the bar settled back into its familiar hum. Silas emerged from the back, a towel over his shoulder, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the light. He glanced at the door, then at Rory, and raised an eyebrow. “Friend of yours?” “Someone I used to know,” she said, and finished her wine. The card burned in her pocket, a promise and a question, waiting for an answer she wasn’t ready to give. Not yet. Not tonight. But maybe, she thought, as she gathered the delivery bag and headed for the stairs, maybe one day. The Raven’s Nest wrapped around her like an old coat as she climbed to her flat, and somewhere below, the rain began to fall again, washing the streets clean of footprints, of promises, of everything that had been said and everything that hadn’t.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.029
92.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2051
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2051
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count2
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"depths"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"flicker"
2"eyebrow"
3"weight"
4"depths"
5"footsteps"
6"electric"
7"whisper"
8"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences97
matches
0"the flicker of confusion"
1"l in frustration"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2042
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1443
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Leo"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Raven2
Nest2
Silas4
Cardiff1
University1
Leo9
Mrs1
Thai1
Soho1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Silas"
4"Leo"
5"Mrs"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"University"
2"Thai"
3"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
26.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if sensing her gaze, and their eyes met"
1"something like a laugh escaped him"
2"quite parse"
3"felt like pulling a splinter from deep"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2042
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences142
matches
0"open that she’d"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean28.36
std20.98
cv0.74
sampleLengths
089
119
277
365
447
532
611
742
838
920
1037
1128
1251
1325
1418
1552
1618
1745
1815
1926
205
2119
2225
233
2432
2532
2614
272
2868
2910
304
3171
3214
332
3420
3516
3650
375
3840
394
406
4140
4228
437
445
4558
4618
4744
4842
493
90.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences97
matches
0"been worn"
1"been broken"
2"been reworked"
3"been said"
90.71% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs244
matches
0"was already reaching"
1"was testing"
2"was expecting"
3"was letting"
2.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences142
ratio0.049
matches
0"The bones of his face were still the same—that sharp jawline, the slight asymmetry to his nose where it had been broken twice, once in a rugby match and once in a fight he never talked about."
1"He slid off the stool, and she saw the way he moved now—controlled, economical, the slight hitch of a hand toward his hip before he caught himself."
2"Leo’s gaze travelled over her, reading her the way he used to read exam papers—quick, thorough, searching for the hidden answer."
3"The bartender—a young woman with a sleeve of roses tattooed up her arm—poured Rory a glass of the house red without asking, and Leo’s eyebrow lifted."
4"Leo’s smile faded, and for a moment she saw the boy she’d known—the one who’d cried at his grandmother’s funeral, who’d let her bandage his knuckles after he’d punched a wall in frustration."
5"“Can you?” He turned to face her fully, and she saw it then—the weight he carried, the things he’d done that had settled into his bones like lead."
6"He slid a card across the bar—black, embossed with a single phone number in silver foil."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1457
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.026767330130404943
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.0068634179821551134
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean14.38
std9.99
cv0.695
sampleLengths
023
125
222
319
419
521
637
719
819
920
1026
115
1213
1329
149
152
163
1718
1811
1911
2026
215
2238
2320
2427
252
268
2715
2813
2914
3022
3114
321
3321
344
359
369
3721
3819
3912
4014
414
424
4313
4410
4518
4615
4726
485
4913
49.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3380281690140845
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners48
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Somewhere in the back, Silas’s"
ratio0.011
22.20% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences91
matches
0"She stood just inside the"
1"She shook the rain from"
2"He sat alone at the"
3"His hair was shorter now,"
4"His shoulders had broadened, filled"
5"He wore a silver watch"
6"She should have walked past."
7"Her shift was almost over,"
8"He turned, as if sensing"
9"She watched the flicker of"
10"His voice had dropped in"
11"She said his name like"
12"He slid off the stool,"
13"He stopped, shook his head,"
14"She stepped forward, the distance"
15"She lifted the takeaway bag"
16"He nodded, but she could"
17"She wondered what he’d written"
18"He gestured to the empty"
19"She should say no."
ratio0.495
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences91
matches
0"The rain had followed Rory"
1"She stood just inside the"
2"The place smelled of old"
3"Maps covered the walls, their"
4"She shook the rain from"
5"He sat alone at the"
6"The bones of his face"
7"His hair was shorter now,"
8"His shoulders had broadened, filled"
9"He wore a silver watch"
10"She should have walked past."
11"Her shift was almost over,"
12"A thread pulled taut across"
13"He turned, as if sensing"
14"The moment stretched, thin and"
15"She watched the flicker of"
16"Someone who had known her."
17"His voice had dropped in"
18"She said his name like"
19"He slid off the stool,"
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
19.70% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"She stood just inside the doorway of The Raven’s Nest, letting her eyes adjust to the dim amber light that pooled beneath the brass fixtures."
1"The place smelled of old wood and whiskey, of leather that had been worn smooth by decades of elbows and restless hands."
2"He wore a silver watch that caught the light when he lifted his glass, a heavy, expensive thing that sat against his wrist like a shackle."
3"Her shift was almost over, and she had a flat upstairs that needed her attention, a shower that called her name with the promise of hot water and silence."
4"He turned, as if sensing her gaze, and their eyes met."
5"She watched the flicker of confusion cross his face, the slow dawn of recognition that rearranged his features from polite stranger to someone who knew her."
6"The same file that had once held her favourite books, her secret fears, the way she took her coffee."
7"Leo’s smile faded, and for a moment she saw the boy she’d known—the one who’d cried at his grandmother’s funeral, who’d let her bandage his knuckles after he’d …"
8"The room felt smaller now, cocooned, as if the world beyond had receded and left only the two of them, suspended in amber light and accumulated years."
9"The Raven’s Nest wrapped around her like an old coat as she climbed to her flat, and somewhere below, the rain began to fall again, washing the streets clean of…"
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory said, her voice low"
1"He leaned, his voice dropping to a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.116
leniency0.232
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.029
75.5183%